1. Bishounen (4,51 stars, 145 notes)
2. Ikemen (5 stars, 246 notes)
3. Shota (2,3 stars, 77 notes)

Vass_Bass wrote:

General
Audio file must be between 128-192 kbps, yours - 224 What, it has been changed again? ;_; OK, edit.
Add approachcircle.png

Shota
00:35:206 (5) - 1 grid left OK~

Bishounen
00:12:039 (3) - little high of grid I don't believe anyone will be able to notice that ingame.
00:56:539 (3) - 1 grid up i think B-but why, it's at the same spot as 1. ;~;

Ikemen
00:19:206 (4,6) - little high of grid Hope it's better now~

Other is very good
Nice work, star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Ikemen]
0:31:721 (2) left to the grid I wanted to keep it at the same place as the one previous note, so moved them both around little.
1:15:221 (4) left 1 grid to make it symmetrical Ok~

[Bishoumen]
nice!

[Shota]
nice!

star*2 for Lens~~~

Garven wrote:

[General]
Add lead-in time to all difficulties please. Oops, fixed~

[Shota]
Reduce OD by 1. Weird needing more accuracy with slower approach circles. OK~
00:26:554 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner considering it's 180 BPM... but I'm not coming up with anything that'll work without mapping through the spinner entirely. :/ Yeah, left it like that for now. ;u;
00:44:555 (3) - Move left one grid OK~
00:51:055 (1) - This is just way too soon after a spinner though. :< Maybe end the spinner at 00:49:721 - ? OK~
01:11:388 (1) - Mm, maybe end this one at 01:13:054 - ? Can add a note at 01:13:888 - Safely me thinks. OK~
Kinda wish there was a break in here somewhere too, but oh well. ^^;

[Bishounen]
00:32:221 (3,4) - Didn't like this overlap much. Moved stuff around~
00:46:221 (2) - Lower one grid OK~
00:47:221 (4) - Raise one grid OK~

[Ikemen]
00:10:055 (1,2) - Lower one grid? OK~
01:09:221 (3,5) - Maybe have these facing outward instead?Hmmm, I like that~ :3

Hooray for mostly cosmetic mod. -_-

Mainly need to fix the lead-in times and the 00:51:055 (1) spinner in Shota~ <3

chamelepeace710 wrote:

General
hmmm, feels a bit quiet in most areas.
I understand that the volume is supposed to increase as you go, but can you raise the volume of each timing section a little higher?

Ikemen
00:33:805 (3) - hmmm, is this a really good spot to put an off-beat clap?
00:34:388 - remove the clap
00:34:888 - add clap
00:38:471 (4) - same as 00:33:805
00:40:138 (3) - ^
00:50:888 (1) - add clap
00:53:805 (4) - same as 00:33:805
01:05:054 - add clap?
01:10:221 - ^ and remove the clap before?

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]
- is leleleP the name of the composer? if it is put it in source, if not put vocaloid in source instead I've been told that "vocaloid" should not be in the source, and I don't agree with producer's name in the source.. .u.
- Ikeme~n diff don't have any lead-in, did you forgot to add it? Oops, added~

[Shota]
00:35:221 (5) - NC this to make it consistent with 00:29:888 (1)
00:40:888 (4) - ^
00:45:888 (4) - ^ might as well add another repeat cause all the similar rythem (00:35:221 (5) & 00:40:888 (4)) have one more beat, so it kinda awkward how this is the only one with less
00:47:221 (1) - hmm the spinner's end kinda sound weird, maybe make the spinner's end into soft hitsound to make it subtle
01:11:388 (1) - ^
01:24:721 (1) - lengthen this spinner by 1/2 beat OK to all~

[Bishounen]
00:45:055 (7) - please make it more smooth OK~;;
00:47:388 (1) - shorten this 1/2 beat and maybe make it soft too Shortened, but I kind od like the finish there~ :3
01:24:721 (1) - lengthen this spinner by 1/2 beat OK~

[Ikeme~n]
01:24:721 (1) -the timing section in the end of spinner is not snapped correctly (it snapped to 86889) that's why I can't hear the sound, snap it to 86888 Oops, fixed~
the anti-jump in 01:00:055 kinda bother me but I'll leave it to other mod ehhehehe~ ´u`
<3

Great map, the pattern are very neat and smooth, nicely done
STAR~