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Kagamine Rin - Amagasa Tojite

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eveless
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eveless
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月14日 at 20:07:25

Artist: Kagamine Rin
Title: Amagasa Tojite
Source: RamuneP
Tags: vocaloid nuz
BPM: 120
Filesize: 2559kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.85 stars, 297 notes)
  2. Normal (3.02 stars, 151 notes)
Download: Kagamine Rin - Amagasa Tojite
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitcircles is from s/14224 by Astom
Thanks for Fuuko let me use it o.o
and thanks Astom's pretty hitcircle
Last edited by eveless , edited 4 times in total.
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
The Birthday Legend of eveless
miku
186 posts
Joined March 2009
miku
happy eveless's year!

E姐的图做的越来越好了 www
现在都没吐槽点了 >.<

E姐加油>.<
moemoe eveless
kiririn_
218 posts
Joined February 2010
kiririn_
Birthday Legend
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
镜音双子大爱~
先star后mod rofl
Aria
174 posts
Joined September 2010
Aria
yo, 饿姐生日快乐.
全是没价值的建议啊啊啊啊.

OverAll:
什么都没有D:

Hard:
貌似softhitnormal的声音很大@.@ 真的
00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - 什么都挑不到只能nazi这个形状了么QAQ
01:06:995 (1) - 这个点要不要kiai再喷一下(喂
01:37:995 (1,2) - 这两个要不要去掉._. 这样前面那个slider潇洒一点? 不会感觉仓促什么的/.
01:51:495 (._.) - 可以加条绿线把这个slidertick加音量两格么....啊哈哈哈哈
什么有用的又找不到._.

Normal:
01:02:995 (?) - 有少个节奏么?X_X
01:09:995 (5) - 开头没压在vocal和鼓点呢(会不会有人说?(小声
01:12:995 (2) - ^
01:41:745 (3) - whistle?

神唱功饿姐
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
E家双份mod rofl

[NM]
00:09:245 (1) - soft whistle? (嘛只是个人想法罢了)
00:16:745 (5) - clap?
00:18:245 (2) - 如果改了上面..这个也改clap好了..
00:48:745 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:995 (3,4) - (吐槽)这个好像和1 2 转的角度不同...
00:58:995 (3,4) - ^
01:22:495 (1) - Remove finish/降低音量
(NM我神马都mod不出)

[HD]
不够遮(喂
00:07:995 (3) - 反方向?
00:18:495 (3) - remove finish
00:18:995 (1) - finish 音量+
00:29:745 (7,8,9) - 能nazi一下这形状么stress 排成直线?
00:40:495 (3) - 这个jump不合歌..真的..
00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - 正五边形?

~_~
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless
fixed sth
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
I had to put volume up very high, but its a star :]
NanaDesu
NanaDesu
餓姐 :shock:

:D
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
General
- For all the diffs, remove the letterbox during break, they are not being used
- Increase the Audio lead-in to 1 second
- Just 2 diffs seems boring to me :/ but that's just me

Normal
01:03:616 Try this instead:


Hard
Fine here

Nice map and good luck with it :)
And sorry it took forever >.<
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

Weezy wrote:

General
- For all the diffs, remove the letterbox during break, they are not being usedokay
- Increase the Audio lead-in to 1 secondI think 0 is fine , and there are not apparent different between 1 and 0 in my mapset.
- Just 2 diffs seems boring to me :/ but that's just mebecause of the BPM and this is a slowly song so there are just 2 diffs , if the song which is let people relax that i think 2 diff is the maximum

Normal
01:03:616 Try this instead:
un...just different thoughts but okay

Hard
Fine here

Nice map and good luck with it :)
And sorry it took forever >.<
thanks
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
wow 阿妈嘎撒脱机特~

[General]:
  1. put 'RamuneP' and 'nuz' to wherever you want
  2. get a approchcircle.png
  3. 1/4三连上的normal-hitnormal有点响了 Hard里
  4. 敲响我的小军鼓喔 咿呀咿呀哟~
[Hard]:
  1. 00:32:745 (6,1) - 这两个时间上换一下会很不错... 否则00:32:995 (1)违和感满塞
  2. 01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233
[Normal]:
  1. 01:09:245 (4,5) - 同Hard里的违和感
    01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233 again
不够送分 不想star了都 :x
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

Colin Hou wrote:

wow 阿妈嘎撒脱机特~

[General]:
  1. put 'RamuneP' and 'nuz' to wherever you wantRamuneP add in source and nuz in tags but nuz is who?.?
  2. get a approchcircle.pngdone
  3. 1/4三连上的normal-hitnormal有点响了 Hard里懒得改了...反正也是4...
  4. 敲响我的小军鼓喔 咿呀咿呀哟~
[Hard]:
  1. 00:32:745 (6,1) - 这两个时间上换一下会很不错... 否则00:32:995 (1)违和感满塞k
  2. 01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233嘛最后一个是完结嘛..也没特别好看懒得改了 不过normal改了>_>
[Normal]:
  1. 01:09:245 (4,5) - 同Hard里的违和感fixed
    01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233 againk
不够送分 不想star了都 :x不够长没分送:<
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
nuz is another name of 口口口口P
Sandpig
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Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

00:12:995 (1) - 后移1/2？因为我看你的下的节奏基本都是跳过第一拍的。而且这里有一个长音
00:18:995 (1) - 这个位置用NORMAL有点重了，这首歌的重音是在24拍。后面第一拍上的重音不改也罢了，第一个音下NORMAL感觉很突然
00:29:745 (7,8,9) - 这种在段落中间的三连尝试只在前两个音用normal(最后可以用一个轻一点的finish)
00:37:745 (7) - ^
00:38:995 - 建议去掉这个normal
01:37:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议normal串里面插soft，这个效果等同于muted note


Normal

00:33:245 - 加个音？前边感觉挺连贯的这里突然一拍半的休止
01:10:995 (1,2) - 这里这么多词为什么用两个slider带过？


没了._.
eveless
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Topic Starter
eveless

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

00:12:995 (1) - 后移1/2？因为我看你的下的节奏基本都是跳过第一拍的。而且这里有一个长音那样看想凸显出来的东西是什么 前面故意跳过第一拍是因为要软 后面基本以鼓为主 要硬的感觉所以不跳第一拍
00:18:995 (1) - 这个位置用NORMAL有点重了，这首歌的重音是在24拍。后面第一拍上的重音不改也罢了，第一个音下NORMAL感觉很突然这首歌的鼓点在24没错 可是你没懂我用normal的意思 区别开来clap和normal好吗
00:29:745 (7,8,9) - 这种在段落中间的三连尝试只在前两个音用normal(最后可以用一个轻一点的finish)我觉得没这个必要
00:37:745 (7) - ^^
00:38:995 - 建议去掉这个normal为什么 去掉了破坏了整体感了
01:37:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议normal串里面插soft，这个效果等同于muted note且不说这不是mute 就算是mute了又怎么样 音效的音量大小用来体现节奏 soft和normal的转换也一样


Normal

00:33:245 - 加个音？前边感觉挺连贯的这里突然一拍半的休止如果全首都这么连贯下去有意义吗 歌当然是有连贯有休止的
01:10:995 (1,2) - 这里这么多词为什么用两个slider带过？难道就一定要每个字都下节奏吗？


没了._.
Vayreceane
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Vayreceane
Hi~
This song is so relaxing~ :D
SPOILER
Normal
00:42:245 (2) - I don't like where this note placed... Move it to something like this?

00:50:495 (1) - End slider here
01:54:995 (4) - Add finish?

Hard
00:12:995 (1) - Move note to 00:13:245
00:13:745 (x) - Add note here
00:40:425 (2,3) - Why suddenly jump ><
01:00:495 (6) - Avoid stacking with (4)
01:09:995 (2) - Remove this note.
01:50:995 (1) - This stacking looks ugly D: imo (If you want to keep this pattern, space 01:49:995 (2,3,4,5) more... Like this I think:

01:54:245 (5) - Why don't make this new combo like you did in normal?
01:54:995 (1) - Remove new combo and add finish?
Here's a star ;) Good luck!
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

Vayreceane wrote:

Hi~
This song is so relaxing~ :D
SPOILER
Normal
00:42:245 (2) - I don't like where this note placed... Move it to something like this?

00:50:495 (1) - End slider here
01:54:995 (4) - Add finish?

Hard
00:12:995 (1) - Move note to 00:13:245
00:13:745 (x) - Add note here
00:40:425 (2,3) - Why suddenly jump ><
01:00:495 (6) - Avoid stacking with (4)
01:09:995 (2) - Remove this note.
01:50:995 (1) - This stacking looks ugly D: imo (If you want to keep this pattern, space 01:49:995 (2,3,4,5) more... Like this I think:

01:54:245 (5) - Why don't make this new combo like you did in normal?
01:54:995 (1) - Remove new combo and add finish?
Here's a star ;) Good luck!
Fixed sth
banvi
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banvi
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