This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 26, 2011 at 11:51:43 AM

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Lovely Day
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: High Note
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5393kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Dance (4.38 stars, 448 notes)
2. Groove (4.97 stars, 710 notes)
3. Relax (2.69 stars, 315 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Lovely Day
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MAP 4 / RANK 1

NOTE: It is advisble to re-download if you downloaded before February 25, 2011.

Important dates...
Created: November 14, 2010
Moved to Pending: December 27, 2010
First MAT Mod (James2250): January 22, 2011
Skinning Finished (courtesy of Wiinter): February 07, 2011
Storyboarding Finished (with help from Selee): February 08, 2011
Second MAT Mod (Garven): February 18, 2011
First BAT Mod (Hitoshirenu Shourai) and my first ever BUBBLE: February 24, 2011
Second BAT Mod (James2250): February 25, 2011
Relax extended to meet the other difficulties: February 26, 2011

Difficulties...
Relax) Good for new players who are moving up in osu! (Level 15+) [hitsounds done]
Dance) Recommended for those who are skilled in osu! but not excellent (Level 25+) [hitsounds done]
Groove) A good challenge for those who are rough and tough in the osu! world (Level 40+) [hitsounds done]

Other information...
As well as putting effort into the beatmap area, you will also find many custom skin elements and some storyboarding in this beatmap. Please enjoy every bit!
More information about the song can be found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=leyYAmSmtIc

Hi~
I decided to take a peek on your map
Also because I love Miku~


Relax:
00:22:429 (4) - 3 grids to the left
00:23:429 (5) - 1 grid to the left

Dance:
01:01:429 (2,3) - Using Distance Snapping here?

Groove:
00:58:304 (12,1) - Move these forward and decrease the spinner with one tick
02:35:304 (11) - Hidden slider? D:


This is just some suggestions, you don't have to listen to me

Here have a Star~★

Here I am at last! xD Sorry for the delay~~

So:

[General]

Offset sounds better at 400ms, I believe.

Not bad, not bad.


All the following times imply the offset change:


[Relax]

Add some more claps. Like here:
- 48:900 (end of the slider)
- 50:900 (end of the slider, too)
- 55:900
- 56:900 (beggining of the slider)
- 57:900 (beggining of the slider, too)

It's a pattern! And an easy one to remember! Like, claps will sound good at every time with 900 ms.

21:429 (2,3,4) - Move them one grid left.
1:17:400 (3,4) - Move them one grid right.
1:45:900 (4) - One grid left.
2:06:400 (7) - Maybe move this so it doesn't get overlapped by 6?
2:19:900 (5,6) - Move these one grid down and one grid right.
2:35:900 (4, 5) - One grid left and one grid down.
3:33:900 (5) - Move this some grids up!
4:02:400 (4) - Try a more equilateral triangle pattern?


[Dance]

Same clap thingy as before, and also in the last difficulty.

Looks better than Relax.

But, I must say, your combos might be too long. Try changing combo every 6-7 circles. Perhaps you could follow a different pattern for the combo change, but I won't suggest any, 'cause I'm not too inspired today. Just keep it in mind.


[Groove]

The clap thing I mentioned earlier.

Also, your combos are too long here too. So, try shortening them.


Hmm... I won't star this now, but keep working on it, and when you believe it's ready, pm me and I'll star it!
Good luck!

First!

BG resolution is 160x120



Remove hatsune miku from Tags,she's already in Artist.
Add vocaloid if you want to.

Ask for timing help,cause offset is out,and reduce volume,too loud for Normal hitsounds.

[Relax]
Don't overuse claps,don't add them to each note,however you missed some.
00:25:429 (2) - Clap.
00:27:429 (4) - ^
01:45:929 (4) - ^
01:47:929 (1) - ^
01:49:929 (5) - ^
01:51:929 - ^
03:22:429 (2) - Whistle.
03:23:429 (4) - ^
03:24:429 (6) - Whistle on whole slider.
03:36:929 (1) - Clap?
03:37:929 - ^
03:38:929 (4) - ^
03:39:929 - ^
03:40:929 (3) - ^
03:41:929 (6) - ^
04:15:929 (1) - Remove NC.

[Dance]
Like 3/4 of song isn't filled with hitsounds,add them!
00:32:929 ~ Add hitsounds.
01:52:929 ~ ^
03:12:429 (1) ~ ^
03:52:429 (1) ~ ^

[Groove]
Deathstreams.

Good luck,star~

Hi...sorry for my bad english

suggestion: add a silent sliderslide for easy diff

[relax]
01:30:400 (6) - end at 01:31:400 ?
02:53:150 (3) - start at 02:52:900 ?

[dance]
nothing much to say but the only thing confuse me is I feel that somewhere should have a note and somewhere should not.
but it's just a feeling.><

[groove]
20m scores is too many.
the stream is sometime unreadable.
but quite funny play.It's a good try.

First. I really but really recommend you to change the bg. I mean, look at these:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/4220
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/1681
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/1287

I mean, for players like me, i really relate a map with it's background. So changing it would really help your map to differenciate it from the others. I know that they are not exactly the same but... >_>

Timing:

Use offset of 422, that's what i got. At least it's better than the one you have. BPM seems to be fine.

I'm only doing a quick mod cause i'm not a fan of this song, and it's kinda too long.

Groove:

I'm really against those senseless streams. And most of them are hard to see. I mean, look at 01:29:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
And the sliders could use some work to make them look better, as well as some of the patterns. They are not bad, but could be a bit better so it can pass my quality requirements.

Dance:

00:21:650 (5) - Move it so it starts at 00:21:400 -

Hi there :3 Here's my mod for ur map~

[General]
Move 'Vocaloid' from Tags to Source in Song Setup
Well-organized and acceptable rhythms~ Great map:)

[Timing]
BPM is ok~
Offset: 415

[Relax]
It should start from 0:08:415, not 0:10:415, so please map in 0:08:415 - 0:10:29
Overall is okay~

[Dance]
It should start from 0:08:415, not 0:10:415, so please map in 0:08:415 - 0:10:29
Overall is okay~

[Groove]
MAXIMUM SCORE TOO LARGE! UNRANKABLE! please truncate the difficulty!
It should start from 0:08:415, not 0:10:415, so please map in 0:08:415 - 0:10:290
There are no hitsounds 0:16:915, try to make a good rhythm to make the beatmap more attractive
0:16:415 (10) Add finish hitsound
0:20:415 (10) New Combo
0:30:415 (1-15) Use as little reverse patterns as possible
0:39:665 (9-15) ^
0:39:665 (9) New Combo
0:42:415 (1) Remove 2nd slider point, it's useless
0:45:415 (1-9) Remap this part, the pattern is not good
0:49:665 (6-12) Make that a nice and good looking curve
0:57:665 (8-12) Hard to determine hitting pattern, please improve that
1:00:665 (4-9) ^
1:01:665 (10-13) Is this better?
1:04:415 (6-14) Hard to determine hitting pattern
1:08:415 (1-7) ^
1:09:415 (1-7) ^
1:10:415 (8) New Combo
1:14:415 (10-13) Reverse pattern again!?
1:28:165 (1) Remove new combo
1:29:540 (1-8) What the heck with those reverse patterns!!?
1:33:665 (3-15 , 1-6) The oval curve is ugly, disable grid snap and make a good looking circle
1:48:400 (1-8) Add Inheriting section and change the Sample Set to Soft
1:53:650 (5-10) Messy pattern
1:54:400 (1) Add finish hitsound
1:56:900 (2-13) Messy pattern
2:09:900 (8) New Combo
2:10:400 Add Inheriting section and change the Sample Set to Normal
2:16:900 (3) Please do not overuse these hold sliders, change that to something else
2:34:150 (2-11) Make it like this?
2:40:650 (1-14) Again, messy patterns
2:42:440 (15) Hold slider problem
2:45:400 (14) ^
2:53:400 (5-13) These messy patterns are driving me crazy!!
2:55:400 (2) Know what to do, eh?
3:26:400 (13) ^
3:27:400 (15) ^
3:28:150 (1) Remove New combo
3:28:400 (1) ^
3:36:900 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) i rofl-ed when i saw this part, map a little bit with it
3:49:150 (1-9) Again
3:58:400 (1) This is too unacceptable
4:02:525 (1) Remove New combo
4:11:400 (2) Again

kds

[Easy]
00:15:400 (2) - Add Claps?
00:53:900 (2) - Remove Clap at end
02:04:150 (5) - Align slider start and end
02:26:400 (3) - Move away from previous slider (so its not touching)
02:30:150 (1) - Shorten slider by 1/2 beat and move to next 1/2 beat.
02:30:150 (1) - Place a circle here.
02:38:900 (1) - I don't like this slider ._.
02:56:400 (4) - Add a Finish
03:48:900 (6) - Move away from (4) [so its not touching]
03:53:900 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:56:400 (5) - Add New Combo

Tooooo loooong D:


[Dance]
00:13:400 (8) - Make the slider look nicer (align start and end horizontally)
01:35:400 (3) - Add a circle here.
01:35:650 (1) - Move spinner up by 1/2 beat.
01:47:900 (7) - Fix Spacing (compared to [5,6] )
01:52:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Use less notes in this section and soft sampleset hitsounds.
02:20:400 (9) - New Combo
02:22:900 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:24:400 (8) - Add New Combo
02:36:400 (9) - ^
02:37:400 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:41:900 (3,4,5) - Spacing. (compare with [1,2] )
02:46:650 (4,5) - Spacing. (compare with [1,2] )
03:28:400 (1) - Use soft sampleset hitsounds during this section and use less notes.

[Groove]
00:11:415 (5) - Make the slider look nicer
00:13:415 (5) - ^
00:29:040 (8) - Spaced too far from previous.
00:57:790 (9) - Add a Circle here. Move repeat slider to next 1/4 beat. Move spinner to next 1/4 beat and shorten by a 1/4 beat.
01:05:540 (1) - Move to previous white tick.
01:24:915 (5) - Add New Combo
01:52:915 (1) - Use soft sampleset hitsounds during this section and use less notes.
02:10:415 (5) - Spacing (compared to the rest of combo)
03:10:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Add some claps here.
03:17:290 (7) - Add New Combo
03:26:415 (13) - ^
03:28:415 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:50:290 (10) - Add a Circle here. Place slider on next 1/4 beat and adjust slider.


Rename to "Key-board Breaking" plz.


Overall, I suggest lowering the play time to about 3 minutes or less. I really wouldn't want to play (or mod) something that long (frequently). You should add more hitsounds and make your easier difficulties look nicer.

Suggestion: mainly use soft hitsound

[Groove]
0:10:415 (1) up 1 grid
0:12:415 (1,2,3) (1,2) down 2 grids, (3) down 1 grid
0:17:290 (2) x:408 y:208
0:51:165 (11) up 1 grids
1:21:915 (6~10) spacing, not symmetical
1:32:165 (8,1,2) stack it together
1:35:165 (15) delete?
1:35:415 (1) no need to 1/8 imo
1:48:165 (11,1,...) right 1 grid
1:48:415 (1~8) weird to me orz
2:01:915 (10,11,12) uneven spacing
2:25:915 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) make it symmetrical
4:11:415 (2,3) 1/4 beat backward

-Quite overmapped, note-only stream brakes the max. rankable total score.
-I don't think you'll have to cut the song, but make it less dense or more slider.

[Dance]
1:01:650 (3) I prefer a smooth slider <_<
1:34:650 (s) This is rankable, but maybe a bit too short as a normal
2:23:400 (2) left 1 grid




Problems mainly comes from the hardest diff, try to make it easier or make a new [hard], otherwise the diff spreadings is too extreme.

star and good locuk~

Oh BTW, very moe BG.

~|General|~
Delete .osb and full submit.
You need a preview point. Reply to this if you don't understand how to or find me in-game and pm me.
Tags?

~|Relax|~
01:27:900(x): add note?
01:31:900(1): Add the hitsound clap?

Pretty good easy diff.

~|Dance|~
00:55:400(1,7): I don't like these two sliders. Opinion.
01:26:900(x): Why don't you add two notes to fill out the empty space?
This was kinda, mehish.

~|Groove|~
Great!

Hi!

Much better now! You really have improved this a lot!

Now, as Emaal said, you need a preview point. Make sure to set one (just go to the timing drop down menu, and select Set current position as preview point. Obviously, you first need to select an adequate preview point xD

[Relax]

Pretty nice!


[Dance]

18:400 (4, 5, 6) - Maybe move these all one grid down? So they don't get overlapped
28:400 (7) - New combo here?
31:400 (1) - Maybe remove this new combo? (If you followed the last suggestion)
54:900 (8) - Distance? The distance from this to the previous and the next object isn't consistent :/
1:01:650 (3) - Maybe move the bottom (the red node) of this slider a few grids up so that the slider looks more symmetrical?


[Groove]

Smoooooooth

Ok, that's all. It has improved a lot. I believe I can star this now.

Hi~>.<~
Here is my poor mod~

[Groove]
04:07:665(5)2 grid left.
A little easy..Maybe increase AR?Or map some jumps?
Fine to me,good diff.

[Dance]
I'm not good at sound effects.But I guess they should be improved in this diff and relax diff..>.<
00:40:400(x)Add a note?
00:58:400(9)This slider doesn't follow the rhythm.
02:00:900(7)New combo.
02:44:400(8)1 grid down.
03:21:650(8)Maybe you'd better move it to 03:21:900?

[Relax]
Ok.Except the sounds.

Happy new year~^^

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Groove

consider using some claps or normal-sample in the front part

some of the streams look little random...but it's ok...

02:32:415 (1) - I don't like the using of this kind of slider. It is short and looks like a common slider. It may confuse the player

and I think there are some unnecessary new combo, consider making some change of them

00:57:665 (1) - remove new combo?
01:13:665 (1) - remove new combo?(you can add one on 01:14:415 (2) instead)
01:27:165 (1) - remove new combo?
01:32:165 (1) - ^
02:01:665 (1) - ^
02:01:665 (1) - remove new combo and add on 02:36:165 (6) instead?
02:36:665 (1) - remove new combo and add on 02:37:415 (6)?
03:49:415 (1) - remove new combo and add on 03:49:915 (3)
03:50:915 (1) - remove new combo and add on 03:51:915 (3)
03:53:415 (1) - remove new combo and add on next slider
03:55:915 (8) - add new combo here and remove the next new combo
04:05:415 (1) - remove new combo and add on 04:05:915 (2)
04:06:665 (1) - remove new combo


Dance

00:20:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm here seems not to match the other part. consider adding a note on 00:21:400 and start 00:21:650 (6) from 00:21:900
01:02:900 (5) - 1 grid up
02:24:400 (4) - add new combo here and remove the next one?
02:40:900 - add a note?


Relax

remove the timing settings in unmapped part


ok, star

Ok, another beatmap..

By Mod Request:

General
01:20:400 - how about making this part kiai time and using the normal sampleset until 01:36:400 (claps would be recommended in this part)
02:40:400 - ^ and ending at 02:56:400
03:44:400 - ^ and ending at 03:59:900 (keep the other kiai time)

Relax
Are you going to map the rest of the song? (If not, take out the stuff in the rest of the song and shorten the mp3 for that diff only)
Other than that, the structure and hitsounds are fine.

Dance
00:12:900 (7) - remove the whistle
00:16:900 (1) - remove the clap at the end of the slider
00:21:400 (5) - clap
00:21:900 (6) - move the slider away or put it under (5) and new combo
00:22:650 (7,8,9,10) - remove the claps at (7,9)
00:30:150 (4) - remove the clap
00:36:400 (9) - move away from the slider
01:24:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make symmetrical
01:46:400 (4) - new combo and move away
01:52:400 - move the timing section back 1 blue tick
02:20:400 (3) - 2 grids to the left
02:21:400 (4) - 1 grid left and down
03:28:150 - move the timing section back 1 blue tick
04:04:400 (10) - 1 grid to the right
04:12:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - too much clap spam

Groove
Fine!!!!

i'm actually in a hurry right now, i'll mod more later.....
Edit: back again. just do the mods

Here's a star....

Looks fine to me >w<
but the bg should be 1024*768 or 800*600

star

The timing is not unique.

[Groove]
01:03:415 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - (8) right 1 grid, (1~5) down 1 grid
01:31:165 (6) - down 1 grid
01:48:415 (1,2,3,4) - use 1/3 slider
01:58:248 (3) - right 1 grid
03:12:040 (x) add 3 notes on the 1/4?

[Dance]
00:10:400 (1) - left+up 1 grid
01:28:150 (2) - up 1 grid
02:54:150 (6) - down 1 grid

as we can seen in the Weezy's reply "the bg should be 1024x768 or 800x600"

Relax
01:18:400(1) - Make symetric
nice~

Dance
00:30:400(5) - Make symetric
01:01:400(3) - move 1 gird right and 1 gird down(lv3)
01:25:150(2) - move 1 gird down(lv3)
01:25:400~01:26:650(3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 1 gird left(lv3)
01:26:900(9) - move 1 gird up(lv3)
02:01:650(4) - move 1 gird up(lv3)
02:25:400(2) - Make symetric
02:32:400(10) - Make symetric
03:22:150(2) - remake this slider(shape)

Groove
01:13:665(1) - remove NC?
01:46:415(7) - remove whistle hitsound
04:00:415(1) - ^ and add a finish hitsound

star

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Relax]
nothing :3

[Dance]
00:11:900 (4) - New Combo
00:31:400 (6) - ^
00:31:400 (6,7,8) - Move them like this : http://puu.sh/IPP
00:39:400 (6) - New Combo
00:47:400 (8) - Move this slider like this : http://puu.sh/IPR
01:08:900 (4) - New Combo
02:27:900 (9) - ^

[Groove]
nice


Have a Star~

Mod:
Green:Request
Red: Change it !
[Dance]

00:57:400- (7) add new combo
01:09:650- same
02:27:150- (8) New combo
03:53:900- same


Groove and Relax are nice :3

Good first map

star~

everyone beat me to mods haha.

otherwise i love what i'm seeing, especially the background

star'd