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Satoru Kousaki - Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Vers

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JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月19日 at 23:22:42

Artist: Satoru Kousaki
Title: Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Version)
Source: Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu
Tags: melancholy sos dan nagato yuki asahina mikuru koizumi itsuki kyon
BPM: 126
Filesize: 18832kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Haruhi's Melancholy (4.93 stars, 237 notes)
  2. Itsuki's Magaare (4.37 stars, 166 notes)
  3. Mikuru's Relaxing Time (2.24 stars, 95 notes)
  4. YUKI.N.exe (5 stars, 329 notes)
Download: Satoru Kousaki - Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Version)
Download: Satoru Kousaki - Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Version) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd map.
plz download it with the video if possible > < thx!
老實說這張做到我吐血
Last edited by JauiPlaY , edited 21 times in total.
miss_dior
miss_dior
;)
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Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
团长团长团长团长团长团长团长团长团长
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
star@@
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Gomo Psivarh
:D

[Haruhi's Melancholy]

1'25''206 (6,8)这两个好像重叠了?

GOOD!
EnakoRin
EnakoRin
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spinner-circle.png考虑要不要换个，转着头晕- -
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relaxing time

0:13:777（3）减少repeat……不容易读出来
0:29:015（2）同上
0:30:920（4）new combo?
0:36:634（2）减少repeat……不容易读出来
0:41:872（1）去掉new combo?
0:42:825（2）new combo？
01:04:253（1）不和前面的123重叠？
01:09:015（3）减少repeat……不容易读出来
01:13:777（2）new combo?
01:15:682（3）new combo?
01:24:253（3）减少repeat……不容易读出来
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body shop
0:12:349（1,2,3）关掉GD重新排下
0:21:396（4）new combo?
0:31:396（3）new combo?
0:35:206（5）new combo?
0:42:349（1）没重叠好
0:42:587（2）关掉GD重新排下
0:48:063（6）new combo?
0:52:825（3）new combo?
0:58:063（4）关掉GD重新排下
01:02:349（5）new combo?
01:15:444（4）new combo?
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melancholy
0:12:825（8）new combo?
0:16:158（9）去掉repeat然后加一个circle在0:16:634
0:26:991（7）重叠在6上面？
0:50:920（1,2）感觉有点不合节奏
0:52:825（3）new combo?
01:08:061（1）不对称，重新画下
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exe
这个难度中用点形状比较好看的slider代替单调的弧线会好一些

0:29:730（4,5,6）如果不重叠的话，稍微错开一些
0:31:634（5）new combo?
0:38:063（6）new combo?
0:38:301（1）去掉new combo?
0:51:634（1）去掉new combo?
0:52:349（1）去掉new combo?
0:53:777（2）用1/8节奏的同样长度的repeat听起来会不会更好一点？

后面没做完，做完了我再来看看LOL
wanhyrzh
376 posts
Joined December 2009
wanhyrzh
fight. 8-)
Kamina
101 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamina
Haruhi :)
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
ohi >u<

General
Not really sure about this, but shouldn't the source be "Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuutsu" only? (without chan, I mean)

Mikuru's Relaxing
00:57:110 (2) - hmm add some shape to this slider, like this http://puu.sh/S0P
01:17:349 - instead of this break, add a spinner here (which starts at 01:17:587 and finishes at 01:19:015)

YUKI.N.exe
Approach Rate is too high imo. -1 tick?

That's all. Nice map ^.^
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
I don't see any problems with this map, it plays very well. ~Star
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
我的建议:

[General]


  • Source 是不是应该是 Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu
    对齐一下spinner-circle.png的中心 有点偏了
    建议所有难度最后的转盘都静音掉
    Combo分得有点乱
    最后的Kiai Time在01:34:730停止
    另外视频底下的字幕为什么是简体中文的…
[Mikuru's Relaxing Time]
这个难度里有许多无规律的Whistle 我建议还是把Whistle都加在重音上比较好

  • 00:14:730 (3,1,2,3): 建议Clap只加在1和3上就好了 要不听起来有点乱 其他难度也是
    00:15:206 (1,2,3): Clap和Whistle加在一起感觉不太好 建议去掉Whistle 把它们都加在重音上 与Clap错开
    01:25:206 (3,1,2,3): 同前面
[Itsuki's Magaare]

这个难度要是作为Normal的话有点偏难


[Haruhi's Melancholy]

没什么要说的


[YUKI.N.exe]

这个难度只是有些跳有些突然 幅度有点大 有点让人措手不急哈


不错的图 找不出太多问题 只是Hitsound还要有所改进

☆ STAR ☆
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Mikuru's Relaxing Time: Fine

Itsuki's Magaare: Fine

Haruhi's Melancholy:

01:09:968 (6) - New combo?

YUKI.N.exe:

00:16:158 (1,2,3) - 1 appears out due to stacking...move it right a bit
00:38:301 (1) - Too close to (6), but I think it plays fine anyway

Awesome map. :) *stars*
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
star~
Nice map!
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
YUKI.N.exe
00:19:253 (4) - remove clap
00:49:968 (9,10,11) - sounds bad. Try this :
SPOILER
If you agree, then add clap to the start of (10).
01:01:277 (4) - remove note
01:01:753 (7) - remove note

Other diffs are fine for me. Star
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
General:
Hello
Very cool spinner design :)
Kiai lags at beginning for a lot of Osu! players. Any chance of only one Kiai or making second and third Kiai one Kiai?

Easy:
Very nice...
1:17:587 - Add a note, finish sound.
Breaks shouldn't be so short. Remove?

Itsuki's Magaare:
0:39:015 - Some other hitsound.
1:15:682 - Louder hitsounds
1:27:944 - Possibly a note here

Haruhi's Melancholy
0:16:158 - Half way shorter. Louder hitsounds
1:11:515 - Add a note. Louder hitsounds

YUKI.N.exe
0:37:944 - I don't think this note should exist.
0:39:134 - Add a note, louder hitsounds
0:50:563 - 1/4 earlier or later.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Source: Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu

Mikuru's Relaxing Time

00:29:015(2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:33:301(3) - ^
00:36:634(6) - ^
00:40:444(2) - remove whistle
00:40:920(3) - add whsitle at the beginning
00:40:920(3) - remove sliderwhistle


Suggestions

00:14:730 (4) - add whistle,remove clap
00:15:682(2) - remove clap

Itsuki's Magaare

What is that?
ITs normal?...if so,i thinik that it should be a little hell for players

Suggestions

01:28:063(x) - add a circle with whistle
01:28:777(4) - del
01:29:968(x) - add a circle with whistle
01:30:682(3) - del

Haruhi's Melancholy

fine

YUKI.N.exe

01:20:325(5) - do not make (5) overlap with (7)

starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

忘记说了。。
skin里缺少了一个spinner-approachcircle
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

网速无能下不了video抱歉。

[General]
难度分布尴尬。第二难度远远超过了第一难度 （为数不少的1/4，跳，等等）。建议补难度
这mp3是本来就这样吗。。。结尾好突兀。。。
复制粘贴不吐你槽了……

[Mikuru...]
两个短break可以都删了。
01:02:825 (1,2,3) - 或许会建议你换个折返slider，毕竟叠的有点多。
01:17:587 - 加音
这个难度的水平不错。

[Itsuki...]
00:30:325 (2) - tick消音掉，这个tick不在音上。
00:43:301 (5) - 感觉上好像该往下点。。？
00:49:968 (6) - 开头和折返去掉whistle

[Haruhi...]
00:30:325 (3) - tick消音掉，这个tick不在音上。
00:50:920 (1,2) - 无关的扯一句。。。饿姐看到这个会开心吧。。。
01:03:063 (4,5) - 个人意见是移动感不要停。
01:16:634 (5) - finish?（可以降点音量）

[YUKI...]
为啥大写。。。
00:31:039 (2) - 就节奏上来讲这个挪前1/4怎样？
00:49:968 (9) - 这个尾clap换到10上。
00:53:777 (2) - 头+finish？
01:17:587 (1) - 这一串试下xxooxxooxoxox？（x=whistle, o=normal）
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Title: 涼宮ハルヒちゃんの憂鬱ギャルゲー版 自行翻译到罗马音吧 ;w; 改完标题记得清理一下.osb再上传、
  2. 这么严重的削波没问题么 这绝对影响身体健康了 OTL 换个好点的音源吧
  3. http://www.rayfile.com/zh-cn/files/da88fbf5-a01f-11de-b57f-0014221b798a/2ca2a849/ 自行转换成192kbps 测offset/timing集体平移什么的就不多说了 还有video offset +_+
  4. 少个spinner-approachcircle.png
[YUKI.N.EXE]:
  1. 00:14:730 (1,1,1,1) - FINISH, 前三个clap移除
  2. 00:16:277 (2,3) - clap
  3. 00:39:730 (2,3,4,5) - 不如老实叠起来
  4. 00:43:539 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  5. 01:34:730 (T) - 加note或者上一个slider加折返... 这里放个finish spinner从01:34:849起结束点不变
  6. 01:34:730 (1) - 好诡异的结末...好的 绝对得换mp3了
[Haruhi's Melancholy]:
  1. 00:14:730 (6) - new combo
  2. 00:14:730 (3) - 全finish 最后留个clap其他移除
  3. 01:01:277 (4) - 移除
  4. 01:34:253 (8) - 加折返 最后放finish spinner延后开始
[Itsuki's Magaare]:
  1. AR+1
  2. 00:14:730 (6,7,8,9) - clap换finish 最后一个起始加finish+clap
  3. 00:41:396 (4) - new combo
  4. 00:47:349 (2,3,4,5) - 一个Normal向diff里有2连...换slider
  5. 00:49:253 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  6. 01:09:968 (5,6,7) - 保持之前的spacing
  7. 01:21:158 (4) - 关grid snap调整下
[Mikuru's Relaxing Time]:
  1. 00:13:777 (3,1,2,3) - ...你懂的 和其他难度同
  2. 01:05:682 (3) - 关grid snap调整下
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yexiang_old
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yexiang_old
:D
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Mikuru's Relaxing Time
HP Drain Rate, Overall Diff and Approach Rate +1

Itsuki Magaare
01:28:063 - Add a note
01:29:968 - ^

Haruhi's Melancholy
Descrease the slider tick rate to 0.5
00:22:691 (7) - This slider's white tick sounds awful
00:30:325 (3) - ^

YUKI.N.exe
Fine~
The slider velocity is too high though
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