yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Mok

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Mok 2011-01-25T19:55:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 3 marzo 2011 at 21:00:35

Artist: yoshiki*lisa
Title: Destin Histoire (TV Size)
Source: GOSICK
Tags: destiny story victorique kazuya victorica numuto
BPM: 166
Filesize: 17284kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,44 stars, 168 notes)
Normal (2,96 stars, 118 notes)
Taiko (4,83 stars, 404 notes)

Download: yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire (TV Size)
Download: yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Opening from GOSICK. Hope you'll like it ^_^

Well...
[Normal]: Done!
[Hard]: Done!
[Taiko Oni]: Done!

That's all guys! Moved to Pending!

Last edited by Mok 2011-03-03T20:00:44+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

Kurai

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Kurai 2011-01-26T15:40:45+00:00

☆ ~ General ~ ☆

Offset 569

☆ ~ Normal ~ ☆

AR+1
00:19:018 (7,8) - Move 1 grid left for symetry
00:24:801 (4) - This slider should begin 1/2 later
00:45:207 (2) - Move 1/2 later (and add a circle here)

☆ ~ Hard ~ ☆

00:53:898 (11) - New combo ?
00:54:621 (13) - The end of this slider don't fit the song :/
01:10:163 (7) - Move 1/2 earlier
01:22:091 (5) - New combo

Star~

Mok

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Mok 2011-01-26T16:00:06+00:00

Thanks! Fix'd

Crimmi

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Crimmi 2011-02-01T18:18:07+00:00

yeah we talked about this in IRC and there's nothing wrong to me, *Star*

Mastodonio

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Mastodonio 2011-02-05T13:05:58+00:00

Hello

General:
00:59:665 - I think your first KIAI mod has to end here
01:01:291 - and the second KIAI mod has to start here

Normal:
00:11:231 - it sounds better if you add here a note
00:24:785 - well,I think that it is better to start this slider from : 00:24:605
00:26:593 - add a note?
00:50:087 - better to end this slider in : 00:50:629,I think
00:52:436 - put away repeat slider and make here just a simple slider
00:52:978 - add a note?

Hard:
00:45:568 - delete circle
00:58:219 - this slider is non-rhytmical,I guess. better to put here some circles instead of this slider

That is all,what I can say

I hope it wil help you

Star!

Mok

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Mok 2011-02-05T13:22:13+00:00

I'm not going to change anything, thanks!

Neko_Ray

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Neko_Ray 2011-02-11T23:54:06+00:00

aaaa neko-mod! :3

Normal
00:43:219 (5): at 00:43:038
00:43:581 (6): at 00:43:400

Hard
00:45:930 (7): at 00:46:111

and...

Disoy

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Disoy 2011-02-13T05:48:22+00:00

(Normal)
00:24:605- add a note??
00:52:436 (1) - 00:52:797 delete - add a note 00:52:978
00:58:942 (4,5) - two circle change a slider?

(Hard)
is fine^ ^

(Oni)
sorry...
I can't mod Taiko..

Mok

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Mok 2011-02-13T15:41:41+00:00

Sorry, i will keep my choice.

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2011-02-13T20:50:26+00:00

[Norma]

00:06:171 - put ^
00:11:412 - put ^
00:12:677 -New combo [If you wanna]
00:13:219 -New combo [If you wanna]
00:16:111 - put ^
00:23:340 - put ^
00:43:219 - New combo [If you wanna]
00:43:581 - New combo [if you wanna]
00:11:773 - New combo [if you wanna]
00:12:858 - New combo [if you wanna]
00:13:400 - New combo [if you wanna]
01:16:291 - New combo [if you wanna]
01:16:834 - New combo [if you wanna]
01:17:376 - New combo [if you wanna]
01:17:737 - New combo [if you wanna]
01:22:075 - Note to 01:22:225
01:22:797 - Note to 01:22:978

[hard]

00:06:171 - put ^
00:12:677 - note to 00:12:496
00:13:219 - note to 00:12:858
00:13:129 - add Spinner until to 00:13:942 [if you wanna] or put slider (I think spinee is beste because this is hard

)
00:23:340 - put ^
00:43:761 - put ^

that all

and hell star <3

Inamaru

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Inamaru 2011-02-15T10:59:36+00:00

Prafo mokkino

aston_old

aston_old 2011-02-15T14:33:45+00:00

Hard :
- 01:10:508 (8) - Spacing
- 00:49:002 (1,2) - Jump, I hope? Extend it a bit, since it's your hardest diff.
- Maybe Spinner at end?
- Preview point not set - Do this immediately.

Normal :
- Preview point not set
- Nothing else

I can't mod taiko, I'm not good at it~
Good map, star~ 3:

Celycchan

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Celycchan 2011-02-15T14:40:31+00:00

Great anime&song.
staaar ~

Sakura

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Sakura 2011-02-15T17:07:45+00:00

[Oni]
Slider speed 1.40 for Taiko please D:
00:20:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ddk then kkd instead?
00:22:617 (10,11,12) - kkd instead?
00:37:075 (14) - Big katsu?
01:11:231 (35) - Regular don instead?
And as another suggestion could you please rename it to Taiko Oni? XD

[Hard]
00:49:002 (1,2) - This jump looks harsh, consdering the player will be unprepared for it as the whole map and song dont give that kind of jumpy feeling, wont ask you to remove but at least tone it down.
01:02:195 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - The notes here are quite a bit clustered...

[Normal]
01:21:532 (1,2,3) - This timing distance can be quite confusing for new players.

Your maps have improved since I last checked them, pretty nice job Good Luck!~

CXu

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CXu 2011-02-21T19:20:23+00:00

[Normal]
00:14:303 (1,2) - Whistles?
00:15:026 (1) - 00:24:785 (4) - Have whistle only at every long-white tick?
00:20:087 (10) - Finish?
00:26:954 (2) - From here on, try a clap-pattern instead?
00:39:243 (2) - Finish at the end instead?
00:43:219 (5,6) - Move to red tick before?
00:53:159 (2) - Move to white tick before? If so, change 00:52:436 (1) - to a stack of 2?

[Hard]
00:16:111 (2) - Remove whistle
00:17:918 (4) - Add whistle
00:19:183 (8) - Remove whistle
00:22:255 (2) - Add whistle
00:26:954 (2) - Clap-pattern instead?
00:30:207 (3) - Remove whistle on repeat
00:32:014 (1) - Remove whislte
00:33:641 (7) - ^
00:33:822 (8) - Add whistle
00:34:183 (9) - Remove at beginning
00:39:062 (3) - Claps? :3
00:40:508 (4) - ^
00:39:605 (1) - Finish
00:41:050 (1) - ^
00:44:303 (2,3,4,5,6) - This part is a bit weird to play. I suggest something like this instead? http://puu.sh/110B
00:49:002 (1,2) - This jump is a bit sudden imo ><
00:50:990 (4,6,8,10) - Remove whistles? You don't have them later in the chorus
01:00:388 (3) - Remove whistle and add finish at 01:00:930 (6)?
01:13:942 - Feels more natural to have the slider start here
01:16:834 - ^

Also, you could add a spinner at the end of both diffs if you want^^

I'm horrible at taiko, so can't mod that >.<

Anyways, the map's nice :3 Star~~

Mok

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Mok 2011-02-21T19:41:47+00:00

Sorry, not going to change anything ç_ç

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2011-02-23T06:12:05+00:00

I said I will do this mod, so here it is.

Offset: It seems to work, but the song seems to vary a lot in offset, so I would like someone else to check it if possible.

Tags: Is "Kazuya" really needed in the tags. Why not Victorique's last name? Also technically Victorica is the official name used in the anime. Personally, I would only put Victorique's name in the tags just because she is the only important person in the show xD

Normal:
Nazi/Cleanliness mod:
01:17:737 (2,3) - rotate this about 1, so 3 is not overlapped by 01:16:291 (1,1)

Hard:
Normal mod:
00:49:002 (1,2) - The size of the jump was a little unexpected for me (just saying because it throws me off slightly)
00:50:990 (4,5,6,7) - no symmetry? It seems like you wanted symmetry here but in the end, you broke it. Here is a screenshot of what I did:

SPOILER

Nazi/Cleanliness mod:
00:21:532 (2) - make this a bit more symmetric (moving the right anchor point 1 grid left works xD)
I could nazi a good chunk of your sliders, but I think that was the only one I noticed during gameplay. Oh well, might notice more next time xD

Taiko Oni: fine

===================
Decent map overall, nice and symmetrical xD. Mostly I want to fix that one symmetry section in hard and change the tags. Can't think of much else to say. *insert Victorique laugh here* Star!

Edit: Some code for normal

88,320,14484,1,4
168,208,15026,6,0,B|208:264|320:264|352:192,1,200,2|0
256,104,16291,1,2
256,104,16472,1,0
176,64,16834,2,0,B|128:96,2,50,0|2|0
256,104,17556,2,0,B|256:160,2,50,2|0|2
336,64,18279,2,0,B|392:96,2,50,0|2|0
334,154,19002,1,0
256,104,19364,1,2
178,154,19725,1,0

cesc

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cesc 2011-02-23T21:30:00+00:00

Ciaoss Mok, volevo moddare una mappa di un amico <3

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[General]
- puoi rimuovere l'.osb dalla cartella

[Normal]
- mod Tecnico:
00:25:870 (1,2,3,4) - usa il repeat ancora una volta nel primo slider, quindi avvicina i beat 2,3 pur lasciandoli centrali, allora usa il reverse nello slider (4), fallo partire a 00:27:677 e aggiungi ancora una volta un repeat. Risultato
00:54:966 (6,1) - anche con la NewCombo, lo spacing potrebbe risultare poco chiaro
01:22:075 (2,3) - Io ti consiglio di eliminarli e di inserire uno spinner che parta da dove si trovava il 2 fino a 01:24:424
- mod HitSounds:

SPOILER

00:05:809 (2) - rimuovi Finish
00:06:352 (1) - aggiungi Finish
00:06:713 (2) - rimuovi Finish a inizio Slider
00:06:713 (2) - rimuovi Finish a fine Slider
00:11:593 (3) - rimuovi Finish
01:03:641 (5) - rimuovi Finish
00:14:484 (2) - rimuovi Finish
00:19:725 (9) - rimuovi Whistle
00:20:087 (10) - aggiungi Whistle
00:22:978 (4) - aggiungi Whistle
00:23:520 (1) - rimuovi Whistle
00:39:243 (2) - rimuovi Finish a inizio Slider
00:39:966 (3) - rimuovi Finish nel revers e aggiungilo a fine Slider
00:43:581 (6) - rimuovi Finish
00:43:942 (1) - aggiungi Finish a inizio Slider e rimuovi quello alla fine
00:45:388 (2) - aggiungi Finish a inizio Slider e rimuovi quello alla fine
00:49:544 (1) - rimuovi Finish
01:01:653 (2) - aggiungi Finish a inizio Slider
01:07:075 (2) - aggiungi Finish a inizio Slider
01:10:508 (7) - rimuovi Finish a inizio Slider

- mod NewCombo
00:06:352 (1) - rimuovi
00:06:713 (2) - aggiungi
00:09:243 (1) - rimuovi
00:09:605 (2) - aggiungi
00:12:677 (1,1,1) - rimuovi
00:19:002 (7) - aggiungi
00:20:448 (1) - rimuovi
00:20:809 (2) - aggiungi
00:23:520 (1) - rimuovi
00:29:123 (6) - aggiungi
00:32:014 (1) - rimuovi
00:32:376 (2) - aggiungi
00:37:436 (1) - rimuovi
00:39:243 (2) - aggiungi
00:41:050 (5) - aggiungi
00:45:207 (1) - rimuovi
01:13:400 (1,1) - rimuovi
01:14:303 (2) - aggiungi
01:16:291 (1,1) - rimuovi

[Hard]
- mod Tecnico:
01:22:135 (1,2,3) - Questi io li farei iniziare a 01:22:135, quindi mappati in 1/3
-mod Hitsound:

SPOILER

00:05:809 (2) - rimuovi Finish
00:06:352 (1) - rimuovi Finish a fine Slider
00:11:231 (4) - aggiungi Finish a inizio Slider ed elimina a fine Slider
00:12:135 (1) - aggiungi Finish
00:19:002 (7) - aggiungi Whistle
00:19:183 (8) - rimuovi Whistle
00:19:364 (9) - rimuovi Whistle (solo nel corpo dello Slider)
00:21:532 (2) - aggiungi Whistle sul reverse dello Slider
00:24:062 (5) - rimuovi Whistle
00:24:243 (6) - aggiungi Whistle
00:24:966 (8) - aggiungi Whistle anche a inizio Slider
00:33:460 (6) - aggiungi Whistle
00:33:641 (7) - rimuovi Whistle
00:33:822 (8) - aggiungi Whistle
00:35:267 (2) - aggiungi Whistle
00:35:629 (3) - rimuovi Whistle
00:35:809 (4) - aggiungi Whistle
00:49:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - in questo pattern ci sono dei whistle che risultano isolati dal resto del ritornello!
00:54:424 (2) - rimuovi Finish
00:54:605 (3) - aggiungi Finish
00:55:870 (3) - rimuovi Finish
00:56:050 (4) - aggiungi Finish
00:58:219 (8) - rimuovi Finish a inizio Slider
01:01:111 (1) - rimuovi Finish a inizio Slider e aggiungine uno a fine Slider
01:05:629 (7) - aggiungi Finish a inizio Slider
01:07:075 (3) - aggiungi Finish
01:07:436 (4) - rimuovi Finish
01:08:159 (3) - aggiungi Finish
01:08:520 (4) - rimuovi Finish
01:12:858 (1) - aggiungi Finish

-mod NewCombo
00:12:677 (1,1) - rimuovi
00:18:641 (6) - aggiungi
00:24:062 (5) - aggiungi
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Spero di esserti stato d'aiuto almeno un pò, nice map! +star

Mok

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Mok 2011-02-24T15:41:35+00:00

Modified some of both, i've ignored hitsounds and newcombo from cesc because i totally hate them -.-'

Anto

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Anto 2011-02-24T15:55:54+00:00

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