Hi Mania mapper
>General
* 00:13:782 - ~ 00:32:918 you need filling more notes on kantan-futsuu
* 00:03:404 - untill 00:12:485 need reworked on Muzukashii, its close spread with Oni
>Inner Oni
* 00:01:620 (9,11) - emphasize this with don, flow vocal and beat is fit, why not?
* 00:03:404 (1) - Cymbal sound, should fill finisher for consistent
* 00:05:431 - have pitch, should fill as Inner Oni. 00:05:755 - this too
* 00:05:918 - add kat? have stronk pitch to be pattern imo
* 00:08:026 - add don, same like 00:05:431 -
* 00:08:350 - same above, have nice flow with dub beat
* 00:10:620 - 00:10:945 - 00:11:107 - like previous suggestion
* 00:11:350 (24) - change to kat for follow 00:11:593 (27,29) - main instrument, if not this would not fit playable
* 00:11:999 (32,33) - swap, same above with reason.. main instrument should follow for fit playable
* 00:12:242 (35) - change to kat, same reason
* 00:12:566 - 00:12:809 - add note, and then 00:12:728 - change this kat for emphasize this high beat
* 00:33:242 (138) - add finisher on this slider? because is High flow, why not to hit big slider for high sounds?
* 00:35:918 (1,2) - change to don, 00:36:323 (3) - and give this kat, main instrument for playable
* 00:37:134 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - same above 00:11:350 (24,16,18) - change to don and 00:37:134 - give this kat, 00:37:864 - and give this kat for variety with before bcus its variety of music
* 00:38:431 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - kddkddkkdkddk? bcus is started different with previously part and 00:38:918 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - this part is good with kkdkddk
* 00:41:026 (50,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:42:323 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - and this, try with my effort. ( if you not still fix this, you make some normal player confuse with alternating lol )
* 00:43:539 (25) - give this kat, still have high flow till 00:43:620 - get this don emphasize with dub
* 00:44:107 (32) - give kat for avoide monotone, really not fit if you keep this with don
* 00:44:431 (36) - change to don, 00:44:512 (37,38) - ctrl g this. bcus is 00:44:593 - high beat
* 00:44:918 (42,3,6,9,12,14) - is good on here, nice!
* 00:47:188 - still high flow and need for emphasize with kat, and to 00:47:350 - follow this sounds
* 00:47:674 - xddd wtf its singing "Jin Ke La", ddk for follow this vocal and flandre instrument? and 00:48:323 - add don on here bcus is clearly to hear
* 00:48:647 - add kat? for 00:48:485 - follow this similar pitch
* 00:49:539 - change to don, if not you will blocked emphasize 00:49:620 (43,44,45) - this main instrument
* 00:50:431 - ddkdd? seems good? bcus follow flandre theme and that electro vocal imo
* 00:51:647 (62,63) - ctrl g this? also for better playable. is no reason to 00:51:647 - give this kat. so yeah you should ctrl g that
* 00:51:891 - I feels this to overemphasize with kat, change to don? better with contrast instrument
* 00:52:701 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - ddddkkkkd? better on soft flow, 00:53:431 (80) - delete and 00:53:512 - change to don bcus overemphasize
* 00:53:837 - delete to give rest, since this song rare to find a rest section.. its fit bcus not main instrument or stronk sounds
* 00:59:512 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too monotone.. 00:59:999 (5) - change this to don and 01:00:809 - this kat? its better with main instrument
* 01:02:593 - just don for this, its 01:03:404 - already fit with don bcus downbeat
* 01:04:701 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - also if you like to keep this for high dub beat, sure its fine.. for variety with similar previously part
* 01:10:377 - change don? like on 59sec.. cuz is for main instrument
* 01:12:972 (16,18) - swap this, and don forget remove finisher and fix on (18) after ctrl g
* 01:15:079 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same comment like 01:04:701 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
* 01:27:809 (57,58) - change to don? 01:28:215 - 01:27:972 - and give this kat? just like previously part on begining
* 01:29:188 - not stronk as kat, change to don and hear that. its differ with previously part
* 01:30:323 (81,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:31:620 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - 01:32:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - you should consindering this to make consistent like on 1st kiai
* 01:37:296 - kkkd 1/6? oh comeon its fit and I never seen 1/6 on this diff
* 01:37:945 - kat for high drum same like after 1st kiai part, 01:38:107 - change to don to avoide overemphasize
* 01:38:269 - delete for give rest after hit finisher
* 01:41:026 - give this kat, avoid monotone. 01:41:431 - change to don.. no reason with kat and break playable
* 01:42:323 - give kat, 01:42:404 (67,68) - for follow flow,
* 01:47:837 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - and consindering this pattern, I think theres have 1/6.. but dont know
* 01:48:161 - change kat to stable playable
Fun diff, but thinking with playable pattern and tasteless/unnecessary emphasize
>Oni
* 00:01:539 - delete bcus its long for oni
* every 00:03:404 - finisher like this, would you make rest like deleting 00:03:566 - note like this? since this part not have rest: 00:06:161 - 00:08:755 - 00:11:350 - some point need to be rest
* 00:11:755 (74,80) - delete this for balance pattern as Oni
* 00:26:918 - delete for avoid long 1/2 pattern
* 00:32:107 - same above
* 00:35:918 - 00:37:215 - 00:38:512 - 00:41:107 - 00:42:404 - 00:42:891 - 00:43:701 - 00:46:296 - 00:49:701 - (00:51:485 - this really rip for Oni lol) 00:51:972 - 00:52:945 - 00:53:269 - 00:53:837 - some point you would delete as rest
* and same suggestion next similar part, look an above suggestion point
* last for this diff, 01:48:080 - delete this
needed more rest since pattern has complex
>Muzukashii
* 00:03:404 - untill 00:12:485 - too overmap, you should remap and just mapping 1/2 pattern. (try spreading from oni without 1/4 stream)
* boring as hell... 00:26:107 - add kat here, for avoid monotone
* 00:26:593 (118) - move to 00:26:755 - here and change kat, for mini rest on this part
* make xxxxx 1/2 pattern from 00:27:566 - here, same above with reason.. for avoid monotone pattern
* 00:28:864 - move to 00:29:026 - here, flow stronk as pattern
* 00:29:512 - ~ 00:34:377 - consindering to make varies pattern, like above
* 00:38:269 - delete, to harsh for muzukashii, also do this for similar point too
* 00:51:323 - delete ^ same reason
* 00:53:837 - delete for give rest and 00:54:809 - here too
* asik... 3rd kiai looks good for me!
* 01:23:674 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334) - dddkkkdddk? pattern should be easir for muzukashii diff imo
* 01:32:755 - delete, live previous point
* 01:40:620 - delete for avoid harsh playable
* 01:43:134 - same point like previous, for give rest
* 01:44:107 - 01:47:026 - ^
* 01:48:080 - for easir playable, delete
espesially 3rd kiai, I like that part!
>Futsuu
* 00:03:080 - delete for rest, also is long 1/1 if you not delete this
* 00:05:026 (11,13) - delete this
* 00:07:620 (19,21) - same reason
* 00:10:215 (27,29) - ^
* 00:12:728 - not safe for futsuu user lol, delete
* 00:13:782 - ~ 00:32:918 - really lessmapped, you should more filling notes on that part. consindering with muzu spread
* 00:33:242 - spinner untill 00:34:539 - here?
* move (22) to 01:26:918 - here
no comment on 3rd kiai, bcus is nice!
>Kantan
* 00:12:161 - delete this for rest? bcus its long for this bpm lol
* 00:13:782 - ~ 00:32:918 - really lessmapped, you should more filling notes on that part. consindering with futsuu spread[2] dont make long rest for diff like this.. or newbie will press esc when playing lol ( so yeah, you can make 1/1 simple on from old futsuu if you really decided fill notes on futsuu )
* 00:33:242 - spinner untill 00:34:539 - here?[2]
* 01:48:161 - this unnecessary for this part, delete? ( like 00:03:080 - this sounds )
well.. almost good!!
yeah Nice map low diff its almost good for me
GLuck!