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YUI - Thank you My teens

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al2e10
1,101 posts
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al2e10
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月13日 at 下午 06:23:27

Artist: YUI
Title: Thank You My Teens
Tags: Can't Buy My Love
BPM: 130.15
Filesize: 4937kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alarmable (4.83 stars, 274 notes)
  2. Normal (3.23 stars, 176 notes)
Download: YUI - Thank You My Teens
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The projest of YUI - CANT BUY MY LOVE

11-05 Up-Load
11-06 Finish Normal (Get to rank now)
11-16 Up-Date (Mod by VanMoNky)
12-15 Up-Date (Mod by Zekira)
03-08 Up-Date (Mod by Garven)
05-04 Up-Date (Mod by jericho2442)
05-08 Up-date (Change the timing)
Last edited by al2e10 , edited 23 times in total.
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
Timing request accepted

BPM:130,15
Offset: 15.310
plus star, nice map :P
jameskong1
403 posts
Joined December 2008
jameskong1
>.>
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Alaramable]
0:15:309 (1,2) spacing?
0:20:150 (5,1) (5) left 1 grid, (1) right+down 1 grid, (2) right 1 down 2 grids?
0:31:214 (3,6) suggestion: (3) right 1, (6) left 1 seems better?
0:35:363 (&) up 1 grid?
0:38:360 (2,3,4) down 1 grid
...~
感覺就是spacing不準，spacing multiple從0.79到0.96x都有，試跟著AImod fix一下？
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

wmfchris wrote:

[Alaramable]
0:15:309 (1,2) spacing?
0:20:150 (5,1) (5) left 1 grid, (1) right+down 1 grid, (2) right 1 down 2 grids?
0:31:214 (3,6) suggestion: (3) right 1, (6) left 1 seems better?
0:35:363 (&) up 1 grid?
0:38:360 (2,3,4) down 1 grid
...~
感覺就是spacing不準，spacing multiple從0.79到0.96x都有，試跟著AImod fix一下？

話說我都沒有用distance snap做過map =w=
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
al2e10, if you have another YUI map, ask me a mod please :p

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. What is that "TAG7" doing in tags?
2. Rename the title become "Thank You My Teens".
3. 00:58:177 to 00:59:329 has a slight off timing. It needs a new timing, I think, I don't know. [?]
4. 01:59:251 to 02:00:403 has a slight off timing. It needs a new timing, I think, I don't know. [?]
5. BPM: 130.17 | Offset: 562 [?]

[Normal]
-- [Normal]'s timing is not same with [Alarmable]'s. Fix this. [!]

00:19:919 (4) - I prefer you put this on 00:20:149.
00:42:966 (1) - Ahh stop this! It hurts my ears X(. Do not use the slidertick here, please.
00:45:501 (5) - I prefer you put this on 00:45:731.
00:45:962 (1) - Stop using the scustom slidertick randomly ("-_-)
00:48:266 (2) - ^
00:50:802 (4) - ^
01:18:458 (3) - Remove the clap.
01:41:965 (1) - I hate doing this but.. move one tiny grid left and one tiny grid up.
01:42:887 (3) - Move one tiny grid right orz.
01:43:809 (1) - Ahh stop this! It hurts my ears X(. Do not use the slidertick here, please.

[Alarmable]
-- I have no idea why you use this odd name...
-- Anyway, may I ask you to stop using the custom slidertick? This is an order lol.

00:54:028 (1,2,3,4) - Make them a little closer to each other.
01:31:825 (2) - Move this one tiny grid right and one tiny grid up. Orz.
The rests are great enough.
Star. Good luck!
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
But... this is graved? o_o

[General]
I personally don't like hitsound changing for sliderticks for the sake of the drum, but that's probably just me.
Offset: 552 (-10 from current)
The last 30 seconds are unused... I'm not sure if I should suggest to cut that part there, but what I have in mind is to either keep it like that (just defend why) or preferably mapping it to the end.

[Normal]
(I think I accidentally modded this with the -10 offset)
00:42:968 (1,3) - remove NC on 1, put on 3
01:16:145 (3,1) - please don't make the circle overlap the slider.
01:23:981 (4,1) - fix 1 so that 4 will stack
01:43:340 (4,1) - don't overlap
01:43:801 (1,2,1) - remove NC on both 1, put on 2, and then the 4 after
01:51:867 (3,4,5,6) - there's some annoying readability problems here... I mean, I can see it, but it was a bit sudden to see this in a Normal.

[Alarmable]
00:23:608 (1) - remove NC
00:27:987 (2) - preferably stack on previous 2?
00:43:889 (1,2) - I highly suggest to move it 1/4 later.
01:47:729 (1) - remove NC
01:54:874 (5) - I recommend making it reverse curved as well just like the 1-2-3-4-5 pattern
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
谢你我的牙
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Mod4Mod (Link to my map is in your queue)

[General]
-> Source : Can't Buy My Love?

[Normal]
-> Normal is 3.38 star... I think you should make it under 3.25 so it will show as 3 star.
00:20:372 (1) - Add whistle?
00:31:434 (5) - Remove whistle?
00:48:258 (2) - Curve it more?
00:59:551 (1) - 1 grid down?
01:15:684 (2) - Add clap?
01:19:832 (2) - Curve this so (3) can be placed one grid right? If you horizontal-flip (3) you'll see it's not same wiith (1)
01:37:118 (7) - Add whistle?

[Alarmable]
-> HP Drain -1?
00:53:329 (1,2,3,1) - I am quite shocked by the spacing here... (3) to (1) is too close
01:28:129 (3) - Add whistle at slider start?
02:28:051 (7) - Add finish?
02:28:742 (1) - Add whistle?

Star!
Deye
163 posts
Joined August 2009
Deye
没啥好说的,nice map~ :lol:
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Move to pending?

-There are only 2 difficulties so it would be nicer if you could extend Normal so it ends at the same time as the other difficulty (and they aren't that far apart)
-Seeing as 'Can't Buy My Love' is the album name it should be in tags not included in the source
-(You could capitalize the forum thread the same as the mp3 if you felt like it)

Normal:
00:27:286 (3,4) - try and avoid overlaps like this to make it look neater while playing
00:36:965 (1,2) - switch new combo
00:40:653 (1,4,5) - meant to be aligned?
00:47:336 (3,1) - space out more if possible
00:49:180 (3,1) - ^
00:59:551 (3) - goes off the bottom of the screen which is always a bad idea

Alarmable:
Some nice symmetrical patterns used here
01:08:079 (1,2,3) - not a big fan of a few notes between 2 breaks
01:58:551 (7,1) - try and avoid anti jump

A pretty nice mapset, get this out of the graveyard
Deserves a star~
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Revived!!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
I suggest you add a custom normal sliderslide.wav that is a copy of the soft sliderslide so that you don't get the weird drum roll sound changes when you're using the custom ticks.
Move "Can't Buy My Love" to tags

[Normal]
Really love what you did with the tick sounds though.
00:58:399 (1,2) - Maybe do whistle nothing instead of nothing whistle?
01:23:981 (4) - Not quite lined up properly. Disable grid and distance snap and line it up.
01:47:258 (2) - Do this for symmetry's sake
SPOILER
Good rhythm use here. Really nice.

[Alarmable]
00:15:993 (2,4) - These jumps kind of confuse me since it's right at the start and at a fairly subdued part of the music.
00:29:130 (4,1) - Use this: 
188,332,29130,2,0,B|188:256|324:255|324:332,1,200,0|8
132,280,30051,6,0,B|180:184|332:184|380:280,1,300,4|2
For this:
SPOILER
00:59:551 (1) - This would be a lot cooler if you could line the ticks up with the bumps. Try to line up the red anchor points with each tick circle and it should be fine.
02:04:543 (2) - It sounded like you were going with the guitar, so I keep hitting this early. Snap it to 02:04:428 (2) -

Nice pair of maps here.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
YUI - Thank you My teens (al2e10).osb seems to be extra from a name change. Please remove and full upload

[Alarmable]
Move "Can't Buy My Love" to tags
00:59:551 (1) - Use this
444,296,59551,6,0,B|400:264|350:296|350:296|304:264|256:296|256:296|208:264|163:296|163:296|112:264|68:296,2,400,0|0|4
For this:
SPOILER
02:21:367 (4) - The tick on this sounds weird compared to the rhythms used for the rest of the map.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10
Almostly, quick mod and quick bubble =W=
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2010
Garven
Nom.

:U
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Seems odd to have 1 custom difficulty name and 1 regular but ok

Normal:
02:14:914 (1) - this is a really bad place to the end the map (and its odd to have a long break then just 1 note after it to finish) I suggest you map it to where Hard finishes
00:37:426 (2) - new combo makes more sense here
00:59:551 (3) - goes off the bottom of the screen which doesn't look good
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

James2250 wrote:

Seems odd to have 1 custom difficulty name and 1 regular but ok

Normal:
02:14:914 (1) - this is a really bad place to the end the map (and its odd to have a long break then just 1 note after it to finish) I suggest you map it to where Hard finishes
00:37:426 (2) - new combo makes more sense here(Fixed)
00:59:551 (3) - goes off the bottom of the screen which doesn't look good(Fixed)
I give up with
02:14:914 (1) - this is a really bad place to the end the map (and its odd to have a long break then just 1 note after it to finish) I suggest you map it to where Hard finishes
And make the rest of it.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
jericho2442
Normal
00:58:399 (1,2,3) - ok at this point she is singing offbeat, which makes this timing rather hard to follow, to get this perfectly intime to follow the vocals would be rather hard and feel bad to play spacing wise, soooo what i advise to do is add a note at 00:58:860 first it makes the pattern much more easy to read and play, it also make the whole part feel like it has more rhythm thus making it sound much better, i really really do advise you to do this

Alarmable
01:25:364 (4) - i have to say imo this slowdown slider felt not good at all, tbh it felt abit too random and this part would feel MUCH better without it :/


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at least think about fixing them 2 things and i will give you your bubble back, but yea....i would really be happy if they was changed ;p

EDIT: all has been fixed, so enjoy having your floaty thing back ;)
JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
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