1. Ripples (5.09 stars, 1097 notes)

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Kroytz wrote:

FiRsT!11!

00:10:629 (5,1) - I personally dont like the spinner so I tried to come up with something to capture the vocals (it 1/6) http://puu.sh/mj24p/348dc78279.jpg Maybe play around with it, I find it sounds better. And then you could map the vocals with closely spaced 1/2 circles in the center of the map cuz thats cool right I placed a spinner there because I didn't want to map the weird shit from 00:10:800 - to 00:11:657 - and doing nothing there into vocal mapping would be too off, and anyway now it maintains consistency too

00:24:000 (1) - ctrl-g PLS ;w;w;w; Nope it would be better circular flow but it would totally fuck up the specific kind of flow in that whole pattern 00:24:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - because circular flow doesn't work as well at providing "impact"; one of the weaknesses of circular flow is that a 1.0x circular flow pattern and a 4.0x circular flow pattern basically require the same amount of effort to play

00:43:029 - Maybe stack a (2) over slider-end. Unmapped high vocal to me is weird but maybe not cuz next pattern has 1/2 gap so idk Nah I like it like this

01:04:457 (1) - why not shorten by 1/2? No beat to capture on red tick and the vocal ends on white too :T Alright

01:16:800 (1) - sugoi owo ty

01:28:457 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC is definitely overkill here and the spacing is very tight. I'd prefer a different pattern that can distinguish that drum sounds or use kicks for them. I actually wasn't mapping the drums there, but since this pattern is iffy, I'll change it if more people say it needs to go. Same for NC

01:34:114 (4) - rotate by 9 degrees for straightness? Fixed, also changed the slider so it wouldn't awkwardly overlap with 3

01:39:514 (1) - same thing with the NCs here. Pair them into (1,2)s is better than all ones. I originally had them NC'd in pairs, however the problem was that on the first and third of those patterns in the map (and maybe fourth or something idk) the emphasis on the beats is in 3/4, not in 1/2, so the paired NC just felt too wrong. Same as before, will change if others agree

01:55:714 (2) - seems odd overlap, could stack at (5)'s slider-end or like a mini blanket on the side of (5). Or maybe in the center of the (5) slier at that tippy curve dip thing ...well, I didn't want to make the jump even harder but since it's not by that much I just pushed it a little higher to blanket 5

02:26:743 (4) - dis overlap maaaan. Instead of going upward start off going down and work up? http://puu.sh/mj2HV/0d5fe76026.jpg. (3) slider-end overlaps previous triangle (3) . Similar to how you did this: 02:28:972 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't want to overuse that pattern so much and I don't think it's that much of a problem

02:38:400 (23,) - Duuude just switch 2 and 3's position on the timeline it soo much better because of how you spaced the previous patterns and then now we slider boiz ;A; Okay

02:44:486 (8,1) - space out more for emphasis? Something like http://puu.sh/mj2Qo/0dcb140659.jpg I was so torn on this and didn't know what to do so I asked #modhelp and I guess the verdict was yes so...okay

03:02:486 (1,1) - this is so cool lol. if only I spun counterclockwise lel lol thanks, I'm so used to spinning ccw I didn't even realize it would suck for cw spinners, but it'll suck for one or the other anyway so

03:33:600 (6) - maybe fix that positioning a little so (4) is in the center of (6) slider I don't want it too far from 6 :S and I think it looks fine (yeah it would probably look better in center but)

03:40:114 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this is more readable than the first I pointed out but I still don't like this pattern :V. If anything fix the NC's >> Same answer

03:51:172 (1) - ^ Same answer

03:54:343 (8) - I think you can create something more creative by ctrl-g'ing this one. Just one idea: http://puu.sh/mj34Y/05362276fa.jpg To follow up, I put (2) on the slider-end of (8) but I'm sure there are way better alternatives lol. Or what you could do too is something like: http://puu.sh/mj38G/1c69329b68.jpg Your current one just looks kinda weird lol Changed up the whole pattern, somewhat similar to your second puush

03:58:286 (4) - might be too close to (3) and not get enough emphasis Moved it only a little bit down - I'm content with it

04:14:400 (1) - ctrl-g too ;;w;; lol nah

04:21:514 (4) - 453; 220 just looks better to me I was keeping with a motif of the circles being non-linear on those rhythms...but...it DOES look better so....fuck it, ok

04:27:429 (1) - I'm not a fan of how non-complimentary this slider-end overlap is to 04:28:457 (3) -. So much as I'd want to use a curve after (2), and blanket the slider end of (1), that wouldn't really look all that well either. bias I think it's fine

04:32:486 (4) - 137:352 have no idea what you mean here, that doesn't work for the 4 or the 5

04:45:172 (1) - same as before Same answer

04:56:743 - there's a strong sound here that should be captured. Could try use one repeat and one regular slider. I'd have to map all the other strong sounds too, I think this is fine in its consistency

04:57:600 (1) - This could be hit too and start spinner on blue but its soft enough to be ignored as well : p It could be a good idea to hit it if you change the previous combo to add that extra red tick beat who knows Nah

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Cagrux wrote:

You requested an M4M so, yeah

General

1. Add some tags. I dunno. Just add something lol Added album name

Ripples

1. 00:21:943 (1) - Kinda hard following this shape. You could keep it if you want tho I think it's fine enough gameplay-wise, though I will continue trying to make it less ugly as I have for a while lol
2. 00:34:286 (1) - This SV slowdown is just.. too slow. How did you even managed to put it at 0.25? Seems to play fine, esp with the NC, and nobody has missed on it or voiced an issue with it yet. I edited the .osu lol
3. 00:46:286 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This part too Think this is even less of concern
4. 01:28:457 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - All these NCs are unneeded imo. The previous part is not that hard to need an HP filling part. Remove NC or reduce their amount Duly noted, I may change this eventually depending on what everyone says in the mod but for now no change
5. 01:39:429 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ ^
6. 03:40:114 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ ^
7. 03:51:086 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ ^
8. 02:06:857 (1) - Remove NC Seems perfectly fine to me
9. 02:07:972 (2,3,4,5) - A bit hard to read the stream cuz it's blocked. Consider going somewhere else Valid concern but no one has had a problem with it yet, and I quite like it
10. 02:18:943 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
11. 02:37:714 (1,2,3,4) - Feels like need more beats. 1/2 slider at each white tick will do 02:40:457 (1) - The 1/2 starts here for a reason, placing it earlier would ruin the escalation both according to the music and in practical game sense
12. 03:02:486 (1) - This spinner is too short and both the objects before and after it only spaced by a 1/4 beat. Recommend changing this It certainly is sketch, but I can get 1000 bonus on it, as can auto (RC requirement), and I can pass it on HR, and it really is the only way I felt I could map this

That's all! Hope this helps!
Don't forget to mod my map :3

1. metadata problem. Camellia should be removed from Artist, because the official information doesn't have his name. take a look at Side's or my mapset. (already confirmed by IamKwaN)
2. should better make the difference clearer between combo color 3 and 7.
3. unsnapped notes: 00:28:285 (4) - 04:18:685 (4) -
4. unrankable: 03:02:486 (1) - spinner length is too short.

1. 00:00:857 - why not map these vocal out? that's quite strange since something like 00:02:914 (1,2,3,4) - are all mapped.
2. 00:10:972 (1) - the beginning of this spinner is kinda awkward for me, it's not landed on something clear. 00:10:972 - this might be a nice place for that.
3. 00:12:343 - for an obvious beat change, i don't think a spinner end is strong enough. a circle will be good.
4. 00:13:714 (4) - add NC here instead of 00:14:057 (1) - to separate constant drums and vocal sample mapping
5. 00:34:286 (1) - umm gray is more consistent than dark green, isn't it? just like 01:29:143 (1) - and 02:56:572 (1) - ?
6. 00:44:229 (2,3,4,5) - sorry for breaking your heart, but they are snapped on 1/6 ;w;
7. 00:57:600 (1) - ummmm leave it empty is quite strange tbh
8. 01:06:943 (5) - this note is mapped for balancing and polarity, not following a strong beat. you should add some hitsound.
9. 01:22:457 (1) - i believe a single circle is better on keeping the consistency, like 01:33:429 (6) - 00:38:572 (4) -
10. 01:34:972 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally i think separate them from the previous slider can help clarify this stream, which starts from a white tick, not blue
11. 01:44:914 (3,4,5) - the path is a little bit like a straight line, maybe sharpen the angle will be better?
12. 02:44:572 (1) - I can almost say that gray is not the color you should use for this slow slider warning. it's too common in slow parts and build-ups. something like pink would be good.
13. 04:24:686 (1) - yea, maybe paint it gray.
14. 04:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now paint it green because all the other streams like this are all in green! (lmao wut)
15. 04:34:629 (2,3,4,5) - same, it's 1/6

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

yep a small mod

[General]

1. metadata problem. Camellia should be removed from Artist, because the official information doesn't have his name. take a look at Side's or my mapset. (already confirmed by IamKwaN) was wondering, but the redname confirmation is good I guess so changed
2. should better make the difference clearer between combo color 3 and 7. Colors are hard for me because I'm colorblind, so I'll ask someone else about this lol
3. unsnapped notes: 00:28:285 (4) - 04:18:685 (4) - Fixed
4. unrankable: 03:02:486 (1) - spinner length is too short. Criteria is auto must be able to get 1k bonus, so the spinner is rankable, albeit barely (also, in practical terms, I can bonus on nomod, and I can also pass it on HR)

[diff]

1. 00:00:857 - why not map these vocal out? that's quite strange since something like 00:02:914 (1,2,3,4) - are all mapped. Prefer the slow start
2. 00:10:972 (1) - the beginning of this spinner is kinda awkward for me, it's not landed on something clear. 00:10:972 - this might be a nice place for that. Honestly think I accidentally put it there lol, fixed
3. 00:12:343 - for an obvious beat change, i don't think a spinner end is strong enough. a circle will be good. Eh it's alright
4. 00:13:714 (4) - add NC here instead of 00:14:057 (1) - to separate constant drums and vocal sample mapping As much as that makes sense, my current NC also makes sense to me, leaving unchanged for now, may change later
5. 00:34:286 (1) - umm gray is more consistent than dark green, isn't it? just like 01:29:143 (1) - and 02:56:572 (1) - ? ......so first of all, I had no idea that was a green LOL I totally thought it was a gray...so okay, changed
6. 00:44:229 (2,3,4,5) - sorry for breaking your heart, but they are snapped on 1/6 ;w; FUCK........fixed
7. 00:57:600 (1) - ummmm leave it empty is quite strange tbh Nah, it sounds good to me
8. 01:06:943 (5) - this note is mapped for balancing and polarity, not following a strong beat. you should add some hitsound. That's uh...really weird...I remember hitsounding this, but oh well, fixed
9. 01:22:457 (1) - i believe a single circle is better on keeping the consistency, like 01:33:429 (6) - 00:38:572 (4) - fixed
10. 01:34:972 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally i think separate them from the previous slider can help clarify this stream, which starts from a white tick, not blue Good idea, will consider but leaving unchanged for now
11. 01:44:914 (3,4,5) - the path is a little bit like a straight line, maybe sharpen the angle will be better? Changed
12. 02:44:572 (1) - I can almost say that gray is not the color you should use for this slow slider warning. it's too common in slow parts and build-ups. something like pink would be good. Gray is the "slow" color, and pink would not fit
13. 04:24:686 (1) - yea, maybe paint it gray. fixed
14. 04:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now paint it green because all the other streams like this are all in green! (lmao wut) ...They're already green?
15. 04:34:629 (2,3,4,5) - same, it's 1/6 fixed...

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Nice, it's pretty consistent
and have some gimmicky slidahs
good one, pleb

NOW MOVE UR ASS AND RANK IT BECAUSE YOU STILL HAVE NO RANKED MAPS

Anxient wrote:

00:29:486 (1) - ctrl g to support flow for this entire area. plays alot better Have had to reject this suggestion several times so far it has a certain direction that I want
00:29:486 (1,3) - not sure about this overlap. UGH fine I'll fix it someone else mentioned it before
00:33:772 (2,3,4,5,1) - try making them the same DS. when i put them in the same SV and 1/2 snap them, i get this. so yea have them be the same ds. It's actually in a stretched diamond pattern with the next slider
00:49:200 (2,3) - try placing 3 more downwards so that the objects look more aligned? (or a term i like to use slider entry but no one uses that term anyway ;a;). itll look better this way. fix any spacing issues that may arise from this. http://puu.sh/mOHtL/a33a41f922.jpg Changed
00:50:743 (1) - im not the one to say, but fix blanket pls http://puu.sh/mOHyj/f97659252c.jpg Fixed
01:04:114 (5,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/mOHFk/2a26d4a56a.jpg Fixed
01:09:257 (5) - 01:12:000 (5,1,2,3) - i think its better for 5 to start a new pattern. coz that note has emphasis. like have 5 continue to the next singletap pattern. http://puu.sh/mOHLt/dbc947658d.jpg and http://puu.sh/mOHO4/4a24d6bcdc.jpg Tried it out, don't like it, plus the pattern seperation would be at odds with that combo setup
01:18:772 (4) - pretty sure this is overmap. ?
01:22:972 (3,5) - stack properly Fixed
01:25:972 (4) - well this looks awkward. try doing this http://puu.sh/mOHWq/1ea3487dbd.jpg Intentional
01:39:943 - just realized for the entire kiai section you only used red colors. ...what? I used blues...(maybe purple, idk, but I at least know for sure they're not reds)
01:57:257 (2) - ctrl g for flow and that extra emphasis for 01:57:600 (3) - Section is intentionally counter-flow
02:07:200 (3) - ctrl g coz theres emphasis. improves flow as well. That flow is intentional
02:31:029 (2,1) - upsets me a bit that this isnt stacked haha but ah well boohoo
02:34:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - airman? :^) more like playable 1/1 geometric patterns I've always used
02:45:943 - THIS NEGATIVE BACKGROUND IS SO PRETTY I WANT IT Made it all myself
02:53:486 (1,1) - curve the end of 02:53:486 (1) - more so that the blanket works. not sure how to fix it tho so no url link. but you can try with the sliderborder of 02:54:172 (1) - with 02:53:486 (1) - sliderend Changed it a little but it's still a little ugly
03:02:400 - 03:03:172 - this SB transition is freaking perfect Thanks
03:05:143 (1) - ctrl g? also fix this super awkward overlap you have here for no reason. http://puu.sh/mOImr/0b688ae269.jpg No ctrl+g, but changed up slider to fix the overlap, also stacked perfectly
03:12:857 (4) - try placing it here 03:13:029 - this is a calm part of the song (with very little beats so if i were you i would use the beats that are the most prominent (aka vocals) Nah I think it's fine
03:13:372 (1,2,3) - same with the slider entry mod. It looks exactly like what you want it to look, idk what to tell you
03:28:457 (1,2,3) - the way 3 overlaps hurts me so much but it makes sense coz its a pattern but the overlap asdfadfs we'll be ok
04:05:143 (6,1) - stack better Fixed
04:27:085 (8) - maybe NC coz downbeat? I tried it before but it didn't work out well because my colors are also dependent on the tone of the song

i guarantee a 75% mod rejection from you. epic storyboard, id rate a strait 5/7 score.

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

So now almost every map on this song is modded bt Anxient

EXCEPT MINE.
NICE.

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

So now almost every map on this song is modded bt Anxient

EXCEPT MINE.
NICE.

Zexous wrote:

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

So now almost every map on this song is modded bt Anxient

EXCEPT MINE.
NICE.

work 4 it, u hoe, i m4m'd

Anxient wrote:

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

So now almost every map on this song is modded bt Anxient

EXCEPT MINE.
NICE.

ill stab you

shadow_neko wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue! very nice song from reol <3 and generally nice map too!

General

so er many random mini kiai time that is really unnecessary. Do fix it and only put it in chorus areas Common technique
besides that, flow is very nice and storyboard too

Ripples

00:21:943 (1) - this slider shape looks very awkward to me Been trying to make it prettier for a while but I suck
00:34:029 (4) - no beat here to support this?? You're right, but at this point it's there for play, which is bad and I should change it probably at some point
00:44:572 (1) - maybe shorten this slider to 00:44:914 to map the vocals Prefer it as is
01:05:657 - map sth here to follow vocals?? No because the mapping was following the percussion there
01:06:943 (5) - is there really a beat here? Same as before
01:07:714 (2,3) - these sliders starting on red tick felt awkward to tap so maybe add a hit circle here 01:07:714 and then have 2 1/2 beat sliders from 01:07:886 to 01:08:400 It's fine
01:09:429 (1,2,3) - dont flow very well from the previous part. maybe can rotate slightly clockwise? Changed
01:10:972 (6) - maybe flip this horizontally? but remain in same location of coz Didn't flip but did move a little and slightly change direction
01:28:457 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this cluster of streams are hard to read and look messy . and i dont really see the purpose of nc spam Kinda like it, nc spam cause song
01:50:829 (5) - overmapped? Same as before
02:28:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe can make this flow towards the top instead coz the prev sliders are leading the player to move in a circular motion kind of and an upward flow would fit perfectly It's fine
02:48:000 (1) - slider shape can be improved imo Really? I think this one is fine
03:02:057 (3) - the head of this slider looks awkward but its prob just me I like it
03:02:486 (1) - as aimod states, this spinner is too short to be ranked RC states auto must achieve 1000 bonus, which is exactly how much it gets, so it's fine
03:09:943 - i understand why u left a large gap in this section but it feels a little too empty maybe start mapping here? Prefer not to
03:13:372 (1) - if this slider was trying to follow the instrument then it should edn on blue tick if vocals then it should end on red tick and reverse Ends on a vocal
03:19:200 - maybe this part can map to vocals instead since its more prominent in the song here like place your beats like this maybe? http://prntscr.com/9x3r49 I think it's better to map the percussion here
03:21:943 - ^ ^
04:02:486 (5) - overmap Same as before
04:13:714 (1) - can be shaped better such that it forms a perfect cirlce with the prev hit circles but up to you coz this is only for aesthetic purposes The aim of the slider is to blanket 3, cant' do that if I try to make a perfet circle with the previous 5 pattern (which makes a perfect pseudo-circle anyway)
04:24:429 (4) - overmap Same as before
04:49:372 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i felt that this part was rather undermapped but i guess its a nice way to fade out the song and end off the map so idk No change

thats all from me i guess XD not very experienced with dubstep mapping so i couldnt really help those part much although i felt it was quite messy but still should be fine
anyways, thanks for modding my map and good luck with ur map !