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jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix)

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ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 27, 2011 at 10:52:31 AM

Artist: jun
Title: SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix)
Source: Dance Dance Revolution X OST
Tags: Rucker Samiljul CrimmiSkye
BPM: 192
Filesize: 3596kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.83 stars, 669 notes)
  2. Crimmi's Dream (3.86 stars, 123 notes)
  3. Easy (1.46 stars, 78 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 293 notes)
  5. Ruc's Dream (4.93 stars, 193 notes)
Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix)
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Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 25 times in total.
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
May I make taiko diff?
~_~
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

samiljul wrote:

May I make taiko diff?
~_~
yes
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
w
Rucker
Former osu! Champion: #1
561 posts
Joined August 2009
Rucker
Done :D

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [Ruc's Dream].osu
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
complete :)

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [31's Taiko].osu
Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Crimmi
:D
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
:)
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
<3
eddieee
253 posts
Joined February 2010
eddieee
why nobody tell me this (rucker!!!!!) i love this song THANK YOUUUU
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
As requested~

Enjoy.
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
mod4mod

General
-Add "Rucker", "Samiljul", and "AdRon" "Zh3Ro" to the tags
-make sure the whole mapset has the same offset
-no source?
Easy
00:24:763 (2,3) - i know it's minor but this kind of spacing will confuse beginner players since it's not consistent with the other 1/1s
01:25:388 (3) - 1 grid left
01:26:013 (4) - 1 grid right
AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream
it's so hard to read >_>
this diff has different offset from the others (2866 instead of 2888)
00:11:928 (2) - fix the stack with (1)'s slider end
00:14:897 (4) - fix the stack with (3)'s slider end
00:19:897 (5) - fix the stack with (4)'s slider end
01:33:647 (4) - new combo
31's Taiko
00:38:981 (x) - add a blue note?
00:43:981 (x) - add a red note?
00:44:059 (x) - ^
00:54:138 (378) - add finish to this note
01:24:138 (596) - ^
01:29:138 (638) - ^
Ruc's Dream
00:16:638 (3) - make this slider smoother
00:28:513 (5) - ^
00:52:731 (x) - add a note?
01:18:825 (x) - ^
01:30:856 (5) - make this slider smoother
Insane
no issues

great map as always
STAR!
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
[-General-] The names you're using for Easy and Insane clash with the guest difficulties. You might want to change Easy into something like Simple Dream and change Insane into something like Nightmare or Insane Dream. Just a suggestion. ;)

[-Easy-] 00:11:638 (2) - You might want to change this from a 2 beat repeator (x2) to a 1 beat repeater (x5). Something that looks like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43156. You might also want to apply more finishes to this repeater to make it sound epic!
00:13:044 ~ 00:13:981 - This section of the song feels sort of... boring. You might want to put some beats here. Similar sections are at 00:15:544 ~ 00:16:481 and 00:18:044 ~ 00:18:981.

[-AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream-] 00:11:950 (2) - Use grid level 4 and stack this under the end of 00:11:638 (1). Also adjust 00:12:888 (1) and the patterns afterward as needed.
00:24:138 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems sort of deceptive. The way it's laid out, it's hard to tell what speed to hit the notes at. Similar patterns are at 00:29:138 (3,4,5) and 01:33:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6).

[-31's Taiko-] If you've ever seen me play Taiko, you'd know why I don't mod Taiko maps. :o

[-Ruc's Dream-] 00:11:638 (4) - You might want to move this one space to the left to match 00:09:138 (2), but it looks fine as it is now. Change it if you want.

[-Insane-] I don't mod Insane difficulties.

Anyway, this is a really cool map. Starred.
gowww
429 posts
Joined June 2009
gowww
good!!
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
...
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
:D
Sander-Don
1,282 posts
Joined March 2010
Sander-Don
ok
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
as requested

[Insane]
0:04:919 (1,1,1) - blargh, those new combos...i'd suggest deleting them?
0:40:388 (2) - i'd like you to add finish here, too c:
0:42:419 (1,1) - those new combos.
0:42:888 (1) - should that finish appear at the begging of this slider, not at it's end?
1:10:388 (2) - add a finish here
1:10:544 (3,4) - (3) should go a grid to the left, and (4) a grid to the right i guess
1:14:138 (4) - new combo?

[Ruc's Dream]
0:11:638 (4) - a grid to the left
0:11:716 (1) - spinners shouldn't start this shortly after a note, it feels to start artifically early. try to begin it at least 1/2 after
1:23:434 (1) - ^
in general: imo some of the hitfinishes should be replaced with hitwhistles, f.e. at 0:42:575 (7)

[AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream]
0:41:950 (7) - it stands out pretty much comparing to the rest of the notes
1:01:638 - 1:02:888 - insert break time
1:06:638 (1,2) - ctrl + j?
1:12:888 - 1:13:669 - ...oh my, those fountains...x_x
in general: whoa, this spacing.

[Easy]
0:32:341 (1) - just like in Rucker's - spinners shouldn't start so shortly after a note
1:11:013 (4) - move it a grid to the right


[General]
kiai times are different in almost every diff =w=

good luck ó.ó
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
~AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream~
0.4 Spacing here causes confusion - having to heavily rely on approach circles like that is really hard ;_;

~31's Taiko~
I think its sounds better with soft hitsounds

~Ruc's Dream~
hitsoundmod
Remember, just a suggestion you don't have to use them
00:22:888 (1) – finish
00:27:888 (4) - ^
00:34:138 (4) -^
00:44:138 (3) - ^
00:49:138 (9) - ^
00:51:638 (4) - ^
01:11:638 (1) -^
01:12:888 (3) -^
01:19:138 (2) - ^
01:21:638 (1) - ^
01:22:263 (3) - ^
01:22:888 (1) - ^ (remove whistle)
01:29:138 (1) – finish
01:33:044 (1) – ^
01:33:200 (2) – remove whistle
01:33:669 (1) - remove whistle add finish


~Twinkle twinkle little star~
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
~_~

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream].osu
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