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Liz Triangle - Who Killed U.N.Owen (Full Version)

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Sandpig
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Sandpig
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月27日 at 18:07:12

Artist: Liz Triangle
Title: Who Killed U.N.Owen (Full Version)
Source: Touhou
Tags: lily-an flandre scarlet 495 th06 wmfchris
BPM: 127
Filesize: 15584kb
Play Time: 05:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Scarlet (4.91 stars, 785 notes)
  2. Waltz (5 stars, 1500 notes)
Download: Liz Triangle - Who Killed U.N.Owen (Full Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd map and for app

last full submission 2010/12/20

Scarlet -- by me
Waltz (Taiko diff) -- by wmfchris

Storyboard -- by me

(>'(oo)')> have fun <('(oo)'<)
Last edited by Sandpig , edited 62 times in total.
TouhouNerd
TouhouNerd
:P
Ibuki Suika
1,254 posts
Joined March 2010
Ibuki Suika
看到2小姐我就射了 :|
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
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SapphireGhost
Ooh, I like this song.

00:19:127 (3,4) I personally don't like this sort of slider overlap but if it's fine with you it's fine with me.
01:54:746 (section) I have a hard time reading this area, but again that's just personal opinion.
02:02:530 (section) The same.
02:23:287 (1,2,3) Because this section is tricky and doesn't appear in other parts of the beatmap, I would change.
03:09:647 (1) Maybe switch off new combo?
03:10:592 (1) Same.
03:16:144 (4) Consider moving this beat one tick down.
04:49:333 (section) Consider removing SOME of the new combos.
05:09:647 (section) Same.

But I think the beatmap is very good! Here's a star for your troubles :D
Sandpig
847 posts
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Sandpig

SapphireGhost wrote:

Ooh, I like this song.

00:19:127 (3,4) I personally don't like this sort of slider overlap but if it's fine with you it's fine with me. made some change
01:54:746 (section) I have a hard time reading this area, but again that's just personal opinion. I think these new combo can help
02:02:530 (section) The same.
02:23:287 (1,2,3) Because this section is tricky and doesn't appear in other parts of the beatmap, I would change. you are right
03:09:647 (1) Maybe switch off new combo? I'd like to keep this
03:10:592 (1) Same.
03:16:144 (4) Consider moving this beat one tick down. ok
04:49:333 (section) Consider removing SOME of the new combos. I'll keep this
05:09:647 (section) Same.

But I think the beatmap is very good! Here's a star for your troubles :D

thx for mod:D
Kotone
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Kotone

wuliang wrote:

看到2小姐我就射了 :|
wmfchris
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wmfchris

karenying wrote:

wuliang wrote:

看到2小姐我就射了 :|
bakaying明明是個女的 D:

0:24:414 (2,4) right 1 grid
0:38:587 (6) up 1 grid
0:39:296 (2) down 1 grid
0:49:926 (2) down 1 grid
0:53:705 (2) ^
1:06:461 (5) right 1 grid
1:07:406 (1) down 1 grid
1:13:075 (3) finish?
1:19:453 (4,5) not symmetrical with (1,2)
1:37:642 (1) left 1 grid
1:44:020 (4) down 1 grid
4:37:994 (1) remove finish

intro的spacing最好整理一下

二小姐萌死了 >///<
預訂taiko diff

star*2
wmfchris
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wmfchris

karenying wrote:

wuliang wrote:

看到2小姐我就射了 :|
bakaying明明是個女的 D:

0:24:414 (2,4) right 1 grid
0:38:587 (6) up 1 grid
0:39:296 (2) down 1 grid
0:49:926 (2) down 1 grid
0:53:705 (2) ^
1:06:461 (5) right 1 grid
1:07:406 (1) down 1 grid
1:13:075 (3) finish?
1:19:453 (4,5) not symmetrical with (1,2)
1:37:642 (1) left 1 grid
1:44:020 (4) down 1 grid
4:37:994 (1) remove finish

intro的spacing最好整理一下

二小姐萌死了 >///<
預訂taiko diff

star*2




ooops.
Sandpig
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Sandpig

wmfchris wrote:

0:24:414 (2,4) right 1 grid done
0:38:587 (6) up 1 grid done
0:39:296 (2) down 1 grid done
0:49:926 (2) down 1 grid done
0:53:705 (2) ^ done
1:06:461 (5) right 1 grid done
1:07:406 (1) down 1 grid done
1:13:075 (3) finish? yeah
1:19:453 (4,5) not symmetrical with (1,2) fixed
1:37:642 (1) left 1 grid done
1:44:020 (4) down 1 grid done
4:37:994 (1) remove finish ok

intro的spacing最好整理一下

二小姐萌死了 >///<
預訂taiko diff

star*2
thx for nazi mod :D
Dotsu
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Dotsu
~STAR~
Kotone
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Joined August 2008
Kotone

wmfchris wrote:

karenying wrote:

看到2小姐我就射了 :|
bakaying明明是個女的 D:
射的東西叫作星
wmfchris
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wmfchris
D:

bakaying you're so 糟糕
Sandpig
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Sandpig
卧槽这渣SB编辑器真浪费人参......[stress]
nante
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nante
02:40:152 (5) - add whistle(together with finish)
02:42:475 (1,2,3,1) - keep 0.8 distance snap here
05:01:616 (5) - delete and start spinner from here?

star
Sandpig
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Sandpig

nante wrote:

02:40:152 (5) - add whistle(together with finish)
02:42:475 (1,2,3,1) - keep 0.8 distance snap here
05:01:616 (5) - delete and start spinner from here?

star
oh I won't change anything but I will keep them in mind. I will see if others consider the same problem

thx for mod
Sandpig
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Sandpig
sb finish

:o 蛋碎了 egg broken
Ballance
osu!painter
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Ballance
star
narakucrimson
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narakucrimson
Hi~~

Just a few things to say:

2:55:637 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to the next circle to keep consistency.
3:10:614 (1) - Maybe put this under the previous slider (I mean, make the previous slider overlap this one a little). I believe it looks better :)
4:35:654 (1) - ^
4:51:480 (1,1,1) - Maybe remove this new combos? Not the previous ones, they are ok; but the thing mustn't be overloaded with new combos.


I'm gonna have to star this, as it is really good :)
Good luck!
Sandpig
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Sandpig

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi~~

Just a few things to say:

2:55:637 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to the next circle to keep consistency. yeah
3:10:614 (1) - Maybe put this under the previous slider (I mean, make the previous slider overlap this one a little). I believe it looks better :) oh here's a increase of distance between the 4 sliders so I'd like to keep this
4:35:654 (1) - ^
4:51:480 (1,1,1) - Maybe remove this new combos? Not the previous ones, they are ok; but the thing mustn't be overloaded with new combos. you are right but it's only a joy of colours so I will keep them :)


I'm gonna have to star this, as it is really good :)
Good luck!
thx for mod :D
La Cataline
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La Cataline
hi~

00:51:816 (3) - definitely 1 grid up
00:56:068 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - cant like this, so many objects at the same line D:
02:28:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe 02:29:449 (4,8) - should be placed elsewhere?
03:09:669 (1,1,1) - maybe you should remove nc?
04:20:299 (5) - dont like 1/4 slider followed by a circle, why dont you replace it with two circles?
04:26:914 (2,3,4,1) - maybe the last note should be placed elsewhere?
04:29:748 (6,7,8,1) - ^
04:34:708 (1,1,1) - i dont really get it why you need nc here
04:49:355 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1) - i dont really get it why you need SO MANY ncs here
04:57:386 (2) - edit=>reverse selection?
05:09:197 (4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - (4) - definitely new combo, but there's no need for it on other notes D:


personal: make the circles bigger ^____^

pretty good map :3
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