1. Easy (2,71 stars, 99 notes)
2. Hard (4,84 stars, 210 notes)
3. Magica (5 stars, 305 notes)
4. Normal (4,15 stars, 132 notes)
5. Pheon's Taiko (4,83 stars, 484 notes)

aston wrote:

Magica :
- +1 on Circle Size, skin makes it difficult to see circles, especially with that bg.

aston wrote:

- No kiai moments.

aston wrote:

- 00:05:760 (1) - 00:07:920 (2); differences in spacing.

aston wrote:

- 01:09:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i'd say spacing too, but it seems like last minute jump kind of thing. Up to middle isn't the same spacing as side to side.

aston wrote:

- 01:15:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these had me going "wut", since you were following vocal lines till this part, it was odd. Could've been better mapped here.

aston wrote:

Normal :
- No Kiai moments, but nothing other than that.

Easy :
- ^

aston wrote:

Normal and Easy were well mapped. Also like the song and good work~
Star~ 3:

1. hit50, hit100, etc. A lot of players hate this because it's too big and will delete it. How about making something like this http://puu.sh/Yk1 ? (but don't take this one, bad quality )
2. You should remove the audio from the video.
3. There's two .osb files in the folder. Remove both of them.

1. 00:10:560 (3) - The end of the slider is wrong, it should be at the red tick before.
2. 00:12:000 (2) - Same here, should be at the red tick before.
3. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break.
4. The end of 01:07:200 (3) should be at the same place than the start of 01:09:120 (1) ( something like this http://puu.sh/Yl7)

1. Overall difficulty is the same as in the Easy... how about +1?
2. 00:03:840 (4) - New combo here?
3. 00:06:240 (3) - This slider is under the note before, it's not very nice, how about 1 grid down?
4. 00:07:680 (4) - New combo here?
5. 00:10:560 (2,3,4) - That's not really nice How about this? http://puu.sh/Ylp And as you can see (4) is wrong, should be on the red tick before, again. Also you should add 1 or 2 whistle on this slider.
6. 00:24:960 (1) - Add a finish at the start and a whistle at the end?
7. 00:26:400 (2) - A whistle at the end?
8. 00:32:640 (1) - ^
9. 00:34:080 (2) - ^
10. 00:36:480 (5) - 1 grid down? (to stack under 00:34:080 (2) )
11. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break.
12. 00:42:240 (1) - Add a finish at the start?
13. 00:49:920 (1) - ^

1. What the hell are those difficulty settings?
   Approach rate 9 is obviously too much on a 125bpm map. -2 or -1 at least
   Hp Drain is big too I think, should be -1 at least
   Overall difficulty... I'm not a pro, but having 80% of acc with a FC while I have more than 95% usually on other maps... should be -1 or -2.
2. 00:03:360 (7) - Move the last point of this slider 1 grid to the left to stack it over 00:04:320 (4)
3. 00:09:360 (6) - Spacing is wrong here, you should stack it over 00:10:320 (5) -
4. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break.
5. 00:50:880 (5) - Reshape the slider a little, the end should be stacked under 00:51:600 (7) or stack this note under the slider (disable the grid snap if you want to do this)
6. 01:12:960 (1) - Maybe end at 01:14:400 ? Sounds better to me.
7. 01:14:400 - You must remove this break.
8. 01:21:000 (2) - Move it 1 grid down
9. 01:22:320 (3,1,2) - Move them 1 grid up

footix31 wrote:

[General]

1. hit50, hit100, etc. A lot of players hate this because it's too big and will delete it. How about making something like this http://puu.sh/Yk1 ? (but don't take this one, bad quality ) Will make them a bit smaller.
2. You should remove the audio from the video. Audio is separated from the video, but some players play the audio file with the video if they have the same name.
3. There's two .osb files in the folder. Remove both of them. Fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:10:560 (3) - The end of the slider is wrong, it should be at the red tick before. This is intended, so the slider finishes as the phrase she sings finishes. I suppose I might reconsider at some point but at the moment I think this is better.
2. 00:12:000 (2) - Same here, should be at the red tick before. Same thing as the above.
3. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break. Fixed.
4. The end of 01:07:200 (3) should be at the same place than the start of 01:09:120 (1) ( something like this http://puu.sh/Yl7) Fixed.

[Normal]

1. Overall difficulty is the same as in the Easy... how about +1? Fixed.
2. 00:03:840 (4) - New combo here? I don't feel that this would fit, the entire combo kinda returns back, so I will leave it as it is now.
3. 00:06:240 (3) - This slider is under the note before, it's not very nice, how about 1 grid down? Fixed, repositioned a bit.
4. 00:07:680 (4) - New combo here? Same as the above.
5. 00:10:560 (2,3,4) - That's not really nice How about this? http://puu.sh/Ylp And as you can see (4) is wrong, should be on the red tick before, again. Also you should add 1 or 2 whistle on this slider. Same situation as easy. Added a whistle to (2) instead, since this would make it go nice with the rhythm.
6. 00:24:960 (1) - Add a finish at the start and a whistle at the end? Done.
7. 00:26:400 (2) - A whistle at the end? Done.
8. 00:32:640 (1) - ^ Done.
9. 00:34:080 (2) - ^ Done.
10. 00:36:480 (5) - 1 grid down? (to stack under 00:34:080 (2) ) Repositioned a bit, 1 grid down was impossible due to distance snapping, but they are stacked now.
11. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break. Fixed.
12. 00:42:240 (1) - Add a finish at the start? Done.
13. 00:49:920 (1) - ^ Done.

[Magica]

1. What the hell are those difficulty settings?
   Approach rate 9 is obviously too much on a 125bpm map. -2 or -1 at least
   Hp Drain is big too I think, should be -1 at least
   Overall difficulty... I'm not a pro, but having 80% of acc with a FC while I have more than 95% usually on other maps... should be -1 or -2. Reduced AR and OD by 1. Reducing it further makes this a bit too easy for an insane IMO, but getting near 100% shouldn't be as hard now.
   Also, I think that HP drain is fine, it allows 3 misses in a row without getting fully drained and you're able to keep and slowly replenish HP while you continue.
2. 00:03:360 (7) - Move the last point of this slider 1 grid to the left to stack it over 00:04:320 (4) Fixed.
3. 00:09:360 (6) - Spacing is wrong here, you should stack it over 00:10:320 (5) This is hard to do, the spacing follows the combo, moving (6) would result in inconsistent spacing in the combo, and moving (5) would make the pattern look really weird. Will think of something maybe, leaving it as it is now.
4. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break. Fixed.
5. 00:50:880 (5) - Reshape the slider a little, the end should be stacked under 00:51:600 (7) or stack this note under the slider (disable the grid snap if you want to do this) Fixed, didn't need to disable snap.
6. 01:12:960 (1) - Maybe end at 01:14:400 ? Sounds better to me. Making this would feel much too different from the easy and normal maps, also making this map really short IMO.
7. 01:14:400 - You must remove this break. Fixed.
8. 01:21:000 (2) - Move it 1 grid down. Why? They make a perfect triangle, and the rest of the notes are spaced perfectly (look here)
9. 01:22:320 (3,1,2) - Move them 1 grid up. Same as above.

It's good for a first map but you need to improve your skills if you want to rank it :>
Thanks. Being my first map it's obvious I need improvements .

lolcubes wrote:

footix31 wrote:

00:10:560 (3) - The end of the slider is wrong, it should be at the red tick before. This is intended, so the slider finishes as the phrase she sings finishes. I suppose I might reconsider at some point but at the moment I think this is better.

lolcubes wrote:

footix31 wrote:

[*]01:12:960 (1) - Maybe end at 01:14:400 ? Sounds better to me. Making this would feel much too different from the easy and normal maps, also making this map really short IMO.

lolcubes wrote:

footix31 wrote:

[*]01:21:000 (2) - Move it 1 grid down. Why? They make a perfect triangle, and the rest of the notes are spaced perfectly (look here)

footix31 wrote:

...What? It doesn't sounds better at all to me. I'll ask to a MAT to be sure and tell you after if it's right or not.

I suppose that our opinions are a bit different on this matter, which is not bad. As I said, might change it if too many people think it's weird.

footix31 wrote:

How could it make the map short since there's nothing to remove? It just make the spinner longer. By the way the break after the spinner is still here.

footix31 wrote:

Uh... the (2) was not on the same line as the (1) when I looked at it. Seems like you fixed it.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~General~
- I recommend that you use the kiai times in this points : start : 00:42:240 , finish : 01:14:880
in all diffies
I don't think kiai is necessary on this map. However since more people suggest that I use it, I have placed it on 01:12:960 - 01:24:480, since this feels like the culmination of the song. On easy and normal this might feel like wasted kiai time a little, so I might change this in the future.


~Easy~
- the spacing is not the best, you should fix it and put it with more symmetry Don't really know what do you mean by that, if you mean that the sliders and circles follow "ugly" patterns, then I have changed this. Thanks.
00:10:560 (3) : sounds better when it ends in 00:11:520 This would mean it doesn't follow the highest focus (voice), however I did tweak it a bit using footix31's advice, but snapping it on a 1/8, need a MAT to confirm this.
00:12:000 (2) : ^ 00:13:440 , about having more symmetry in sliders Fixed, sliders should be more pretty now.


~Normal~
00:11:040 (4) : sounds better when it ends in 00:11:520 and fix it the spacing This would mean it doesn't follow the highest focus (voice), however I did tweak it a bit using footix31's advice, but snapping it on a 1/8, need a MAT to confirm this.
00:32:160 : whistle ? Fixed.

~Magica~
-wow xD , the distance spacing is very high , but should lower the "Circle Size" place it in 2
D:
Fixed.

star and good luck
thanks

James2250 wrote:

-This song doesn't really need a break, but if you want to have a small one it would make more sense to have it near the middle of the map not at the end Well, while the player doesn't need the break, the nature of the song suggests to stop there a little, I don't see how to do the last part without removing it completely and then I would feel like the song is too short.
-Include a hitcircle overlay and a hitcircle approach circle in your folder as you have a custom hitcircle used there Fixed.
-Tick rate 2 doesn't seem to work too badly for these difficulties if you want to try it out Used tickrate 2 for all maps now.
-Make sure to include a hit0 with your set in the folder (even if it is just the default one) Fixed.
-Try and only keep 1 osb file in your folder, it seems to have 2 atm (no big deal) I already did remove it before, no idea how it got there again, should be fixed again. Thanks for checking.
-The middle of your hp bar seem odd..(try looking at it when testing) Wow, what a major oversight, thanks, fixed now (although a bit lazy fix but it looks good enough )
-Don't have kiai during a break, it doesn't work well when playing Kiai removed.

Easy:
-Slightly hard for an Easy at the moment, might be a good idea to decrease the slider velocity to make it more beginner friendly Fixed. This also resulted in major changes in the map since I had to remap half of it cause it contained sliders mostly.
-Try and add some more hitsounds at places, it sounds too empty in places Fixed. I think.
00:34:080 (3,5) - avoid too many overlaps to make the map look neater Due to the changes in the map this no longer applies, but I did follow the advice, no more silly overlaps.
00:42:240 (1,2,3,5) - this pattern seems kind of close together Should be okay now after the changes.
00:46:080 (1,5) - stack things like this if possible Same as the above.

Normal:
Could look slightly more organized but not too bad in general Currently no plans to change it, unless something mindshattering pops up

Magica:
-I would just name this Hard or Insane as the other difficulty names are standard I would prefer to keep it as it is, atleast for now, maybe easy and normal might receive a rename once I figure out a clever name.
-HP Drain is slightly high, it isn't terrible but I still suggest -1 Since you're not the only one who thinks this, decreased the HP drain by 1.
00:04:800 (6) - add a whistle here to follow your pattern Actually the pattern is kind of 1+1, this means that the first part has more "key sounds" than the other one, and then repeats in the next pattern, so I will leave it as it is (listen to it closely a couple of times, it's easy to catch)
00:08:640 (4) - add whistle to the start Same as the above.
00:42:720 (4,5) - space out more Fixed.
Those gaps at the end are pretty harsh considering the hp drain HP drain got reduced, should be less harsh (although harsh sounds fine to me! )

For your 1st map the maps are actually nicely done, however too many general errors for me to star atm
Call me back after main fixes and I should be able to star~
Thanks, will do.