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Takayuki Negishi - Mew Zakuro no Theme

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gkana
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Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
gkana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 8 februari 2011 at 04:57:24

Artist: Takayuki Negishi
Title: Mew Zakuro no Theme
Source: Tokyo Mew Mew
Tags: Saten-san
BPM: 200
Filesize: 2177kb
Play Time: 01:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,08 stars, 56 notes)
  2. Hard (4,86 stars, 121 notes)
  3. Normal (4,39 stars, 99 notes)
  4. Zakuro (4,99 stars, 182 notes)
Download: Takayuki Negishi - Mew Zakuro no Theme
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st Beatmap

Zakuro by Saten-san
Last edited by gkana , edited 56 times in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Star and Good luck.

You think my Diff is suited for approved or ranked?

Hard
00:11:574 (1,2,3) - Do not overlap like that please.
00:27:024 (3) - Increase the slider 2 ticks.
00:05:574 (1,2,3) - Move these three 1 tick forward
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Hej!

This is no full modding as I don't have my home computer at the moment but I noticed some other faults that need to be fixed ,)

I'm pretty sure the artist should be Takayuki Negishi.
Please change to that and read this before you do that viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

You don't need the OST in source. "Tokyo Mew Mew" is enough as a source.

Zakuro isn't needed in tags as it in the title already.

Also, if you intend this going for a rank you need to get atleast one easier difficulity with less than 3 stars as the current difficulity spread is unacceptible.

Well, as I said I can't check it out right now but please fix the things I said.
If you want more modding post in some Modding Queues and/or ask in #modreqs.
I might check it out later if you have gotter 8 stars :)
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Will have a look at the Artist-change issue in a few moments (Done), since we live in the same house

God jul, Merry Christmas
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
General
- Either add Kiai Time for all the diffs or remove it from the Zakuro diff
- Remove countdown from all the diffs (its not being used)
- Background image should be 1024*768 or 800*600 fix please
- For the audio, it should have a bit rate of 192kbps or less for it to get ranked. Please fix or you can PM for help

Easy
00:03:174 (2) Make it end at the previous white tick (00:04:374)
00:17:424 (2) move it to the next white tick (00:17:574)
00:27:024 (2) ^same

Normal
Increase the cirlce size by 1
00:17:424 (2) lol guess. Same as before
00:27:024 (2) ^same

Hard
Seems fine to me

Zakuro
01:00:474 (5,6) Move them 3 grids to the right

Nice map
and good luck on getting this ranked :D
gkana
24 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
gkana

Weezy wrote:

General
- Either add Kiai Time for all the diffs or remove it from the Zakuro diff
- Remove countdown from all the diffs (its not being used)
- Background image should be 1024*768 or 800*600 fix please
- For the audio, it should have a bit rate of 192kbps or less for it to get ranked. Please fix or you can PM for help

Easy
00:03:174 (2) Make it end at the previous white tick (00:04:374)
00:17:424 (2) move it to the next white tick (00:17:574)
00:27:024 (2) ^same

Normal
Increase the cirlce size by 1
00:17:424 (2) lol guess. Same as before
00:27:024 (2) ^same

Hard
Seems fine to me

Zakuro
01:00:474 (5,6) Move them 3 grids to the right

Nice map
and good luck on getting this ranked :D
All done & Thanks :)
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Hey.

General

About Kiai time : It is not very good if you leave Kiai for too long. (Easy/Hard : 24.0% to 100% isn't good - Normal/Zakuro are okay, but I think that you can cut it once more)


Easy
Fine but consider cutting the Kiai.


Normal

00:11:635 (5) - Too many repetitions, consider cutting it
00:14:335 (2) - ^

I didn't have a look on Zakuro and Hard, since I'm not modding beyond Normal+ but it seems fine to me. It deserves a star.

Good luck for ranking ~
gkana
24 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
gkana

Gezoda wrote:

Hey.

General

About Kiai time : It is not very good if you leave Kiai for too long. (Easy/Hard : 24.0% to 100% isn't good - Normal/Zakuro are okay, but I think that you can cut it once more)


Easy
Fine but consider cutting the Kiai.


Normal

00:11:635 (5) - Too many repetitions, consider cutting it
00:14:335 (2) - ^

I didn't have a look on Zakuro and Hard, since I'm not modding beyond Normal+ but it seems fine to me. It deserves a star.

Good luck for ranking ~
Thanks~
Kiai cut done
and the rest is likely fixed
gkana
24 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
gkana
:lol:
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Pointless comment lol
LesTrucsRoses
271 posts
Joined July 2010
LesTrucsRoses
Normal
SPOILER
00:13:585 (3) - Move this beat 4 grids down.
00:32:335 (4) - New combo.

Hard
SPOILER
00:16:435 (1) - This slider is too close to the HP bar.
00:37:210 - This break is too short. delete it.
00:39:501 - This break is too short. delete it.
*Consider mapping those breaks.

Well done.
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
Remove "original soundtrack" in tags
Remove kiai and add new on 00:45:235 - 00:53:635

Easy
Good

Normal
Fast speed of the sliders, it's hard for normal
00:17:635 (3) - move it there 00:17:485
00:27:085 (2) - ^ 00:27:085
00:44:035 (1) - short slider, remove
00:47:635 (7) - do it simmetrical
00:48:835 - remove this break

Hard
00:18:835 (2,3) - 1 grid right
00:37:135 - delete break and next too
00:46:735 (3) - spacing

Zakuro
00:33:685 (1) - divided into 3 parts
00:54:835 - 00:59:635 - don't sure about this part...

Good luck, star
Saten
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3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

Vass_Bass wrote:

Zakuro
00:33:685 (1) - divided into 3 parts
00:54:835 - 00:59:635 - don't sure about this part...
Fixed

Download: Takayuki Negishi - Mew Zakuro no Theme (gkana) [Zakuro].osu
gkana
24 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
gkana

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal
SPOILER
00:13:585 (3) - Move this beat 4 grids down.
00:32:335 (4) - New combo.

Hard
SPOILER
00:16:435 (1) - This slider is too close to the HP bar.
00:37:210 - This break is too short. delete it.
00:39:501 - This break is too short. delete it.
*Consider mapping those breaks.

Well done.
Fixed and done Thanks :D

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove "original soundtrack" in tags
Remove kiai and add new on 00:45:235 - 00:53:635

Easy
Good

Normal
Fast speed of the sliders, it's hard for normal
00:17:635 (3) - move it there 00:17:485
00:27:085 (2) - ^ 00:27:085
00:44:035 (1) - short slider, remove
00:47:635 (7) - do it simmetrical
00:48:835 - remove this break

Hard
00:18:835 (2,3) - 1 grid right
00:37:135 - delete break and next too
00:46:735 (3) - spacing

Zakuro
00:33:685 (1) - divided into 3 parts
00:54:835 - 00:59:635 - don't sure about this part... Updated

Good luck, star
Changed Normal to Normal+
Thanks for modding :D
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hi

Easy:
  1. 00:16:435 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
  2. 00:21:235 (1)-^
  3. 00:26:035 (1)^
  4. 00:27:835 (3)-Add a clap on the end of that slider.
  5. 00:30:835 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
  6. 00:31:885 (2, 3)-^
  7. 00:35:635 (1)-^
  8. 00:38:035 (1)-^
  9. 00:40:435 (1, 2)-http://puu.sh/BPZ O_o I think you made some kind of mistake on this... Fix it. Now!
  10. 00:45:235 (1)-^
  11. 00:50:035 (1)-^
  12. 00:52:435 (4)-^
  13. 00:59:635 (1)-Add a finish.
Normal+:
  1. 00:035 (1)-Add a finish.
  2. 00:06:835 (1)-^
  3. 00:11:635 (1, 3)-On 1, add a finish on the beginning of that slider. And add a finish on 3.
  4. 00:14:035 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
  5. 00:16:534 (1, 2, 3)-Fix the spacing on this... Even if this difficulty is a Normal+, I still find that to be hard. =P After that, fix the spacing on 2 and 3.
  6. 00:23:835 (5)-Add a finish.
  7. 00:23:785 (1)-^
  8. 00:29:035 (2, 5, 6 ,7)-On 2, Fix the spacing on this? On 5, Add a clap on the end of that slider and fix the spacing on this. On 6 and 7, Add some finishes.
  9. 00:30:835 (1)-Add a finish and fix the spacing.
  10. 00:32:335 (1)-Fix the spacing...
  11. 00:45:235 (1)-Add a finish.
  12. 00:50:035 (1)-^
  13. 00:53:485 (1)-^
  14. 01:01:135 (1)-^
Hard:
  1. 00:09:235 (1)-Add a finish.
  2. 00:11:635 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
  3. 00:14:035 (1)-Add a finish.
  4. 00:21:235 (1)-^
  5. 00:26:035 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
  6. 00:30:835 (1, 6)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider on 1. Fix the spacing on 6 when possible....
  7. 00:44:185 (1)-Add a finish.
  8. 00:53:485 (1)-^
  9. 00:57:767 (1, 2, 3, 4)-Add some finishes, man.
  10. 01:01:510 (1)-Add a finish.
Zakuro:
  1. 00:03:235 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-... :( Might I suggest having them closer and making the angles less sharp? Like this.
  2. 00:08:635 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Have the spacing on this more closer....
  3. 00:10:435 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-Same thing I mentioned about 00:03:235.
  4. 00:29:035 (5, 6, 7, 8 9)-This right here confused me a little bit... especially 6 and 8... Probably not a good idea not to stack them on the end of those sliders because it would make the player hit them early and since its 1/2 away in the time-line, it would result getting a miss or lesser accuracy. Its a nice idea but it plays bad.
  5. 00:54:835 to 00:59:635 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 00:03:235.
And done. Sorry if I'm being too harsh on the Zakuro difficulty. xD If you guys have any questions, let me know in-game.

Might as well star this.

Edit: Thanks for pointing out the spelling error, Saten-san.
Last edited by Roddie , edited 2 times in total.
Saten
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Saten

Roddie wrote:

Zakuro:

* 00:03:235 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-... :( Might I suggest having them closer and making the angles less sharp? Like this.
* 00:08:635 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Have the spacing on this more closer....
* 00:10:435 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-Same thing I mentioned about 00:03:235.
* 00:29:035 (5, 6, 7, 8 9)-This right here confused me a little bit... especially 6 and 8... Probably not a good idea not to stack them on the end of those sliders because it would make the player hit them early and since its 1/2 away in the time-line, it would result getting a miss or lesser accuracy. Its a nice idea but it plays bad.
* 00:54:835 to 00:59:635 (1)-something I mentioned on 00:03:235.


And done. Sorry if I'm being to harsh on the Kakuro difficulty. xD If you guys have any questions, let me know in-game.
"Kakuro" hahah XD
sorry :P

All done on my diff :3
Something about the overall spacing... You think it's too spacey between the notes?

Rest will be done tomorrow, since gkana went to bed before seeing this mod.

Edit: kudosu'd

Roddie wrote:

00:40:435 (1, 2)-http://puu.sh/BPZ O_o I think you made some kind of mistake on this... Fix it. Now!
Lol what the.. Fixed this critical error
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Try these colors
Combo1 : 88,98,167
Combo2 : 193,62,118
Combo3 : 153,56,173
Combo4 : 249,134,157

Easy;
- Good !!

Normal+;
- 00:54:835 >> End kiai time here

Hard;
- 00:54:835 >> End kiai time here

Zakuro;
- 00:32:785 >> Align with (5) end

* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Try these colors
Combo1 : 88,98,167
Combo2 : 193,62,118
Combo3 : 153,56,173
Combo4 : 249,134,157
Nice colors

Zakuro;
- 00:32:785 >> Align with (5) end done
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
Easy:
00:17:635 (2) - One 1/2 tick earlier.
00:27:235 (2) - ^
00:50:035 (1,2) - extend (1) by one 1/1 tick, delete (2) and make a beat at 00:51:535 -

Normal:
Just call this Normal. The '+' is unnecessary. IMO the low distance snap of this diff makes it easier.
00:48:535 - and 00:49:135 - add a short 1/2 slider? like this
SPOILER

Hard:
00:02:335 (1,2) - spacing. (2) is too far away.
01:00:085 (3,4) - Two grids right.

Zakuro:
00:44:035 (1) - start this one 1/4 tick earlier, but let it end on the same time as before.
01:00:535 (5,6) - One grid left.

Nice map for your first one^^
Saten
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3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

Rukarioman wrote:

Zakuro:
00:44:035 (1) - start this one 1/4 tick earlier, but let it end on the same time as before. done
01:00:535 (5,6) - One grid left. Done, I thought I already did that O.o
Edit: Rest is done. [Normal+] Changed back to [Normal] again.
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