Bearizm wrote:

X

1. 00:59:436 - since you were following the vocals in the previous jumps, I'm going to question why this is empty. two taps gives less pressure to the white tick imo

I

1. 00:59:436 - same same

H

1. 01:02:318 - why not start a new repeat here? it's rare to see a repeat lasts this long. starting a repeat there would still have a repeat that's still repeats more than once, and the player might get tricked by the single-repeat of the first 1 tbh

N

1. 00:23:843 (3) - why not make this a 1/1 slider and put a circle in the end? better for the song, and the spread since your hard is spammed with jumps. naisu!
2. 00:34:690 (3) - ^ naisu!
3. 00:39:437 (2) - ^ and the same sounds in this part. naisu! (only for one part cuz i need pressure on 00:42:996 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 00:56:555 (1,2,3) - ^ really undermapped imo naisu!
5. 01:02:996 (1) - just make this 2 circles lol no XD
6. 01:03:673 (1) - god damn it man your normal is 2.07... these 3/2 sliders needs to be buffed. same as the other 3/2 sliders, i think it's much better if you make these into 1/1 sliders and a circle in the end. same applies to the same sounds, again. not here lo i think the kiai's pretty hard xd

E

1. 00:17:742 (1,3) - i have a feeling this can potentially be an issue. well u didnt notice this xdd! 00:12:487 (2,4) -
2. 01:22:740 (1) - i feel like this is too short.. just map this part lol spiners 4 life xd

General Feedback

1. there's nothing terribly bad or wrong with the map, but I feel like easy is WAY too easy, normal is undermapped, and hard is REALLY hard. imo you should just buff out easy and normal. made some changes to hard tbh

Good luck m8, sorry for the short mod, I couldn't find anything lol.

Side wrote:

Hoyl forgot to mod this LOL


[Extra]

Personal suggestion but I'd use HP7 cuz its 90 seconds so farmers won't care for grinding it anyway. what7

00:03:505 (2) - ctrl+left this two times (grid snap off) to fix blanket :v naisu!
00:22:657 - Would be nice if this was a clickable object instead but ofc it was probably intensional since it was done in other parts as well. Still if you do prefer that then make sure to change for the others as well. intended
00:59:436 - Could definitely see a note here at x:497 y:256 since its following the vocals. Plus works better with the jumps. doesn't work better with the jumps ince each pause between the jumps is 3/2, which i continue. plus 2 note s would give les impact to the stronger one after
01:02:996 (1,2) - make these two normal sample instead of just addition since it has that drum sound too. naisu!
01:09:096 - Personally I don't like how the volume drops from 70% to 40% even if it increases it just removes that intense feeling from the loudness. The music doesn't get quieter and I don't feel it fully represents the increase of the choir in the background. naisu!

[Insane]

00:59:436 - Similar suggestion as the extra. Maybe have the note at 00:59:436 - slightly offstacked over 00:59:097 (4) - and then 00:59:606 (1) - offstacked at 00:58:928 (3) - or something. d no
01:01:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Same suggestion of the hitsounds for 01:02:996 (1,2) - but regarding the 1/2 single tap before that idk. Feels pretty lacking even if its just an insane there's room for emphasis here. Definitely could see some small jumps into the bigger ones at 01:02:996 (1,2) - dont want it to be too complex here
Make sure to copy over the hitsound/volume suggestions from the extra. naisu!


[Hard]

Pretty much just make sure to apply any hitsound or volume things mentioned in the previous diffs since they were copied over. naisu!

01:01:809 (1) - I guess you'd rather this be simple but I think this would be more interesting if it was two kick sliders with the 2nd one starting at 01:02:487 - maybe something like this nah explained before
01:21:808 (2) - Move to x:298 y:119 for better blanket LOL ok no nazi stuff naisu!

Also hitsounds and blah naisu!


[Normal]

No real issues just apply the hitsound naisu!

[Easy]

OD2.5 for that spread consistency :^) ok lo
01:02:996 (1) - Even if it is an easy I think this could still do well as a 1/2 slider to get both drum sounds otherwise it just feels noticeably empty. Could do something like this maybe or other options ofc. The slider will vanish before 01:05:028 (3) - appears so there is no visual overlap in game. nope would be weird in an easy with 99% 2/1 spacing lol
01:28:079 (1) - I know its an easy but I am SO tempted to put this note in the center of those sliders hnnnnng xd

Hitsounds and what not naisu!


Overall set's good to go couldn't find much sorry for the short mod. Hope it helps. Good luck!

VINXIS wrote:

Can you source your backgrounds for once?

General

1. hajime mashou......................................... naisu!

ez

1. y the fuk r u using mor than 1 sv and mor than 1 ds -_ naisu!

nrmsl

1. y the fuk r u using mor than 1 sv and mor than 1 ds -_ naisu!

hard

1. 01:11:639 (4) - put this higher lik 43/229 thx eat a dick

insne..

1. 00:22:318 (1) - u sud mak it 3/4 or smth and hav a cicl ont he big whit tik Cx eat a dick
2. 00:59:436 - add a note here since u lov to map to vocalz eat a dick

extr.

1. 01:18:757 (3,4,5) - this plays rlly werid in the stream.. i brek here evrytim.. naisu!

hi quality mod

Spaghetti wrote:

Extra:
00:13:843 (1,2,3,4) - these linear jumps dont rlly fit with the section coz every other jump pattern mapped to this is jumpy so d >jumps, anyway thats the whole point cuz i wanna make this have a different effect than a jump
00:29:098 (5) - ctrl g plays way better wh no
00:29:437 (1,2,3) - squigly wgh
00:30:793 (1) - ctrl g is cool here too it would break the copypaste flip
00:31:810 (5) - ^ whdg
quality mod so far
00:32:148 (1) - woh this was like rlly out of the blue id space out the last piece of the section before it so it kinda builds up to this and it isnt so sudden well the music is sudden xd
00:42:996 (1) - ^ holy shit fuckigjn notch hell x)
00:59:436 - ignoring this vocal is kinda triggering me since this whole part before the spinner is mapped only to the vocals no1 understand mse
01:17:740 (1) - ctrl g is pretty g iot would break the whole theme of the kiai

Insane:
00:14:521 (1) - kinda gya that this slider lacks the emphasis u put on the rest id space it out a bit changed su mstuf
id apply the thing i said about the huge sv changes here too
00:22:318 (1) - the flow direction change here is so bait hw ol yheja
00:59:436 - u kno n0

Hard:
00:11:471 - why tf did u not end the spinner here hello????? recovery
00:59:436 - yh d

Normal:
01:18:079 (2,3,4) - for this id just make the a repeating 1/2 slider, move 4 to the red tick behind it, and add a note to the white tick after it. sounds much better and may be a bit easier to play consistency with 01:18:588 (3,4) - and i dont see hwo its remotely easier to play lo

Easy:
00:09:776 (1) - wouldnt thios be better as a spinner for newer players, itll help them learn how to spin :d:D;:D;d recuvry