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Sonoda Umi (CV.Mimori Suzuko) - Watashitachi wa Mirai no Han

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Dailycare
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 4월 7일 목요일 at 오후 11:49:33

Artist: Sonoda Umi (CV.Mimori Suzuko)
Title: Watashitachi wa Mirai no Hana
Source: ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: Love Live 海色少女に魅せられて μ's u's
BPM: 66
Filesize: 4756kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (3.06 stars, 298 notes)
  2. Easy (1.48 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Hana (5.34 stars, 557 notes)
  4. Hard (3.71 stars, 376 notes)
  5. Insane (4.57 stars, 485 notes)
  6. Normal (2.09 stars, 208 notes)
Download: Sonoda Umi (CV.Mimori Suzuko) - Watashitachi wa Mirai no Hana
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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M4M here

[General]
-Disable widescreen and letterbox
-i recommend u rename ur light hard to Advanced or maybe change the Hard to Hyper and light hard to Hard

[Easy]
-why not use DS *1.2 to avoid overlaps and touching
-00:25:120 (2,3) - no no no stack in easy diff also no 1/2 notes
-00:29:383 (1) - need at least 2 white ticks of recovery time after a spinner
-00:51:350 (2,3) - damn stacks dude
-01:04:465 (2) - very confusing for nabs
-01:07:088 (2,3) - oh man
-01:13:809 (1,2,3) - this is not Normal diff, no 1/2 clickable notes
-01:58:399 (1) - shouldnt this end here 02:01:186 -
Overall: remove all stacks and 1/2 clickable notes and then u should be fine

[Normal]
-Pretty crazy SV for a normal diff dont u think? and since u used 0.8 DS it feels weird to have sliders faster then jumps
-00:28:071 (4) - have the anchor point in the slidertick would make more sense:
-01:00:858 (1,2) - dont like this flow, try this:
-01:03:481 (1,2) - improve blanket
-01:10:038 (1,2,3,4) - im a bit worried about so many circles with high bpm, this is not hard diff tho
-01:22:825 (3,4) - blanket xD
-01:27:088 (1,2) - oh man x) blankets blankets blankets blankets
-01:31:022 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow, should make a break between those try this:

-01:36:268 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
-01:40:858 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - dude xD
-01:46:760 (5) - NC
-02:04:793 (3,4) - elite blanketing x)

[Light Hard]
-00:39:875 (1) - a bit down so it dont touch with the next slider tail
-00:42:989 (2,3) - here we go blanket
-00:50:202 (1,2) - i guess this is too much spacing for no reason
-01:09:711 (3,4) - ew this overlap also appearing in game
-01:14:629 (3,4,5) - hmm triple in advanced diff might be a prbleme i recommend u remove also its confusing since after on 01:15:940 (3,4,5) - player will get confused and think its the same
-01:29:055 (3,1) - no dude this map is beatiful dont make random overlaps
-01:34:465 (2,3) - ctrl+G?


[Hard]
-00:11:322 (1,3) - we are still in the begining dude xD blanket...
-00:45:448 (2,3) - copy and pasta
-00:55:776 (2) - :
-01:46:104 (3) - more curved to fix flow and blanket
-02:11:678 (1) - id like it without stack
-Overall: i like the style of this diff gj but take note that i didnt point out all blankets so look through it again and fix em pls

[Insane]
-00:43:153 (4,5) - wats the meaning of this spacing
-00:48:727 (6) - strong beat, 00:48:563 (5) - almost nothing on this one, so more space for 6 and less for 5 ;)
-00:52:989 (1,2,3) - either u curve them more or u make them straight cuz as they are now its really useless :/
Very nice diff

Overeverything :D cool map and patterns so to make it perfect work on ur easy diffs and blankets
thats all from me gud luck 0/
Anna-
Hana:
00:28:564 (3) - Try a perfect Triangle Here
00:54:793 (4) - Maybe another Triangle chance?
00:58:563 (2) - Lol maybe a blanket chance here to?
01:02:497 (2) - Bit to many of these stacks, i recommend not doing these way to often.
01:18:235 (3,4,5) - Fix your spacing.
01:21:104 (4) - Should not start above the slider, lower it and start a new combo on the stream.
02:06:924 (3) - This is a definite needs to be a perfect triangle.

Insane:
00:25:284 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Fix Spacing.
01:05:284 (4,5,6) - Try a triangle
01:18:235 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:20:858 (2) - These triangles though
01:37:252 (4,1) - It might just be me but i find this really strange...
01:47:907 (5,6,1) - A slider may be more fitting

You got yourself a nice song here~
Good luck on the mapping
Topic Starter
Dailycare

CaptainMimi wrote:

Hana:
00:28:564 (3) - Try a perfect Triangle Here oh sry, i think 00:28:564 (3,4) - is strong beat, so i made a distance
00:54:793 (4) - Maybe another Triangle chance? move a little down
00:58:563 (2) - Lol maybe a blanket chance here to?
01:02:497 (2) - Bit to many of these stacks, i recommend not doing these way to often. now 01:03:071 (4,5) - is not stacked
01:18:235 (3,4,5) - Fix your spacing. umm, why.. ;w;
01:21:104 (4) - Should not start above the slider, lower it and start a new combo on the stream. i'll accept, but i don't fix it now xD
02:06:924 (3) - This is a definite needs to be a perfect triangle.

Insane:
00:25:284 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Fix Spacing. I didn't understand :(
01:05:284 (4,5,6) - Try a triangle umm 01:05:612 (5,6,1) - it's already triangle and (4) was placed between (6) and (1)
01:18:235 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:20:858 (2) - These triangles though :(
01:37:252 (4,1) - It might just be me but i find this really strange... hmm.. i'll fix it later. cuz i don't come up with any patterns now ;w;
01:47:907 (5,6,1) - A slider may be more fitting Change to reverse slider

You got yourself a nice song here~
Good luck on the mapping
lol thanks for your modding xD


HB24 wrote:

M4M here

[General]
-Disable widescreen and letterbox
-i recommend u rename ur light hard to Advanced or maybe change the Hard to Hyper and light hard to Hard I changed Light Hard to Advanced

[Easy]
-why not use DS *1.2 to avoid overlaps and touching
-00:25:120 (2,3) - no no no stack in easy diff also no 1/2 notes
-00:29:383 (1) - need at least 2 white ticks of recovery time after a spinner
-00:51:350 (2,3) - damn stacks dude
-01:04:465 (2) - very confusig f - oh man
-01:13:809 (1,2,3) - this is not Normal diff, no 1/2 clickable notes
-01:58:399 (1) - shouldnt this end here 02:01:186 -
Overall: remove all stacks and 1/2 clickable notes and then u should be fine

[Normal]
-Pretty crazy SV for a normal diff dont u think? and since u used 0.8 DS it feels weird to have sliders faster then jumps
-00:28:071 (4) - have the anchor point in the slidertick would make more sense:
-01:00:858 (1,2) - dont like this flow, try this:
-01:03:481 (1,2) - improve blanket
-01:10:038 (1,2,3,4) - im a bit worried about so many circles with high bpm, this is not hard diff tho
-01:22:825 (3,4) - blanket xD
-01:27:088 (1,2) - oh man x) blankets blankets blankets blankets
-01:31:022 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow, should make a break between those try this:

-01:36:268 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
-01:40:858 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - dude xD
-01:46:760 (5) - NC
-02:04:793 (3,4) - elite blanketing x)

[Light Hard]
-00:39:875 (1) - a bit down so it dont touch with the next slider tail
-00:42:989 (2,3) - here we go blanket it was mistake xD
-00:50:202 (1,2) - i guess this is too much spacing for no reason
-01:09:711 (3,4) - ew this overlap also appearing in game
-01:14:629 (3,4,5) - hmm triple in advanced diff might be a prbleme i recommend u remove also its confusing since after on 01:15:940 (3,4,5) - player will get confused and think its the same // 01:15:940 (3,4,5) - I changed these notes to slider, but i didn't change 01:14:629 (3,4,5) -. I'll fix it if any modders complain about this
-01:29:055 (3,1) - no dude this map is beatiful dont make random overlaps Oh sorry, but i didn't fix it..
-01:34:465 (2,3) - ctrl+G?


[Hard]
-00:11:322 (1,3) - we are still in the begining dude xD blanket...
-00:45:448 (2,3) - copy and pasta
-00:55:776 (2) - :
Sorry i didn't ;w;
-01:46:104 (3) - more curved to fix flow and blanket
-02:11:678 (1) - id like it without stack
-Overall: i like the style of this diff gj but take note that i didnt point out all blankets so look through it again and fix em pls // oh yea, i'll try it :D

[Insane]
-00:43:153 (4,5) - wats the meaning of this spacing lol
-00:48:727 (6) - strong beat, 00:48:563 (5) - almost nothing on this one, so more space for 6 and less for 5 ;)
-00:52:989 (1,2,3) - either u curve them more or u make them straight cuz as they are now its really useless :/ curved
Very nice diff

Overeverything :D cool map and patterns so to make it perfect work on ur easy diffs and blankets
thats all from me gud luck 0/
oh dude, I'm gonna re-make Normal and Easy diffs reflecting your suggestion, thanks all guys :D
Yahuri
From my queue~

General
-I noticed some recycled patterns for the same sections in Insane and Hana. Perhaps you could change some of them? Ex. 00:06:777 (1,2), 00:29:383 (1,2,3,4), 00:15:285 (1,1,2,1)
-Suggestion: you can make more pentagons, it would make sense since the song has Hana(flower) in it. For example, you might be able to form a pentagon with the start of all of these 01:11:678 (2,3,4,5,1) objects.

Insane
00:15:284 (1,2,3) - might confuse some people, maybe not put 1 equidistant between 2 and 3?
01:12:989 (2,5) - blanket?
01:46:104 (3,4) - blanket

Hana
00:15:284 (1,2,3) - same as insane
00:51:514 (1,3) - this overlap doesnt look great imo
00:52:989 (1) - maybe flip the arc so that the tail of the slider points more towards 2?
01:01:350 (3) - 01:02:170 (1) - i think it would be better if you didnt overlap the start of 1 under 3
01:11:022 (5,1) - this is a pretty big jump, maybe nerf it a bit?

Hope this helps a bit, good luck :)
Anna-
Noticed you were confused on the triangle thing, basically when i say triangle i mean to distance it perfectly like this:
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Ph0WlOe.png

Your top left needs to be matched up perfectly with the same numbers, this can be any just as long as they match up, so this can be
1.09 and 1.09 or 2.03 and 2.03, simple.
The middle in the triangle is where these should be evened out, your beat map was really good so i just sort of figured you already
knew what the perfect triangle fixes were.
Topic Starter
Dailycare

Yahuri wrote:

From my queue~

General
-I noticed some recycled patterns for the same sections in Insane and Hana. Perhaps you could change some of them? Ex. 00:06:777 (1,2), 00:29:383 (1,2,3,4), 00:15:285 (1,1,2,1) okay, i'll try it. but not now!!
-Suggestion: you can make more pentagons, it would make sense since the song has Hana(flower) in it. For example, you might be able to form a pentagon with the start of all of these 01:11:678 (2,3,4,5,1) objects.

Insane
00:15:284 (1,2,3) - might confuse some people, maybe not put 1 equidistant between 2 and 3? where can i put (1)!? it's too hard to think ;w; So i skip this suggestion sry :(
01:12:989 (2,5) - blanket?
01:46:104 (3,4) - blanket oh yea, but i don't need to make blanket for patterns !!

Hana
00:15:284 (1,2,3) - same as insane same as insane..
00:51:514 (1,3) - this overlap doesnt look great imo me too. but i allow some exception!
00:52:989 (1) - maybe flip the arc so that the tail of the slider points more towards 2? sorry.. i don't want this
01:01:350 (3) - 01:02:170 (1) - i think it would be better if you didnt overlap the start of 1 under 3
01:11:022 (5,1) - this is a pretty big jump, maybe nerf it a bit? sure xd

Hope this helps a bit, good luck :)
Yea Thank you!

CaptainMimi wrote:

Noticed you were confused on the triangle thing, basically when i say triangle i mean to distance it perfectly like this:
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Ph0WlOe.png

Your top left needs to be matched up perfectly with the same numbers, this can be any just as long as they match up, so this can be
1.09 and 1.09 or 2.03 and 2.03, simple.
The middle in the triangle is where these should be evened out, your beat map was really good so i just sort of figured you already
knew what the perfect triangle fixes were.
Sorry for my misunderstanding.. lol i don't understand English perfectly, cuz My English Sucks
I understood your intention now, i re-fixed some notes. but i didn't fix some stuffs that have a little error. thanks again
Topic Starter
Dailycare
@HB24
Now, in Easy diff, there are no stacks but few 1/2 notes remain here. and i used DS 1.1 to avoid overlapping xd
Electoz
Hi, we meet again. That map I modded before was ranked already? I haven't noticed lol, omedetou gozaimasu.
[Easy]

  1. SV changes are not recommended in Easy. Stacking objects like this 02:07:416 (5,6) is also not recommended.
  2. Some spacing errors. > 00:55:284 (4,1) - 00:58:235 (4,1) - 01:06:104 (1,2) - 01:47:743 (4,1) .
  3. 00:23:809 (3,1) - The blanket is a bit off imo.
  4. 00:35:940 (3,1) - Can you improve the symmetry here?
  5. 00:40:858 (2,3,1) - I think the flow here should be improved.
  6. 00:47:743 (1) - Maybe end the slider here 00:48:071 instead?
  7. 01:34:301 (4) - How about making this the same shape with 01:34:956 (1,2) ?
  8. 01:58:399 (1) - I would extend the spinner so it'll end here 02:01:186 .
[Normal]

  1. Spacing errors. > 00:49:055 (4,5) - 00:58:563 (2,3) - 01:07:416 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:28:727 (4,5,6) - 01:32:170 (1,2) - 01:45:448 (1,2) - 01:58:399 (4,1) .
  2. 00:35:448 - I would add sth here. Because you leave 3/2 beat spacing on 00:34:629 (1,2) and 1/1 on 00:35:612 (2,3) so it's kinda hard to read for beginners.
  3. 01:10:038 (4) - Iirc, kicksliders with 2 or more kicks aren't recommended in Normal.
  4. 01:25:448 (3,4,5) - The flow's a bit weird imo. I can see that you're trying for symmetry on 01:25:448 (3,4) but maybe you can do sth about this?
  5. 01:42:989 (2) - I think 01:42:989 - 01:43:153 didn't match anything in the song, or even if it did. It isn't audible enough to follow.
[Advanced]

  1. HP 4.5? So it would become linear in the from of Normal(4) > Advanced(4.5) > Hard(5) .
  2. 00:23:153 (2,1) - The flow here could be improved. I feel like the angle of 00:23:153 (2) could be tweaked a bit to support the flow.
  3. 00:44:465 (1,2,1) - Most advanced players will interpret 00:44:629 (2,1) as 1/2 beat spacing and missed it. So I wouldn't recommend to do a stack here. Similar case applies to 01:09:711 (3,1) .
  4. 00:47:743 (1,2) - Probably this is intentional. But I think it's kinda stand out because there aren't any overlaps since the beginning of the song.
  5. 00:52:825 - There's a drum sound here so map sth here as well?
  6. 01:49:383 (2) - NC?
  7. 02:02:661 - There's a triplet starting here so you shouldn't ignore it.
  8. 02:07:088 (3,1) - Is this intentional for a "not-quite-a-blanket" on this one?
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:760 (1) - Add a finish on the head? Same applies to 01:23:153 (1) .
  2. 01:14:711 - I think maybe a triplet here could be changed to sth else, because I didn't hear anything here.
  3. 01:26:104 (2) - Almost touches the life bar, you should move it down a bit.
  4. 02:11:514 - Map sth here? Since there's a drum sound.
[Insane]

  1. Please take note that I'm noob at modding Insane.
  2. 00:15:284 (1,2,3,1) - It's kinda hard to read when playing this for the first time imo.
  3. 01:00:858 - I think SV should be increased here instead of 00:59:383 .
  4. 01:10:038 (1,2,3,4) - I think there must be some patterns that can present the rhythm than just putting these linearly.
  5. 02:11:350 (6,7,1) - I would do sth similar to this because it flows better. > http://puu.sh/m5Viu/345a2d28a3.jpg (I kept the same DS between these objects)
Btw there is an unsapped object somewhere in some diff and I forgot to mention it.
DONNEEEEEEEE. Alright, good luck~
PS. I think the gap spread is fine.
Topic Starter
Dailycare

Electoz wrote:

Hi, we meet again. That map I modded before was ranked already? I haven't noticed lol, omedetou gozaimasu. Oh, not ranked :3 just qualified. but i think it's ready to be ranked lol
[Easy]

  1. SV changes are not recommended in Easy. Stacking objects like this 02:07:416 (5,6) is also not recommended.
  2. Some spacing errors. > 00:55:284 (4,1) - 00:58:235 (4,1) - 01:06:104 (1,2) - 01:47:743 (4,1) .
  3. 00:23:809 (3,1) - The blanket is a bit off imo.
  4. 00:35:940 (3,1) - Can you improve the symmetry here?
  5. 00:40:858 (2,3,1) - I think the flow here should be improved.
  6. 00:47:743 (1) - Maybe end the slider here 00:48:071 instead?
  7. 01:34:301 (4) - How about making this the same shape with 01:34:956 (1,2) ?
  8. 01:58:399 (1) - I would extend the spinner so it'll end here 02:01:186 .
[Normal]

  1. Spacing errors. > 00:49:055 (4,5) - 00:58:563 (2,3) - 01:07:416 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:28:727 (4,5,6) - 01:32:170 (1,2) - 01:45:448 (1,2) - 01:58:399 (4,1) . really thank you for this xd
  2. 00:35:448 - I would add sth here. Because you leave 3/2 beat spacing on 00:34:629 (1,2) and 1/1 on 00:35:612 (2,3) so it's kinda hard to read for beginners. I know generalization is not good behavior, but my two friends who have not played osu!std just passed this without any problems yesterday..
  3. 01:10:038 (4) - Iirc, kicksliders with 2 or more kicks aren't recommended in Normal.
  4. 01:25:448 (3,4,5) - The flow's a bit weird imo. I can see that you're trying for symmetry on 01:25:448 (3,4) but maybe you can do sth about this?
  5. 01:42:989 (2) - I think 01:42:989 - 01:43:153 didn't match anything in the song, or even if it did. It isn't audible enough to follow. I fixed hitsound a little
[Advanced]

  1. HP 4.5? So it would become linear in the from of Normal(4) > Advanced(4.5) > Hard(5) .
  2. 00:23:153 (2,1) - The flow here could be improved. I feel like the angle of 00:23:153 (2) could be tweaked a bit to support the flow.
  3. 00:44:465 (1,2,1) - Most advanced players will interpret 00:44:629 (2,1) as 1/2 beat spacing and missed it. So I wouldn't recommend to do a stack here. Similar case applies to 01:09:711 (3,1) .
  4. 00:47:743 (1,2) - Probably this is intentional. But I think it's kinda stand out because there aren't any overlaps since the beginning of the song. fixed, and i stacked (3) on (1)'s head
  5. 00:52:825 - There's a drum sound here so map sth here as well?
  6. 01:49:383 (2) - NC?
  7. 02:02:661 - There's a triplet starting here so you shouldn't ignore it. Okay .. but i'll fix it later. cuz i don't come up with better flows
  8. 02:07:088 (3,1) - Is this intentional for a "not-quite-a-blanket" on this one? lol no xD
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:760 (1) - Add a finish on the head? Same applies to 01:23:153 (1) . applied hitsound to all diffs' 00:26:760 (1), but i didn't apply to 01:23:153 (1)
  2. 01:14:711 - I think maybe a triplet here could be changed to sth else, because I didn't hear anything here.
  3. 01:26:104 (2) - Almost touches the life bar, you should move it down a bit. moved it down A BIT.. it may touch the life bar still
  4. 02:11:514 - Map sth here? Since there's a drum sound.
[Insane]

  1. Please take note that I'm noob at modding Insane.
  2. 00:15:284 (1,2,3,1) - It's kinda hard to read when playing this for the first time imo.
  3. 01:00:858 - I think SV should be increased here instead of 00:59:383 . umm.. i think it's fine
  4. 01:10:038 (1,2,3,4) - I think there must be some patterns that can present the rhythm than just putting these linearly. I'll fix it later, but i may not fix it.
  5. 02:11:350 (6,7,1) - I would do sth similar to this because it flows better. > http://puu.sh/m5Viu/345a2d28a3.jpg (I kept the same DS between these objects) your suggestion was replaced some similar one
Btw there is an unsapped object somewhere in some diff and I forgot to mention it. wtf i'll try to fix them ;w;
DONNEEEEEEEE. Alright, good luck~
PS. I think the gap spread is fine. Thanks! <3
oh sorry to be late ;w; I didn't notice about your modidng.. although you're noob at Insane or Extra, yea, you're obviously PRO at Easy/Normal/Hard diffs! thanks again~
..And I'm gonna reremake easy diff without SV changes lol
Vovan
From my modding queue.

[Normal]

00:54:956 (6,7) - Don't stack.
00:56:924 (4,5) - ^
01:00:530 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't make the diff to harder.
01:07:088 (3) - 1 circle, not a slider.
01:58:727 (1,2) - Don't stack.
02:03:153 (6,1) - Fix Blanket

[Insane]

00:15:612 (2,3) - Don't make jumps like this.

For me, looks fine, I'm a beginner at modding Insane
Topic Starter
Dailycare

Dono027 wrote:

From my modding queue.

[Normal]

00:54:956 (6,7) - Don't stack.
00:56:924 (4,5) - ^
01:00:530 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't make the diff to harder.
01:07:088 (3) - 1 circle, not a slider.
01:58:727 (1,2) - Don't stack.
02:03:153 (6,1) - Fix Blanket

[Insane]

00:15:612 (2,3) - Don't make jumps like this.

For me, looks fine, I'm a beginner at modding Insane
Oh, i didn't accept your suggestion about stacking ;w; it's fine for me.. Anyway thanks for your modding!
SkinnyJommy
hi! NM from my queue, sorry busy with christmas and stuff ;-;

[Hana]
  1. 00:10:867 - Shouldn't there be a circle here??
  2. 00:40:366 (2) - move this to 352, 344 so the slider ends don't overlap, cuz that looks UUGLY BRUH
  3. 00:44:465 (1,2) - This spacing is pretty extreme and sudden, even for an extra difficulty
  4. 00:50:202 (1,2,3) - Are these supposed to be stacked? Because this seems like really random spacing idk
  5. 01:24:956 (4) - I think there should be an NC here
  6. 01:25:448 (7) - I think this should be a slider, instead of a random stop here
  7. 01:50:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This should be some time of stream to follow the string sound here

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:867 - Again, missing a circle here?!
  2. 00:40:366 (2,3) - Stack please!
  3. 00:51:186 (4) - This slider on the red tick isn't really following anything and feels out of place ;-; maybe you could ctrl g this with 3
  4. 01:14:956 (5,6,1) - The pitch is increasing here, so the spacing should increase too!!

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:153 (2) - This slider has the appropriate sounds to make it a repeat slider, but instead you use a repeat on 00:24:137 (1) - this slider when there is clearly sounds that the slider passes over
  2. 00:44:956 (1,3) - stack
  3. 01:01:842 (4,2) - stack
  4. 01:29:547 (6,2) - ^
  5. 02:02:334 (1,2,3) - ^

[Advanced]
  1. 00:13:140 (2) - move this to 484, 282 so it can keep the flow moving smoothly!
  2. 00:39:547 (7,1) - 7 needs more spacing because it looks like 1/2 spacing to me
  3. 00:44:629 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:59:219 (3,1) - I feel this is a bit too far tbh
  5. 01:09:711 (3,1) - same thing as the previous suggestions, it looks like 1/2 spacing
  6. 01:20:038 (2,1) - stack
  7. 01:38:235 (3,1) - blanket!!
  8. 01:42:497 (4,3) - this overlap is really bad looking
  9. 01:43:809 (4,3) - stack!!
  10. 01:51:022 (2,1,2,3) - ugly overlap
  11. 01:56:268 (2,4) - stack

[Normal]
  1. 00:51:514 (4,6) - You should make these sliders parallel!
  2. 00:54:956 (6,7) - Though I am not sure about stacks in these easier difficulties... because its hard to read for new players
  3. 00:56:924 (4,5) - ^

    Well, I think the kiai time is very very dense for a Normal... that can't be good tbh

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:514 (1,2) - You should keep all sliders and circles pointing in the same direction!
  2. 00:26:760 (1,2) - Don't have slider ends closer to the circle then the head of the slider because newer players will mistake the end of the slider for the head and miss it... ive seen it happen with my own eyes
  3. 00:42:497 (1,2) - again keep all things flowing in the same direction please!!!
  4. 01:04:465 (2,3) - this is a big nono too... having 3 closer to 1 then 2 is really bad and is so hard to read

Well that's it for my mod! I hope it helped you out in some way

and also OMFG I LOVE THIS SONG UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL OKAY gl with this
Topic Starter
Dailycare

SkinnyJommy wrote:

hi! NM from my queue, sorry busy with christmas and stuff ;-;

[Hana]
  1. 00:10:867 - Shouldn't there be a circle here?? I don't think so.. but i accept your suggestion
  2. 00:40:366 (2) - move this to 352, 344 so the slider ends don't overlap, cuz that looks UUGLY BRUH
  3. 00:44:465 (1,2) - This spacing is pretty extreme and sudden, even for an extra difficulty
  4. 00:50:202 (1,2,3) - Are these supposed to be stacked? Because this seems like really random spacing idk i fixed some patterns and rhythm
  5. 01:24:956 (4) - I think there should be an NC here
  6. 01:25:448 (7) - I think this should be a slider, instead of a random stop here oh.. is it random stop?? 01:25:448 (4) - i heard the strong sound here, so i made a jump with stop that emphasize the sound
  7. 01:50:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This should be some time of stream to follow the string sound here wo, i agree with you :3 but because i didn't come up with any inspirations of streams, so i passed it, sorry..

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:867 - Again, missing a circle here?! yea, same as insane. but i didn't fix cuz i didn't feel importance of note in Insane diff ;w;
  2. 00:40:366 (2,3) - Stack please!
  3. 00:51:186 (4) - This slider on the red tick isn't really following anything and feels out of place ;-; maybe you could ctrl g this with 3 So i changed slider to notes. i think it's better than the original patterns, or even yours xD
  4. 01:14:956 (5,6,1) - The pitch is increasing here, so the spacing should increase too!! um.. i think the spacing between (5) and (6) is already fine, So 01:15:284 (1,2) - i did ctrl+g this!

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:153 (2) - This slider has the appropriate sounds to make it a repeat slider, but instead you use a repeat on 00:24:137 (1) - this slider when there is clearly sounds that the slider passes over
  2. 00:44:956 (1,3) - stack
  3. 01:01:842 (4,2) - stack
  4. 01:29:547 (6,2) - ^
  5. 02:02:334 (1,2,3) - ^

    i fixed only stacks, but i'll consider your suggestion about repeat sliders :3

[Advanced]
  1. 00:13:140 (2) - move this to 484, 282 so it can keep the flow moving smoothly!
  2. 00:39:547 (7,1) - 7 needs more spacing because it looks like 1/2 spacing to me just... um.. but i obviously fixed it lol
  3. 00:44:629 (2,1) - ^ Sorry, i wanna hold my decision about that spacing ..
  4. 00:59:219 (3,1) - I feel this is a bit too far tbh
  5. 01:09:711 (3,1) - same thing as the previous suggestions, it looks like 1/2 spacing i also fixed previous slider..
  6. 01:20:038 (2,1) - stack
  7. 01:38:235 (3,1) - blanket!! Oh, sorry.. I didn't intend blanket ;w; but i'll fix it if other say "Blanket!!!!!"
  8. 01:42:497 (4,3) - this overlap is really bad looking
  9. 01:43:809 (4,3) - stack!! OKAY!!!!
  10. 01:51:022 (2,1,2,3) - ugly overlap
  11. 01:56:268 (2,4) - stack

[Normal]
  1. 00:51:514 (4,6) - You should make these sliders parallel!
  2. 00:54:956 (6,7) - Though I am not sure about stacks in these easier difficulties... because its hard to read for new players
  3. 00:56:924 (4,5) - ^

    Well, I think the kiai time is very very dense for a Normal... that can't be good tbh

    fixed all. and i'll find the way to make dense stuff to normal stuff >w<

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:514 (1,2) - You should keep all sliders and circles pointing in the same direction!
  2. 00:26:760 (1,2) - Don't have slider ends closer to the circle then the head of the slider because newer players will mistake the end of the slider for the head and miss it... ive seen it happen with my own eyes
  3. 00:42:497 (1,2) - again keep all things flowing in the same direction please!!!
  4. 01:04:465 (2,3) - this is a big nono too... having 3 closer to 1 then 2 is really bad and is so hard to read
Fixed all too!

Well that's it for my mod! I hope it helped you out in some way

and also OMFG I LOVE THIS SONG UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL OKAY gl with this
UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST GIRL UMI BEST...

SkinnyJommy wrote:

actually there is one rule... name your favorite anime character!!
I REALLY LOVE UMI AS YOU LOVE yea, i noticed your modding queue's rule, and i tell you my fav character :3 i'm sorry again to not read your rule carefully T-T
SnowNiNo_
From my queue

[Insane]
00:15:284 (1) - suggest delete this note
00:23:645 (3) - dont overlap with 00:23:153 (2)
00:33:973 (1) - suggest 2 notes here
01:05:284 (4) - suggest 3 notes here
01:07:088 (4,5,6,7,1) - ctrl + G, cause the flow is not good XD
01:39:793 (4,5) - stick together LOL
01:52:825 (4,5) - make the space bigger

[Hana]
00:15:285 (1) - suggest delete this note
01:11:022 (5) - if you want to match the vocal here, you need to add somrthing in 01:10:694 - 01:10:858
01:19:711 (2,3,4,5) - flow is not good LOL
01:24:383 (6) - delete

Nice map, nice hitsounds, nice music, and nice BG <3
give a star ;)
GL m8
Topic Starter
Dailycare

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

[Insane]
00:15:284 (1) - suggest delete this note um.. i heard the sound like drums, so i placed note :3
00:23:645 (3) - dont overlap with 00:23:153 (2) also fixed 02:05:448 (2,3) -
00:33:973 (1) - suggest 2 notes here
01:05:284 (4) - suggest 3 notes here
01:07:088 (4,5,6,7,1) - ctrl + G, cause the flow is not good XD
01:39:793 (4,5) - stick together LOL
01:52:825 (4,5) - make the space bigger i don't want that, but.. i'll accept your suggestion

[Hana]
00:15:285 (1) - suggest delete this note same as insane diff xd
01:11:022 (5) - if you want to match the vocal here, you need to add somrthing in 01:10:694 - 01:10:858 oh sorry about that. it's just overmapped. if other modders want to fix it, i'll do it
01:19:711 (2,3,4,5) - flow is not good LOL
01:24:383 (6) - delete

Nice map, nice hitsounds, nice music, and nice BG <3
give a star ;)
GL m8
Thanks for your mod and thanks for star! ;) i love it xD
Kalibe
As requested.
  1. Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol.
Easy :
  1. 01:04:793 (3,1) - This flow is really weird tho. Check this if you don't know what i mean lol.
  2. Idk really why you don't hitsound heads like 01:13:809 (1,1) - I can clearly hear a good sound to hitsound it with Whistle or Finish lol.
  3. 01:58:399 (1) - Why after this spinner break is so huge? lol. You can easily extend it to ( 02:02:497 - dowbeat ) and c o o l.
  4. 01:00:858 (1) - Unnessesary NC imo.
  5. 01:24:465 (1) - This object is nearly out of offscreen lol.
Normal :
  1. You can raise AR to 5 if you want.
  2. 00:42:170 (4,1) - Just try and fix this blanket.
  3. 01:08:071 (2,3,4) - This is really hard to play for nuubies. I rather change to something other, like tadah~ . Try this at least tho.
  4. 01:31:022 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
  5. 01:32:497 (2,3,4,5) - 01:37:743 (2,3) - Wot ? I highly recommend to delete those red beats 1/2 sliders repeaters and put it something more creative lol.
Advanced :
  1. Why you called this diif "Advanced" ? Advanced is Light Hard ( 2.25 - 2.8 stars if i remember ). Change name to "Hard" instead of Adv. dude.
  2. 01:14:711 (4) - I don't hear any sound on this circle. Prefer to remove it.
  3. 01:22:825 (4) - Missing Finish on head? This is the same sound as you have in 01:22:170 (2) - when (2) have Clap and Finish together.
  4. 01:31:842 (2,3,4) - This is ugly imo. 3 stacks in 1/2 beats is not cool at all. Try this rhythm instead, should be work i guess.
  5. 01:45:120 (3,4) - Why is this spacing becomes bigger? Any reason? It should be increases on 01:45:284 (4,1) - imo.
Ok, that's all. Hope i helped. Good luck o/
Topic Starter
Dailycare

Kalibe wrote:

As requested.
  1. Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol. lol
Easy :
  1. 01:04:793 (3,1) - This flow is really weird tho. Check this if you don't know what i mean lol.
  2. Idk really why you don't hitsound heads like 01:13:809 (1,1) - I can clearly hear a good sound to hitsound it with Whistle or Finish lol. lol idk why i didn't hitsound it
  3. 01:58:399 (1) - Why after this spinner break is so huge? lol. You can easily extend it to ( 02:02:497 - dowbeat ) and c o o l. I extend it to 02:03:153 -
  4. 01:00:858 (1) - Unnessesary NC imo. um.. NC per two down beats, it's my original pattern of NC in Easy/Normal diffs. but I heard strong sound here (00:59:383 - ), instead of 00:58:235 (4) - , I added NC to 00:59:383 (1) -
  5. 01:24:465 (1) - This object is nearly out of offscreen lol.
Normal :
  1. You can raise AR to 5 if you want. accepted xd
  2. 00:42:170 (4,1) - Just try and fix this blanket.
  3. 01:08:071 (2,3,4) - This is really hard to play for nuubies. I rather change to something other, like tadah~ . Try this at least tho.
  4. 01:31:022 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
  5. 01:32:497 (2,3,4,5) - 01:37:743 (2,3) - Wot ? I highly recommend to delete those red beats 1/2 sliders repeaters and put it something more creative lol. lol i fixed it but i think it's not creative ;w;
Fixed all!

Advanced :
  1. Why you called this diif "Advanced" ? Advanced is Light Hard ( 2.25 - 2.8 stars if i remember ). Change name to "Hard" instead of Adv. dude. There is already Hard diff. so, i named this diff "Advanced" regardless of star ratings..
  2. 01:14:711 (4) - I don't hear any sound on this circle. Prefer to remove it. Oh it's my mistake :3
  3. 01:22:825 (4) - Missing Finish on head? This is the same sound as you have in 01:22:170 (2) - when (2) have Clap and Finish together. 01:22:170 (2) - that finish is just for emphasizing this slider. i know there are no strong sound here, but i think the finish match the song..
  4. 01:31:842 (2,3,4) - This is ugly imo. 3 stacks in 1/2 beats is not cool at all. Try this rhythm instead, should be work i guess. yea, but I didn't put note to 01:32:252 -
  5. 01:45:120 (3,4) - Why is this spacing becomes bigger? Any reason? It should be increases on 01:45:284 (4,1) - imo. lol there's no reason um... i fixed it but it's a little awkward. :3
Ok, that's all. Hope i helped. Good luck o/
Thanks for your modding >w</
_vanity
Nice mapset. Sorry, once again. ;)
Topic Starter
Dailycare

_vanity wrote:

Nice mapset. Sorry, once again. ;)
I don't care :D thank you, once again~
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