1. Easy (1,88 stars, 118 notes)
2. Hard (4,92 stars, 298 notes)
3. Normal (4,24 stars, 184 notes)

• BPM: 165.00 (current BPM seems too fast
  Offset: +5ms
  
  Delete 2 .osb file and Thumbs.db desktop.ini if you can.
  
  Remove kiai? Not necessary imo...
  
  BG_Easy.jpg doesn't fit other two BG well...Try to find another one?
  
  In Normal and Hard, Transparent hitcircle.png makes notes hard to see...
  
  Tags: Remove "Rogue Galaxy Wandering Way" since they already involved in title/source. Also "game" seems too general, also remove this? Add "Level-5" for developer of the game?
  
  Add 1.5~2s lead-in, because your map starts at 00:00:800 (Song setup--Audio--Lead-in)
  
  Make combo colors same in all diff? (Make sure they aren't against the background.
  
  I think it's a little loud to use 80% volume for such a quiet music, reduce the volume for 10%?
  
  New combo pattern needs to improve in all diff.
  
  Use distance snap in Easy and Normal
  
  Make better arrangements can improve your map significantly, you can learn arrangements form others' map.

• 00:17:161 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing, also whistle for 2?
  00:20:433 (2,3) - Why stacking?
  00:25:886 (1) - Remove the new combo
  00:26:977 (2) - New combo
  00:34:612 (2,1) - Spacing
  00:42:247 (4) - make it normal
  00:46:246 (4) - add note at 00:46:246 and 00:46:610 instead of using slider

• 00:08:798 (2,1) - overlaping, move 2 to avoid this
  00:10:616 (3,4,1,2) - Think a better arrangement?
  00:55:336 (4,5) - Overlapping

Selee wrote:

[General]

• BPM: 165.00 (current BPM seems too fast Fixed
  Offset: +5msFixed
  
  Delete 2 .osb file and Thumbs.db desktop.ini if you can.Fixed
  
  Remove kiai? Not necessary imo...Highlight is Highlight
  
  BG_Easy.jpg doesn't fit other two BG well...Try to find another one?Fixed
  
  In Normal and Hard, Transparent hitcircle.png makes notes hard to see...Fixed
  
  Tags: Remove "Rogue Galaxy Wandering Way" since they already involved in title/source. Also "game" seems too general, also remove this? Add "Level-5" for developer of the game?Fixed
  
  Add 1.5~2s lead-in, because your map starts at 00:00:800 (Song setup--Audio--Lead-in)Fixed
  
  Make combo colors same in all diff? (Make sure they aren't against the background.When they would have the same BG image ok... ill think about that
  
  I think it's a little loud to use 80% volume for such a quiet music, reduce the volume for 10%?Fixed
  
  New combo pattern needs to improve in all diff."I Guess" i changed some
  
  Use distance snap in Easy and NormalFixed
  
  Make better arrangements can improve your map significantly, you can learn arrangements form others' map.

[Easy]

Because the song's BPM is high, you'd better decrease the slider velocity and disntance spacing for a little bit.

• 00:17:161 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing, also whistle for 2?Fixed
  00:20:433 (2,3) - Why stacking?Fixed
  00:25:886 (1) - Remove the new comboFixed
  00:26:977 (2) - New comboFixed
  00:34:612 (2,1) - SpacingFixed
  00:42:247 (4) - make it normalFixed
  00:46:246 (4) - add note at 00:46:246 and 00:46:610 instead of using slider

Fixed

[Normal]

Needs more hitsounds... Fixed

• 00:08:798 (2,1) - overlaping, move 2 to avoid thisFixed
  00:10:616 (3,4,1,2) - Think a better arrangement?Changed their Positions
  00:55:336 (4,5) - Overlapping

Fixed

[Hard]

The changes of slider speed in your diff seem so pointless..erased different speeds and added hitsounds

This map needs more work, not bad as a beginner though.Hard is now "almost new"
So have my star~

Fight69 wrote:

Use Distance Snap everywhere !
There is a lot of spacing error here
So, replace every circles/sliders one by one with Distance Snap on

Fight69 wrote:

Hello there o/

[General]

Kiai ? Don't fit with the music IMO, delete it

[Hard]

These combo colors are hard to see, choose something elsemade them Brighter now

01:24:805 (6) - New comboFixed
01:25:895 (7) - New comboFixed
01:36:805 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why all these new combo ?... Fixed

[Easy]

Use Distance Snap everywhere !Fixed
There is a lot of spacing error here
So, replace every circles/sliders one by one with Distance Snap on always on but sometimes i forget it to turn it on again sry
00:20:441 (2,3) - Make them better ? They are a bit weirdFixed
00:42:259 (4) - New comboFixed
01:34:623 (3) - New comboFixed
01:41:168 (1) - No new comboFixed

[Normal]

Same thing about the distance snap hereFixed

00:09:532 (1) - Hidden by the previous slider, move it somewhere elseFixed
01:21:532 (2,3,4,5) - A bit hard to read for a NormalFixed
01:36:804 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - WTF ? New combo spam again ?! Fixed

No star for the moment, sorry

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ohai~

[Easy]

Fight69 wrote:

Use Distance Snap everywhere !Fixed
There is a lot of spacing error here
So, replace every circles/sliders one by one with Distance Snap on

^ this
- Slider tick Rate : 2Fixed
00:42:259 (4) - New comboFixed
01:37:895 (1) - Remove new comboFixed
01:38:986 (1) - Remove new comboFixed
01:42:259 (1) - Remove new comboFixed
01:43:350 (1) - Remove new comboFixed
01:45:532 (1) - Remove new comboFixed

[Normal]
Use Distance Snap everywhere !Fixed
01:36:804 (1) til the end - Why there are such new combo D: Please, use New combo correctly D:Fixed

[Hard]
00:44:805 (2) - This slider is a bit confusing, It's unreadable, "where the slider ball will go ..." I've though that when I've tested the mapFixed
00:49:168 (2) - ^Fixed
01:36:805 (1) till the end - Again too much new como :<Fixed

ok, I won't star it now, I'll do a recheck when you'll get some other mod. Don't ask for the recheck, I'll do it by myself

Jagang wrote:

huhu,here is my mod

[General]

add kiai O.o ill think about it again

[Hard]

00:09:168 (3,1,2) - spacingFixed
00:42:805 (2,4,6) - align themFixed
00:44:077 (x) - add noteFixed
00:44:805 (2) - make it neaterFixed
00:46:986 (1,4) - align themFixed
00:49:168 (2) - make it neaterFixed
00:52:805 (9,1,2) - spacingFixed
00:57:895 (2) - ugly sliderFixed
01:01:532 (10,11,1) - spacingFixed
01:07:714 (4,5,6,7) - place them neaterFixed
01:24:259 (4,5) - align themFixed
01:24:986 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^Fixed
01:36:441 (x) - add noteFixed
01:37:895 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacingFixed

[Normal]

00:35:350 (x) - add notedoesnt really fit
00:44:077 (x) - ^doesnt really fit too
pls add a spinnerFixed

no problems with it
but the sliders looks like random or odd,pls make them neaterFixed the most

[Easy]

01:00:077 (3) - one grid downFixed
pls add a spinnerFixed

no problems detected
but the sliders looks like random or odd,pls make them neaterTried to Fix the most

nice map star~Thanks

Jagang

stickmeister wrote:

I love relaxing songs in osu. It's a nice change.

Okay. Are you ready? Let's get started. Now, take note, you don't have to do any of these, all of them are suggestions.

General Notes
AIMod is your best friend. Go to File>Open AIMod.best friend in normal easy but not in hard
Spacing is THE biggest problem here. Or at least in Hard. It might be fine everywhere else.
Edit the hitcircle-overlay.png (I think that's the file name) to something. I suggest just an outline for the hit circle. Without the overlay, some skins clash with the custom. (Such as my own)ill work on 1 it will take some time

Hard
Why is this mapped in 1/6...?
AIMod detects 141 frikkin' spacing issues. It's somewhat nazi about spacing, but 141 is just way too high. Because there are so many, I would just open the AIMod and edit the ones you see fit. Going through it, it doesn't seem like you used Distant Snap whatsoever, so I also suggest just going through the map again and replacing notes with Distance Snap. I'm going to list some that are especially bad. Most of these are respectful of their patterns.
Now, if you were shooting for the map to be harder because of the higher spacing, I can understand that, but there are still huge problems. You could always set Distance Snap to 1.5x or so. The notes below, however, are still extremely bad cases.
Simply put, just make sure standard human reaction times are able to hit your notes.

-Spacing from 00:03:350 to 00:05:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7 and 1 on the next combo)
-Spacing from 00:08:441 to 00:09:168 (1,2,3)
-Spacing from 00:17:168 to 00:18:259 (6,7,8,9)
-Spacing from 00:33:532 to 00:33:895 (4 to 5 and 5 to the next combo)
-Spacing from 00:40:077 to 00:40:077 (oh my god what this one isn't even humanly possible) (5 to the next combo)
-Spacing from 00:42:259 to 00:42:623 (5 to the next combo)
-Spacing from 00:46:986 to 00:48:441 (1,2,3,4,5)
-Spacing from 00:52:077 to 00:53:168 (7,8,9, and 1 on the next combo)
-Spacing from 01:02:259 to 01:03:350 (1,2,3,4)
-Spacing from 01:05:859 to 01:07:350 (6,7, and 1,2,3 on the next combo)
-Spacing from 01:37:532 to 01:37:895 (4 to 1)
Fixed some of those and others
Yes there are a lot. I apologize if I am nazing but it's a huge problem.
-00:00:805 to Finish hitsound on every strong chord. (Such as on 00:06:259 and so on. Most if not all are on new combos.)
-00:17:168: New combo. Fixed
-00:44:077: Put this note somewhere else, the pattern makes it look as though it were the next note.Fixed
-01:00:805 New combo.Fixed
-01:36:805 to 01:45:532 Finish hitsound on every strong chord. (Such as on 01:38:986 and so on. Most if not all are on new combos.)

Normal
I was disappointed by Hard but this difficulty is much, much better.
-01:21:532 Move this one red tick over and shorten the reverse two 2i guess it could stay that way
-01:22:623 Same thing. If you're wondering, the low chord you hear is from the rhythm in the background and isn't part of the actual melody as what I assume you though.
-01:23:986: Revise the sliders in this fashionill made a new apposition at this part

-01:26:077: Note on every white and red tick until 01:27:350, remove the slider at 01:26:623.
-01:36:805 to 01:45:532 Finish hitsound on every strong chord. (Such as on 01:38:986 and so on. All of them are on new combos.)I dont think "Finish hitsound" fits in this silent song

Easy
Why is this mapped in 1/6...?
-01:36:805: Move these notes around a bit, they're kinda boring just sticking around the center of the screen.Fixed
Looks good.

This is alright so far except for Hard which just has painful spacing issues. I suggest (read: I insist) you go through AIMod in the File tab and move around some notes, or just revise it with 1.5x or 1.8x spacing. I might come back to this and play around with hitsounds as well.

You've got a long road, good luck!

Lightgazer wrote:

I dont think "Finish hitsound" fits in this silent song

Saten-san wrote:

Easy
00:53:154 Make this Timing point start at 00:53:168Fixed
01:14:968 Remove this Timing Point since it serve no purposeFixed
01:17:150 Make this Timing point start at 01:17:168Fixed
01:21:513 Remove this Timing PointFixed
01:22:967 Make this Timing point start at 01:22:986Fixed

Normal
basically, all timing points are misplaced by a few msFixed
There's some anti jumps because you're using 0,54x sliders, but I guess it's ok

Hard
00:40:077 (5) - Could you do something about this jump?Put him a bit closer
00:44:428 (T) - Misplaced timing point by 13msFixed
01:11:895 (8,9) - Remove jump? and make 01:11:350 (5,6,7,8,9) - Λ shaped maybeFixed
01:13:168 (3,4,5) - Could you do something about this jump? Maybe use Distance Spacing 1,0x here on 4# and move it abit to the right (x:136 y:88)Fixed
__
The timing points are likely misplaced because of either changing the Offset or BPMBPM

mm, relaxing map

Star~

Edit:

Lightgazer wrote:

I dont think "Finish hitsound" fits in this silent song

It does, at least "soft" ones

gdeath wrote:

Hi hi~

[Easy]
Will sound better with slidertick 1.0if u say so...
The hitsounds for this diff is few.Is it still in prgress and will add more soon?Done now

[Normal]
00:20:441 (4) - I'd like add new combo as it has towards another same slider of pattern.Fixed

[Hard]
the 1st combo colour is simliar to the 5th one.Its hard to make out when they get alone.Fixed
01:38:986 (1) - why do you add new combo here since there is no new combo appearing on the same pattern.oh didnt saw that one sry
ic: 01:37:895 (1,2,3,4) and 01:40:077 (1,2,3,4)
01:42:259 (1) - the same issue as above mentioned.

BTW,why the combo colours of all diffs are different?I dont know whether it meets a criterion looks way better

Few suggestion and hope it can help you =)u did
/me shoots star

Combo1 : 181,213,211
Combo2 : 20,62,131
Combo3 : 66,50,88
Combo4 : 72,58,28

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Disable countdown on all diffsFixed
- Make audio lead in the same for all diffsFixed
- I don't know if the kiai time fits for this song ...we will see...

Skin;
- Hitcircle should be in a grayscale
[attachment=0:f42ba]hitcircle.png[/attachment:f42ba]
- You need to put this elements on the folder (even if they're the template ones);
* Hitcircle overlay
* Approach circle
* Scorebar-ki, scorebar-kidanger, scorebar-kidanger2
ok then i will request some from "my design help"
Easy;
- In general for me hitsounds are too loud, lower the volume by 1 tickFixed
- Use these colors;

Combo1 : 181,213,211
Combo2 : 20,62,131
Combo3 : 66,50,88
Combo4 : 72,58,28

ah Thx for that code
- 00:14:986 >> Ugly slider :< Curve it betterFixed
- 01:00:805 >> Ugly slider, try to make it more symmetricalTried as much as possible
- 01:09:532 >> More symmetricalFixed
- Those 0.5x sections you have don't fit at all, the music doesn't go slow in those partsRemoved all timings
- I don't like the sound of slider slide ...
- Try to create a pattern with the whistlesThink i got one

Normal;
- Lower the volume by 1 tickFixed
- I don't understand those custom slider speed or those 0.5x sections, the music is the same for all the song, there are no slow downsRemoved all timings
- 01:31:714 >> Curve this betterFixed

Hard;
- Lower volume by 1 tickFixed
- 00:57:895 >> I can't see the repeat arrow because of the hitburst of (1)Fixed
- 01:42:623 >> Remove new comboFixed

* Star & Good Luck ~ >w<