MaouDamashii - piano11 [CatchTheBeat] · forum

MBomb

Topic Starter

MBomb 2016-03-14T00:11:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 March 2016 at 02:40:59

Artist: MaouDamashii
Title: piano11
Source: 永恆的賽妮亞
Tags: Eternal Senia Magaleta arpg piano chill relaxing soundtrack MBomb JBHyperion
BPM: 80
Filesize: 2460kb
Play Time: 01:11
Difficulties Available:

Eternal (2.04 stars, 96 notes)
Hyperion's Cup (0.94 stars, 68 notes)
Salad (1.55 stars, 86 notes)

Download: MaouDamashii - piano11
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Amazing song from an amazing game <3

Project Senia, map 1.

Thanks to JBHyperion for the cup and hitsounds.

Last edited by MBomb 2016-03-26T02:40:13+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-03-14T00:35:17+00:00

OSU NEEDS MORE ETERNAL SENIA

Filthy self mod because I can xp

Salad

00:07:573 (2) - x-232? Would give even spacing between 00:06:823 (1,2,3) - I know you want a bit more spacing for the whistle sound but such a small difference and at this low BPM it just looks a bit weird. Alternatively, pitch for a bigger difference and/or direction change, like you have at 00:21:823 (1,2,3) - 00:21:823 (1,2,3) - etc.
00:27:425 (4,1) - Would reduce this a tiny bit due to the direction change, it comes as quite a surprise, so maybe x-88
00:34:550 - Circle here perhaps? Would help to maintain the white tick rhythm that follows, no hs additions
00:46:550 - ^
00:54:050 - ^
00:57:178 - I quite like the idea of this being unmapped to emphasize the upcoming reversion in rhythm. I mapped it as a slider end in my diff, you think I should make it a single circle as well? (Lol asking for a mod in my mod because fuck the meta)
00:58:972 (2,3) - x-280 for equal spacing between these and the previous note, or do the other thing I suggested back at 00:07:573 (2)

Eternal

00:04:948 (3) - x-400? Similar to suggestions such as 00:07:573 (2) in the Salad, a bit more spacing from the outset would fit well with the difficulty here I think
00:10:573 (2,3) - 00:16:573 (2,3) - e.g. these and others could be a dash. or at least a slightly stronger normal movement, the pause afterwards provides a good deal on emphasis on the last note so more spacing here would fit really nicely
00:39:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This one-directional slow moving stream breaks the flow a little for me as it plays in a somewhat stuttered way. If you don't want to use a curve here like you did at 00:27:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perhaps a zig zag or small jump at 00:40:550 (5) would work
00:54:425 (5,1) - This is the only place where you use a strong antiflow with tap dash, feels quite out of place to me so I'd opt for a more smooth flow here for consistency
01:01:222 (1,2) - Same as in the intro r.e. 00:10:573 (2,3)

Rank please <3

MBomb

Topic Starter

MBomb 2016-03-14T00:52:33+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
OSU NEEDS MORE ETERNAL SENIA

Filthy self mod because I can xp

Salad
00:07:573 (2) - x-232? Would give even spacing between 00:06:823 (1,2,3) - I know you want a bit more spacing for the whistle sound but such a small difference and at this low BPM it just looks a bit weird. Alternatively, pitch for a bigger difference and/or direction change, like you have at 00:21:823 (1,2,3) - 00:21:823 (1,2,3) - etc. - Made difference bigger.
00:27:425 (4,1) - Would reduce this a tiny bit due to the direction change, it comes as quite a surprise, so maybe x-88 - Fair point, done.
00:34:550 - Circle here perhaps? Would help to maintain the white tick rhythm that follows, no hs additions - Repeat on the last slider.
00:46:550 - ^ - ^
00:54:050 - ^ - Done.
00:57:178 - I quite like the idea of this being unmapped to emphasize the upcoming reversion in rhythm. I mapped it as a slider end in my diff, you think I should make it a single circle as well? (Lol asking for a mod in my mod because fuck the meta) - Yeah I think it'd work better xd
00:58:972 (2,3) - x-280 for equal spacing between these and the previous note, or do the other thing I suggested back at 00:07:573 (2) - Yep.
Eternal
00:04:948 (3) - x-400? Similar to suggestions such as 00:07:573 (2) in the Salad, a bit more spacing from the outset would fit well with the difficulty here I think - x:392 instead.
00:10:573 (2,3) - 00:16:573 (2,3) - e.g. these and others could be a dash. or at least a slightly stronger normal movement, the pause afterwards provides a good deal on emphasis on the last note so more spacing here would fit really nicely - Yep done.
00:39:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This one-directional slow moving stream breaks the flow a little for me as it plays in a somewhat stuttered way. If you don't want to use a curve here like you did at 00:27:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perhaps a zig zag or small jump at 00:40:550 (5) would work - Did a zig-zag thing with a dash to 7.
00:54:425 (5,1) - This is the only place where you use a strong antiflow with tap dash, feels quite out of place to me so I'd opt for a more smooth flow here for consistency - Changed this around a bit.
01:01:222 (1,2) - Same as in the intro r.e. 00:10:573 (2,3) - Done.
Rank please <3

Thanks for the mod!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-03-20T12:04:54+00:00

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[

General]

Great!

[

Hyperion's Cup]

Gameplay

00:09:823 (1) - What about changing this into a circle at 00:09:823 - ? It feels more consistent with 00:00:823 (1) - , 00:03:823 (1) - and 00:06:823 (1) - .
00:21:823 (1,2,3,4) - ^

The above points are just nitpicky stuff. To be honest the difficulty is good.

[

Salad]

Gameplay

00:30:050 (2,1) - In my opinion this part should include a dash in order to keep consistency with 00:31:925 (2,3) - and 00:33:425 (4,1) - as they are all in the same rhythm heard.

[

Eternal]

Gameplay

00:35:300 (3,4,5) - I think the dash at (4,5) can be omitted, in my opinion the rhythm starting from 00:30:800 - is dash every 2 white ticks, and it is progressing till 00:35:300 - which is going to be dash every white tick. Hence it feels much better to the rhythm when you keep a dash at 00:35:300 (3,4) - only.
00:39:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is consistent with 00:27:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and you added a dash at 00:40:737 (6,7) - , but not for the former one. Please check and change either one to fit consistency.

Good luck!

AFB

MBomb

Topic Starter

MBomb 2016-03-20T15:02:07+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
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[ General]
Great!

[ Salad]

Gameplay
00:30:050 (2,1) - In my opinion this part should include a dash in order to keep consistency with 00:31:925 (2,3) - and 00:33:425 (4,1) - as they are all in the same rhythm heard. - Hmm, the pitch is weaker on this one than the others.

[ Eternal]

Gameplay
00:35:300 (3,4,5) - I think the dash at (4,5) can be omitted, in my opinion the rhythm starting from 00:30:800 - is dash every 2 white ticks, and it is progressing till 00:35:300 - which is going to be dash every white tick. Hence it feels much better to the rhythm when you keep a dash at 00:35:300 (3,4) - only. - Hmm, the note of 5 feels far too strong to me to not have a dash because of the strong piano here, I think the change from dash every 2 ticks to every 1 feels fitting with the change in the song here.
00:39:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is consistent with 00:27:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and you added a dash at 00:40:737 (6,7) - , but not for the former one. Please check and change either one to fit consistency. - Added a dash to the first one.

Good luck!

AFB

Thanks for the mod!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-03-20T16:06:55+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Hyperion's Cup]

Gameplay
00:09:823 (1) - What about changing this into a circle at 00:09:823 - ? It feels more consistent with 00:00:823 (1) - , 00:03:823 (1) - and 00:06:823 (1) - . Changed this for consistency with surrounding rhythms
00:21:823 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Prefer to keep this as it creates some variety that emphasizes the end of this particular rhythm. I feel it builds nicely into the next part of the song

The above points are just nitpicky stuff. To be honest the difficulty is good.

Good luck!

AFB

Thanks for the mod!

Cup

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MBomb

Topic Starter

MBomb 2016-03-20T16:14:57+00:00

Updated.

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,576 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-03-25T11:05:52+00:00

recheck11

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

General]

Great!

[

Hyperion's Cup]

Gameplay

00:27:800 (1,2) - While it is pretty minor, I think this part can be softer, as there is only a long slider in Salad, but a few more notes right here. Actually I think the two patterns can be exchanged so the problem can be fixed.
00:39:800 (1,2) - ^

[

Salad]

Gameplay

00:27:800 (1) - While it is pretty minor, I think this part can be a bit stronger, since there are few more notes in Cup while here, there is only a slider, which is not as dense and strong as the Cup portrayal. In my opinion the two patterns can be switched to solve the problem easily.
00:39:800 (1) - ^

[

Eternal]

Great!

This should be it. Call me right after the updates.
Good luck!

AFB

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-03-25T11:12:52+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
recheck11

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Hyperion's Cup]

Gameplay
00:27:800 (1,2) - While it is pretty minor, I think this part can be softer, as there is only a long slider in Salad, but a few more notes right here. Actually I think the two patterns can be exchanged so the problem can be fixed.
00:39:800 (1,2) - ^
Swapped both to 3/2 sliders

This should be it. Call me right after the updates.
Good luck!

AFB

Thanks for the recheck!

Dainty Jingle

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Last edited by JBHyperion 2016-03-25T12:33:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2016-03-25T12:07:35+00:00

lol CS4

MBomb

Topic Starter

MBomb 2016-03-25T12:29:49+00:00

Fixed all.

Also gj with the code jbh xdddd

Updated.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-03-25T12:34:06+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
gj with the code jbh xdddd

You saw nothing.

N o t h i n g .

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,576 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-03-25T13:06:46+00:00

hi

bubble11

pls no speedrankerino lolz

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

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JBHyperion 2016-03-25T14:13:30+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
pls no speedrankerino lolz

Please it's been uploaded for 12 days, that's already 11 days more than we intended for it to be in Pending for (^:

koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-03-25T16:18:30+00:00

General

In tags is not neccessary add "piano" because it is already in the title

Cup

00:01:573 (2) - 00:19:573 (2) - Maybe these vertical sliders could be a problem for new players because they can't know if is neccessary move the ryuuta or not, i think is better with at at least 50% horizontal, like 00:07:573 (2) -
00:21:823 (1,2,3,4) - Why different distance to (3)? ): if is because thats sound is a bit more strong, you could do it in 00:47:300 (2,3,4,5) - too
00:48:800 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit more distance to (3)? is much stronger than (2), for example as you did in 00:36:050 (3,1,2) -

Salad

00:22:948 (3,4,1) - Mh i think the movement is a bit weird, would be much better with 00:24:448 (4) - ctrl+g and a bit to the left
00:30:050 (5,1) - Why not dash here to be consistent? 00:27:425 (4,1) - 00:31:925 (2,3) - 00:33:425 (4,1) -
00:42:050 (5,1) - ^ same here, i think this have enough potential to be dash too
00:55:579 (2,3) - Huh this dash is not so obvious, why not a less distance? to be walkable :3

Eternal

00:28:737 (6,7) - Maybe a bit less distance? this dash is a bit hard imo

The rest is fine for me, really nice platter

aaaaa

MBomb

Topic Starter

MBomb 2016-03-25T16:30:24+00:00

koliron wrote:

General
In tags is not neccessary add "piano" because it is already in the title - JBH told me to keep it in for seperate searching or something.

Salad
00:22:948 (3,4,1) - Mh i think the movement is a bit weird, would be much better with 00:24:448 (4) - ctrl+g and a bit to the left - Hmm, I think this is fine because how far away 3 and 4 are on the timeline, and the movement to 1 is easier how it is currently.
00:30:050 (5,1) - Why not dash here to be consistent? 00:27:425 (4,1) - 00:31:925 (2,3) - 00:33:425 (4,1) - - These notes get consistently stronger, I put no dash on the first one to emphasise that.
00:42:050 (5,1) - ^ same here, i think this have enough potential to be dash too - Added here.
00:55:579 (2,3) - Huh this dash is not so obvious, why not a less distance? to be walkable :3 - Increased distance to make dash more obvious instead, I feel like it fits well with the strong pitch on 3 to have a dash.

Eternal
00:28:737 (6,7) - Maybe a bit less distance? this dash is a bit hard imo - Reduced slightly.

The rest is fine for me, really nice platter

aaaaa

Thanks for the mod!

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-03-25T16:31:46+00:00

koliron wrote:

Cup
00:01:573 (2) - 00:19:573 (2) - Maybe these vertical sliders could be a problem for new players because they can't know if is neccessary move the ryuuta or not, i think is better with at at least 50% horizontal, like 00:07:573 (2) - I think it's pretty clear even for new players that these require no movement (which is intended) since they're practically vertical already
00:21:823 (1,2,3,4) - Why different distance to (3)? ): if is because thats sound is a bit more strong, you could do it in 00:47:300 (2,3,4,5) - too Whistle on (3), this is slightly stronger so I gave it a little more spacing. Did the same with 00:47:675 (3,4) as well now for consistency
00:48:800 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit more distance to (3)? is much stronger than (2), for example as you did in 00:36:050 (3,1,2) - Tweaked some spacings here

aaaaa

Thanks for the mod!

Didn't screw it up this time I swear

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:魔王魂
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koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-03-25T18:39:42+00:00

Ok we discussed about the timing, some offsets were bad, now sounds much better

2016-03-25 13:49 koliron: oh wait
2016-03-25 13:49 koliron: open the map in the editor
2016-03-25 13:49 - Magic Bomb -: o
2016-03-25 13:49 koliron: 00:00:823 - i dont know if this offset is correct
2016-03-25 13:49 koliron: hears a bit off
2016-03-25 13:49 koliron: is like..
2016-03-25 13:49 koliron: 805
2016-03-25 13:50 - Magic Bomb -: yeah
2016-03-25 13:50 - Magic Bomb -: 805 sounds better
2016-03-25 13:50 koliron: wait
2016-03-25 13:50 koliron: yep
2016-03-25 13:51 - Magic Bomb -: kk i'll change to 805
2016-03-25 13:51 koliron: lemme se the others timings
2016-03-25 13:51 koliron: who did this timing points?
2016-03-25 13:51 - Magic Bomb -: kk
2016-03-25 13:51 koliron: you or jbh?
2016-03-25 13:51 - Magic Bomb -: I did the first and then the ones at the end
2016-03-25 13:51 - Magic Bomb -: the ones at like 33% were JBH
2016-03-25 13:52 - Magic Bomb -: but JBH checked all of them
2016-03-25 13:52 koliron: 00:57:178 - mmh
2016-03-25 13:52 koliron: i think is a bit more there
2016-03-25 13:53 koliron: 00:58:972 - and this a bit less
2016-03-25 13:53 koliron: wait
2016-03-25 13:53 koliron: 00:58:972 - yeah definitely this is like 20 less D:
2016-03-25 13:53 koliron: 01:01:222 - ^ or maybe 30
2016-03-25 13:54 koliron: 01:05:347 - same here ;__;
2016-03-25 13:54 koliron: the rest are fine
2016-03-25 13:54 koliron: oh nope
2016-03-25 13:54 koliron: 00:24:448 - this is abit less, too
2016-03-25 13:55 koliron: even i dont knwo if those 2 timing points are neccessary
2016-03-25 13:55 koliron: i think feels better 00:24:448 (4) - in 1/2
2016-03-25 13:55 - Magic Bomb -: 00:57:178 - changed to 00:57:196 - bpm to 65
2016-03-25 13:56 koliron: yeah sounds much better
2016-03-25 13:57 - Magic Bomb -: moved 00:58:972 - to 00:58:954 -
2016-03-25 13:58 - Magic Bomb -: 01:01:222 - to 01:01:204 -
2016-03-25 13:59 - Magic Bomb -: 01:05:347 - to 01:05:329 -
2016-03-25 13:59 koliron: yeah sounds better, maybe 2~4 less in 01:01:204 - 
2016-03-25 13:59 koliron: but is still fine
2016-03-25 13:59 koliron: fdlkjsdfl
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: yeah 01:05:329 - is better
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: even
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: 01:05:329 - 
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: you can remove this timinf becaouse is the same bpm
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: wait no
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: is not
2016-03-25 14:00 koliron: ldkfjdslk
2016-03-25 14:01 - Magic Bomb -: nah, 73bpm sounds a lot better
2016-03-25 14:01 - Magic Bomb -: on that xD
2016-03-25 14:01 koliron: yes yes, i saw the previous haha
2016-03-25 14:01 koliron: and what about 01:05:329 - 
2016-03-25 14:02 koliron: i think those triming are not neccessary
2016-03-25 14:02 - Magic Bomb -: that's the 75bpm one
2016-03-25 14:02 - Magic Bomb -: 73*
2016-03-25 14:02 - Magic Bomb -: even
2016-03-25 14:02 koliron: oh
2016-03-25 14:02 koliron: 1true is 80 and the previous 85
2016-03-25 14:02 koliron: aaa
2016-03-25 14:03 koliron: but is still a bit off
2016-03-25 14:03 koliron: in 00:24:430 - sounds better
2016-03-25 14:03 - Magic Bomb -: yeah i changed that