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Rib - Young disease outburst Boy

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Mafumafu
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年5月30日 at 23:58:52

Artist: Rib
Title: Young disease outburst Boy
Tags: vocaloid utaite rerulili Upload feat.Vocalist れるりり Chuubyou Gekihatsu Boy Kagamine Len
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2314kb
Play Time: 01:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.79 stars, 173 notes)
  2. Eternal Force Blizzard (4.53 stars, 269 notes)
  3. Habi's Normal (1.75 stars, 103 notes)
  4. Hard (3.63 stars, 211 notes)
Download: Rib - Young disease outburst Boy
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Genre Suggestion: Novelty; Japanese
Regraz's Toilet Booming Series #3
瓜子的炸厕所系列 #3


“中二是病，得治”
Thank for IamKwaN for metadata confirmation!

Check out metadata here: http://miku-vocalist.com/#tracklist and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2ovsJkqaiM

Normal - HabiHolic
Advanced - me
Hard - me
Eternal Force Blizzard (Insane) - me

After this one, all my new vocaloid maps will not be cut. This is what I promised to neonat.
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Mint
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i love you ;~;
Mafumafu
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appleeaterx wrote:

i love you ;~;
❤
Kyouren
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Regraz wrote:

appleeaterx wrote:

i love you ;~;
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appleeaterx wrote:

i love you ;~;
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Methyl wrote:

i love you ;~;
10nya
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rib<3
Mafumafu
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rib so popular in Indonesia xDDD
mintong89
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那么好听不算炸厕所吧233
Mafumafu
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mintong89 wrote:

那么好听不算炸厕所吧233
炸厕所不代表不好听啊233
Lobelia
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噫!
你是不是最近开始跟我一起粉RIB啦
❤❤❤❤❤
Mafumafu
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[ Abhor ] wrote:

噫!
你是不是最近开始跟我一起粉RIB啦
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dssq
HabiHolic
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Normal Done!

http://puu.sh/obV1P/9a9411f037.zip
HabiHolic
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1.75 star!

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Title:Chuubyou Gekihatsu Boy
TitleUnicode:厨病激発ボーイ
Artist:Rib
ArtistUnicode:りぶ
Creator:Regraz
Version:Habi's Normal
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Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
Hello!

Returning M4M on this set instead. Already told you I wasn't going to be online for a while, but the other set has already been qualified soooooooooooooooooooo...

:idea: General


* The fact that it's already cut is quite lame already, but putting breaks seems not needed at all...
* osu! needs more Rib!
* 00:52:167 - Could be mapped out in all the difficulties, but it's up to you.

Habi's Normal


* 00:37:957 (4,2) - Would refrain from doing this actually, considering this is the easies difficulty. The approach circle of (2) is already visible when you click (4). Not that big of a problem, still highly recommended to fix.

Advanced


* 00:00:694 (1,2,1) - Due to stacking these overlap, which is probably not what you were aiming for at all. http://puu.sh/oex90/754c6fe4cb.jpg
* 00:48:772 (1) - I'm against placing many breaks in a cut song, but if you add breaks in the other difficulties, please do that here as well (or just map them out, which would be much better in my point of view)
* 00:52:483 (1) - Something that bugged me a bit, is that the whole KIAI is extremely easy with 1/1 spam with only little 1/2 usage, while this is really different in the rest of the map. This feels really unbalanced. On the other hand, the Hard's density as almost identical to the Insane. Perhaps you can make it more even throughout the difficulties themselves.

Hard


* 00:00:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - In the whole intro, I felt that the spacing felt a tad too low. Due to automatic stacking, when 1/4s are placed, they become really close with the following 1/2 object. They almost overlap, and the whole cluster of different approach circles don't really make this better... http://puu.sh/oewYZ/31cce9420f.jpg

Eternal Force Blizzard


* I found that 'Outburst' fit more tbh ;w;
* 00:08:588 (3,4,5) - 00:13:641 (3,4,5) - Given the different angle and inconsistent DS, this one in particular plays really strange. If you were to add a jump instead, would make it more obvious - like increasing DS a bit more or having a sharper angle. (comparison to 00:06:062 (3,4,5) - and 00:11:115 (3,4,5) - )
* 00:14:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - So many important & really noticeable sounds are completely skipped, which for an Insane is a bummer. Especially when you consider that you mapped quite some 1/4s and even doubles later on at 00:43:009 (3,4,5,6) - ...
* 00:22:325 (2) - So far the only clap you skipped, which sounds illogical to me. The other sounds you've skipped 'till now in this section weren't that loud. Would map this one if I were you.
* 00:45:536 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - It might've been inevitable considering your style, but the loudest 1/4s are now covered with a slider, rather than the beats. In my eyes, it should be the other way around, or mapped fully.
* 00:56:272 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda expected a jump pattern here instead? You did that 99% of the time anyways. Even Hard has this exact same pattern, which is even more lame :c
* 01:04:325 (2) - While this fits the vocals, both a synth note - and quite some drum beats on both 1/2 and 1/4 ticks are skipped all at once just because of this 1/1.

Since this is a WIP set, take another star from me as well to compensate for it.

Good luck <3
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
No Fixed my diff.
wasin
wasin
Hi M4M from your q


Habi's Normal
01:05:115 (1) - This slider you can move the tail of this slider down like this! to make the same pattern with the slider 01:03:851 (3) - and 01:05:746 (2) - also better flow and pretty shape.
01:07:009 (4) - The end of this song I think should be 01:07:325 - you can try to reduce slider.

Advanced
Firstly put some hs on this diff.
00:07:957 (4) - I'm not trying to aim about blanket, but if you can fix the blanket 00:07:957 (4) - of this slider it doesn't fit with the slider(2) before.
00:31:009 (1) - This slider I suggest you move the slider to X:192 Y:88 to make better flow with a circle(2).
00:31:641 (3) - Seem it's not perfect slider, make it perfect by move the tail of this slider right a bit.
00:42:378 (1) - There is nothing sound on this white tick, it could be better if you follow the vocal like this!.
00:51:220 - This space is empty I think you can put somethings here before kiai time, it's up to you just my opinion.

Hard
00:02:509 - You leave it blank space ? I heard the rhythm here, so add some a circle here like a circle(2) before.
00:07:562 - ^^ The reason same as above
00:14:115 (5,1) - It's not good idea to make this shape, broken flow try to ctrl+H with 00:14:430 (1) - and don't forget to fix distance.
00:25:325 (3) - A strange rhythm, why not put a circle here 00:24:930 - instead 00:25:404 - , just try I think it's better than your own.
00:34:641 (1) - Broken flow again on this part, you should fix the slider or better way change this pattern.
00:40:088 - The reason same as 00:25:325 - .
00:40:088 - ^^ Same as above.
00:51:220 - This space is empty I think you can put somethings here before kiai time, it's up to you just my opinion.

Eternal Force Blizzard lolllll name of this diff
00:14:588 - Because this is the hardest diff, it could be better if you follow the rhythm since this to make properly way for std players.
00:16:957 (1) - The blanket looks really ugly in my opinion, it's up to you to fix this blanket.
00:34:167 (4) - This slider I suggest you do like this! to make a pretty shape and also better flow than your own.
00:50:036 - Like my first suggest this is the hardest diff, so please don't leave blank space and put somethings here sice this untill 00:52:167 - .

I'm not good on Eternal Force Blizzard diff because I never mod the diff that higher than hard diff, it's my best please understand.

That's all my modding good luck . :)
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
Hi, M4M from your queue
[]

[Habi's Normal]
Seems to be clean

[Advanced]
Why not hitsounds?
00:01:167 (2,1) - So close to slider 1
00:52:167 - Circle?

[Hard]
Same as Advanced, not hitsounds
00:02:509 - Missing beat
00:34:641 (1) - Broken flow
00:38:588 (1,2,3) - Overmap :(
00:52:167 - Circle?
00:50:154 - This break should be finish in 00:51:220

[Eternal Force Blizzard]
Same as Advanced
00:19:483 (1) - Try to get better on symmetry
00:32:588 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you're trying to do a star flow, then you failed
00:50:036 - 00:51:220 - You could map this imo
00:52:167 - 00:52:404 - Same
01:01:009 (5,6) - x:180 y:112

Sorry if my mod is short, I don't found major problems to be honest
Good luck :)
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rib - Chuubyou Gekihatsu Boy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52167
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Chuubyou Gekihatsu Boy
TitleUnicode:厨病激発ボーイ
Artist:Rib
ArtistUnicode:りぶ
Creator:Regraz
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:
Tags:vocaloid utaite rerulili Upload feat.Vocalist れるりり Young Disease Outburst Boy Kagamine Len
BeatmapID:948324
BeatmapSetID:404283

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG_Rib.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
Thanks for your mod^^
M4M back

[General]
  1. disable widescreen support
  2. add soft-sliderslide?

[Habi's Normal]
  1. 00:37:957 (4,2) - imo the stack here is not suitable for the easiest diff
  2. 00:44:272 (2,1) - blanket
  3. 00:41:115 (1,2) - overlap a little bit too much?
  4. 00:30:378 (4) - whistle and clap wrong order
  5. 00:48:694 (1) - add clap/finish to spinner?
  6. 01:07:009 (4) - i think 01:07:641 - here is clickable,what about use a slider+a circle here?

[Advanced]
  1. 00:01:799 (1,2) - looks strange,i think sth like
    http://puu.sh/osuxi/43324f5bc5.jpg or http://puu.sh/osuzc/dcd826100c.jpg works well
  2. 00:03:220 (1) - move it down a bit for better overlap and flow
  3. 00:20:904 (1) - try this? http://puu.sh/osuDK/942ac15644.jpg
  4. 00:36:062 (1) - ^^
  5. 00:48:772 (1) - end spinner 00:51:220 - with a clap/finish

[Hard]
  1. delete unused green lines such as 00:05:746 - (btw same for advanced)
  2. 00:19:325 (3,1) -
    http://puu.sh/osuN6/9c71bd5a6b.jpg ?
  3. 00:48:772 (1) - same as advanced
  4. 00:52:483 (1,2) - the shape feels weird,maybe 00:52:799 (2) - `can be a straight slider?

[Eternal Force Blizzard]
  1. 00:05:430 (1,2,3) - looks really confusing,especially with an overlap
  2. 00:31:641 (4,1) - imo the flow is not good
  3. 00:12:299 (2,3) - and 00:11:904 (1) - no need to stack
    spinner suggestion same as above

That's all i can say, another thing is that this song is quite short as a vocaloid...the kiai finish is too sudden and feels weird. I'm sure there's a full version but anw this is good enough :)

GL^^
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