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Owl City ft. Breanne Duren - The Saltwater Room

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JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年2月19日 at 20:22:47

Artist: Owl City ft. Breanne Duren
Title: The Saltwater Room
Tags: ocean eyes
BPM: 112
Filesize: 4216kb
Play Time: 03:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.81 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Hard (4.92 stars, 454 notes)
  3. Normal (4.21 stars, 292 notes)
Download: Owl City ft. Breanne Duren - The Saltwater Room
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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So tell me darling, do you wish we'd fall in love?...
My 2nd map.
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Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
鹽水鴨
Aria
174 posts
Joined September 2010
Aria

Pokie wrote:

鹽水鴨
我该等LKs 来2楼么 QAQ
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
谢谢=。=不过你们自重啊
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
糖水鸭 :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris

Clickz wrote:

Pokie wrote:

鹽水鴨
我该等LKs 来2楼么 QAQ
你壞了Pokie姐的好事 D:


[Insane]
1:19:174 (3) up 1 grid
1:25:067 (4,5) (4) up 1 grid, (5) up 2 grids+right 1 grid
1:41:808 (6) down 1 grid
2:11:674 (3) ^

[Hard]
0:21:049(2) right 1 grid
0:32:567 (4) down 1 grid
1:40:603 (4,1) stack properly
一堆spacing 0.76x 也有一堆0.83x 用lv3 grid修一下就不錯了

[Easy] ok

有Pokie姐指導就是不同
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
[Insane]
- Combo problem
00:36:585 (4,5,6,7) - I don't know it isn't get ranked. Bet I almost remain you to new combo for 4.
00:38:728 (4) - New combo
01:37:120 (5) - ^
02:12:210 (5) - ^

[Hard]
- Sound
00:40:603 (5) - Remove wistle
01:08:192 (2,3) - (2)wistle, (3)remove it

[All]
Lovely song, lovely map.
STAR
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
thank you guys :)
i will fix them these days.
Cute Bunny
185 posts
Joined November 2009
Cute Bunny
[ Easy ]

00:21:049 (1) - remove combo
00:21:585 (1) - new combo
00:32:299 (1) - remove combo
01:06:853 (4) - ^
01:11:942 (5) - ^
01:13:013 (7) - new combo
01:15:156 (2) - remove combo
01:23:728 (1) - ^
01:28:549 (1) - remove combo?
02:04:442 (1) - remove combo
02:08:728 (2) - ^
02:33:370 (1) - remove combo
02:34:442 (1) - new combo
02:34:978 (1) - remove combo
02:39:799 (1) - ^
02:55:870 (4) - new combo
02:56:406 (1) - remove combo
03:24:263 (1) - ^
03:28:549 (1) - ^

[ Hard ]

00:36:585 (1) - remove combo
00:40:603 (5) - spacing
00:49:710 (1) - remove combo
00:55:067 (1) - ^
00:55:870 (3) - new combo
00:57:745 (1) - remove combo
00:58:013 (2) - new comobo
00:59:085 (1) - remove comobo
01:07:924 (1) - ^
01:11:942 (1) - ^
01:13:013 (3) - new combo
01:14:888 (1) - remove combo
01:15:156 (2) - new combo
01:18:638 (1) - remove combo
01:24:263 (1) - ^
01:39:263 (1) - ^
01:39:799 (2) - new combo
02:04:442 (1) - remove combo
02:17:835 (1) - ^
02:40:870 (1) - ^
02:50:513 (1) - ^
02:51:585 (1) - new combo
02:54:263 (1) - remove combo

[ Insane ]

~_~;

[ All ]

02:21:853 (b) - I think you can fill some good patterns as your thinking. o_o

~_~
STAR~★
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
General:
Cute question mark, but I think you should keep it as its own combo. Up to you. :)

Easy:
01:06:853 (1) - No new combo.
02:33:370 (1) - ^
03:38:728 (4) - New combo.
03:40:870 (1) - No new combo.

Hard:
00:21:049 (2) - 1 grid right.
00:35:781 (4) - New combo.
01:18:638 (1) - No new combo.
03:38:460 (5) - New combo.
03:40:870 (1) - No new combo.

Insane:
03:04:710 (1) to 03:08:460 (10) - I think it would be a good idea to put more combos here so that the player isn't relying solely on approach rings and numbers to determine the hit order.
03:38:460 (9) - New combo.
03:40:870 (1) - No new combo.

Nice maps, starred.
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
:) thanks for your modding! well because i'm really busy these days, the problem may be fixed several days later.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Modding~

Those are just suggestions...

Easy

OK

Hard

01:08:995 (1) - extend to red tick?
01:40:067 (3) - Just my opininon, but I'd just use a 1/2 slider in here.
02:06:585 (1) - If you already use a ? formed slider, make it stand the right way (flip it). You might have to re-arrange some previous notes.
03:31:228 - add a note?
03:33:370 - ^

Insane
Can't find any problems, but
03:04:710 - The instumental part. Damn, this is hard to read. I'm not saying it's bad, but I'd definitely fail it >_<


Star~
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
This is a really good map. Starred.
An-Don
89 posts
Joined February 2009
An-Don
'tis good now that it has been modded alot :D
Star~
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Remove "owl city " from tags as it is already in title
Remove Ocean Eyes from source and just keep it in tags (its album title so doesn't belong in source...some ranked maps have this wrong)

Easy:
01:25:603 (1) - extend by 1 white tick? (and add clap)
02:19:174 (1) - ^

Hard:
00:23:192 (6) - whistle just on slider sounds odd, make it like 00:25:603 (3)?
00:32:835 (5) - add whistle to the start?
01:18:638 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:
00:37:924 (1,2,3,4) - try and keep spacing equal
00:43:013 (5,1) - move further away
00:56:942 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - spread out more
01:08:460 (1) - odd place for new combo
01:41:674 (5,6,7) - slight spacing error
02:37:656 (1) - odd place for new combo

Nice
Star'ed~
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
fixed, thanks. ;) but except those things that i really thought they're fine.
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
moded on irc
star~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
easy

[00:17:229] 减少点音量
[00:23:192] 结尾的Whistle删了
[00:52:388] whistle
[00:52:924] 首尾Whistle 中间不用
[00:55:067] whistle
kiai中间不用断一下的

Hard

[00:38:728] 可以再圆一点的 8-)
[00:41:406] 不要Whistle
亮点 normal-Whistle-Whistle的使用
稍欠缺排位的美观 比如间距 比如slider弯折的角度

Insane

[00:17:229] 减少点音量
那个..
明天继续mod
先逃..~
:o
嗯
这首歌感觉还是比较轻的
那表现在摆放上也应该稍微轻 淡一点

首先我是觉得sliderslide会造成 阻力感
其次slider velocity稍微有点慢 配合大号的slider
再然后slider的形状 比如[00:38:728] 转折的很硬
[00:41:942] 形如这种 "重心"（瞎扯）明显偏左了 事实上这首歌轻的很平正 我觉得不适合用这种不对称的slider

然后我觉得[00:42:745] 这样的Whistle-Whistle 是不是加上一点音量变化会好点
[00:52:946] 这种1/4转折角太大 如果间距大一点 角度小一点也好
对于这张图 如果2连 最好完全重叠或者完全不遮挡

+_+/
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Starblade_old
4 posts
Joined October 2010
Starblade_old
INSANE的连打什么的._.
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
嗯,等你mod完我就开始改图了
把你和CJmod出来一起改应该会比较有效率...
谢啦 :)

Starblade wrote:

INSANE的连打什么的._.
就是恶心人用的._.
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