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Bill Hamel & Derek James - The Way U Move

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ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 8:06:55 PM

Artist: Bill Hamel & Derek James
Title: The Way U Move
Source: Dance Dance Revolution 2010
Tags: Breana Skiles DDR
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2857kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.09 stars, 116 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 235 notes)
  3. Normal (3.9 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James - The Way U Move
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 31 times in total.
Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Crimmi
My Diff, Go Go Go!

Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James feat. Breana Skiles - The Way U Move (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Normal].osu
wmfchris
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Roddie's Intense]
0:12:508 (1,2) stack properly
0:14:730 (6) up 1 grid
0:28:730 (1,2) right 1 grid
0:42:730 (1) up 1 grid
0:49:841 (1,2,3,4) stack properly:3
1:02:063 (5) left 1 grid
1:43:396 (2,3) up 1 grid

[Hard]
0:14:508 (2) right 1 grid
0:16:285 (1,2) not sure it it's too near to the boundary
1:08:952 (2) up 1 grid
1:33:841 (3,1) too near to the boundary?

[Crimmi's Normal]
Only normal has kiai? Though no problem for this one...

[Easy] fine.

star~
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Only normal has combo colors and kiai?

[Roddie's Intense]
00:36:285 (3) - It's just my personal opinion and not that important to do, but I think this would play nicely if this slider was flipped horizontaly. :3
01:12:063 (2) - Delete clap and add it to (5)? Sounds better.
01:35:619 (4) - Why this is only different looking slider in this combo? Why not just copy-pasta-horizontal-flip (3)? :V
01:26:285 (4) - Delete clap and add it to beginning of (7)?

[Hard]
No hitsounds? :V
00:32:063 (5) - Maybe make this slider like this, like you have done with some other sliders, too~?
01:28:063 (3) - Maybe rotate 11 degrees anti-clockwise to match the previous slider? :3
01:48:508 (1) - Would look better to me if you deleted the new combo

[Crimmi's Normal]
You have pretty sudden notes after spinners... ・u ・''
00:14:285 (5) - New combo?
00:30:285 (6) - ^
00:42:730 (4) - ^
00:51:619 (5) - ^
01:09:396 (6) - ^
01:14:730 (5) - ^
01:23:619 (4) - ^
01:27:174 (3) - ^
01:36:063 (4) - make this to end at next red tick and delete (5)? :V

[Easy]
01:48:508 (1) - Like in hard, would look better to me if removed the new combo

Great work, especially hard was super enjoyable to play~ ・u ・*star*
Roddie
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Roddie

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Intense]
0:12:508 (1,2) stack properly I think its fine as it is.
0:14:730 (6) up 1 grid Sure.
0:28:730 (1,2) right 1 grid ^
0:42:730 (1) up 1 grid ^
0:49:841 (1,2,3,4) stack properly:3 Looks okay to me.
1:02:063 (5) left 1 grid Done.
1:43:396 (2,3) up 1 grid ^
Thank you, Chris. 8-)

Lanttu wrote:

[Roddie's Intense]
00:36:285 (3) - It's just my personal opinion and not that important to do, but I think this would play nicely if this slider was flipped horizontaly. :3 Hm... Okay.
01:12:063 (2) - Delete clap and add it to (5)? Sounds better. Nah, but I will add a clap on 5.
01:35:619 (4) - Why this is only different looking slider in this combo? Why not just copy-pasta-horizontal-flip (3)? :V Done.
01:26:285 (4) - Delete clap and add it to beginning of (7)? Err...I won't delete the clap on 4 but I will add a clap on the beginning of 7

Great work, especially hard was super enjoyable to play~ ・u ・*sigh* :(
Thanks for the mod, Lanttu.

Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James feat. Breana Skiles - The Way U Move (ouranhshc) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Crimmi

Lanttu wrote:

[Crimmi's Normal]
You have pretty sudden notes after spinners... ・u ・orz. It's Not THAT sudden T.T''
00:14:285 (5) - New combo? Done.
00:30:285 (6) - ^ Done.
00:42:730 (4) - ^ No, But i did New combo at 00:44:508
00:51:619 (5) - ^ Done.
01:09:396 (6) - ^ Done.
01:14:730 (5) - ^ No.
01:23:619 (4) - ^ Done.
01:27:174 (3) - ^ No.
01:36:063 (4) - make this to end at next red tick and delete (5)? :V Done.

Great work, especially hard was super enjoyable to play~ ・u ・*star*
Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James feat. Breana Skiles - The Way U Move (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Normal].osu
bmin11
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bmin11
[Roddie]
00:12:508 (1) - ending it at 00:12:952 sounds better and it's easier to understand 00:13:841 (3)
01:35:619 (4) - make it symmetry with 01:35:174 (3)

[Hard]
01:04:952 (3) - New Combo. Atlease this it makes it easier to tell the jump

[Crimmi]
00:25:396 (3) - flip it on horizontal and fix to the Distance snap. It looks better with not overlapping with the slider
01:05:841 (2) - This is not symmetry but it really doesn't matter I guess

[Easy]
01:01:841 (x) - add a break? I really thought it was the end of the map and went 'well that's an weird ending'


Not bad not bad. Ouran's diffs needs more hitsounds though... maybe create more Custom hitsounds? The song can go well with lots of bass n drum hitsounds and such
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Joined March 2009
Derekku



A few people have agreed with me that your artist is too long. Getting rid of Bill/Derek would be a bit awkward, so I suppose remove "feat. Breana Skiles" and put her name in the tags. (Speaking of tags, why don't you have DDR tags in there?)
ouranhshc
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Derekku wrote:




A few people have agreed with me that your artist is too long. Getting rid of Bill/Derek would be a bit awkward, so I suppose remove "feat. Breana Skiles" and put her name in the tags. (Speaking of tags, why don't you have DDR tags in there?)
>_>
Roddie
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Roddie

bmin11 wrote:

[Roddie]
00:12:508 (1) - ending it at 00:12:952 sounds better and it's easier to understand 00:13:841 (3) I'll consider changing it if someone says the same thing about that.
01:35:619 (4) - make it symmetry with 01:35:174 (3) I thought I fixed that? Oh, well. Fixed.
Thanks. :D

Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James feat. Breana Skiles - The Way U Move (ouranhshc) [Roddie's Intense].osu
swish
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Joined February 2009
swish
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YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
Crimmi's Normal:
- The custom colours for this diff. are nice. Can you use them in every other one? HOWEVER: That black. It blends in with the background. How about using

202,202,202
or

73,73,73

Hard:
- HP Drain, Approach Rate and OD same as Roddie's Intense? ._.
- Reduce HP Drain by 2, Approach Rate by 1 and OD by 2

Roddie's Intense:
00:12:508 (1,2) - This doesn't play well. Looks and sound ugly.
00:19:619 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not stacked properly, and look ugly when playing.
01:48:730 (1) - Move the spinner a 1/4 tick back, so starting at 01:48:619 instead, but extend it so it ends in the same place as before.
Crimmi
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Crimmi
orz... bmin11 & YGO mods applied.

Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James feat. Breana Skiles - The Way U Move (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Normal].osu
Ayeen_old
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Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
Star ~
lolcubes
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lolcubes
Hey here's my mod.

[General]:
  1. Preview time for all diffs is -1. Not sure if you intended to do this, if you didn't you should change it.
  2. Only Crimmi's diff has a kiai time. Even with that, I suggest a kiai for following timelines: 00:33:841 - 01:02:285, 01:34:285 - 01:48:508.
  3. Combo colors are left as default apart from Crimmi's diff. Suggesting to change that to his colors (with some minor changes listed in his diff section).
[Easy]:
  1. Very few hitsounds, only noticed some finishes. I suggest some occasional claps that follow the beat, atleast in the kiai time sections (if you decide to add them).
  2. 00:38:730 (3) - You were placing a new combo for notes like this one on the timeline (3 combos back). Why not make this one a new combo as well? If so, remove the new combo from the next slider.
  3. 00:54:730 (2) - Add new combo, remove new combo from the next slider.
  4. 01:01:841 to 01:05:396 - Insert a break?
[Crimmi's Normal]:
  1. Combo colors are nice, but I don't think using a black is a good idea. There is alot of black in the background and this would make reading notes close to impossible at times. Instead of black, I suggest using R193 G140 B62. This color can also be found in the background, so why not use that instead.
  2. Suggesting to match the kiai times to my idea I already wrote down in the general section.
  3. 00:49:396 (2) - Add a clap to match the other similar notes in this section.
[Hard]:
  1. AR feels a bit too high for a 'Hard' diff, but it plays alright so no need to change this if you think that as well.
  2. Very few hitsounds, only noticed some finishes. I suggest some occasional claps that follow the beat, atleast in the kiai time sections (if you decide to add them).
No general errors at all. Well mapped. Feel free to ignore stuff you don't wanna change, they are mostly suggestions anyway.
Star~ :3
y u c a
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Joined April 2009
y u c a
hi oukun~(・∀・)/

General
same combo color plz at all diff

Easy

00:26:730 (1) - add finish
00:33:396 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:841 (2) - add new combo
00:40:952 (1) - add finish
00:55:174 (1) - ^
01:41:396 (1) - ^


Normal

00:40:952 (1) - add finish
00:55:174 (1) - ^
01:01:841 (6) - add whistle
01:12:508 (3) - add clap
01:41:396 (1) - add finish


Hard

00:33:841 (2) - add finish
01:21:841 (1) - remove clap
Haneii
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Joined November 2009
Haneii
~Normal~
01:45:841 (2,3,4) – It doesn’t look too nice partially overlaying 01:44:063 (6,7,8). Move it more to the left?
Also random part to start Kiai time (the song begins to slow down at this point, pretty anticlimactic imo. Either start at the beginning of the chorus or no kiai time would be my suggestion.)

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Crimmi
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Crimmi

Haneii wrote:

~Normal~
01:45:841 (2,3,4) – It doesn’t look too nice partially overlaying 01:44:063 (6,7,8). Move it more to the left?
Also random part to start Kiai time (the song begins to slow down at this point, pretty anticlimactic imo. Either start at the beginning of the chorus or no kiai time would be my suggestion.)

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Ok.

Fixed.

Download: Bill Hamel & Derek James feat. Breana Skiles - The Way U Move (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Normal].osu
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
what happened to my mod? D:
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc

YGOkid8 wrote:

Crimmi's Normal:
- The custom colours for this diff. are nice. Can you use them in every other one? HOWEVER: That black. It blends in with the background. How about using

202,202,202
or

73,73,73
i just made them all default colors
Hard:
- HP Drain, Approach Rate and OD same as Roddie's Intense? ._.
- Reduce HP Drain by 2, Approach Rate by 1 and OD by 2done

Roddie's Intense:removed diff
00:12:508 (1,2) - This doesn't play well. Looks and sound ugly.
00:19:619 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not stacked properly, and look ugly when playing.
01:48:730 (1) - Move the spinner a 1/4 tick back, so starting at 01:48:619 instead, but extend it so it ends in the same place as before.
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