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Dailycare
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 3월 27일 일요일 at 오후 9:06:18

Artist: senya
Title: Ondosa
Source: 東方Project
Tags: comiket87 Temperature Difference Touhou 幽閉サテライト Yuuhei Satellite 想いが歴史に変わる時 でいたらぼっち Deitarabotchi かませ虎 kamase tora 森永真由美 Morinaga Mayumi 東方風神録 extra stage theme Kanako Yasaka Suwako Moriya
BPM: 147
Filesize: 3524kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.01 stars, 396 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.27 stars, 550 notes)
  3. Normal (1.82 stars, 243 notes)
Download: senya - Ondosa
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Last edited by Dailycare , edited 46 times in total.
Satellite
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Satellite
call me if you are ready
Dailycare
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Dailycare

Satellite wrote:

call me if you are ready
okay, sir
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It's ok for me tho =w=

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2016-02-22 20:04 Dailycare: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/909244 senya - Ondosa]
2016-02-22 20:04 Dailycare: this..
2016-02-22 20:04 Dailycare: i'm not sure of hitsounds..
2016-02-22 20:16 Riantra: no sample hitsounds for C1?
2016-02-22 20:16 Dailycare: c1?
2016-02-22 20:16 Dailycare: what c1?
2016-02-22 20:16 Riantra: i mean custom hitsounds 1
2016-02-22 20:17 Dailycare: oh there is
2016-02-22 20:17 Dailycare: but there's only hitclap
2016-02-22 20:17 Riantra: i see in your folder there are only softslider and soft hitclap and normal hitclap
2016-02-22 20:17 Dailycare: lol yea
2016-02-22 20:18 Dailycare: but soft-hitclap is same as normal-hitclap
2016-02-22 20:20 Riantra: i think the hitsounds is pretty nice
2016-02-22 20:20 Dailycare: oh my god
2016-02-22 20:20 Dailycare: rly?
2016-02-22 20:21 Riantra: yes
2016-02-22 20:21 Dailycare: thanks xD
2016-02-22 20:21 Dailycare: really glad to hear that
2016-02-22 20:25 Riantra: 00:26:685 (1) - i think this part need finish
2016-02-22 20:25 Dailycare: lol
2016-02-22 20:25 Dailycare: wait plz
2016-02-22 20:25 Dailycare: oh it's my mistake ;w;
2016-02-22 20:26 Dailycare: normal-finish?
2016-02-22 20:26 Dailycare: or soft-finish?
2016-02-22 20:26 Dailycare: what do you want?
2016-02-22 20:26 Riantra: soft
2016-02-22 20:26 Dailycare: yup
2016-02-22 20:28 Riantra: i think the rhythm is a bit monoton
2016-02-22 20:28 Riantra: idk just my opinion lol
2016-02-22 20:28 Dailycare: uh..
2016-02-22 20:29 Dailycare: k i'll consider some rhythm..
2016-02-22 20:30 Riantra: like, just before the note you add some normal-whistle, you can add some triple
2016-02-22 20:30 Riantra: 00:29:746 (4) - for example this
2016-02-22 20:30 Riantra: 00:29:338 (2,3) - you can add triple in here
2016-02-22 20:31 Dailycare: o.o
2016-02-22 20:31 Dailycare: at this part..
2016-02-22 20:32 Dailycare: how about adding note between 00:29:746 (4,1) - 
2016-02-22 20:32 Dailycare: ?
2016-02-22 20:34 Riantra: considering the hitsound you can even add double triple
2016-02-22 20:34 Riantra: 00:29:338 (2,3) - between this and between 00:29:746 (4,1) -
2016-02-22 20:35 Riantra: because you add normal whistle in red tick which make a new sound
2016-02-22 20:37 Dailycare: hmm..
2016-02-22 20:37 Dailycare: i think double triple is not good..
2016-02-22 20:37 Dailycare: for me lol
2016-02-22 20:38 Riantra: then just add triple in one of them
2016-02-22 20:38 Riantra: or not adding triple lol
2016-02-22 20:38 Riantra: it's up to you
2016-02-22 20:38 Dailycare: but it may be better to add triple
2016-02-22 20:41 Riantra: this is just a suggestion for hitsound, but what do you think of this
2016-02-22 20:41 Riantra: 00:51:379 (3,5,3,5) - sampleset change to drum
2016-02-22 20:42 Dailycare: omg
2016-02-22 20:42 Dailycare: it's pretty sick
2016-02-22 20:42 Dailycare: gonna change it
2016-02-22 20:42 Riantra: lol
2016-02-22 20:42 Riantra: is it good? or bad? owo
2016-02-22 20:43 Dailycare: it just awesome
2016-02-22 20:43 Riantra: lol
2016-02-22 20:43 Dailycare: pretty nice
2016-02-22 20:44 Riantra: .w.
2016-02-22 20:44 Dailycare: 01:56:685 (3,5,3,5) - 
2016-02-22 20:44 Dailycare: also adjusted
2016-02-22 20:45 Riantra: yeah sampe part
2016-02-22 20:45 Riantra: same*
2016-02-22 20:48 Riantra: 01:08:522 (2,4) - why don't add sampleset drum in here too?
2016-02-22 20:49 Dailycare: hmm..
2016-02-22 20:51 Riantra: 01:18:318 (2,4) - instead of whistle, why don't change it to clap?
2016-02-22 20:51 Riantra: i think drum-whistle and normal-whistle doesn't really go well here
2016-02-22 20:51 Dailycare: oh this
2016-02-22 20:51 Dailycare: k then,
2016-02-22 20:52 Dailycare: do you intend some clap sounds?
2016-02-22 20:53 Riantra: yea
2016-02-22 20:53 Dailycare: hmm.. i'm gonna remove normal-hitclap
2016-02-22 20:54 Riantra: this is just opinion lol, because i don't like normal-whistle sound.. so it's still up to you
2016-02-22 20:54 Dailycare: but i think so
2016-02-22 20:55 Dailycare: clap sounds are more better than whistle..
2016-02-22 20:55 Riantra: yeah
2016-02-22 20:56 Riantra: 01:18:318 (2,4) - like this, i think you should add more normal sampleset at this kind of rhythm, because it symphasize the music better
2016-02-22 20:56 Riantra: especially the clap sounds
2016-02-22 20:56 Riantra: don't too focus on soft-hitclap
2016-02-22 20:57 Dailycare: kk
2016-02-22 20:57 Dailycare: omg
2016-02-22 20:58 Dailycare: normal sampleset is pretty good choice
2016-02-22 20:58 Riantra: w
2016-02-22 20:58 Riantra: 02:07:093 (3) - why not slow slider lol
2016-02-22 20:59 Riantra: long vocal there
2016-02-22 21:00 Dailycare: lol
2016-02-22 21:00 Dailycare: i'm too noob ;w;
2016-02-22 21:01 Riantra: if you noob, then i'm mongrel ;w;
2016-02-22 21:01 Dailycare: oh mongrel..
2016-02-22 21:01 Dailycare: 02:07:909 (1) - 
2016-02-22 21:01 Dailycare: and i also removed this
2016-02-22 21:01 Riantra: yeah
2016-02-22 21:01 Riantra: sounds weird there
2016-02-22 21:02 Dailycare: D:..
2016-02-22 21:02 Riantra: =w=
2016-02-22 21:02 Dailycare: and how do you think that spiner's hitsound?
2016-02-22 21:04 Riantra: idk lol
2016-02-22 21:04 Riantra: feels too silent
2016-02-22 21:04 Dailycare: silent?
2016-02-22 21:04 Dailycare: oh..
Akiyama Mizuki
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Akiyama Mizuki
온도에 의해 사망하면 온도사
Dailycare
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..? haha honey jam
Line-
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온도에 의해 사망하면 온도사
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Down
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Down

bbj0920 wrote:

온도에 의해 사망하면 온도사
[General Setting]

삭제가 필요한 부분입니다.

태그에 관해서..


일단 동인 서클 유헤이 새틀라이트(幽閉サテライト Yuuhei Satellite)
엘범 이름입니다. 想いが歴史に変わる時
편곡자 이름입니다. でいたらぼっち
동방풍신록 東方風神録
동방비상천칙 東方非想天則
모리야 스와코 洩矢諏訪子 Moriya Suwako
동방 노래이니까 Touhou
원곡이 동방풍신록 EX스테이지 수록 extra stage theme

뭔가 더 있을거같은데 Satellite가 잡아주겠죠..

[Normal]
02:36:073 (4,5) - 최하위 난이도니까 0.07x정도 차이는 맞춰주시면 좋아요.
01:17:501 - 01:18:318 - 01:18:726 - 01:25:256 - 01:30:562 - 01:30:971 - 01:31:379 - 01:31:787 - 02:22:807 - 02:23:624 - 02:24:032 - 02:30:562 - 02:35:869 - 02:36:277 - 02:36:685 - 02:37:093 - 미사용 타임라인 입니다. 제 맵도 이것때문에 고생한 기억이..

[Hard]
02:25:052 (3) - 스킨에 따라서 HP바에 닿을지도 모르니 조금 내려 주시거나 꺾어주세요. 그러면서 어려울지도 모르겠지만 02:25:665 (4) - 오버랩을 자연스럽게 고쳐보도록 해보세요. 저도 어려워서 대안을 드릴 수가 없네요ㅠ

[Lunatic]
01:12:195 (4,1) - 뒤에 비슷한 점프들에 비해서 많이 벌리신듯 합니다. 3.0~3.5x 사이를 추천합니다.

힛사에 엄청난 노력이 보였습니다ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 굿럭!
Dailycare
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Down wrote:

[General Setting]

삭제가 필요한 부분입니다.

태그에 관해서..


일단 동인 서클 유헤이 새틀라이트(幽閉サテライト Yuuhei Satellite)
엘범 이름입니다. 想いが歴史に変わる時
편곡자 이름입니다. でいたらぼっち
동방풍신록 東方風神録
동방비상천칙 東方非想天則
모리야 스와코 洩矢諏訪子 Moriya Suwako
동방 노래이니까 Touhou
원곡이 동방풍신록 EX스테이지 수록 extra stage theme

뭔가 더 있을거같은데 Satellite가 잡아주겠죠.. // 이외에도 네 개 정도 추가 했습니다. 제안해준 태그 중에 추가 안한건 한자랑 영어랑 병기해야하는지, 한자만 써도 되는지 확신이 안서서.. 캐릭터 이름은 전 랭크 맵에선 한자는 안썼기 때문에 일단 영어만 넣었어요.

[Normal]
02:36:073 (4,5) - 최하위 난이도니까 0.07x정도 차이는 맞춰주시면 좋아요.
01:17:501 - 01:18:318 - 01:18:726 - 01:25:256 - 01:30:562 - 01:30:971 - 01:31:379 - 01:31:787 - 02:22:807 - 02:23:624 - 02:24:032 - 02:30:562 - 02:35:869 - 02:36:277 - 02:36:685 - 02:37:093 -미사용 타임라인 입니다. 제 맵도 이것때문에 고생한 기억이.. // 여기에 안 잡은 것도 사용안했으면 지웠습니다. 생각해보니까 우선 지워놓고 노트 추가될 때에 하나씩 추가하는게 맞는 것 같아요

[Hard]
02:25:052 (3) - 스킨에 따라서 HP바에 닿을지도 모르니 조금 내려 주시거나 꺾어주세요. 그러면서 어려울지도 모르겠지만 02:25:665 (4) - 오버랩을 자연스럽게 고쳐보도록 해보세요. 저도 어려워서 대안을 드릴 수가 없네요ㅠ

[Lunatic]
01:12:195 (4,1) - 뒤에 비슷한 점프들에 비해서 많이 벌리신듯 합니다. 3.0~3.5x 사이를 추천합니다.

힛사에 엄청난 노력이 보였습니다ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 굿럭!
앨범 정보 저렇게 한글로 된건 찾아도 안나오던데.. 참고해서 넣겠습니다. 모딩 감사합니다~
Moa
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Moa
Senya 了从人巨大 口久? 口 口久 己口立巨 己口 了从人巨大 己口了从口匚ヲヲヲ
Lefia
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Lefia
NM queue here~


i can't find a problem here
so i'll shoot a kudosu star

GL~
Underdogs
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Underdogs
Annyeonghaseyo (dont reply, this is a test)

Normal
00:40:562 (2) - You can keep it, or put it a beat earlier ( on 40358) (the same goes to 00:47:093 (2) - ) It's to make the players familiar with the sliders starting at 01:45:869 (2,3) -

I think that's it

Hard
on 00:41:379 (1) - I would make it a reverse slider and put a circle on 00:42:195 (3) - But different people have different style right?

I'm not a std pro playin Insane, but I won't mod Lunatic. But your map is excellent! (What the Koreans can't do anyway :/)

You got my support. Rank this map :D
Dailycare
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Dailycare
@Underdogs

Underdogs wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo XD
I did it, but, both are not my type.. So I restored these to previous patterns ;w; If other modders want to fix the stuff in Normal, I'll do it.
uuuget
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uuuget
Hi, from my modding queue

But i can't find any problem :)
wajinshu
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wajinshu

General

  1. Looks fine

Normal

  1. 00:43:828 (2,3) - blanket
  2. 00:46:277 (1) - imrove blanket
  3. 00:55:256 (4,5,1) - let's change the rhytm to something this? http://puu.sh/nn4Bc/c9c2238cee.png
  4. 00:57:501 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/nn4Bx/7dde7395c1.png
  5. 01:20:562 (5) - http://puu.sh/nn4O0/9ea9d9f9e0.png
  6. 02:25:869 (5) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:40:460 (3) - delete I can't hear here bit
  2. 00:46:991 (3) - ^
  3. 00:57:603 (5) - ^
  4. 01:07:399 (5) - ^^^
  5. 01:13:930 (5) - ^^^^^
  6. 01:20:460 (5) - ^
  7. 01:26:991 (5) - you know what I mean ;d
Good luck with rank ^_^ sorry for such a small mod
Dailycare
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Dailycare

wajinshu wrote:

General

  1. Looks fine

Normal

  1. 00:43:828 (2,3) - blanket // um i think it's fine D:
  2. 00:46:277 (1) - imrove blanket
  3. 00:55:256 (4,5,1) - let's change the rhytm to something this? http://puu.sh/nn4Bc/c9c2238cee.png // It's pretty nice rhythm, but i intended to ignore vocal sound. but i'll consider it again
  4. 00:57:501 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/nn4Bx/7dde7395c1.png // Same as above..
  5. 01:20:562 (5) - http://puu.sh/nn4O0/9ea9d9f9e0.png // Similar reason as above.. it's the lowest diff, so i didn't make rhythm more detailed.. hope you to understand TwT
  6. 02:25:869 (5) - ^ // ^..

Hard

  1. 00:40:460 (3) - delete I can't hear here bit
  2. 00:46:991 (3) - ^
  3. 00:57:603 (5) - ^
  4. 01:07:399 (5) - ^^^
  5. 01:13:930 (5) - ^^^^^
  6. 01:20:460 (5) - ^
  7. 01:26:991 (5) - you know what I mean ;d // Fixed all except 00:57:603 (5) -
Good luck with rank ^_^ sorry for such a small mod
Thanks for mod~!
Moa
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Moa
[normal]
01:59:338 (2,3) - plz fix blanket
02:45:460 (4,5) - fix blanket
01:48:318 (1) - Touch HP bar
[Hard]
Perfect
[Lunatic]
P...Perfect

Good map
I'll shoot a kudosu star~!
Dailycare
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Dailycare

Moa wrote:

[normal]
01:59:338 (2,3) - plz fix blanket // Da
02:45:460 (4,5) - fix blanket // Go
01:48:318 (1) - Touch HP bar // Chim ^^
[Hard]
Perfect
[Lunatic]
P...Perfect

Good map
I'll shoot a kudosu star~!
moding gamsahapnida~
H i k a r i
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H i k a r i
hi

General

각 난이도마다 서클 크기 좀 키워도 될거같음
키아이 부분마다 75, 80 이렇게 볼륨이 커졌다 작아졌다 하던데 어쩌피 80부분을 샘플셋을 normal로 뒀으니 충분히 강조되었다고 생각합니당
그리고 키아이때 휘슬을 노말 휘슬로 바꿔도 어울릴듯

Hard

00:34:848 (1,2,3)
00:38:114 (1,2,3) - 이부분들 http://puu.sh/nnY7G/635e6e7213.jpg 이렇게 바꿀수도 있을듯

Lunatic

에얄 8.3은 너무 느린듯 8.5~9 사이도 나쁘지 않는거 같네요

00:51:379 (3,3)
01:56:685 (3,3) - 앞에 서클에 클랩이 있으니까 굳이 드럼사운드가 들어갈 필요는 없다고 생각해용

키아이 아닌부분들도 휘슬좀 넣어주세용 뭔가 많이 어색하진 않은데 부족한 느낌이랄까



노말은 제가 보기엔 수정할 부분이 없는거 같네요
하드나 인센은 자잘한 부분들만 수정하면 랭크되도 별 문제 없을듯 ㅋㅋ
Dailycare
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Dailycare

H i k a r i wrote:

hi

General

각 난이도마다 서클 크기 좀 키워도 될거같음 // 이건 일단 이대로 냅둘게요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
키아이 부분마다 75, 80 이렇게 볼륨이 커졌다 작아졌다 하던데 어쩌피 80부분을 샘플셋을 normal로 뒀으니 충분히 강조되었다고 생각합니당 // 노말 샘플셋을 85로 두면 소리가 좀 더 큰 느낌이라 75로 줄인거에요.. 음 이건 다른 모더가 불필요하다 말하면 없앨게요
그리고 키아이때 휘슬을 노말 휘슬로 바꿔도 어울릴듯 // 이것도 처음엔 키아이에 휘슬썼는데 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 누가 소리가 난잡하대서 바꾼거라..

Hard

00:34:848 (1,2,3)
00:38:114 (1,2,3) - 이부분들 http://puu.sh/nnY7G/635e6e7213.jpg 이렇게 바꿀수도 있을듯 // 스타레이팅을 위해 어쩔 수 없었습니다 ㅠㅠ

Lunatic

에얄 8.3은 너무 느린듯 8.5~9 사이도 나쁘지 않는거 같네요

00:51:379 (3,3)
01:56:685 (3,3) - 앞에 서클에 클랩이 있으니까 굳이 드럼사운드가 들어갈 필요는 없다고 생각해용

키아이 아닌부분들도 휘슬좀 넣어주세용 뭔가 많이 어색하진 않은데 부족한 느낌이랄까



노말은 제가 보기엔 수정할 부분이 없는거 같네요
하드나 인센은 자잘한 부분들만 수정하면 랭크되도 별 문제 없을듯 ㅋㅋ
m4m 감사함당~
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