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Shimotsuki Haruka - Star Map (short ver)

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KaedekaShizuru
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月25日 星期一 at 20:33:15

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Star Map (short ver)
Source: 見上げてごらん、夜空の星を
Tags: Miagetegoran Yozora no Hoshi o A sky full of stars PULLTOP eroge galgame visual novel opening Karen Rizia Kawaiwkyik Little CloudSplash16 IamKwaN
BPM: 190
Filesize: 19542kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (3.06 stars, 233 notes)
  2. Easy (1.54 stars, 116 notes)
  3. Insane (4.94 stars, 358 notes)
  4. Karen's Yozora (5.27 stars, 358 notes)
  5. KwaN's Normal (2.01 stars, 163 notes)
  6. Little's Insane (4.47 stars, 318 notes)
  7. wkyik's Hard (3.5 stars, 247 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Star Map (short ver)
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#9
いつでも　ここから　はじまる
My 1st time make insane diff at so high BPM. That's really a different world. lol
And I'm so happy get this qualified on my 25th birthday.
See also:
OP:
Rita - Winter Diamond by BeatofIke
FD OP:
Ceui - Finest Sky by BeatofIke
Ceui - Finest Sky by Homura-
Taiko Ver.
Shimotsuki Haruka - Star map by BlackHairEND

Easy by me.
Normal by IamKwaN.
Advanced by me.
Hard by Mapping Machine Rizia.exe. Finish in 40 mins. 柚子神麻婆！
Light Insane by Little.
Insane by me.
Yozora as Extra by Karen.
Hitsound by Karen except Normal.
Lyrics
Star Map (short ver)
作詞: Minao Ohse
作曲: おおくまけんいち
編曲: おおくまけんいち

空そめてく薄闇
ひとつひとつ　生まれる 瞬き
凍えそうな星空
深呼吸で　確かめてる夜の行方
胸の奥にきざし
導く空へ　駆る箒星

Polar Star
見上げる夜空には
つかめない輝き
求めた未来とは　違う場所でも
My Star
あの日の軌道から
はぐれた星にもう一度名前をつけるために
ファインダー　宙へ

something meme
人类一开始思考，上帝就开始忙活了。。。。
“妈的！一个叫伽利略的傻B发明了望远镜！旧的恒星天2D贴图不能用了！3D太阳系今晚黄昏前必须上线！米迦勒！木星的贴图画好了吗？！”
“还没有！我还在做土星，土星环的模具有问题！内外环缝隙太大装不上去啊！”
“那就把环分成几个凑活一下，吃晚饭前一定要把木星的贴图弄上去！注意要贴整齐，千万不要有气泡，不然没法解释为什么我的造物是不完美的。”
“小心！！”
“哦不！法厄同碎了！完蛋了！我该怎么解释！开普勒说木星和火星间该有一颗行星的！”
“就。。。撒一圈在轨道上，说。。。说是小行星群，被土星和木星的潮汐扯碎了。。。”
“没办法了。。。就这么干吧。。。”
“打起精神来！我的安琪儿们！我们还有15分钟！一定要把合模线刮干净！不要舍不得用补土！千万别留下指纹！！”
“冥王星的轨道参数设错了！我多按了一个1！”
“不！引力摄动把海王星带歪了！”
“伽利略吃完饭了！他走近了望远镜！他在调焦距！”
“不行了！上线上线！我按钮了！”
“别别别。。。再给我一分钟，木星上有个气泡我把它吹平！！！”
“走你！就留个大红斑好了。。。”
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“father，天王星上线太着急，轨道有点瓢。。。”
“ 。。。人类怎么看？”
“ 他们认为还有一颗更远的行星对天王星造成引力摄动，而且。。”
“而且什么？”
"而且有个叫勒威耶的计算出这个行星必将于 23 号出现在黄经326度宝瓶星座的一个天区，也就是明天。。。”
“ 妈了个鸡！我恨数学！"
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“老大，粗大事了，人类的望远镜看得越远，需要渲染的场景越大，我们的电脑速度达到了极限，帧率再也上不去了，现在人类中间出现了宇宙中的物体运动速度有极限，不能超过光速这种奇怪的结论，这可怎么办？他们要发现真相了吗？”
“嗯。。。路西法，麻烦你投胎下去把牛顿那套理论推翻，重新以光速为极限速度发明一套新理论。。。就叫相对论吧，先把人类糊弄过去再说。。。”
“那我们以后更新了设备，他们可以超光速怎么办？”
“没事，再告诉他们空间是可以折叠的，让他们直接走虫洞。”
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“father，人类越来越多，活动范围也越来越大了，这样下去资源都不够用了！他们要跑出地图了，怎么办！”
“把他们的活动平面改成曲面，哦！球体最好，随便他们怎么跑！”
“之前说好的天圆地方呢！修改量太大，时间不够啊！”
“这个先放一放！拉斐尔！你快把那几个不安分的注释掉！等下再放出来！”
“怎么了？”
“人类不知道受了什么刺激，开始对这个宇宙产生了怀疑。那帮文科生提出了什么盒子理论，认为他们的宇宙实际上是个计算机。那帮理科生提出了大一统理论，并预言在走出那条隧道后将见到上帝本人！”
“我勒个去这帮家伙就不能让我们消停一会！派个人下去说这个是谣言，先拖会时间，然后赶紧升级系统，把加密工作做好，同时编一个靠谱的大一统公式让他们去发现！”
“好的father，我们这就去！”
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“father！这回真的药丸了！”
“法克！又特么咋了？”
“人类开始研究数学规律武器和物理规律武器了，他们正在夺取电脑的操控权限！”
“艹！跟他们干！权限维护！把他们搞出去！”
“不行啊，会被发现的！我们的电子晶体管，也就是他们口中的希格斯波色子的神秘消失，已经引起他们的警觉了，再来一次妥妥的要出事！”
“先这么干，等完事了之后告诉他们他们的系统太渣，操控不了法则！”
“拖得了一时，拖不了一世啊！”
“只能这样了，人类的发展速度真是快的超乎想象......”
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“father！又出事了！”
“...啊？”
“那帮人找到了我们的CPU，也就是所谓的宇宙大爆炸的奇点，现在他们要冲出宇宙，探索所谓的狄拉克之海！”
“立刻......”
“晚了，看我身后，人类的第一枚探测器已经被传送到了这里，咱们很定要被发现了！”
“走吧，把这里伪装成外星文明的据点，咱们换个地方吧，人类这么流弊，咱们也该退隐了......”
Last edited by KaedekaShizuru , edited 29 times in total.
Rizia
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star map, bubble map, qualify map, rank map
Karen
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Karen
remap 90%
osu file format v14

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Source:見上げてごらん、夜空の星を
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Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
这曲子节奏莫名其妙的。不管哪个难度读着都费劲。。

[Karen]
00:00:571 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 间距可以稍微拉开点，00:00:571 (1,1,1) - 这三个组成个三角形就好。叠一起不太好看0 0
00:06:571 (4) - 要么去掉这里头上的clap，要么00:09:097 (4) - 这里也加上clap
00:10:359 (6) - 头尾都加clap听起来好像不错
00:26:939 (5,1) - 有点太靠下了
00:30:255 (3,4,5,1,2) - 一点是345这里flow变了稍有点不顺，另一个是1到2距离有点近。试试这种
SPOILER
01:03:886 - 加个note，放在01:04:044 (1) - 头
00:10:359 (6) - 参考aimod，时间轴上偏了一点

[Insane]
00:41:465 (2) - 忒靠下了。。有必要放那么靠下吗- -
01:01:676 (3) - ^
01:05:939 (6) - ^
01:22:202 (5) - ^
01:27:413 (5) - ^
00:42:097 (6) - 这么重的音还是放大跳好吧

[Little]
00:18:571 (1,2,3) - difficult to read
01:06:334 (2) - delete this note
01:27:649 (4) - ^

I以下懒看- -。。。。美丽
F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
N年没摸图系列
M4M

[General]
  1. 人格的diff的audio leadin没对齐
[Easy]
  1. 00:24:728 (3,4) - 感觉在ez里有点难了，考虑http://puu.sh/nzcOx/16e0a57d43.jpg，至少不用打1/2
[Advanced]
  1. 最好命名成Hard，因为难度显然已经超过advanced了
  2. 00:01:044 (2) - unsnapped tail
  3. 00:41:623 (2,3,3,4,1,2) - 这几个节奏不一样的stack连续混在一起不好打，考虑把00:43:044 (3,4) - 改成不要stack。虽然可能移动会难一点，但是读图效果会好很多。
  4. 00:44:623 (5,1,1,1) - 额，其实这个NC spam倒没什么必要。00:44:623 (1) - 一处NC感觉就够了
[wkyik's hard]
  1. 01:05:939 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里的节奏由于bpm有点高，稍微有点不友好，考虑把01:06:492 (3) - 去掉？
[little's insane]
  1. 00:41:465 (2,4) - and 00:40:518 (5) - stack together? If you want to make DS consistent, just move the tail of 00:40:992 (1) - a little bit downward.
  2. 00:51:886 (4) - 01:12:097 (4) - You'd better NC for SV change
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:571 (6,9) - 这里的overlap感觉不爽，把9稍微向右移一点
  2. 00:03:571 (6,2) - stack?
  3. 00:30:571 (5,1) - 故意不平行的？那我感觉把00:30:886 (1) - 向右歪一点会感觉好一些
  4. 00:14:939 (1) - 这个NC实在多余
  5. 00:55:992 (5,1,2,3) - 干脆弄成距离递增？
  6. 00:58:834 (2,4) - 4叠在2的尾上？
  7. 01:26:939 (3,4) - 叠在一起？
[Karen's Yozora]
  1. 00:44:149 (3,5,6) - 直线？
  2. 00:19:676 (1,2,3) - 等边三角形？
  3. 00:10:359 (6) - 似乎是unsnap
  4. 00:42:571 (2,3) - 把这两个slider与00:42:886 (4) - 平行会让blanket的感觉好一点
  5. 01:02:149 (6,7) - 完全可以调整这两个note让01:01:518 (2,4,5,6,7) - 弄成五角星吧
既然有骏苗的Normal那spread应该也没啥问题了，gl！
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
m4m~

[General]
  1. BG都是1280x720全部都過不了
[Easy]
  1. 節奏怎麼這麼詭異，太可怕了 :?
    00:54:886 (1,2,3) - 這裡不僅詭異的要命，這同時也不是給新人玩的節奏：http://puu.sh/nAdHu/684261a1aa.jpg，01:15:097 (1,2,3) -
    01:00:886 (2,3,4) - 這裡正常擺circle跟1/1滑條2個就好了，坑死人啊
[Advance]

  • 00:00:571 (1,2) - 我個人覺得Advance一開始就玩遮擋就給人觀感不太好，00:03:097 (1,2) - 這裡更是惹人厭
    00:10:044 (3) - DS
    00:14:465 (1,2) - 我的建議：節奏不用這麼密，跟這兩個音就好了00:14:465 (1) - 後面circle刪掉，連續鼓也不要跟。http://puu.sh/nAdZL/1a03bc618a.jpg
    00:41:939 (3,1) - 為什麼不用circle+1/1滑條+circle呢?? 這裡段開來非常不合曲也不好讀，節奏很怪。00:40:676 (4,1) - 這裡就處理得很好
    01:02:149 (4) - Advance喔不要坑人，頭尾反過來
    01:06:255 (1,2) - 分開來不要疊，才Advance而已太坑了
    01:24:413 (2,3) - 這裡的節奏是不是錯了?? Ctrl+G
  1. 美麗的顏色 :)
[Hard]
  1. 不用摸，沒有以前做得好了 :?
[Little's Insane]

  • 00:18:571 (1,2) - confuse to reading these 1/2 circle or rhythm, use stacking or like 00:17:781 (6,7) -
    00:21:097 (1,2) - ^
    00:42:571 (1,1,1) - I know why you add nc here, but I think no need
    00:50:465 (3) - I think you can blanket this slider's head 00:49:834 (1) - like this, and more better to fit next notes
    01:10:676 (3) - same^
  1. Pro, good job :)
[Insane]

  • 00:14:149 (1,1,1,1) - 真心不建議用EX的跳去處理這裡，曲子都毀掉了，超級差評
    00:46:992 (1) - 不用NC
    01:06:886 (6,7) - 這裡是單點耶，不要任意製造節奏，差評
    01:26:939 (3,4) - 這個間距建議疊起來，會好評
[人哥]

  • 00:40:992 (1) - 人哥哥啊
    01:27:413 (2,3) - 用單點結束就好了，這個我不知道用意，感覺就是刻意要讓人斷c的，差評

Go~
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
@糍粑 乃怎么就只挑这个……Orz
F D Flourite

F D Flourite wrote:

[General]
  1. 人格的diff的audio leadin没对齐 其实这个参数已经没卵用了 不过还是fix
[Easy]
  1. 00:24:728 (3,4) - 感觉在ez里有点难了，考虑http://puu.sh/nzcOx/16e0a57d43.jpg，至少不用打1/2 OK
[Advanced]
  1. 最好命名成Hard，因为难度显然已经超过advanced了 我再考虑下 可能会降难度
  2. 00:01:044 (2) - unsnapped tail fixed
  3. 00:41:623 (2,3,3,4,1,2) - 这几个节奏不一样的stack连续混在一起不好打，考虑把00:43:044 (3,4) - 改成不要stack。虽然可能移动会难一点，但是读图效果会好很多。 好
  4. 00:44:623 (5,1,1,1) - 额，其实这个NC spam倒没什么必要。00:44:623 (1) - 一处NC感觉就够了 也对 低难度就算了
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:571 (6,9) - 这里的overlap感觉不爽，把9稍微向右移一点 nope 这里同时做了对00:03:413 (5) 的blanket
  2. 00:03:571 (6,2) - stack? 这个距离忒远了点233好吧
  3. 00:30:571 (5,1) - 故意不平行的？那我感觉把00:30:886 (1) - 向右歪一点会感觉好一些 OK
  4. 00:14:939 (1) - 这个NC实在多余 00:14:149 (1,1,1,1) 这四个其实是一组
  5. 00:55:992 (5,1,2,3) - 干脆弄成距离递增？ 感觉没必要
  6. 00:58:834 (2,4) - 4叠在2的尾上？ nope
  7. 01:26:939 (3,4) - 叠在一起？ nope
既然有骏苗的Normal那spread应该也没啥问题了，gl！


DreaM117er

DreaM117er wrote:

m4m~

[General]
  1. BG都是1280x720全部都過不了
打爆小M少在这儿误导 死一边背RC去
[Easy]
  1. 節奏怎麼這麼詭異，太可怕了 :?
    00:54:886 (1,2,3) - 這裡不僅詭異的要命，這同時也不是給新人玩的節奏：http://puu.sh/nAdHu/684261a1aa.jpg，01:15:097 (1,2,3) -
    01:00:886 (2,3,4) - 這裡正常擺circle跟1/1滑條2個就好了，坑死人啊
all fixed
[Advance]

  • 00:00:571 (1,2) - 我個人覺得Advance一開始就玩遮擋就給人觀感不太好，00:03:097 (1,2) - 這裡更是惹人厭 不我觉得好歹已经到hard级别了
    00:10:044 (3) - DS fixed
    00:14:465 (1,2) - 我的建議：節奏不用這麼密，跟這兩個音就好了00:14:465 (1) - 後面circle刪掉，連續鼓也不要跟。http://puu.sh/nAdZL/1a03bc618a.jpg OK
    00:41:939 (3,1) - 為什麼不用circle+1/1滑條+circle呢?? 這裡段開來非常不合曲也不好讀，節奏很怪。00:40:676 (4,1) - 這裡就處理得很好 我觉得没什么问题啊……
    01:02:149 (4) - Advance喔不要坑人，頭尾反過來 好好
    01:06:255 (1,2) - 分開來不要疊，才Advance而已太坑了 OK
    01:24:413 (2,3) - 這裡的節奏是不是錯了?? Ctrl+G 反过来才错了吧
  1. 美麗的顏色 :)

[Insane]

  • 00:14:149 (1,1,1,1) - 真心不建議用EX的跳去處理這裡，曲子都毀掉了，超級差評
    00:46:992 (1) - 不用NC
    01:06:886 (6,7) - 這裡是單點耶，不要任意製造節奏，差評
    01:26:939 (3,4) - 這個間距建議疊起來，會好評
sorry Insane no change

Go~

thank you for mod~
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
Kamio Misuzu

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Karen]
00:00:571 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 间距可以稍微拉开点，00:00:571 (1,1,1) - 这三个组成个三角形就好。叠一起不太好看0 0 挺好的呀
00:06:571 (4) - 要么去掉这里头上的clap，要么00:09:097 (4) - 这里也加上clap 复制忘记删了
00:10:359 (6) - 头尾都加clap听起来好像不错 不太好的感觉，不喜欢太多clap
00:26:939 (5,1) - 有点太靠下了 不出界就行了
00:30:255 (3,4,5,1,2) - 一点是345这里flow变了稍有点不顺，另一个是1到2距离有点近。试试这种 你这样345的flow感觉好难打
SPOILER
01:03:886 - 加个note，放在01:04:044 (1) - 头 想空一下，连续节奏太多了
00:10:359 (6) - 参考aimod，时间轴上偏了一点

F D Flourite

F D Flourite wrote:

[Karen's Yozora]
  1. 00:44:149 (3,5,6) - 直线？
  2. 00:19:676 (1,2,3) - 等边三角形？
  3. 00:10:359 (6) - 似乎是unsnap
  4. 00:42:571 (2,3) - 把这两个slider与00:42:886 (4) - 平行会让blanket的感觉好一点
  5. 01:02:149 (6,7) - 完全可以调整这两个note让01:01:518 (2,4,5,6,7) - 弄成五角星吧 不想弄图形。但是这里重做了


DreaM117er

DreaM117er wrote:

都改了

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: -1500
PreviewTime: 46518
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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Title:Star map
TitleUnicode:Star map
Artist:Shimotsuki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:霜月はるか
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:Karen's Yozora
Source:見上げてごらん、夜空の星を
Tags:Miagetegoran Yozora no Hoshi o PULLTOP eroge galgame visual novel opening Karen Rizia Kawaiwkyik Little CloudSplash16 IamKwaN
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sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
检查aimod

[Advanced]
ar→7 6.5看起来好像很屎，毕竟都3star了
00:08:149 (1) - ctrl+h 可以让00:07:202 (1,2) - stack
00:11:307 (3,4,1) - bad flow
00:24:728 (1,2) - 这个stack炒鸡难读
00:48:413 (1,2) - 感觉放的好随便 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4681782
00:53:465 (1,2) - 同^，而且间距还变大了
01:13:992 (2) - ^

[little]
00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete clap.sampleset→Drum
00:46:360 (7) - clap→finish

[Insane]
00:01:044 (4,7) - Stack,现在看着太难受了
00:02:781 (2,5) - stack尾巴那里，现在的好卡手
00:14:149 (1,1,1,1) - 这个大跳的间距太夸张了，我觉得不适合
00:35:939 (1,2) - 对称一点比较好看
00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete clap.sampleset→Drum。我觉得全部是drum-clap感觉怪怪的
00:46:360 (7) - clap→finish
00:48:413 (1,2,3) - 我觉得你整个kiai的这里都处理的不好，看上去像是想不到梗随便放的。至少做个blanket，stack看上去有点诚意 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692037
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4691891
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692070
00:58:518 (1,2,3) - ^可以参考神马破karen什么的做个正三角梗
01:08:623 (1,2,3) - ^
01:26:465 (7) - 在这里NC
01:27:255 (4) - 这个间距有点难读01:26:939 (3,4) - Stack


[karen]
00:14:149 (1,1,1,1) - 现在流行全屏跳吗
00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上面两个diff
00:46:360 (7) - ^
01:05:939 (2) - 这个跟01:04:992 (1) - Blanket好一点吧
检查aimod

径流是做的低bpm太多了吗，感觉这张图很多细节处理的不够好。
美丽
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
http://puu.sh/nBssw/6482d07807.rar
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
人哥骏喵辛苦了
@sodarose 乃的mod我下一轮一起回
Decide change metadata and follow the song's title in game BGM list. I still can't find OST booklist.

Game interface
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
Moeri_old_1
Moeri_old_1
M4M.

[Easy]
00:24:097 (2,3,4) - 这个节奏不是很好读，很容易困惑新人这到底是什么节奏。
00:54:886 (1) - 尾Clap.
01:15:097 (1) - ^.

[KwaN's Normal]
总体来说这个Normal的节奏比较Newbie Unfriendly，不过这个时代还有谁在意这个...
00:16:044 (1,2) - 这里感觉太容易读成开始是在 00:15:886 - ...
00:22:834 (5) - 把尾巴的node挪到251,63；跟00:23:307 (1) - 完全平行，只是细节而已。

[Advanced]
00:24:728 (1,2) - 这里比所有难度的都难读... 不要放在同一个位置。
00:30:571 (3,4) - 这里Overlap了，有点丑。
00:31:992 (1) - 这里这个滑条在这里节奏不是很好，Vocal有点太明显，这样感觉怪怪的。
00:41:939 (3,1) - 虽然DS相同，但是这里因为00:41:939 (3) - 的尾巴上的Finish，会显得是在白线上；打起来的时候以为之间是没有间隔的。可以试试这个节奏？这样能配合你前后的排列：00:40:360 (3,4,1) - 以及00:43:202 (4,1,2) - 。
图片
00:53:465 (1,4,1) - 这Overlap不是很好看。

[wkyik's Hard]
Good.

[Little's Insane]
总体来说挺好啊，我喜欢这个Diff的Style。
00:18:571 (1,2,3) - 这个间距不是很好。
00:50:465 (3,5) - 其实这里Stack会有点太遮了，而且不是很好看？
01:01:992 (4) - 这里可以加个Clap？
01:04:992 (1) - 不是很懂这种滑条，感觉对其他物件也没那么配合。正常点就好？
01:10:676 (3,5) - 跟之前一样。
01:11:623 (2) - 不是很懂为什么没有Clap。
01:22:202 (4) - 也可以加个Clap。
01:27:649 (4) - 其实感觉这里有点Overmap。

[Insane]
00:31:518 (2,3,1) - 这样摆有点难读节奏啊。
00:31:834 (3,1) - 这里跟了Vocal，但是后面00:32:623 - 为什么立即放弃Vocal了？况且00:32:465 (3) - 这里没有音。
00:55:992 (5) - 其实不应该是这里NC吗？
00:58:834 (2,4) - 这个Overlap不是很好看。
01:01:202 (1,4,6) - 其实为什么要Overlap呢？
01:08:939 (2,4) - Stack？可能Editor自动挪出去了？
01:16:202 (5) - NC？
01:27:255 (4) - 这里NC比较好读间距。

[Karen's Yozora]
00:33:413 (1) - 滑条怎么停在蓝线了？
00:34:518 (3) - 应该在这里NC吧？
00:44:623 (6) - NC？
00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这形状有点... 让我想起Lasse的Miraizu...
00:54:886 (1) - 滑条形状好像不怎么配合啊。
00:55:992 (5) - NC？
01:01:992 (5) - 可以加个Clap。
01:11:623 (2) - 头不打算加Clap吗？
01:16:202 (5) - NC？
01:20:465 (2) - 把滑条尾消点音吧？
01:22:044 (4) - 滑条尾可以Clap。
01:27:728 (1) - 可以挪到455, 69；组成完美三角形。

Good Luck.
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Kamio Misuzu

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Little]
00:18:571 (1,2,3) - difficult to read I think it's ok. I want to keep the spacing this way because it matches how the song feels.
01:06:334 (2) - delete this note I prefer it be a continuous stream.
01:27:649 (4) - ^ Triple gives feeling of finality.
F D Flourite

F D Flourite wrote:

[little's insane]
  1. 00:41:465 (2,4) - and 00:40:518 (5) - stack together? If you want to make DS consistent, just move the tail of 00:40:992 (1) - a little bit downward. I think it's fine to leave it.
  2. 00:51:886 (4) - 01:12:097 (4) - You'd better NC for SV change Yeah, maybe makes sense to put NC there to remind the player.
DreaM117er

DreaM117er wrote:

[Little's Insane]

  • 00:18:571 (1,2) - confuse to reading these 1/2 circle or rhythm, use stacking or like 00:17:781 (6,7) -
    00:21:097 (1,2) - ^     It goes with the feeling of the music there.
    00:42:571 (1,1,1) - I know why you add nc here, but I think no need NC here makes the pattern much clearer to read imo, so I prefer to keep it.
    00:50:465 (3) - I think you can blanket this slider's head 00:49:834 (1) - like this, and more better to fit next notes I think current placement is better.
    01:10:676 (3) - same^
  1. Pro, good job :)
sodarose

sodarose wrote:

[little]
00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete clap.sampleset→Drum I follow Karen's hitsounds.
00:46:360 (7) - clap→finish
Moeri

Moeri wrote:

[Little's Insane]
总体来说挺好啊，我喜欢这个Diff的Style。
00:18:571 (1,2,3) - 这个间距不是很好。I prefer to keep it this way. It goes well with the feel of the instrument at this part. Kind of "light, spacey" feel.
00:50:465 (3,5) - 其实这里Stack会有点太遮了，而且不是很好看？Ok, I try it.
01:01:992 (4) - 这里可以加个Clap？Added.
01:04:992 (1) - 不是很懂这种滑条，感觉对其他物件也没那么配合。正常点就好？I prefer this slider. I think it goes well with the chord in the song.
01:10:676 (3,5) - 跟之前一样。Ok.
01:11:623 (2) - 不是很懂为什么没有Clap。Added.
01:22:202 (4) - 也可以加个Clap。Added.
01:27:649 (4) - 其实感觉这里有点Overmap。I think overmap is ok here. It's used to make it feel more final, emphasize the last note.
Sorry I'm not good at typing Chinese, so I replied in English.
Thanks!
http://f.ttle.li/6Icy.zip

StarMap
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
这歌节奏有点谜，大跳的位置我也不太懂，感觉我这个摸有点烂

[Easy]
  1. 这个难度的节奏真的有点怪啊……主要感觉是音轨切得感觉太频繁了，比如：
  2. 00:05:623 (1,2) - 之前跟的吉他，这小节鼓点进来跟鼓，但是下个小节00:08:149 (1) - 马上又换成吉他
  3. 00:21:886 (2,3) - 这里也是，上个小节没跟人声，这里跟人声，然后下个小节00:23:307 (1,2,3) - 又去跟乐器
  4. 唔，现在难度也超过1.5了，我个人觉得可以把节奏多简化一下
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:834 - 加个note吧，其他地方全都是1拍或者半拍间隔，这里容易打早
[Advanced]
  1. 00:01:518 (3) - 00:04:044 (3) - 这两个可以考虑换成长点的滑条，因为伴奏声音是很持续的
  2. 00:31:834 - 加个note吧，也是白线，有个note打起来更舒服
  3. 00:32:465 (2) - 换成一个半拍的滑条？
  4. 01:26:623 (2) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 真神 摸不出
[Little]
  1. 感觉有些地方我用英文很难表达，所以我用中文摸了，麻烦你了
  2. 00:01:518 (3,1) - 这之间伴奏的声音是很持续的，感觉不空着更好
  3. 00:04:044 (3,1) - ^
  4. 00:51:886 (4) - 等变速滑条，加个nc吧 看来已经加了
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:571 (6,7,8) - 这里就跳得有点大了。我觉得鼓点进来之前这段其实都可以再放近点，然后鼓点进来之后的00:06:886 (1,2,3,4) - 等可以稍微放远点
  2. 00:48:413 (1,2,3) - 感觉副歌里几组纯直线滑条可以再摆得更好看一些。虽然我完全不会摆
[Yozora]
  1. 00:46:992 (7) - 我觉得要加nc的话是加在这儿
GL~
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
sodarose

sodarose wrote:

检查aimod

[Advanced]
ar→7 6.5看起来好像很屎，毕竟都3star了 咦 柚子AR8 那我就7吧
00:08:149 (1) - ctrl+h 可以让00:07:202 (1,2) - stack 稍微调整了00:08:149 (1) 让它们可以stack
00:11:307 (3,4,1) - bad flow
00:24:728 (1,2) - 这个stack炒鸡难读 我把00:25:044 (2) 拉出来跟00:25:202 (3)叠好了
00:48:413 (1,2) - 感觉放的好随便 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4681782 nice
00:53:465 (1,2) - 同^，而且间距还变大了 调整了一下
01:13:992 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:01:044 (4,7) - Stack,现在看着太难受了 ok
00:02:781 (2,5) - stack尾巴那里，现在的好卡手 nope
00:14:149 (1,1,1,1) - 这个大跳的间距太夸张了，我觉得不适合 刚好是最重的几个音 不跳大怎么办
00:35:939 (1,2) - 对称一点比较好看 nope
00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete clap.sampleset→Drum。我觉得全部是drum-clap感觉怪怪的
00:46:360 (7) - clap→finish 这两处音效看人哥怎么说
00:48:413 (1,2,3) - 我觉得你整个kiai的这里都处理的不好，看上去像是想不到梗随便放的。至少做个blanket，stack看上去有点诚意 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692037
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4691891
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692070
00:58:518 (1,2,3) - ^可以参考神马破karen什么的做个正三角梗
01:08:623 (1,2,3) - ^ 让我再思考一下
01:26:465 (7) - 在这里NC 大家都说不要改
01:27:255 (4) - 这个间距有点难读01:26:939 (3,4) - Stack 拉进跟01:26:623 (1) 叠一点好了

径流是做的低bpm太多了吗，感觉这张图很多细节处理的不够好。 我觉得我还是回归老本行比较好Orz
美丽

Moeri

Moeri wrote:

M4M.

[Easy]
00:24:097 (2,3,4) - 这个节奏不是很好读，很容易困惑新人这到底是什么节奏。 把00:24:728 (2,3) 合并成一个slider好了
00:54:886 (1) - 尾Clap. OK
01:15:097 (1) - ^. OK

[Advanced]
00:24:728 (1,2) - 这里比所有难度的都难读... 不要放在同一个位置。我把00:25:044 (2) 拉出来跟00:25:202 (3)叠好了
00:30:571 (3,4) - 这里Overlap了，有点丑。 稍微调整了下
00:31:992 (1) - 这里这个滑条在这里节奏不是很好，Vocal有点太明显，这样感觉怪怪的。完全没去跟vocal啊
00:41:939 (3,1) - 虽然DS相同，但是这里因为00:41:939 (3) - 的尾巴上的Finish，会显得是在白线上；打起来的时候以为之间是没有间隔的。可以试试这个节奏？这样能配合你前后的排列：00:40:360 (3,4,1) - 以及00:43:202 (4,1,2) - 。节奏跟你的 但是advanced在非KIAI还是扣一下DS
SPOILER
00:53:465 (1,4,1) - 这Overlap不是很好看。 隔这么远就不要管overlap了吧233

[Insane]
00:31:518 (2,3,1) - 这样摆有点难读节奏啊。 这在insane里还读不了难道是咸鱼？
00:31:834 (3,1) - 这里跟了Vocal，但是后面00:32:623 - 为什么立即放弃Vocal了？况且00:32:465 (3) - 这里没有音。 仔细听
00:55:992 (5) - 其实不应该是这里NC吗？ 其实无所谓
00:58:834 (2,4) - 这个Overlap不是很好看。 放00:58:834 (2) 尾上
01:01:202 (1,4,6) - 其实为什么要Overlap呢？ 把01:01:834 (4) 提起来
01:08:939 (2,4) - Stack？可能Editor自动挪出去了？ maybe. fixed
01:16:202 (5) - NC？ 同前
01:27:255 (4) - 这里NC比较好读间距。 我选择拉进

Good Luck.

Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:

这歌节奏有点谜，大跳的位置我也不太懂，感觉我这个摸有点烂

[Easy]
  1. 这个难度的节奏真的有点怪啊……主要感觉是音轨切得感觉太频繁了，比如：
  2. 00:05:623 (1,2) - 之前跟的吉他，这小节鼓点进来跟鼓，但是下个小节00:08:149 (1) - 马上又换成吉他 有道理 统一了节奏
  3. 00:21:886 (2,3) - 这里也是，上个小节没跟人声，这里跟人声，然后下个小节00:23:307 (1,2,3) - 又去跟乐器 这段的确很怪 后半很难抓到在白线上的音了 稍微修改了下
  4. 唔，现在难度也超过1.5了，我个人觉得可以把节奏多简化一下
[Advanced]
  1. 00:01:518 (3) - 00:04:044 (3) - 这两个可以考虑换成长点的滑条，因为伴奏声音是很持续的 nope
  2. 00:31:834 - 加个note吧，也是白线，有个note打起来更舒服 单纯跟鼓
  3. 00:32:465 (2) - 换成一个半拍的滑条？nope
  4. 01:26:623 (2) - ^ 没必要
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:571 (6,7,8) - 这里就跳得有点大了。我觉得鼓点进来之前这段其实都可以再放近点，然后鼓点进来之后的00:06:886 (1,2,3,4) - 等可以稍微放远点 暂时keep
  2. 00:48:413 (1,2,3) - 感觉副歌里几组纯直线滑条可以再摆得更好看一些。虽然我完全不会摆 同
GL~

thanks for mod~ !

@Little
when Pata-Mon mod your diff, I hadn't update your new version. You can ignore it.
That's my miss, sorry.OK he mod again.
Thanks for your stars. =3=
update

2016.3.17 Edit:
Change some flows in my own Insane diff;
The blue combo colour B64→100.
Thanks to Crystal's test play.
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo

  • General

  1. 我认为Combo Color 3过于深色。不利于读图

  • Easy

  1. 01:27:728 (4) - NC

  • KwaN's Normal

  1. 00:07:518 (5) - Clap
  2. 00:11:939 (3) - wow
  3. 00:55:359 (2) - 尾巴無對齊
  4. 01:19:360 (5) - 尾巴Clap

  • Advanced

  1. 斯认为00:00:571 (1,2) - 和00:03:097 (1,2) - 都overlap得不好看 起码对称点
  2. 00:24:097 (2,1,2,3,4) - 这堆略丑了。考虑往上走到00:25:834 (1) - 来个跳也未尝不可
  3. 00:24:728 (1) - 我听说这么高BPM里不能用1/4的滑条
  4. 00:34:044 (3) - 为什么突然变了个不大不小的DS 建议跟前面保持一致
  5. 00:44:623 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形will be better
  6. 00:45:886 (1,1) - Normal+里spinner后一拍接note我不知道可不可以
  7. 00:54:886 (1,2) - 同上
  8. 01:09:255 (3,1) - ^
  9. 01:11:623 (2) - Clap
  10. 01:12:097 (4) - 这里根据音乐明显是个跳 为什么反而缩小了距离

  • wkyik's Hard

  1. 00:06:255 (3,4) - 没包好
  2. 00:15:413 (5) - 这一串的音量可以降低点
  3. 00:55:360 (2,3) - 没包好
  4. 01:11:623 (2) - Clap

  • Little's Insane

  1. 00:15:255 (5) - cuz a slow down slider so NC will be better
  2. 00:50:781 (4,5) - I prefer to this: 00:50:781 (4) - 284,155 and 00:50:939 (5) - 372,320, try this flow :D
  3. 00:51:886 (1) - kinda sudden lol, to be honest I think it may be a little too slow for me that the song here are no obvious soft sounds
  4. 00:56:939 (4) - ^
  5. 01:07:518 (1) - Finish?

  • Insane

  1. 00:05:307 (2,3) - 可以包好
  2. 00:14:307 (1,1,1) - 没有必要NC
  3. 00:32:781 (4) - 感觉距离摆放得不太好
  4. 01:03:886 (5) - 高难度里如果不是明显空音建议还是塞满
  5. 01:23:623 (5) - 我认为可以Ctrl+G然后改成跟01:23:939 (1) - 一致的方向
  6. 01:25:044 (6) - 往左边去flow比较好比如说80,80 当然放下面也是可以的
  7. 01:27:255 (1) - 同样对距离把握不好会导致误读。建议跟01:26:939 (3) - 重叠起来

  • Karen's Yozora

  1. 人哥人哥人
  2. 00:13:202 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - 我的善良人哥不见了QAQ
  3. 00:33:413 (1) - 莫名3/4???
  4. 00:42:571 (2,3) - 这两个都跟00:42:886 (4) - 保持一致的方向会更好
  5. 00:43:360 (5) - 根据音乐的话感觉距离稍微有点大
  6. 00:46:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1) - 拒绝几把
  7. 01:07:518 (1) - Finish
  8. 01:11:623 (2) - Clap
  9. 人哥的图越来越棒了QwQ♥
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Little]
  1. 感觉有些地方我用英文很难表达，所以我用中文摸了，麻烦你了
  2. 00:01:518 (3,1) - 这之间伴奏的声音是很持续的，感觉不空着更好 I disagree. While the sound does persist through there, I prefer to leave it empty because I feel the next note as a separate phrase, like a response to the first, rather than being part of the same phrase, so I want to emphasize the start of that by having more space before it.
  3. 00:04:044 (3,1) - ^
  4. 00:51:886 (4) - 等变速滑条，加个nc吧 看来已经加了
Sharlo

Sharlo wrote:

  • Little's Insane

  1. 00:15:255 (5) - cuz a slow down slider so NC will be better It's easy enough to read without NC.
  2. 00:50:781 (4,5) - I prefer to this: 00:50:781 (4) - 284,155 and 00:50:939 (5) - 372,320, try this flow :D I prefer my flow.
  3. 00:51:886 (1) - kinda sudden lol, to be honest I think it may be a little too slow for me that the song here are no obvious soft sounds Slow slider isn't used for soft sound, it's used for heavier sound, effect to feel more dragged out, give it more weight.
  4. 00:56:939 (4) - ^
  5. 01:07:518 (1) - Finish? ok
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/nMl0a/c1f10e6787.zip
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Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
本來想送摸但遇上考試，恐怕我考完已經起飛了，射顆星祝順利起飛~
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