1. Hard (3.39 stars, 256 notes)
2. Normal (1.63 stars, 181 notes)

Hushu wrote:

Looks nice, I'll give star when hard will be finished!

Edit!: Thank you for finishing! Just one more thing,... Had some difficulty with distances, is there a way you could decrease the distance?
Otherwise, Starred! The beatmap feels on time and the song is beautifull!!

Lybydose wrote:

This is almost impossible to time because it's sooooo slow, and both the guitar and vocals are off at times. It's pretty close though, so there really isn't much need to put a ton of timing sections for differences of a few ms that most people won't notice anyway.

Anyway try this:

Change offset to 779
Add offset at 194,800
Add offset at 195,276
Add offset at 195,835
Add offset at 197,313

Don't use 1/8 snap. Use 1/6 snap (or 1/3) for those notes. Also, some notes sound better using purple ticks on 1/3 snap, like at 00:58:241 (2,3,4,1) -

OzzyOzrock wrote:

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[Normal]
No clue why, but 00:08:163 (1,2,3) - the spacing there, the space between the two and three should be the same as the spacing between 1 and 2. Especially on the same combo. I dunno why, but I don't like that lol. There are a few parts with that. If you'd like, fix them. It doesn't matter much, it's just normal, and it's easy either way lol.

ok, fixed the nazi

Otherwise, good.

[Hard]

Hmm, there's nothing bad in matters of the flexibility of hard maps.


Both maps have a fair share of ugly sliders though. D:

Still, nice job

NatsumeRin wrote:

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[General]
display storyboard in front of combo fire. done

[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
00:57:778 (1,2,3,4) - 建议这样（4是上个3，2是上个23正中）这样4接后面的spacing会很奇怪
01:26:624 (2) - 头上也加whistle done
02:16:470 (1,2,3) - 23不要叠比较好？ done]

LKs wrote:

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normal

开头三个我认为可以降低10%的音量 因为本身歌曲那里有很适合的音色 soft-n反而不合

另外没什么了 要是还要加什么我觉得就是加一些音量线了
通过让同样的soft-n的不同音量改变 可能让音效更加柔和 比如一句歌词中做一个强-弱-强-次弱-强的变化
这种和缓的歌曲最好有一种让人随之"飘动"的感觉就最好了 要不然就会和缓的有些单调
这种15%,10%的强弱的变化确实比较隐蔽 不过我听这难度的时候有些地方确实感到有些生硬 比如[01:20:855]

[00:08:163] 这里我试着加了一下音量线 感觉会好些？
[attachment=0:65570]supercell - Yakusoku wo Shiyou (Colin Hou) [Normal].osu[/attachment:65570]

具体问题具体分析 大部分地方还是很合适的

[03:17:313] 这里加个Whistle呢? done

Hard

[03:17:313] 这里加个Whistle done

高速slider倒也可以用在这歌上 反而能减少hits不顺的感觉

star

IceBeam wrote:

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[Normal]
00:04:067 (1,2) - Huh,are they snapped? On 1/8? Why can't you just put then in white ticks?
00:27:548 - Whistles sound bad here.
00:37:701 (1) - Whistle?
01:05:394 (3,4,5,6) - Why spacing changed so suddenly? I'd never increase spacing in the easiest difficulty,but still,you have to point them out in New Combo due to new spacing. fixed
01:22:009 - Remove clap.
01:25:701 - ^ Same,this clap sounds rough and off-timed.

I may mistake,but a lot of objects seems off-timed to me,maybe first offset isn't perfectly correct or this songs uses multiple timing sections.

[Hard]
Nothing much to complain,except claps,they sound really bad to me,maybe change clap file to something else?

Of course,map is nicely made,and song is cute,but anyway,even despite it's 03:21:928 long,this map follows mostly lyrics,there's no straight rhytm.

Star.