1. Black (4,9 stars, 540 notes)
2. Brikel's Gray (4,49 stars, 303 notes)
3. Kanpa's Cadetaiko (4,94 stars, 1141 notes)
4. White (2,13 stars, 209 notes)

Combo1 : 90,37,90
Combo2 : 216,35,35
Combo3 : 231,222,114

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lovhin456 wrote:

Hi Leo !! Here's my mod >w<

* About the skin, I already made a map with a song related to Rumia, so maybe you can take some elements from it, also PM me with the details of what elements you want and what you have in mind >w<

General;
- Use these colors ??

Combo1 : 90,37,90
Combo2 : 216,35,35
Combo3 : 231,222,114

- Umm, I'm not sure if the countdown fits >w>

White;
- 03:56:554 >> Change for normal finish ?? No

Black;
- 00:49:411 >> Curve better ~ Yes
- 01:07:574 >> Like this ...Yes

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- 02:12:880 >> ^Yes
- 02:33:288 >> Remove comboYes
- 02:37:982 >> ^Yes
- 02:45:329 >> You can curve this betterYes
- 03:56:554 >> Change for normal finish ?? No

* Star & Merry Christmas ~~ !! (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ♥

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Black

00:29:615 (1) - maybe remove newcombo from it? these 6 notes should be together(I'm not going to point out others) Fixed
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - it's a careless arrangement I think(4 jumps out of this part) :< you can use some pattern for them Fixed
01:03:085 (2) - one more note and end it on a white line? No
01:20:228 (2,3,4) - they hear bad because the first note of them is too loud. maybe you can remove 01:20:330 (3) and add a note on 01:20:125 (between 1 and 2)(I'm not going to point out others /.) Fixed
01:25:738 (5) - new combo (I'd prefer if you use this kind a rhythm here because you increase the distance between 1,2,3. xD. it's just my personal opinion)No

SPOILER

01:31:044 (2) - I think it would be better if long slider is ended on a white line (like 02:28:391 (1,2,3)) Fixed
01:37:574 (2) - ^ No! That is heart pattern DDD:
02:02:268 - I think this halt is too long, some notes should be added here, and it feels not good that the coming notes are started with a stream (for instance add notes on 02:02:064 and 02:02:268) No
02:05:533 - I prefer more notes here :> Fixed
02:08:798 - ^ Fixed
02:03:289 (1,2,1) - reduce new combo Fixed
02:10:432 (1) - remove new combo No
02:10:840 (2) - new combo No
02:11:452 (4) - new combo No
02:22:677 (1,2,3) - make a prettier arrangement for them Fixed
03:30:431 - add a note here(I don't like the shape of this stream :<)No
03:37:983 (5) - new combo No


White

01:20:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this kind of rhythm seems too stiff at the beginning of kiai time. players should make more clicks here Fixed
02:26:758 (4) - I heard a whistle here. consider more whistle? :> Fixed
03:28:798 - the volume is turned up too suddenly That is the part of the song you idiot!


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Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit. No, is there any issue about SB dimensions in ranking guideline? If there it no, why you point it out? I saw the map is over 800 x 600 >.>
- The White and Black diff is missing 'brikel' in its tags. Added
- The combo colours in brikel's diff has different combo colours. Please check the .oosu files and make them identical. Added
- That custom normal clap is pretty loud. I suggest you make it a bit quieter. Lower the volume.......

White:
00:51:248 (3) - One grid left? Ok
02:22:676 (1) - New Combo, to stay consistent. Ok
02:34:105 (5) - One grid up? So it's stacked with the previous (1). No
03:43:085 (4) - One grid right? No

Brikel's Gray:
00:37:370 (4) - New combo? Ok
00:56:962 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it in the timeline like this No

that sounds better IMO
01:17:370 (2) - Extend this by one 1/4 tick.Ok
01:26:349 (6) - New combo? Ok
01:30:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Where are the new combos? I suggest on at (6), (14) and (19). Ok
02:22:880 (3) - One 1/4 tick later and extend by one 1/4 tick. Ok

Black:
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - Very confusing. the distance between (2), (3) and (3), (4) is the same but the time distance between (2), (3) is shorter than (3), (4). Please respace that. Ok
02:10:840 (2,3,4) - Confusing again. Ok

Leorda wrote:

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit. No, is there any issue about SB dimensions in ranking guideline? If there it no, why you point it out? I saw the map is over 800 x 600 >.>

Odaril wrote:

Er... hum, there IS a maximum size for storyboard elemets and that size is 800x600. Resize said picture and full submit. If you refuse to fix an unrankable thing we are allowed to nuke the map, are you aware of this ?

Jarby wrote:

lolno

18:09 <ppy> : Jarby: i'd allow 1 extra 1024x image
18:09 <ppy> : on top of the map's background
18:09 <ppy> : any more would just scream for abuse

Joshua Lost wrote:

Just star.I can find nothing,really.

By the way,thanks for your long mod.That's very helpful.

James2250 wrote:

Storyboard at 03:01:044 seems slightly early compared to the notes? Might just be me Yes
Don't really like 20 second+ break but it has sb so ok..

White:
00:56:962 (1,4) - align? OK
02:00:636 (2,3,4) - slight spacing error OK
03:33:697 (3) - random whistle by itself? Nope, I add it because there is some sound effect

Brikel's Gray:
02:22:676 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:574 (6,1,2,3,4) - looks strange with stacking at the moment, try raising stacking leniency and trying in test

Black:
00:53:085 (4,1) - space further apart OK
02:08:798 (1,2) - spacing? OK

Nicely done~
Star'ed