This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 28 de marzo de 2016 at 04:59:42 p.m.

Artist: DystopiaGround
Title: AugoEidEs
Tags: Nao Demetori Dystopia Ground
BPM: 207
Filesize: 10627kb
Play Time: 07:11
Difficulties Available:

1. Freezing (7,4 stars, 1689 notes)

Download: DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs
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hi

6:50 :^)

1:1 pm



i just dropped some suggestion so no need to giv kds


sorry troll mod but i tried my best dx

Len wrote:

1:1 pm



i just dropped some suggestion so no need to giv kds

pp map:

1. 04:05:624 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - about this pattern, its really awkward when i test; actually, idk lol ok i agree, i will try to change this
2. 04:21:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - , 04:22:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - its really hard to catch tbhtbhtbh reduced
3. 05:48:958 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - try this? http://puu.sh/ncaSP/28d0bb224d.jpg its better than before i think lo not exactly but changed
4. 06:28:958 - ~ 06:29:393 - it should be emphasized like this: 06:31:277 (2,3,1) - ? In this second is because there is not a strong sound in 06:31:856 -

sorry troll mod but i tried my best dx if is your best i give you a kudosu ^^

Thank you!

ExGon top rank incoming

Kyuare wrote:

General

1. Add "marathon" and "suigintou" in your tags please; Suigintou is the girl who is on the Background added

Freezing

1. 00:35:769 (1) - A slider like this makes the flow a bit odd, try to curve it please. not exactly but changed
2. 00:45:624 (3,4,5) - Move it to x:~368; the jump is quite violent yet I don't see why it should be, nevertheless, I like the movement. Bring 00:45:914 (6) - closer be the way. reduced
3. 00:58:958 (2) - Move it to x:144; to make it symmetrical with 00:58:813 (1) - :^) mh? sorry i cant understand your idea
4. 01:01:711 (2) - Curve it like 01:01:277 (1) - please, the flow will be better. i tried to vary in this, if all sliders were curved, would be boring
5. 01:16:784 (1,2,3) - Should have more distance between 01:16:929 (2,3) - than 01:16:784 (1,2) - because the beat is stronger than others. huh for me (2) is stronger and acute than (3)
6. 01:30:987 (6) - Link it to the beggining of 01:30:262 (4) - (move it to x:352) rather than at the end will make the transition much better. changed
7. 01:39:103 (1) - Same for earlier, move it to x:336 will make the transition better. sure
8. 01:47:074 (4,1) - Move it to x:384 to make it consistent with 01:46:349 (1,2) - not exactly but changed!
9. 01:50:697 (3,4,5) - Same for 01:16:784 (1,2,3) -; should have more distance between 01:50:987 (4,5) - than 01:50:697 (3,4) - Whoops, my error, thanks!
10. 01:55:190 (2) - Curve it please ;_; to make the flow better. I like the current, but changed the positions
11. 01:59:972 (1) - Ctrl + G will make this much better sure
12. 02:12:001 (3,4) - I understand the idea, but the player will tend to go directly to the left, move 02:12:291 (4) - to x:192 please changed
13. 02:12:581 (1,2) - Very hard jump, put a Hyper dash here to help the player please wop, iots true, but hyper not fit, ds reduced
14. 02:16:059 (1) - Reduce the distance please, move it to x:256 reduced
15. 02:16:059 (1) - Ctrl + H will make this much better, I let you arrange the following pattern depending on your choice hum it's the same point as above? i prefer keep this following the voice
16. 03:50:697 (5) - Curve it please o3o aaa i like this
17. 04:03:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I really would like a Slider Velocity variation here, which would increase depending on the intensity of the music! hum, tbh i think thats not much appreciable at playing, but trying something like that
18. 04:29:248 (1,2,3,4) - Very hard, try to make this like 04:29:538 (1,2,3,4) - changed
19. 04:40:407 (2,3) - Looks weird imo, move 04:41:494 (3) - to x:224 and Ctrl+H 04:41:567 (4) - will make this prettier and better oh, sure
20. 04:47:364 (3,4) - Very very punitive, I would suggest that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4559667 huh, lol i think plays good o.o
21. 05:08:088 (1,2) - I can see the idea, but the spacing is still too high imo, reduce a bit please. reduced
22. 05:38:233 (4) - x:120 to reduce the spacing and make it less shitmissable. reduced a bit
23. 05:39:827 (4,5) - I can't see why you put a big spacing while there is nothing special about the music, Ctrl+H 05:39:972 (5) - please. it's following the intrument aaa
24. 05:43:161 (1) - Curve it like you've done before here 05:40:842 (1) - it fits the music very nicely as i said before
25. 05:46:349 (5) - Ctrl+H sure
26. 05:55:624 (2) - I think you should move this slider 1/1 tic later, like you've done for 05:54:755 (5) - vary in this is not so bad
27. 06:09:827 (2,1) - Hyper Dash here please Whoops, my error, thanks!
28. 06:14:030 (6,1) - Very hard spacing, reduce the distance please. aaaa
29. 06:27:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Repetitive, sounds like genryuu kaiko lol; you can still vary patterns, but this is optional. yes why not :3
    Good flow, good map, but we regret the lack of vertical sliders. Good luck !

Thank you for the helpful mod! ^^

te amo

mod req

Este mapa necesita más atención

Taeyang wrote:

mod req

[ General]

1. Combo3 and 4 too similar,i think need to change this
2. i cant find anymore xdd

• Freezing
  

1. 00:35:262 (6) - i cant find any sound here Hum, i can hear a clear sound here o.o try with sample 0%
2. 01:03:451 (5) - x160? i think 01:03:451 (5,1) - here need some hyper not exactly but changed
3. 01:07:074 (1,2) - rhythm ; 01:05:914 (1,2,3,4) - just use consistency rhythm? like there nor add circle here 01:07:653 -
   that's feel better ok there is a sound, but is just os hard to listen at play, i prefer dont add
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:755 (5) - NC and remove NC this 01:05:190 (1) - wo
5. 01:08:233 (5) - i think NC point here and remove that 01:08:668 (1) - dumb again
6. 01:15:480 - dont skip here instrument drum sound is just to vary a bit is not so bad
7. 02:02:581 (7,1) - i think here need more DS then here 02:01:929 (2,3) - 02:02:219 (4,5) - fixed
8. 02:07:943 - add note? wup
9. 02:20:842 - why did used KIAI here? i think that's fine 03:44:175 - 05:48:523 - i think recharge point here 02:22:001 - 03:45:480 - 05:49:538 - is so similar as 02:01:567 - , and the instrument is just so different, +no voice, i will ask more people about this but i think the current is the correct kiai, as the ranked map
10. 04:23:740 (6) - NC true
11. 05:00:117 (1,1,1) - add finish sound? looks better not really, just the voice is so loud
12. 05:13:016 - KIAI end here looks better and NC nc
13. 05:40:552 (2) - add clap lol my error
14. 02:13:306 (1) - 03:36:784 (1) - add finish sound? like here 05:40:842 (1) - in the first, the rest is just the voice
15. 06:50:262 - ~ 07:11:132 - add spin and 07:11:277 - add note nooo that's so long! if you add a long spinner, the ryuuta would have a lot of notes, is exaplained in CtB RC
16. Duplicate timing points(s) at:
    06:07:364 {367364} aaaa

Thank you! ^^

Deif wrote:

Este mapa necesita más atención

En eso estoy! x.x Creo que voy a tomar esto como un insulto(?

GOTTA BOARD THE HYPE TRAIN

Your first "X" map, lol i'll mod later!

Hype! here's a star! maybe i'll check it out later too if i have motivation

Jusenkyo wrote:

Your first "X" map, lol i'll mod later!

klonoa wrote:

Hype! here's a star! maybe i'll check it out later too if i have motivation

Wow this is so fast

hi for you

Never enough AugoEidEs.

hi

[Freezing]

00:33:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - At this section (and also the rest of the parts like this), 3 is definitely a stronger note than 4, it'd make a lot more sense to have the hyper to that instead.
00:36:204 (2) - This is weaker than 00:36:494 (3) - , why have a hyper to this if you're not gonna have one here? I think removing this hyper entirely is a better idea.
00:36:784 (5) - This note is also quite weak, get rid of the hyper to this (But keep the hyper from it, 1 is a strong note).
00:37:943 (6) - ^
00:38:813 (4) - You didn't have a hyper to really similar sounding notes earlier on, why the change here? Get rid of the hyper to this.
00:39:103 (5) - Again, get rid of the hyper to this, but keep the hyper from this, this note is relatively weak compared to other notes you didn't hyper.
00:41:422 (4) - ^
00:42:581 (6) - ^
00:43:740 (7) - ^
00:44:900 (4) - ^
00:46:059 (7) - ^
00:46:204 (1) - Keep in mind the antiflow here with the HDash, may be better to tilt this slider slightly to make flow better.
00:46:639 (2) - ^
00:48:378 (7) - Again, HDash not to this, but to 1, sounds a lot better with the music.
00:49:538 (4) - Whilst I do understand why this is a HDash with the music, I feel it'd actually be better to get rid of the HDash too, as the musical effect added by just the single HDash would be a lot better, and would make that note feel all the more powerful.
00:51:856 (7) - Again, get rid of the HDash to this, weak note compared to some others you're not using HDash on.
00:52:726 (4) - You didn't use a HDash to similar sounds, why use one here?
00:53:161 (1,2,3,4) - 1 is definitely a lot stronger than 3, have the HDash to that by changing this pattern around.
00:54:175 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is just no, it's out of nowhere, and is completely different to 00:53:885 (1,2,3,4) - despite being basically the same sounds. If you really want to, have a HDash to 1, but even that is a bit of overpatterning in my opinion, and just a normal dash to this would be a lot better.
00:54:465 (1,1) - Whilst it's purely optional and personal preference, I think making this a break would be nice.
00:57:509 (1) - This spinner sounds like it starts a bit early in my opinion, the next 1/1 tick sounds a lot better as that's where the "woosh" sound starts.
00:59:972 (5) - Having a hyper both to and from this doesn't make much sense. The drumbeat isn't that strong compared to other drumbeats where you had normal dashes, and then the vocal afterwards is very weak.
01:01:132 (4) - Having a HDash to this doesn't make much sense either, for the same reason stated above.
01:02:291 (4) - ^, however the HDash afterwards feels nice.
01:03:451 (5) - Get rid of the HDash to this, the drumbeat is weak.
01:04:175 - You've been hitting this guitar notes consistently so far, why is there no circle here despite the fact there has been in every other place similar? Maybe a 1/2 slider from 01:04:030 (2) - would be better as this is more of a consistent sound from that note.
01:04:610 (4) - Get rid of the HDash to this and add a HDash to 1 instead, that guitar sound is very strong and feels underemphasised as it is now.
01:05:769 (4) - Vocal is weak and the drum isn't that strong either, get rid of this HDash.
01:06:929 (4) - Both drum and guitar aren't that strong, get rid of both of these HDashes as 1 isn't very strong either.
01:07:509 (2) - Same as earlier, 1/2 slider.
01:08:088 (5) - More of a curve pattern would be nice here, try x:432.
01:10:552 (3) - 1/1 slider followed by a circle would feel a lot better with the music.
01:11:567 (2) - No HDash to this, weak drumbeat.
01:12:726 (3) - No, this drumbeat is so weak, no reason to have a HDash to this.
01:13:885 (4) - ^
01:15:190 (5) - 1/1 slider followed by circle.
01:18:233 (3) - This is not strong, nor is 4, reduce the distance on both of these.
01:18:813 (1) - What? There's basically no sound on this, why is there a HDash at all?
01:20:552 (3) - Weak sound, please no HDash. Ctrl+g would work nicely.
01:21:711 (4) - Please have a bit of a jump to this, this is stronger than both 5 and 6.
01:22:871 (3) - Neither this nor 4 are strong, decrease distance.
01:24:029 (3) - This is stronger than 4 and 5, add a jump.
01:24:465 (1) - Feels weird to miss the note in the middle of this, 1/2 repeat slider would work better.
01:25:480 (5) - Make this a normal dash to add more emphasis onto the next note, as this drumbeat does not fit a HDash.
01:25:769 (2) - Maybe have a low distance triple for this one, and then the current distance on the next instead, to better ease the player into these HDash distances? Try x:112.
01:27:943 (4) - Vocal and drumbeat are both weak, please remove this HDash.
01:28:958 (3) - Nope, both sounds to and from this are weak, get rid of both HDashes.
01:30:697 (5) - This vocal and drum beat are both quite weak, no HDash here works a lot better.
01:31:277 (7,1) - Both of these sounds are weak, remove both HDashes.
01:31:856 (2) - 1/2 slider sounds better.
01:32:436 (4) - Drum beat is quite weak, get rid of the HDash.
01:33:740 (1) - Vocal isn't that strong, normal dash works better.

And so on. Not gonna continue because hopefully you get the idea by now. I've only been making remarks about HDash usage because I think flow comments wouldn't be helpful in this map's current state, as a lot of changes are needed in terms of distancing anyway.
Anyway, onto the slightly different parts of the map to say how these could be changed.

02:05:480 (2) - Please keep HDashes to strong vocals during the kiai, sounds a lot better, these drumbeats are a lot less noticeable in game, especially compared to the strength of the vocals.
02:06:059 (2) - This vocal is weak compared to the other vocals in the chorus, please get rid of the HDash.
02:07:798 (2) - Again, vocals only for HDash please.
02:08:378 (2) - This is more of a buildup vocal than a strong one, removing the HDash here sounds a lot better.
02:10:697 (4) - Split this into two circles. Makes sense for the other ones to be sliders, but not this one.
02:10:987 (1) - This vocal is weak compared to the other hypering ones, try a normal dash.
02:12:001 (3) - No HDash please.
02:12:436 (5) - ^
02:13:306 (1) - Maybe slightly lower distance here, super strong hypers like this should be avoided.
02:17:074 (4) - Why is this a hyper at all, ignoring the fact it's so strong. Please remove the HDash.
02:17:653 (2) - This is more of a buildup vocal, no HDash here sounds better with music.
02:19:103 (1) - No strong sound at all here, please get rid of the HDash.
02:19:393 (2) - Drum isn't strong enough for a HDash here and vocal is weak.
02:19:682 (3) - ^
02:19:972 (4) - ^
02:20:987 (4) - Both 4 and 5 are weak, why are there HDashes to either?

And again, you get the idea, this applies to all of the kiai times like this.

04:19:538 (1) - Hdash to this sounds weird with the music.
04:21:567 (2,3,4,5,6,2,3,4,5,6) - These stacks just feel bad to play. Make them a good stream that plays nicely.
04:23:161 (1) - This one isn't that strong? No hyper here would be better.
04:27:074 (3) - This is not that strong, why is there a HDash to this.
04:27:219 (1) - Same with this, neither the guitar nor the drum is that strong here.
04:27:654 (3) - Here too.
04:27:798 (1) - And here.
04:28:378 (1) - Also here.
04:28:523 (3) - Another one.
04:28:813 (3) - And another.
04:28:958 (1) - This one as well.
04:29:538 (1) - Here as well.
04:29:972 (3) - Drum isn't strong enough for a HDash here.
04:30:842 (3) - This one too.
04:33:161 (1) - This guitar sound is not that strong.
04:34:465 (3) - Drum and guitar are both quite weak.
04:34:610 (4) - This one is a bit more subjective but I don't like the way a hyper to this sounds.
04:36:929 (3) - No, these streams are constantly the same sound, don't decide you want to make the stream harder for no reason in the music. Get rid of this HDash.
04:37:292 (4) - Remove this, the 3/4 notes in this stream are so weak that I can't even tell they're there.
04:37:582 (4) - ^
04:37:798 (3) - No HDash, this note is weak.
04:37:870 (4) - Maybe remove this note too.
04:38:668 (3) - Slightly higher distance for the stronger note could be nice.
04:39:103 (5) - Drum and guitar are both quite weak, no HDash works better.
04:39:538 (2) - The guitar here is weak, please no HDash.
04:41:567 (4) - The way this hyper is currently, it feels like you're being forced against the wall, which is unrankable. Try x:448.
04:43:451 (4) - The guitar here is weak, get rid of the HDash.
04:45:480 (1) - Sound is moderately weak, avoid the HDash here.
04:45:625 (3) - This sound isn't as strong as surrounding sounds, no HDash please.
04:46:059 (1) - Sound is quite weak, get rid of the HDash.
04:47:074 (3) - No, this sound is weak, get rid of the HDash.
04:47:364 (3) - ^
04:47:798 (1) - Guitar here isn't strong enough for a HDash.
04:48:378 (1) - This guitar isn't too strong either.
04:48:523 (3) - Weak beat sounds better without HDash.
04:49:393 (3) - Nope, this is weak.
04:50:697 (1) - Similar sound earlier without HDash, why is there one here?
04:51:132 (3) - This is weak, get rid of the HDash.
04:51:277 (1) - Pretty weak sound for the guitar, no HDash sounds better.
04:51:422 (3) - Guitar is weak and there's not even a drum here, so the HDash sounds weird.
04:51:856 (1) - HDash sounds weird with music.
04:52:436 (1) - This one is a weak sound too, get rid of that HDash.
04:53:161 (3) - Guitar is weak and drum isn't too strong, sounds better without the HDash here.
04:54:610 (3) - Guitar isn't that strong, no HDash sounds better.
04:55:045 (1) - No HDash to this works better as well because the guitar is weak and drum isn't strong enough for a HDash.
04:55:624 (1) - Guitar isn't that strong and drum is weak so get rid of that HDash.
04:56:349 (3) - No HDash, this note is weak.
04:56:639 (1) - There is definitely a beat on the 3/4 beat here that you're missing for no reason.
04:57:364 (1) - Both beat and guitar aren't that strong.
04:57:509 (3) - ^.
04:57:798 (1) - Missing 1/4 beat here for no reason.
04:58:958 (1) - 1/1 slider followed by circle sounds better.
05:03:016 (2) - Normal dash would work better than HDash considering there was no dash to this sound in the last section like this.
05:03:451 (3) - ^, normal dash would work better for consistency.
05:04:610 (2) - Again, normal dash for consistency.
05:05:769 (4) - ^
05:06:349 (3) - Note isn't that strong, get rid of HDash.
05:06:639 (1) - Guitar is weak, get rid of HDash.
05:07:219 (3) - Why no HDash to this? The guitar is strong enough to support it.
05:08:088 (1) - Beat is not that strong, get rid of the HDash.
05:09:393 (2) - Guitar isn't that strong here, no HDash works better.
05:10:407 (4) - Guitar should be main focus of HDashes here, not drums, get rid of the HDash to this.
05:12:001 (2) - Normal dash sounds a lot better to this and better matches the effect of those drums.

And again, this isn't the whole map, keep in mind every part of this mod and carry on through the rest of the map and fix it all up. Should be easy for you to find and fix all the issues yourself.

Ok so that's all I'm gonna post about for now. As always, pm me in game if you have any questions, and good luck!

mapa ql moda <3