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CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru [Taiko]

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newyams99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May 7, 2016 at 10:22:27 AM

Artist: CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Title: Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru
Source: アオハライド
Tags: sekai ha wa ai ni michiteiru aoha ride aoharu op opening
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5061kb
Play Time: 05:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Oni (3.89 stars, 1307 notes)
Download: CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru
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この気持ちが恋なのか。
#9 - 世界は恋に落ちている


My 9th submitted beatmap. Love the song <3
Song Info and Lyrics
This song is from the album Sekai Wa (Ha) I Ni Michiteiru. Sung by CHiCO, composed by HoneyWorks, this song was the opening theme to Ao Haru Ride (アオハライド).

Lyrics (日本語)
世界は恋に落ちている 光の矢胸を射す
君をわかりたいんだよ
「ねぇ、教えて」

すれ違う言葉にちょっとだけの後悔涙こぼれて
忙しい感情鼓動にリンクする
チューニング確かめたいんだ

目的ばっかにとらわれて
大事なものが霞んで逃げて
今日もリスタート

世界は恋に落ちている 光の矢胸を射す
君をわかりたいんだよ
「ねぇ、教えて」
たった1ミリが遠くて
駆け抜けた青春(ひび)に
忘れない忘れられない輝く1ページ

お似合いの二人になんだか複雑な気持ちがいるよ
初めての感情鼓動にリンクする
体温計壊れちゃったかな?

自分のこと分からないまま
あの子にアドバイスまでしちゃって
胸が痛いや・・・

世界は恋に落ちている 光の矢胸を射す
気づいたこの想いは
「もう、遅いの」
あの子の方がかわいいの知ってるだけど
「うまくいかないで」なんてね…逃げ出したくせに。

バカ・・・

(君のこと全部わかりたいって想っちゃう
これが恋だった
初めて気付いたな
絶対振り向いて欲しい
遅かったけど諦めたくない
だって、好きだから)


春に咲いた花が恋をした
花は必死に上を向いて笑った
青い夏の蕾も恋をした
咲かない花と火薬の匂い

ホントの気持ち言葉にして大事なこと話せたら今日もリスタート

鈍感な君だから口に出して言わなきゃ
今君に伝えるよ
「ねぇ、好きです」

世界は恋に落ちている 光の矢胸を射す
全部わかりたいんだよ
「ねぇ、聞かせて」
手繰り寄せてもう0センチ
駆け抜けた青春(ひび)に
忘れない 忘れられない 輝く1ページ

Lyrics (English) Translated by me.

The world is falling in love; an arrow of light pierces through my heart.
I want to know you,
"Hey, can you tell me?"

I shed tears at the slight regret of my misunderstood words.
My heartbeat links with my jumbled emotions -
I want to confirm the tuning of it.

Always getting caught up in my objectives,
I lost sight of the important things.
Today I restart again.

The world is falling in love; an arrow of light pierces through my heart.
I want to know you,
"Hey, can you tell me?"
The one millimeter between us is so far.
The days (youth) that passed,
I won't forget, I can't forget this single shining page.

I have some complicating feelings towards those matching two.
My first feelings links with my heartbeat.
Did my thermometer break?

Not knowing my own feelings
I even gave advice to that girl.
My chest hurts.

The world is falling in love; an arrow of light pierces through my heart.
These feelings that I realize were
"so late."
I know that that girl is cuter but
"I don't want them together," but who am I kidding?... I was the one who ran away.

Idiot...

(I keep on wanting to know more about him,
This was love.
I realized for the first time,
I want him to be interested in me,
I was a bit late but I don't want to give up,
Because I love him.)


The flower that bloomed in spring fell in love,
The flower smiled at the ground frantically.
The flower bud of the blue summer also fell in love -
The smell of the flower that can't bloom and gunpowder.

If I'm able to explain my true feelings and speak about the important things, I'll restart today again.

Because you're dense, I have to say them to you,
So I'll say them right now
"Hey, I love you."

The world is falling in love; an arrow of light pierces through my heart.
I want to know you,
"Hey, can you tell me?"
I pulled you close, there's zero centimeters.
The days (youth) that passed,
I won't forget, I can't forget this single shining page.
Intelli
ayy lmao first

Mod from queue

Oni:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - In general, try not to overuse certain patterns, like dk k d. Mixing it up with some kd d d or dk d k depending on the song would help alot. I'll only mention a few specific instances in the mod itself for this reason.

  2. 00:29:947 (86) - Remove and swap 00:29:831 and 00:30:062

  3. 00:40:908 (139) - Change to d

  4. 00:42:524 (145ish) - I would rework this section a bit so you can map to the piano riff that happens here, for SR's sake.

  5. 01:16:793 (41) - ctrl+g with next note

  6. 01:17:831 (47) - ^

  7. 01:18:755 (50) - Change to d

  8. 01:42:408 (0) - is it just me or is there a sound effect like uncle fucking pecos from tom and jerry breaking his guitar string here? Metadata issue clearly, the artist is CHiCO with Honeyworks feat. Uncle Pecos.

  9. 01:50:370 (199) - I would start with 4 ks because the sound from the drumset jumps down to one of the lowest drums on the fifth hit.

  10. 01:51:524 (208) - Rework these first 2 beats to match the vocals better (k dk k d d k or something)

  11. 02:52:447 (131) - Far too monocolor of a stream, maybe split it into a triple then a stream based off the drumset? Just spitballin' since its kinda boring as-is. Rest of the 2 kiais here are great.

  12. 03:03:524 (153) - d

  13. 03:47:831 (270) - d

  14. 04:22:908 (1) - Make sure not to overuse dk ddk here

  15. 04:35:831 (76) - map the drum solo damnit

  16. 04:48:755 (139) - K

  17. 05:07:101 (227) - wow holy shit this song ends abruptly.
kewl map dude
Topic Starter
newyams99

IntelliTroodon wrote:

ayy lmao first

Mod from queue

Oni:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - In general, try not to overuse certain patterns, like dk k d. Mixing it up with some kd d d or dk d k depending on the song would help alot. I'll only mention a few specific instances in the mod itself for this reason. I personally just stick to what sounds best and don't try to go for variety, but I'll see what I can do.

  2. 00:29:947 (86) - Remove and swap 00:29:831 and 00:30:062 Done, also changed the stream pattern there a bit.

  3. 00:40:908 (139) - Change to d I try to always have a k to match the drum beat on beats 2 and 4 (1st and 3rd small tick), since it's present in almost ever 4/4 song. Changing to d doesn't match this style.

  4. 00:42:524 (145ish) - I would rework this section a bit so you can map to the piano riff that happens here, for SR's sake. Sure, although the SR didn't change xD

  5. 01:16:793 (41) - ctrl+g with next note Done, also Ctrl + G'd on 01:09:408 (9,10) for consistency.

  6. 01:17:831 (47) - ^ This one should be fine because of the k matching the drum beat form that I try to follow. Also matches the piano.

  7. 01:18:755 (50) - Change to d

  8. 01:42:408 (0) - is it just me or is there a sound effect like uncle fucking pecos from tom and jerry breaking his guitar string here? Metadata issue clearly, the artist is CHiCO with Honeyworks feat. Uncle Pecos. Uncle Pecos is HoneyWorks confirmed. I guess this'll be unrankable if I don't change it :P

  9. 01:50:370 (199) - I would start with 4 ks because the sound from the drumset jumps down to one of the lowest drums on the fifth hit. Sure.

  10. 01:51:524 (208) - Rework these first 2 beats to match the vocals better (k dk k d d k or something) I intentionally composed the current rhythm since I thought the instrumentals sounded much different and more focused on imo. No change.

  11. 02:52:447 (131) - Far too monocolor of a stream, maybe split it into a triple then a stream based off the drumset? Just spitballin' since its kinda boring as-is. Rest of the 2 kiais here are great. Changed, but it's still kinda boring. Well, I'll see how it does.

  12. 03:03:524 (153) - d Done, I think I was thinking of doing this before I requested the mod but totally forgot to do it lol

  13. 03:47:831 (270) - d Done, also changed the hit before to k.

  14. 04:22:908 (1) - Make sure not to overuse dk ddk here I'll see what I can do again. I'll try Ctrl + Ging some of the dks.

  15. 04:35:831 (76) - map the drum solo damnit I really wish I could x.x But I really like the finishers :(

  16. 04:48:755 (139) - K Done.

  17. 05:07:101 (227) - wow holy shit this song ends abruptly. Yep.
kewl map dude


Thanks :D
IControl
iControl's mod

Oni
00:19:101 - add k it goes with the pattern you did earlier and I hear it in the drum beat
00:22:793 (54,55) - change to kK? not sure if its allowed but sounds nicer
00:24:639 - k for consistency
00:25:678 - ddI think the other notes you had were kinda boring compared to the triples patterns you had going on
00:26:485 - k
00:29:601 (88,89) - ctrl g I think you meant to map k to the piano? the piano starts at the red tic
00:30:062 (91) - d the drums sound much lower for a k
00:32:716 - dI think you were mapping to the lyrics which usually ends up being kinda awkward in taiko imo. Plus you have a cool double pattern going on
00:36:639 - dTriple pattern consistency
00:36:755 (125) - ddrums sound to low here
00:42:293 (150) - move to 00:42:062 - There was no sound there lol
00:53:601 - d The map needs more pressure here plus it sounds awkward mapping to the lyrics again
00:55:101 - k more pressure again , not as boring
01:14:485 (32,33) - ctrl g Drum notes sound lower
01:26:370 (85) - kConstancy from the previous triple
01:50:716 (202,203) - cltr g Not as boring i don't like mono tone streams that much
02:01:331 - d constancy
02:33:870 (37,38) - cltr g constancy
02:47:601 (106,107) - cltr g The first note sounds lower than the second
02:52:908 (134) - k One i don't like mono tone streams, Two I think theres a sound difference right here
03:38:255 - add kdd I feel like something should go there but i'm not sure what to do with the finisher
04:08:139 - change audio to 40% If your going to map to something very low you should make notes sound low as well
04:33:294 (56) - d Drums sound lower here
04:33:639 (59) - remove 04:33:870 (59) - remove There are no sounds there. I think you were getting to dk kd happy lol
04:34:562 (63) - k Kinda diffuclt to explain this but if you change the playback rate to 50% you can hear theres a diffrence between 04:34:562 (65) - and 04:35:024 (69) - k Should be there to establish that difference. sorry not that good at explain things lol
04:35:486 (73) - k Kai time should have more kats, also sounds better imo
04:43:563 (111) - k 04:44:024 (114) - k 04:44:370 (116) - k mapping to the piano here
04:59:831 (188) - if possible finisher
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
newyams99

IControl wrote:

iControl's mod

Oni
00:19:101 - add k it goes with the pattern you did earlier and I hear it in the drum beat
I considered doing this when I first mapped it. I decided not to because I'd use the 2 hit 1/4 pattern too often, resulting in a loss of specialness (specialty?) in the ones that have a really loud sounding drum beat like at 00:15:870 (22,23). Will do this if there are frequent suggestions regarding this.
00:22:793 (54,55) - change to kK? not sure if its allowed but sounds nicer I wish I could do that but that's an unrankable pattern.
00:24:639 - k for consistency Same as before.
00:25:678 - ddI think the other notes you had were kinda boring compared to the triples patterns you had going on Yeah, thought the same. Added.
00:26:485 - k I'll consider this. I don't want to do this mainly because I've had a d here for the section.
00:29:601 (88,89) - ctrl g I think you meant to map k to the piano? the piano starts at the red tic
Changed by making 00:29:601 (85) k instead.
00:30:062 (91) - d the drums sound much lower for a k Done.
00:32:716 - dI think you were mapping to the lyrics which usually ends up being kinda awkward in taiko imo. Plus you have a cool double pattern going on That is a totally valid argument. It's just me that really doesn't like mapping with the double pattern if there's no distinct vocal or instrumental to match it.
00:36:639 - dTriple pattern consistency Done.
00:36:755 (125) - ddrums sound to low here Wanted to match to the vocals here.
00:42:293 (150) - move to 00:42:062 - There was no sound there lol There TECHNICALLY is a sound. I'll change it :P
00:53:601 - d The map needs more pressure here plus it sounds awkward mapping to the lyrics again
00:55:101 - k more pressure again , not as boring I want to deny the previous two because it'd be a continual kdkdkdkdkdk rhythm which is kinda pushing it on repetition.
01:14:485 (32,33) - ctrl g Drum notes sound lower This would work too, but I wanted to match the k to the vocals.
01:26:370 (85) - kConstancy from the previous triple Done.
01:50:716 (202,203) - cltr g Not as boring i don't like mono tone streams that much I'll try it, see what others say.
02:01:331 - d constancy Same thing as before, no change.
02:33:870 (37,38) - cltr g constancy ^
02:47:601 (106,107) - cltr g The first note sounds lower than the second Done.
02:52:908 (134) - k One i don't like mono tone streams, Two I think theres a sound difference right here I tried this, but I didn't really like the sound of it.
03:38:255 - add kdd I feel like something should go there but i'm not sure what to do with the finisher
Meh, I'll leave it for now.
04:08:139 - change audio to 40% If your going to map to something very low you should make notes sound low as well 60% is quiet enough. Changing it to 40% will be too small a difference from the Audio Volume at 30% at the whispering part.
04:33:294 (56) - d Drums sound lower here
Will keep in mind. I tried it, but it sounded a bit weird imo.
04:33:639 (59) - remove 04:33:870 (59) - remove There are no sounds there. I think you were getting to dk kd happy lol
Idk, I felt by doing this made this section feel really empty. Will keep in mind.
04:34:562 (63) - k Kinda diffuclt to explain this but if you change the playback rate to 50% you can hear theres a diffrence between 04:34:562 (65) - and 04:35:024 (69) - k Should be there to establish that difference. sorry not that good at explain things lol Sure, why not :P
04:35:486 (73) - k Kai time should have more kats, also sounds better imo
I'll keep this in mind, but no change for now.
04:43:563 (111) - k 04:44:024 (114) - k 04:44:370 (116) - k mapping to the piano here
Did for the second one.
04:59:831 (188) - if possible finisher Can't do that rip :/
Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod :D
IControl
50% audio change at that section? still feel like it should be lower
Topic Starter
newyams99

IControl wrote:

50% audio change at that section? still feel like it should be lower
Okok I'll change it lel :P
Elfie
Hi, from my queue :)
maps seems to be very clear and pleasant to play so i guess there won't be many suggestions
Oni
  1. have you thought about making the second diff?
  2. 00:29:139 - 00:29:370 - there is a place for 1/6, you may use it somehow
  3. 00:29:601 - d bcuz of lower tone of drum
  4. 00:29:831 - k ^ also drum
    ^ example of this part
  5. 00:49:447 (189,192,195) - k if you want to emphasise the bell
  6. 00:51:755 - k (cuz i hear a cymbal)
  7. k
  8. 01:27:524 - 01:28:101 - look http://puu.sh/mkOzW/a5c9c9bc89.jpg, kats are in wrong place for me - i put them to the highest drum tone and piano at the same time
  9. 01:28:793 - k also
  10. 01:50:370 - 01:51:293 - i hear something like this, check if this fits for you
  11. 02:05:485 - ,02:05:947 - you may fill these gaps with d
  12. 02:39:178 - k
  13. 02:39:408 - this may be deleted so 02:39:524 - this note may be a finisher
  14. 02:39:293 - and this d cuz it's low
  15. 02:40:793 - 02:40:908 - here you may put dk(no finisher) according to drums
  16. 02:47:485 - ,02:47:947 - here you may also fill gaps
  17. 02:52:908 - this should be k, this is hearably higher than the previous one
  18. 02:54:293 - i think you should increase SV a little because it's disturbing the reading a bit (or just move to 02:56:139 - ) it's up to you
  19. 03:38:255 - you may add a note here (guitar)
  20. 03:50:716 - k
  21. 04:34:216 - 04:35:831 - check if u like it
  22. 05:04:216 - k also

I hope it's helpful :)
Topic Starter
newyams99

Elfie wrote:

Hi, from my queue :)
maps seems to be very clear and pleasant to play so i guess there won't be many suggestions
Oni
  1. have you thought about making the second diff? No need to, since it's over 5 minutes :D
  2. 00:29:139 - 00:29:370 - there is a place for 1/6, you may use it somehow Oooh ok. Will change if it gets suggested to be removed.
  3. 00:29:601 - d bcuz of lower tone of drum
  4. 00:29:831 - k ^ also drum
    ^ example of this part I made small modifications to this rhythm, but for the most part is changed. Still not sure how good it sounds (it's fine), but idk if it's better than the other one.
  5. 00:49:447 (189,192,195) - k if you want to emphasise the bell Yeah, the bell's unimportant here imo.
  6. 00:51:755 - k (cuz i hear a cymbal) I'd like to keep this as a d to contrast the drum sound on the next hit. The cymbal isn't loud enough for that I think.
  7. k
  8. 01:27:524 - 01:28:101 - look http://puu.sh/mkOzW/a5c9c9bc89.jpg, kats are in wrong place for me - i put them to the highest drum tone and piano at the same time I think it's fine the way it is now. I only wanted to match the piano here and the piano is only going up in pitch so technically I could put the k's anywhere :P Will take this into consideration tho.
  9. 01:28:793 - k also I personally don't like this :/
  10. 01:50:370 - 01:51:293 - i hear something like this, check if this fits for you That works :)
  11. 02:05:485 - ,02:05:947 - you may fill these gaps with d You can really hear the kkd rhythm here so I'd like to keep them separated.
  12. 02:39:178 - k Sure.
  13. 02:39:408 - this may be deleted so 02:39:524 - this note may be a finisher This has consistency issues, but I'll try it.
  14. 02:39:293 - and this d cuz it's low Ok.
  15. 02:40:793 - 02:40:908 - here you may put dk(no finisher) according to drums Again, consistency isses, but I'll do it.
  16. 02:47:485 - ,02:47:947 - here you may also fill gaps Changed the rhythm here.
  17. 02:52:908 - this should be k, this is hearably higher than the previous one Suggested in the previous mod, done.
  18. 02:54:293 - i think you should increase SV a little because it's disturbing the reading a bit (or just move to 02:56:139 - ) it's up to you I thought so too, but I wasn't sure. Will see what others say.
  19. 03:38:255 - you may add a note here (guitar) I like it without the hit.
  20. 03:50:716 - k Sure.
  21. 04:34:216 - 04:35:831 - check if u like it Idk. I'll keep it in mind.
  22. 05:04:216 - k also There'll be consistency issues. No change. :o


I hope it's helpful :)
Thanks for your mod :D
[R]
okay from my queue

[General]

01:21:524 - | 02:40:908 - | 04:37:216 - | i dont know how to explain my reason but why not continuing kiai time ? or if you like that structure try move the green line to 01:20:139 - its better

kiai time to long 1/3 (aimod) imo delete in this section 01:36:755 - | 04:52:447 -

[Oni]
00:22:562 - k
00:36:755 - d

00:37:216 (124,125,126,127) - 124 part have ksound in previous sec , imo change structure to k kkd

00:41:601 - delete ? you folowing vocal here

00:51:293 - k sound better
00:52:101 - add d

00:57:755 (223,224) - make ddd
00:59:370 (231,232,233,234) - make kdddk or kdddd

01:14:024 - add note ?
01:38:370 - delete ? emphasize
01:43:678 (168,169,170,171) - make kddkd

01:50:024 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) - imo this part is overlap, maybe you can following the piano

01:51:524 - you following drum this part but suddenly 01:53:831 - change to vocal, solution is 01:51:985 (210,211) - dont let this empty

02:05:947 - add note ?

03:47:716 - delete , overlap

04:16:216 - k variant
04:16:562 - ^
04:18:178 - ^
04:18:408 - ^


Okay just that
Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
newyams99

[R] wrote:

okay from my queue

[General]

01:21:524 - | 02:40:908 - | 04:37:216 - | i dont know how to explain my reason but why not continuing kiai time ? or if you like that structure try move the green line to 01:20:139 - its better Yeah, I do like that structure :P I originally thought to end the kiai time at the point you suggested, but after mapping it, I realized that it looked more visually appealing to me to have the kiai end with the piano gliss.

kiai time to long 1/3 (aimod) imo delete in this section 01:36:755 - | 04:52:447 - Deleted the first one. The second one not removed for the abrupt effect at the end.

[Oni]
00:22:562 - k I think this is fine as is.
00:36:755 - d Ok.

00:37:216 (124,125,126,127) - 124 part have ksound in previous sec , imo change structure to k kkd Partially changed.

00:41:601 - delete ? you folowing vocal here I'll be keeping this, but I'll consider the suggestion. I have a hit here because you can hear a fairly loud drum sound.

00:51:293 - k sound better Sure.
00:52:101 - add d I don't hear a good sound here, and the kkd should be isolated for good emphasis.

00:57:755 (223,224) - make ddd I don't like the idea of adding a hit where there isn't a good sound.
00:59:370 (231,232,233,234) - make kdddk or kdddd Made a modified rhythm.

01:14:024 - add note ? Saved that for the third kiai.
01:38:370 - delete ? emphasize Done.
01:43:678 (168,169,170,171) - make kddkd I'll consider this. I've thought about it before, but I'm still not too sure.

01:50:024 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) - imo this part is overlap, maybe you can following the piano It's very easy overlap, no need to change imo. Will change if pointed out again.

01:51:524 - you following drum this part but suddenly 01:53:831 - change to vocal, solution is 01:51:985 (210,211) - dont let this empty I really like the instrumentals here and it has a different kind of sound from the rest of the song. To distinguish this, I purposely have it like this. No change.

02:05:947 - add note ? I'd like to keep the kkd kkd for the emphasis on those separated sounds.

03:47:716 - delete , overlap Whut =_= I'll fix the overlap a bit at the end of the second kiai tho.

04:16:216 - k variant
04:16:562 - ^
04:18:178 - ^
04:18:408 - ^ Idk about this, but it's a possibility. Will consider that.


Okay just that
Good Luck ~
Thanks for your mod :D
EdamaMe411
にゅーやんさあああああああん!!>ω<

Mod依頼されてきたのですが、自分がmodしてもあまりいいことは言えません!そこら辺は許してね!!

じゃあ行くよ!

Oni
00:29:139 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - ここの音ピアノの音取ですよね?なのに最後の2音がkkになってて音が上がってしまってる。実際の音はどんどん音が低くなってるのでdで終えたほうがいいと思う。配置の見直しを!

00:32:601 - d追加。ここで無理に2連にしなくてもいいですね。偶数のノーツっていうのは、ほんとにリズム変える程度で使えばいいと思うので、ここは普通に3連打でいいと思います :)
00:39:985 - ^と同じ!

00:37:447 (126,127) - 削除‼ ここはボーカルのところに合わせたほうが短いノーツラインにまとめられるし、序盤から難しくならないようにできるのでお勧めです!

00:41:831 (148,149) - Ctrl+G、、00:42:062 (146) - のピアノを表現したいから(たとえ低くてもピアノの音取をしているんだと相手に意識させるため)

01:08:601 - d追加。せっかくのkiaiタイムなのにちょっと物足りないと感じました。もう少し詰めてもいいかも 8-)
01:08:370 - d追加。^に納得してくれたのなら!
01:10:216 - 01:10:447 - d、、^きっとよくなると思います!
01:12:293 - 01:12:062 - d^
01:15:755 - 01:15:985 - d^

01:20:139 (69) - d。ピアノも低くなってるし、次のボーカルの音程ともマッチするから ;)
01:46:678 (190) - ここ確かにピアノが強くたたかれてるからそこで止めたんですが、太鼓として叩く分にはそこで切ると流れが悪くなってしまいます。01:46:908 - 01:47:255 - に音を入れてあげてつないであげましょう!

01:53:370 (224,225) - DD。。。01:51:524 (217) - ここがKになってるので一貫性持たせるためにも ;)

02:09:293 (304) - k? 02:08:831 (300,301,302,303) - この4音と音が違うからっていう理由 :D

02:17:139 (342,343) - 削除‼‼‼ノーツライン長すぎる‼‼Inner Oniなら許されるかもだけどこれはOni なので!Approvalといってもそこら辺はしっかり切っていこうw
02:16:562 - k追加。  ^賛成してくれたなら

02:26:601 (1) - ここからのkiaiタイム、もう少し詰めてもいいと思うよ

02:45:062 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - ここすごい好き!Very Good :oops:

03:38:139 (214,215) - ここ!!d kになってるけど、ピアノの音拾えばもっといいと思う!だから1/4でddddkでいい感じになるハズ!


03:38:947 (219) - 削除。して03:39:062 (220) - d‼‼‼理由は03:39:293 (221,222,223) - ここを目立たせたいから‼‼この意見はおすすめ!

03:45:870 (258) - 削除。ピアノの入りを優先させてあげてね!
03:47:716 (271) - ^

04:06:293 (1) - dにして04:06:293 (1) - kにしてみるのは?1/8だけど、入れても違和感ないと思った!

05:02:601 - ノーツ追加。上に書いた(どこかにw)のと同じ理由!

良い譜面だと思います。頑張って‼ :D
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Topic Starter
newyams99

EdamaMe411 wrote:

にゅーやんさあああああああん!!>ω<

Mod依頼されてきたのですが、自分がmodしてもあまりいいことは言えません!そこら辺は許してね!! いいえいいえ、そんなことないと思います。自分のmod に自信を持って! :D

じゃあ行くよ!

Oni
00:29:139 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - ここの音ピアノの音取ですよね?なのに最後の2音がkkになってて音が上がってしまってる。実際の音はどんどん音が低くなってるのでdで終えたほうがいいと思う。配置の見直しを! おk。でも、ドラムとピアノを同時に合わせると思って、最後から二番目の k は変更なしです。

00:32:601 - d追加。ここで無理に2連にしなくてもいいですね。偶数のノーツっていうのは、ほんとにリズム変える程度で使えばいいと思うので、ここは普通に3連打でいいと思います :)
00:39:985 - ^と同じ! やっぱり?そうしよかなと悩んでました。二つともd を追加しました。

00:37:447 (126,127) - 削除‼ ここはボーカルのところに合わせたほうが短いノーツラインにまとめられるし、序盤から難しくならないようにできるのでお勧めです! おk。

00:41:831 (148,149) - Ctrl+G、、00:42:062 (146) - のピアノを表現したいから(たとえ低くてもピアノの音取をしているんだと相手に意識させるため)ううん、いいアイデアなんだけどちょっとドラムの音取もしたいので。一応やってみます。

01:08:601 - d追加。せっかくのkiaiタイムなのにちょっと物足りないと感じました。もう少し詰めてもいいかも 8-)
01:08:370 - d追加。^に納得してくれたのなら!
01:10:216 - 01:10:447 - d、、^きっとよくなると思います!
01:12:293 - 01:12:062 - d^
01:15:755 - 01:15:985 - d^ 確かに Edamameさんの言う通りです。他の気合タイムと似すぎちゃうのでそうするのはなしと決めましたがもしの場合にこのことは心に留めておきます。

01:20:139 (69) - d。ピアノも低くなってるし、次のボーカルの音程ともマッチするから ;)  やってみます。
01:46:678 (190) - ここ確かにピアノが強くたたかれてるからそこで止めたんですが、太鼓として叩く分にはそこで切ると流れが悪くなってしまいます。01:46:908 - 01:47:255 - に音を入れてあげてつないであげましょう! おk。

01:53:370 (224,225) - DD。。。01:51:524 (217) - ここがKになってるので一貫性持たせるためにも ;)  これチョーいいアイデアです。

02:09:293 (304) - k? 02:08:831 (300,301,302,303) - この4音と音が違うからっていう理由 :D 一番強調したいところが02:09:524 なのでここは d のままにしておきます。

02:17:139 (342,343) - 削除‼‼‼ノーツライン長すぎる‼‼Inner Oniなら許されるかもだけどこれはOni なので!Approvalといってもそこら辺はしっかり切っていこうw
02:16:562 - k追加。  ^賛成してくれたなら二つともやりました。それか名前を Inner Oni にかえたりとかいけるんじゃね?w

02:26:601 (1) - ここからのkiaiタイム、もう少し詰めてもいいと思うよ どうすればいいのか悩んでます :/ あまりノートを入れる場所はないと思います。

02:45:062 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - ここすごい好き!Very Good :oops: よっしゃ!

03:38:139 (214,215) - ここ!!d kになってるけど、ピアノの音拾えばもっといいと思う!だから1/4でddddkでいい感じになるハズ! ごめん、そんなに好きじゃない :?


03:38:947 (219) - 削除。して03:39:062 (220) - d‼‼‼理由は03:39:293 (221,222,223) - ここを目立たせたいから‼‼この意見はおすすめ!  Ctrl + G しました。

03:45:870 (258) - 削除。ピアノの入りを優先させてあげてね! おk。
03:47:716 (271) - ^ 

04:06:293 (1) - dにして04:06:293 (1) - kにしてみるのは?1/8だけど、入れても違和感ないと思った! ま、できるんだがスピナーの後だとリズムに反応するのはちょっと難しいかな? 1/6 に見えるし。

05:02:601 - ノーツ追加。上に書いた(どこかにw)のと同じ理由! チョットだけ追加しました。

良い譜面だと思います。頑張って‼ :D
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いつもありがとうございます。Star もありがとう。いっぱい頼んで悪いな。いつでもEdamameさんのリクエストを受け付けますので言って下さい  8-)
infr4
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i'm sorry but i'll skip this map to next

i'll mod this later. (actually, 2 of 5 mins song killed me)
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Oni
00:22:793 (53,54) - maybe kd because of the drums you mentioned?
00:32:370 (100,101,102) - ddk to fit the drums
00:34:678 (110,111,112,113,114) - typical dnb sound, try dkdkd or leave it at ddddd, sounds fine too
00:41:831 (146) - k for drum?
01:52:447 (212) - k because of that sound there i cant describe because i suck
04:22:101 (1) - remove and maybe put a slider? Short spinners dont play very well!

Sorry for short mod, im new at modding :(

its almost all copypaste anyways, sooooo...
Surono
ahh, why... double post really sorry..
Surono
Hi! I am here for M4M

>General
  1. bitrate 128, but still fine to hear.. XD
  2. http://puu.sh/mJMVZ.png 1.3999999666214 change to 1.4
>Oni
  1. 00:21:755 - is high pitch (differ with note before), you want change this to kat?
  2. 00:22:562 - I think is High pitch, you should change this to kat for good emphasize.. if not is heard fade imo
  3. 00:29:139 - kddk 1/6 more smooth if heard (EDITT: is fine :U but up to u, just focus on my blue dem word wwww. is important things)
  4. 01:28:793 - you must change this to kat for consistent hitsound with 01:28:908 (102,103) - this pitch, same flow right?
  5. 01:33:408 - you may add this kat for consistent follow piano pitch and 01:33:524 - change this don for better emphasize, and this fit to be pattern
  6. 01:42:986 (164,169) - same with before
  7. 01:50:370 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - its fine, i know why u make this for better emphasize with drum right? 01:50:831 (204,205,206,207,208) - but if you want emphasize piano, you can just change to kdkddkddk if you like it
  8. 02:05:601 (273,274,275,276,277,278) - if you slow playback this, it can be dkkdkkd, but if you want follow vocal, just make dkk kkd. its fit with vocal to be variety, 02:05:947 - cuz this heard fade, so up to you
  9. 02:10:216 (301,302,303,304,305,306) - to better contrast, change to dkk dkk, cuz for 02:12:062 (308,309,310) - better variety and 02:11:831 (307,308) - for emphasize bass
  10. 02:33:063 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - its blocked important pitch, better to change from here 02:33:062 - k dkkdk k, and 02:33:985 - want this to be finisher cuz have cymbal?
  11. 02:39:985 - change to kat finisher? 02:39:524 (70,71,72) - D K D its fit with drum and vocal imo
  12. 02:40:908 - kat for drum? and vocal its still fine imo if you change kat
  13. 02:55:678 - 02:55:908 - BHAAGKHHAAA~
  14. 03:37:678 - change don? to over if kk, dk its look good if heard from low-high pitch
  15. 03:39:870 - add kat and 03:40:331 - delete this? its good emphasize imo for patterning
  16. 03:43:562 - same above, but here is don for variety
  17. 03:44:831 - kat for piano and drum? contrast is good imo
  18. 03:48:755 - don? for contrast
  19. 04:07:216 - dd and d? for consistent your place note, 03:37:678 (212,213,214) - like in here if you want
  20. and consider on 8th kiai, some mod have same parts in my previous mod, but idk XD
  21. 05:04:216 - kat for drum? and this consistent with 05:04:908 - this pitch, both piano and drum imo
  22. 05:06:755 - change don? 05:06:870 (228,229) - this for emphasize this notes
well, looks simple map, simple patterns *cuz would overmap if mapped all pitch ww* and good emphasize too.. and I see some extended pattern or idk haha, give stars for Nice map!
GLuck!
Topic Starter
newyams99

Nepuri wrote:

Oni
00:22:793 (53,54) - maybe kd because of the drums you mentioned? I'd like to keep this so I don't get repetitive with my patterns. I also have the end as a k for the piano.
00:32:370 (100,101,102) - ddk to fit the drums My intentions behind this rhythm was that I wanted to capture the vocals, but not fully omit the drums. dkk didn't sound good, so I had it as dkd.
00:34:678 (110,111,112,113,114) - typical dnb sound, try dkdkd or leave it at ddddd, sounds fine tooKept.
00:41:831 (146) - k for drum? I actually changed this because of a previous mod, and his reasoning behind it was pretty good imo, and I liked it. However, it is definitely a possibility.
01:52:447 (212) - k because of that sound there i cant describe because i suck I'd like to keep this for the emphasis on the difference in instrumentals.
04:22:101 (1) - remove and maybe put a slider? Short spinners dont play very well! I personally like this, but I could decide to do this.

Sorry for short mod, im new at modding :( That's ok. It's great that you're contributing to the mapping community.

its almost all copypaste anyways, sooooo... tru lol
Thanks for your mod :D
Topic Starter
newyams99
Surono
not too.. the problem just in SV 1.3864396306983638078937 and another just unnecessary things ( Grrreen tick for spicy sv map or epic kiai? k )
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