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Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short Ver.)

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Tenshi-nyan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 26. März 2011 at 11:15:31

Artist: Dai2BungeibuBand
Title: KiraKira (Short Ver.)
Source: KiraKira
Tags: d2b Eirene Kirari Shiino Sarina Kashiwara Chie Isurugi OzzyOzrock
BPM: 202
Filesize: 11557kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,58 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Eiri'nsane (5 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Hard (5 stars, 224 notes)
  4. Normal (4,24 stars, 135 notes)
  5. Ozzy's Taiko (4,83 stars, 529 notes)
Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short Ver.)
Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Status:
All done!

Special thanks to:
Eirene for his Insane difficulty.
OzzyOzrock for his Taiko difficulty.

You should play this with the video. Just sayin'.

First time doing some work with sexy hitsounds. Ehm yeah...
endlessHorizon
Star~

TBH this really is much better than K-on
herrschumacherr
I wanna see at least 1 ranked kira kira map, so star.
ziin
k-on for adults...
Eirene
here is my insane ... sorry for the delay >w<
I need to work a bit hitsounds I guess *.*

Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Tenshi-nyan) [Eiri'nsane].osu
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
woah, I already thought you forgot about this. I'll re-start to work on this map in a while.Gotta rework what I got so far.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Gotta push this up. Just finished Easy... I think O_o
I suck at mapping (easy) maps... so yeah.

Just waiting for Eirin for some stuff before this goes into pending.

Anyone knows whether the artist is correct?
Aleks719
Eiri'nsane
bpm here 202.1. 202 in other diffs. fix it + resnap
01:08:598 (8) - add note
What about kiai? It's strange.

Hard and Normal
Can't find mistakes here

Easy
AR = 2 now, but it really fast (bpm 202). AR -1 .
00:06:107 (1) - make this (length of slider + add note). Imo, sounds better : 00:09:374 (1) - replace 1/2 early (white section)
00:09:671 (2) - make this (remove reverse + add note). Imo, sounds better : 00:34:770 (1) - reverse must be at white section. If you can up difficulty in easy, remove reverse, add 1/2 slider. Yup, it's hardly, but sounds more pretty.
Good work.star.
senaya
God, you really made me remember that I had to map one awesome song from there like.. fff, since December 2009 :?

[General]
If you need a 4:3 bg you can't just stretch it =_=
Here, I did it in less than 2 minutes via photoshop http://puu.sh/Vz0. Try to make it better if you want.

Also, the song is called キラ☆キラ (Kira☆Kira) with a star between words.
I dunno if you need to add the star but game supports it http://puu.sh/Vzg.
And the artist is 第二文芸部バンド (DainibunngeibuBando or smth like "The second literature club Band")
I don't know the correct spelling so I just used D2B when I mapped their stuff.
And the source probably is Kira☆Kira Show Time!!

[Easy]
00:09:671 (2,1) - doesn't follow music I think. Change it to something else?
00:31:800 (2) - you need to place it at 00:31:750 using 1/6 so it will fin the GO lyrics maybe?

[Normal]
00:20:513 (3) - repeat one more time?
01:15:166 - add circle here and make spinner start later.

[Hard]
Same with the last spinner.

[Eiri'nsane]
00:42:493 (1,2,3,4) - nice stuff, lol

I'm sorry if I write too much unnecessary stuff, I was just excited when I saw a song from this vn :oops:
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

senaya wrote:

God, you really made me remember that I had to map one awesome song from there like.. fff, since December 2009 :?

[General]
If you need a 4:3 bg you can't just stretch it =_=
Here, I did it in less than 2 minutes via photoshop http://puu.sh/Vz0. Try to make it better if you want. D:

Also, the song is called キラ☆キラ (Kira☆Kira) with a star between words. The game didn't support it when I checked it...
I dunno if you need to add the star but game supports it http://puu.sh/Vzg.
And the artist is 第二文芸部バンド (DainibunngeibuBando or smth like "The second literature club Band") Dai2BungeibuBand is correct in that case then.
I don't know the correct spelling so I just used D2B when I mapped their stuff.
And the source probably is Kira☆Kira Show Time!! Nah, source is just KiraKira. Show Time!! is a 2nd part.

[Easy]
00:09:671 (2,1) - doesn't follow music I think. Change it to something else? I dunno really in what D:
00:31:800 (2) - you need to place it at 00:31:750 using 1/6 so it will fin the GO lyrics maybe? nah, it's fine

[Normal]
00:20:513 (3) - repeat one more time? I think... with 200 BPM that'd be too fast...
01:15:166 - add circle here and make spinner start later. ehm OK~

[Hard]
Same with the last spinner.

[Eiri'nsane]
00:42:493 (1,2,3,4) - nice stuff, lol

I'm sorry if I write too much unnecessary stuff, I was just excited when I saw a song from this vn :oops:
Thx~
ziin
haha I didn't even download it when I gave my star.

[general]
I don't know how you messed up the video like that...
I guess super really does suck.
http://puu.sh/VJn

[easy]
I can't ever find stuff in easy, I'm no good at easy stuff.

[normal]
00:36:255 (3) - no need for this note
00:39:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/VIm maybe? The slider doesn't fit perfectly. There's a lot of these in easy and normal, so I won't mention them all.
00:57:047 - add circle
01:06:849 - (1) split this up, put a slider here.
01:09:225 (1,2) - repeating slider here
01:11:156 (1) - ^^
01:13:978 - slider here
01:14:423 (3,5) - ^

[hard]
00:34:621 (1,2,3) - this would sound so much better 1/2 tick over.
00:36:255 (5) - as in normal no need for this note
00:39:374 - http://puu.sh/VIE this section is just weird to me
00:47:394 (2) - extend it to do the full drumroll?

[insane]
00:02:542 (1) - silence the end of these
00:42:493 (1) - I hate you
00:45:909 (1) - i don't hear anything at the start of this, unless you count the vague guitar strumming.
00:47:097 (1) - ^

I can't follow the rhythm very well so it's really confusing to me, but I don't particularly feel like shoving my rhythms down your throat. Suffice it to say, I like it when sliders start on a white note, and there's an occasional pause in the beats. Right now it's just BAM BAM BAM x20. Maybe getting rid of those long repeating sliders into just plain sliders would give me some reprieve, but it doesn't matter that much.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

ziin wrote:

haha I didn't even download it when I gave my star.

[general]
I don't know how you messed up the video like that...
I guess super really does suck. yeah, it sucks.
http://puu.sh/VJn thx for the video :3

[easy]
I can't ever find stuff in easy, I'm no good at easy stuff. D:

[normal]
00:36:255 (3) - no need for this note
00:39:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/VIm maybe? The slider doesn't fit perfectly. There's a lot of these in easy and normal, so I won't mention them all.
00:57:047 - add circle
01:06:849 - (1) split this up, put a slider here.
01:09:225 (1,2) - repeating slider here
01:11:156 (1) - ^^
01:13:978 - slider here
01:14:423 (3,5) - ^

[hard]
00:34:621 (1,2,3) - this would sound so much better 1/2 tick over.
00:36:255 (5) - as in normal no need for this note
00:39:374 - http://puu.sh/VIE this section is just weird to me
00:47:394 (2) - extend it to do the full drumroll?



I can't follow the rhythm very well so it's really confusing to me, but I don't particularly feel like shoving my rhythms down your throat. Suffice it to say, I like it when sliders start on a white note, and there's an occasional pause in the beats. Right now it's just BAM BAM BAM x20. Maybe getting rid of those long repeating sliders into just plain sliders would give me some reprieve, but it doesn't matter that much. Maybe for insane D:
Changed some stuff... thx for mod~
nimi
Hi hi ^.^

General
First of all.. If everything is finished, why is this still WIP? u.u
Remove KiraKira from the source, since it's already the name of the song D:
And I'm not sure, but isn't this TV Size? Check it, and in case it is add it on song's name.

Easy
00:19:324 (4) - make this slider like http://puu.sh/WBq ? Sounds better imo
00:40:636 - break time?

Normal
Rename it to Normal+? Plays kinda hard for a normal, but not hard enough for a hard XD

And it's all >_<" Star
Nakagawa-Kanon
delete .osb file

[Easy]
00:22:295 (2,3) - 1grid up
00:34:770 (1) - omg..... How about make no return slider?

[Normal]
4.28 Normal?

omg It's Hard...

Please make more Normaltic

[Hard]
no comment

[Insane]
00:04:918 (9) - add newcombo
00:05:810 (1) - remove newcombo
00:05:364 (10,1) - this jump is counfusing to me
00:19:176 (7,1) - same
00:33:730 (5) - same
00:43:087 (5) - add newcombo
00:48:285 (1) - this jump is counfusing to me
00:50:661 (1) - same
00:53:037 (1) - same
00:54:225 (1) - same
00:55:414 (1) - same
00:57:790 (1) - same
00:58:978 (1) - same
01:00:166 (1) - same
01:03:730 (1) - same
01:04:918 (1) - same


OMG
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

Wiinter wrote:

Hi hi ^.^

General
First of all.. If everything is finished, why is this still WIP? u.u cus I'm waiting for Eirene to put some hitsounds into his map.
Remove KiraKira from the source, since it's already the name of the song D: Well yeah... The source's the same as the title...
And I'm not sure, but isn't this TV Size? Check it, and in case it is add it on song's name. added short ver.

Easy
00:19:324 (4) - make this slider like http://puu.sh/WBq ? Sounds better imo
00:40:636 - break time?

Normal
Rename it to Normal+? Plays kinda hard for a normal, but not hard enough for a hard XD eh nah.

And it's all >_<" Star

dksslqj wrote:

[Easy]
00:22:295 (2,3) - 1grid up
00:34:770 (1) - omg..... How about make no return slider? huh... nah

[Normal]
4.28 Normal?

omg It's Hard...

Please make more Normaltic It's maybe a lil' bit hard. But it also still is a normal.

[Hard]
no comment



OMG what's that for? D:
thx~
James2250
-Bliss mentioned that the artist could be set to 'd2b' but it looks like yours can work too (http://www.d2b.jp/about.html)
-You might want to change the red combo color so it doesn't blend into the background too much for players
-Consider ending the final spinners at 01:21:107 on every difficulty, it fits nicely in my opinion
-Your offset seems slightly off, try -12 (303) Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections

Easy:
00:19:324 (4,5) - could look slightly neater if spread out
00:42:790 (1,2) - fix spacing
00:44:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern could look more organized

Normal:
Pretty difficult for a Normal but the map looks nice

Hard:
I am guessing all the sharp curved sliders like 01:05:661 (1,2) are done on purpose
00:47:245 (1,2) - fix spacing

Eiri'nsane:
Some of the jumps work nicely but a few of them seem kind of random to me
00:04:621 (7,9,1,2) - avoid overlap?
00:23:780 (4,5) - hard jump to follow
00:31:503 (2,5) - ^

Some nicely done maps here, get the hitsounds done and move it to pending :D
Deserves a star~
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

James2250 wrote:

-Bliss mentioned that the artist could be set to 'd2b' but it looks like yours can work too (http://www.d2b.jp/about.html)
-You might want to change the red combo color so it doesn't blend into the background too much for players
-Consider ending the final spinners at 01:21:107 on every difficulty, it fits nicely in my opinion
-Your offset seems slightly off, try -12 (303) Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections

Easy:
00:19:324 (4,5) - could look slightly neater if spread out
00:42:790 (1,2) - fix spacing
00:44:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern could look more organized

Normal:
Pretty difficult for a Normal but the map looks nice My Normals always turn out harder than I want them, lol. I think it's fine though... the song's fast after all.

Hard:
I am guessing all the sharp curved sliders like 01:05:661 (1,2) are done on purpose yeah. of course it's on purpose :O
00:47:245 (1,2) - fix spacing

Some nicely done maps here, get the hitsounds done and move it to pending :D
Deserves a star~
Yay a star. Though no icon. Oh well. Need moar mods~
Will upload Eirin's if I get the update.
Eirene
ok ...few things changed and custom hitsounds
don't know what timing is the best... I leave this to you
oh, and one thing : do not change my kiai :3

Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira[Eirinsane].rar
wmfchris
[general]
preview time missed in insane.

[Insane] BPM not unique with other diffs.
00:10:545 (2) - right 1 grid
01:09:031 (2) - left 1 grid

[Hard]
nice.

Other diffs look good enough. star~

*If the insane diff is made by others, remember to tag the guest diff maker.
Louis Cyphre
Easy -> Normal. Increase Aproach rate by 1-2
Normal --> Hard. It's hard, not normal, slider speed is not for normal
Hard --> Insane.

[Guest diff]
Please make Kiai mod same as in Easy Normal and Hard


Mapset seems for me good, don't want to nazi. ;)

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