1. Insane (4,97 stars, 656 notes)
2. Normal (2,94 stars, 281 notes)

DragonSparta wrote:

Normal
Hp Drain +1 no
00:48:801 (2) - One grid right no
01:19:542 (1) - Remove NC removed in 01:20:282 (2)
01:21:764 (1,2) - One grid left no

Insane
00:09:912 (3,4) - One grid up mm ok
01:01:949 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Make this stream more round-ish like in 01:13:801 no
01:05:468 (1,2,3,4) - No Warning? no
01:17:120 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no
I'll mod the rest later

KenezzEdward wrote:

Bakastom~
Aqui mi mod

General
-Pensaste en poner a todas las chicas del juego en los comboburst?, a mi parecer quedaría mejor : D
-Como siempre ame tu SB y tu Skin~
-Baka baka baka

Normal

-00:04:727 (1) - Finish al inicio? no
-00:18:060 (1) - ^ no
-01:54:357 (1) - Whistle al inicio? ok

Insane

-00:04:727 (1) - Finish al inicio? whistle
-00:34:357 (1) - ^ ok
-00:41:394 (5) - Whistle al Final? ok
-02:18:431 (2) - ^ ok

Nada más que agregar, es casi perfecto! xD
Bueno bueno ahora mi Kenezz's Star~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~~

General;
- Todo bien aqui ~

Skin;
- Estas son todas sugerencias y opiniones para "mejorar" el skin aunque ya esta bastante bueno por eso lo de sugerencias xD
- El cursor seria lindo de color celeste, pero de ahi me vino a la cabeza que no seria bueno al dar vueltas en el spinner, mas bien un color naranja ?? Bueno la cosa es que no me gusta mucho el color actual :T
- En el spinner-metre cambiale el color de los petalos a rosado como en el fondo ??
- El scorebar-bg y el scorebar-colour se mezclan demasiado, mejor haz que uno sea de un color mas claro ??
las tomare en consideracion, pero primero vere q opinan los demas.

Normal;
- 01:11:764 >> Un nuevo combo no es necesario aqui creo toy siguiendo los combos previos asi q no
- 01:47:690 >> El nuevo combo deberia empezar aqui -----^
- 04:16:394 (3,4) >> Puedes hacer que esten un poco mas separados ?? Quiero decir que no se toquen xD oks
- Buena diff, todo bien, muy bien <:

Insane;
- 02:38:801 >> Align better with (4) mm ok

* Star ~ Buen SB como siempre >w<

Faust wrote:

Lol, "Don't ask for guest diff"

I see this another well-constructed and panned out map. It's got pretty much everything. Your directing is as usual, impeccable.
By now, I'd have imagined you played all the games already and such. Multitude of elements in the folder, might be your trademark or something lol.

I would suggest having another combo colour for the map, though it's likely you settled on only 2 with a purpose in mind, it's all good anyway, the candy-pink tone of the slider-borders/edges fill in the otherwise gap in variety and lends a nice solid look of consistency.

What I like most about it is the feeling of harmony between the song and the beatmap itself. The blank pages near the end I particularly like, it was as if I was meant to reflect with appreciation (whether it was intended or not), it was nice.

Top-notch playing experience I say. Well done!

Unfortunately, I do not have anything to add on Normal.

Insane: The skin actually makes you think the hit-area for the hitcircles is bigger. Or maybe it could just be me, because the colours you chose make it look "fuller". You could say it's a bit deceiving ^ ^;.
Quite tame for an Insane, but I take it you put into consideration the less-skilled playerbase. That is admirable.

- 01:28:616 - At first glance, it looks tricky, but surprisingly, it works out pretty fine.

Nothing of concern, neither do I have anymore suggestions to give.

Long post with nothing in it that you'd call a "mod" but consider the feedback as consolation for what I can't give.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
epilepsy warning... plz! (add lead-in if you do so) rdy
offset: about -7 imo. uhmm I think than the actual offset is fine
diff spread is ok, though it would be appreciated if you have a Hard (i can't fc Insane :<) too much work =w=

[Normal]
00:07:320 (2) - whistle? no
00:38:801 (3) - remove this single whistle? (or maybe add 00:41:764 (3) too?) added in 3
01:06:579 (2,3,1) - maybe this would be better..? well something like that
[attachment=1:c4789]59.png[/attachment:c4789]
01:15:838 (1) - remove sliderwhistle ups, ok
01:49:357 (4) - remove clap at the 2nd reverse. (red line) no
03:13:060 (3) - clap at the end? no
03:25:838 (2) - miss a clap here? yep
03:41:023 (3) - should has a clap at the end? (you do so in the kiais before.) yep I miss it u_u and I check it like 4 times =w=
03:45:468 (1) - remove finish uhm no
04:12:134 - 04:13:986 - maybe remove this short break. no :<
04:16:394 (3) - whistle at the beginning. ok

[Insane]
00:18:616 (2,3,4,5) - sth like this? uhm ok
[attachment=0:c4789]60.png[/attachment:c4789]
00:29:171 (3) - remove the single whistle? or maybe add at 00:32:875 (5)'s beginning? added in 3
00:56:764 (8,9) - personally i'd like to stack them since you did at 6&7 mm no
01:01:579 (3,4) - emm... a simple triple circles...? huhuhu no
01:28:616 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hard to hit. change to sliders spread like that? hehe no
02:04:171 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - = =|||| :>
03:20:838 (3,4,5) - move this left a bit. after stacked it would look better than now when playing. uhm ok
04:12:134 - 04:13:986 - maybe remove this short break. no

really nice job. good luck thx ^^

KillerRind wrote:

awesome map!
awesome SB!
found nothing wrong ._.
Star~

Krisom wrote:

General-
·Approach Circle~? no
·Por que hay un Kiai desde 03:02:505 - hasta 03:08:431 ? No escucho nada respaldandolo musicalmente o que lo haga diferente a 02:56:579 - 03:02:505 pq deberia empezar en 02:56:579 =P! pero le quise dar mas enfasis a la ultima parte
·04:12:505 - Seria bueno desacerse de este break en ambas diffs no
·La proxima ves que veas a un BAT, pidele que te mueva el lugar donde sale el título y artista de la canción a 00:19:542 - , de esa manera sale junto con el "Presented By Astom" ok, vere q se puede hacer
· El custom slidertick que va con la batería esta un poco fuerte. De hecho es actualmente más fuerte que el soft hitclap que hace de bateria. te recomiendo (fuertemente) que le bajes algo el volumen a tu softslidertick es el mismo hitsound, y suenan iguales, al menos para mi
·Concuerdo 90% con NatsumeRin, el offset esta muy adelantado. Sin embargo, digo 90% por que le hace falta más que -7. Trata con -15~-17. Se me hizo considerablemente más fácil jugar las streams de insane con -15. -8 es suficiente
·El salto en el diff spread es algo exagerado, pasas de 2.5 M a casi 13M, Ve si te puedes conseguir una guest Hard o hacer una tu ._. no

Normal-
01:22:505 - Que esta slidertick no sea custom para que calze con 01:21:023 (Y vaya con la bateria)me parece mejor con el doble golpe, pero bueno
01:28:431 (4) - Whistle al inicio en vez de clap no
02:43:986 (4) - ^ no
03:41:764 - Que esta slidertick no sea custom para que calze con 03:40:282 (Y vaya con la bateria) ok

Hard-
01:28:616 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uhhhh, es necesario el doblestack? ademas de que es algo dificil de leer e interrumpe el "flow" de la cancion, se ve algo feo D: :P
02:42:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,) - Agrega un new combo en algun lado, este combo esta especialmente largo, probablemente en (5) para que calze con 01:27:660 (1) - ok