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Yuuhei Satellite (Arranged: Iceon) feat. senya - Yuudachi, K

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 6월 20일 월요일 at 오전 8:39:42

Artist: Yuuhei Satellite (Arranged: Iceon) feat. senya
Title: Yuudachi, Kimi to Kakurega
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Patchouli Knowledge パチュリー・ノーレッジ Iceon kamase-tora かませ虎 Touhou 魔法少女達の百年祭 The Centennial Festival for Magical Girls 東方紅魔郷 Embodiment of Scarlet Devil extra stage theme 上海アリス幻樂団 ZUN 例大祭 Reitaisai SDVX SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection- ULTIMATE TRACKS -東方紅魔郷REMIX-
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6669kb
Play Time: 03:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.89 stars, 510 notes)
  2. Insane (3.92 stars, 699 notes)
  3. Lunatic (4.74 stars, 859 notes)
  4. Normal (1.86 stars, 321 notes)
Download: Yuuhei Satellite (Arranged: Iceon) feat. senya - Yuudachi, Kimi to Kakurega
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I've made many beatmaps so far, and this is the one I'm most attached to. I think this taught me how to use jump patterns, and overall, it was a great help in having my own style. In terms of the song, it is a song that I personally like, and it gave me an opportunity to be a friend with 'N a s y a' who I like and respect.
Enon
poi?
Topic Starter
Dailycare
헐 마지막난이도 이름 뽀이로 결정..
Satellite
poi, kimi to kakurega
Topic Starter
Dailycare
thanks for star xD
GIDZ
Mod
20:54 Dailycare: still accept mod req??
20:54 - G I D Z -: o.o
20:54 Dailycare: lol
20:54 - G I D Z -: new map?
20:55 Dailycare: um yea
20:55 Dailycare: but low quality xd
20:55 - G I D Z -: sure I can mod xd
20:55 Dailycare: cool XD
20:55 *Dailycare is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/975561 senya - Yuudachi, Kimi to Kakurega]
20:55 Dailycare: this song..
20:56 - G I D Z -: ?
20:56 Dailycare: ?!?
20:56 Dailycare: w,what..
20:56 - G I D Z -: nothing xd
20:57 Dailycare: >W<
21:01 Dailycare: oh i expected you play it with dt
21:03 - G I D Z -: My DT not good now xd
21:03 - G I D Z -: didnt play DT for 2 weeks
21:03 Dailycare: oh why ..
21:03 Dailycare: 2 weeks ;w;
21:03 - G I D Z -: I was practicing HR
21:03 - G I D Z -: and nomod
21:03 - G I D Z -: and old maps xd
21:03 Dailycare: lol
21:03 Dailycare: but youre always good at hr too..
21:06 - G I D Z -: I wanted better aim
21:06 - G I D Z -: so I stopped DT for a while
21:06 Dailycare: ;w;
21:06 Dailycare: hope you to get better aim..
21:06 - G I D Z -: already did :D
21:07 - G I D Z -: but lost speed now
21:07 Dailycare: XD
21:07 - G I D Z -: should I mod all?
21:07 Dailycare: that's rly sad..
21:07 - G I D Z -: or just the insanes?
21:07 Dailycare: ah
21:07 Dailycare: um
21:08 Dailycare: depend on you
21:08 - G I D Z -: lol
21:08 - G I D Z -: I dunno how to mod diffs with DS
21:08 - G I D Z -: so I'll just mod the insanes xd
21:08 Dailycare: oh lol
21:08 Dailycare: then just 2 diffs
21:08 Dailycare: kk xd
21:09 - G I D Z -: 00:14:671 (3) - Why not curve this more cuz the next note is on the right, better flow imo xd
21:09 Dailycare: oh
21:09 Dailycare: irc?
21:09 Dailycare: wait lol
21:09 - G I D Z -: oh
21:09 - G I D Z -: xd
21:10 - G I D Z -: u DSed everything? o.o
21:10 Dailycare: not rly
21:10 Dailycare: maybe,...
21:10 Dailycare: ahh
21:10 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5189371
21:10 Dailycare: what about this?
21:10 - G I D Z -: curve more? xd
21:11 Dailycare: hm
21:11 Dailycare: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5189379
21:11 Dailycare: what about..
21:11 Dailycare: this..?
21:11 - G I D Z -: yea
21:12 Dailycare: oky~
21:12 - G I D Z -: 00:17:871 (3) - same for this
21:12 - G I D Z -: consistency
21:12 Dailycare: uh,
21:12 Dailycare: but if i make it more curved..
21:13 Dailycare: flow between 2,3 would be worse
21:13 Dailycare: imo
21:13 - G I D Z -: ok
21:13 Dailycare: i'll consider making it curved ;w;
21:14 - G I D Z -: xd
21:14 Dailycare: but don't expect xD
21:14 - G I D Z -: is ok just my nazi modding :v
21:15 Dailycare: nazi modding is always okay
21:15 - G I D Z -: I just always catch small things ;w;
21:16 Dailycare: i don't mind~
21:17 - G I D Z -: 01:13:471 (2,3) - blanket?
21:17 Dailycare: oh.. wait
21:19 Dailycare: did it xd
21:19 - G I D Z -: \o/
21:19 Dailycare: xD
21:23 - G I D Z -: 02:51:571 - The music sounds change 3 times and this should be clickable imo
21:24 - G I D Z -: 02:53:071 (4,5) - same with this
21:24 Dailycare: uh.. but i thnk 02:51:571 - is rly weak sound..
21:25 - G I D Z -: hmm
21:25 - G I D Z -: but while I was playing the map I could hear the music change there
21:25 - G I D Z -: and it felt weird to not have anything there
21:26 Dailycare: then i'll fix those sliders only in the highest diff
21:26 - G I D Z -: xd
21:26 - G I D Z -: ok
21:26 Dailycare: but..
21:26 Dailycare: can i make those to repeat sliders?
21:26 - G I D Z -: which?
21:27 Dailycare: 02:51:471 (4) - 02:53:071 (4) -
21:27 - G I D Z -: but u already have so many after this part xd
21:27 Dailycare: hmm
21:28 Dailycare: making it clickabe seems little excessive for me..
21:28 - G I D Z -: well its totally up to you
21:28 - G I D Z -: just my opinion xd
21:28 Dailycare: lol oky
21:30 - G I D Z -: 03:26:271 (2,3) - I think u can blanket better xd
21:30 - G I D Z -: 03:26:471 (3,4) - ^
21:30 Dailycare: blankets.......
21:31 - G I D Z -: sry for nazi
21:31 - G I D Z -: xd
21:31 Dailycare: it will take much time
21:31 Dailycare: wait for me...
21:31 - G I D Z -: >_>
21:31 Dailycare: nah why sry xD
21:31 - G I D Z -: 03:26:471 (3,4) - lol here also x.x
21:31 Dailycare: i rly appriciate it
21:31 Dailycare: okok
21:31 Dailycare: wait for me~
21:31 - G I D Z -: tks >_>
21:31 - G I D Z -: ok
21:32 - G I D Z -: cuz I was studying Skystar maps and all of his maps are perfectly blanketed lol
21:32 - G I D Z -: Just makes the map look much more neat
21:33 Dailycare: neat lol
21:33 Dailycare: i wanna make my maps neaat too ;w;
21:33 Dailycare: but it's rlllllllllllllllly hard for me TwT
21:34 - G I D Z -: ;w;
21:34 - G I D Z -: I am trying too xd
21:34 Dailycare: XD
21:34 Dailycare: k fixed it
21:34 - G I D Z -: lol
21:34 - G I D Z -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5189521
21:35 - G I D Z -: someone just sent me his score
21:35 - G I D Z -: and it was ur map
21:35 - G I D Z -: XD
21:35 Dailycare: what a
21:35 Dailycare: lol xD
21:35 Dailycare: who is he?
21:35 Dailycare: friends?
21:35 - G I D Z -: some internet friend xd
21:35 - G I D Z -: 03:42:271 (2) - Ctrl G this?
21:36 - G I D Z -: and u can move it up a bit if u do
21:36 Dailycare: hm..
21:36 Dailycare: wait
21:36 - G I D Z -: k
21:39 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5189546
21:39 Dailycare: i changed patterns..
21:39 Dailycare: what do you think of it?
21:39 - G I D Z -: err
21:39 Dailycare: hm.
21:39 - G I D Z -: the flow feels kinda werid imo
21:39 Dailycare: okyyy
21:40 Dailycare: wait again ;w;
21:40 - G I D Z -: 03:40:271 (1,2) - Cuz these notes go up down
21:40 - G I D Z -: 03:41:871 (1,2) - So I just wanted to keep consistent here
21:40 Dailycare: oh
21:40 - G I D Z -: http://puu.sh/oXzfU/4b7a0db57c.jpg
21:40 - G I D Z -: like this xd
21:42 Dailycare: i moved 03:42:271 (2) - to (1)'s left side
21:42 Dailycare: also moved it a bit up
21:42 - G I D Z -: did u ctrl G it? o.o
21:42 Dailycare: also did it XD
21:43 - G I D Z -: ok XD
21:43 Dailycare: 03:42:671 (3,4) -
21:43 Dailycare: and i adjusted those position
21:43 - G I D Z -: ok
21:43 Dailycare: ^^b
21:43 - G I D Z -: 03:47:471 (3) - a bit off grid imo
21:43 - G I D Z -: move the whole pattern down?
21:44 Dailycare: oops
21:44 - G I D Z -: or make triangle
21:44 - G I D Z -: xd
21:44 Dailycare: i dont wanna make it triangle~
21:44 - G I D Z -: lol ok
21:44 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5189576
21:44 Dailycare: also gonna move it donw
21:45 - G I D Z -: nice
21:45 - G I D Z -: moving to next poi diff
21:45 Dailycare: oky
21:45 Dailycare: ah
21:45 Dailycare: have you any better diff names?
21:45 - G I D Z -: hmm
21:46 Dailycare: *do you have
21:46 - G I D Z -: for extra
21:46 Dailycare: my eng sucks xd
21:46 Dailycare: extra..
21:46 - G I D Z -: I think its better to put some signature on it
21:46 - G I D Z -: like Skystar
21:46 - G I D Z -: so people can easily recognise
21:46 - G I D Z -: Thats what Fycho told me xd
21:46 Dailycare: oh lol
21:47 Dailycare: so what can i do..
21:47 - G I D Z -: hmm
21:48 - G I D Z -: idk xd
21:48 Dailycare: xD
21:48 - G I D Z -: I am not good with diff names lol
21:48 Dailycare: oky~
21:48 - G I D Z -: 00:13:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move this combo down a bit to avoid off grid xd
21:49 Dailycare: did it
21:49 Dailycare: easy~
21:49 - G I D Z -: Actually
21:50 - G I D Z -: this map feels very similar to the previous diff
21:50 - G I D Z -: just more jumps xd
21:50 Dailycare: um
21:51 - G I D Z -: 00:33:871 (3,4) - Why this suddenly not reverse slider? o.o
21:51 Dailycare: some player told me
21:51 Dailycare: it was little boring
21:52 Dailycare: so i changed it to 3/4 and 1/2
21:52 - G I D Z -: lol ok
21:52 Dailycare: xD
21:54 - G I D Z -: 02:31:471 (1,2) - off grid xd
21:54 Dailycare: it
21:55 Dailycare: 's little ambiguous..
21:55 - G I D Z -: idk
21:55 Dailycare: give me some time
21:55 - G I D Z -: kk
21:56 Dailycare: oh
21:56 Dailycare: easy to fix it
21:56 Dailycare: completed
21:56 Dailycare: xd
21:56 - G I D Z -: xd
21:56 - G I D Z -: 02:40:671 (1) - why NC? No SV change here
21:56 Dailycare: oh
21:57 - G I D Z -: lol
21:57 Dailycare: i wanted to add nc at 02:40:471 -
21:57 - G I D Z -: ?
21:57 - G I D Z -: I dun think its necessary tho xd
21:57 - G I D Z -: Just volume change there
21:57 Dailycare: um
21:58 Dailycare: k then gonna remove it
21:58 - G I D Z -: xd
21:59 Dailycare: also hard, lunatic were fixed
21:59 - G I D Z -: 02:49:871 (1) - ? o.o
21:59 - G I D Z -: NC again lol
21:59 Dailycare: um?
22:00 - G I D Z -: DS change?
22:01 Dailycare: yea
22:01 Dailycare: 1.3
22:01 - G I D Z -: kk
22:01 Dailycare: lol
22:01 Dailycare: 02:56:671 (1) -
22:02 Dailycare: should i remove NC?
22:02 - G I D Z -: 02:55:771 (2,3) - Actually what are these following? xd
22:02 Dailycare: um
22:02 - G I D Z -: actually I am noob at NCs xd
22:02 - G I D Z -: so idk
22:03 Dailycare: k..
22:03 Dailycare: i followed some whistle sounds of the song
22:03 - G I D Z -: ok
22:03 Dailycare: also i know that 02:56:171 - doesn't have any sound
22:03 Dailycare: but .
22:03 Dailycare: oh..
22:04 - G I D Z -: just a bit weird imo
22:04 Dailycare: whole sliders?
22:04 Dailycare: or only (3)?
22:04 - G I D Z -: 2 and 3 actually
22:05 Dailycare: ah,
22:05 Dailycare: hmm..
22:05 Dailycare: i'll consider better rhythm...
22:05 - G I D Z -: 02:54:671 (1,2,3,4) - Cuz these follow the main rythm
22:05 - G I D Z -: rhythm*
22:05 - G I D Z -: 02:55:471 (1) - this also
22:05 Dailycare: oh well,
22:06 - G I D Z -: so the sliders after seem weird not to follow main rhythm xd
22:06 Dailycare: oky..
22:06 Dailycare: will fix it later..
22:06 - G I D Z -: ok >_>
22:07 - G I D Z -: 03:04:271 (1,2,3,4) - Make them slant more? http://puu.sh/oXAAM/505320f3ce.jpg
22:08 Dailycare: um
22:08 Dailycare: how much rotate it?
22:08 Dailycare: more 15?
22:09 Dailycare: *over
22:09 Dailycare: lol xd
22:09 - G I D Z -: 03:04:471 (2) - X:308 Y:120
22:09 - G I D Z -: 03:04:871 (4) - X:384 Y:208\
22:09 Dailycare: oh
22:09 - G I D Z -: 03:04:871 (4) - Cuz this jump going upward left
22:09 - G I D Z -: do I think the next jump should be going upward right
22:10 - G I D Z -: so*
22:11 Dailycare: i moved (4) to 412, 228
22:11 Dailycare: it would be better imo
22:11 - G I D Z -: ok
22:12 Dailycare: ^^bbb
22:12 - G I D Z -: 03:13:871 (1,2,3,4) - hmm
22:12 - G I D Z -: I think can flow better here
22:12 Dailycare: how?
22:13 - G I D Z -: 03:13:871 (1) - stack on 03:13:471 (3) - then make N jump
22:14 - G I D Z -: http://puu.sh/oXAYi/556b2cf7e4.jpg
22:14 - G I D Z -: 03:14:071 (2,4) - Make 2.60x DS
22:15 Dailycare: oops
22:15 - G I D Z -: 03:14:871 (2,3) - These two can be spaced a bit more
22:15 - G I D Z -: http://puu.sh/oXB42/c24f7e630c.jpg
22:16 Dailycare: oky
22:16 Dailycare: wait for meee
22:16 - G I D Z -: kk
22:17 Dailycare: and about 03:13:871 (1,2,3,4) -
22:17 Dailycare: i'll fix it later too
22:18 Dailycare: can't come up with any idea
22:18 Dailycare: x.d
22:18 Dailycare: oh
22:18 Dailycare: *x.x
22:18 - G I D Z -: ?
22:18 - G I D Z -: I posted screen shot
22:18 - G I D Z -: xd
22:18 - G I D Z -: screenshot*
22:18 Dailycare: yea but,
22:18 Dailycare: seems bit hard for me
22:18 - G I D Z -: o.o
22:19 Dailycare: ahhh..
22:19 Dailycare: my internet has some problems imo
22:20 - G I D Z -: lol
22:20 Dailycare: 03:13:871 (1,2,3,4) - so, still keep this flow now
22:21 - G I D Z -: o.o
22:21 Dailycare: will consider better flow
22:21 - G I D Z -: ok
22:22 - G I D Z -: wat abou 03:14:671 (1,2,3,4) - ?
22:22 - G I D Z -: about*
22:23 Dailycare: already fixed
22:23 - G I D Z -: ok
22:23 - G I D Z -: I think thats all xd
22:23 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5189845
22:23 Dailycare: oh
22:23 Dailycare: oky~
22:23 - G I D Z -: :D
22:23 Dailycare: post it
22:23 - G I D Z -: GL
22:24 - G I D Z -: lol ok
sahuang
Nice song~
Topic Starter
Dailycare
thank you~
wajinshu
Poi
Topic Starter
Dailycare
CaffeAmericano
안녕하세여

  • 노멀
  1. 담요를 굉장히 많이 쓰셨는데, 대부분 조금식 삐뚤한게 아쉽네요. 비교적 많이 삐뚤한건: 01:03:871 (2,3) - 01:15:071 (5,6) - 02:18:271 (5,1) -
  2. 01:04:271 (3,4,5) - 살짝 틀어 주면 모양 더 좋지 않을까요 ( http://puu.sh/p3tqh/27f33bc847.jpg )
  3. 00:24:471 (3,4) - 슬라가 짧아서 스택 하는게 조금 어색해 보여요. 뒷부분도 전부.. /w\

  • poi
  1. 00:16:871 - 00:20:071 - 서클을 배치해 주시거나 슬라를 쓰시는게 좀더 좋아보이는데, 뒷부분도 일관성 있게 하긴 하셨네여...
  2. 00:26:371 - 01:44:771 - 여기도 소리가 있는데 1/4 슬라 사용해서 매꾸시는건 어떤가요
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Topic Starter
Dailycare
@alacat
star arigato! owo/


BitterCoffee wrote:

안녕하세여

  • 노멀
  1. 담요를 굉장히 많이 쓰셨는데, 대부분 조금식 삐뚤한게 아쉽네요. 비교적 많이 삐뚤한건: 01:03:871 (2,3) - 01:15:071 (5,6) - 02:18:271 (5,1) - // 블랭킷은 점진적으로 고쳐나가겠습니다 ㅠㅠ
  2. 01:04:271 (3,4,5) - 살짝 틀어 주면 모양 더 좋지 않을까요 ( http://puu.sh/p3tqh/27f33bc847.jpg )
  3. 00:24:471 (3,4) - 슬라가 짧아서 스택 하는게 조금 어색해 보여요. 뒷부분도 전부.. /w\ // 어.. 이건 스택 자체가 주는 뭔가 제자리에 머물러있는 느낌을 주고싶어서..ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

  • poi
  1. 00:16:871 - 00:20:071 - 서클을 배치해 주시거나 슬라를 쓰시는게 좀더 좋아보이는데, 뒷부분도 일관성 있게 하긴 하셨네여... // 서클 넣어봤습니다..
  2. 00:26:371 - 01:44:771 - 여기도 소리가 있는데 1/4 슬라 사용해서 매꾸시는건 어떤가요
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모딩 감사합니다아~ XD
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M4M각입니다.

[General Setting]
何もありません。

[Normal]
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[Hard]
■ 01:39:471 (3,2) - 너무 붙어보여서 시각적으로 불안정해 보입니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5266794 이런식으로 (3)번슬라를 굽혀주시던가 거리를 벌려주세요.
■ 02:13:871 (1) - 블랭킷이라면 상당히 나간듯한..?
■ 03:13:071 (1,2) - 보컬을 따라가서 괜찮긴 한데 앞부분에는 계속 1/2박자를 나눠서 사용하시다가 1/1슬라가 나오니 약간 어색하다고 느꼈어요. 누르고 있는 느낌을 주면서 박자를 표현하기 위해 1/2리버스슬라들로 대체해도 괜찮다고 생각합니다.
■ 03:19:871 - 이부분에 클리커블이 있었으면 좋겠습니다. 음이 굉장히 강하거든요..

[Lunatic]
■ 00:50:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 취향저격당함;
■ 02:49:071 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 직선플로우 같아서 치기 어려울 것 같은데 데케님 맵에서 많이 보이는 패턴이라 흠..
■ 02:56:271 (1) - 노래 느낌상 다른부분들과 다른 이부분에 들어갈 슬라이더는 S자형 보다는 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5266928 번개(?)모양 슬라이더가 들어가는 것은 어떻게 생각하시나요? 맵 전체적으로 S자형을 쓰셨는데 분위기 전환용도로 괜찮아 보입니다.
■ 03:13:071 (1,2) - 하드에서 언급드린 부분입니다. 만약 하드에서도 안고치셨다면 이부분도 두는게 낫겠군요.
■ 03:19:871 - 이부분도 클리커블.. 하드는 몰라도 루나틱인 만큼 3/4슬라와 서클하나로 표현할 수 있지 않을까요?
■ 03:44:271 (5,6) - 거리가 엄청 멀다고 생각해요. 이정도 거리는 마지막 끝내는부분(03:50:671 (5,6) - )같은곳에 넣어주는게 더 어울린다고 생각합니다.

[Poi]
■ 00:21:471 - , 00:34:271 - ~etc.. 혹시 이곳 힛사들은 왜 제거하셨는지 알 수 있을까요? 제가 저번에 텟플할때는 이부분 누르는 느낌이 거의 안나서 어색했습니다. 뭔가 눌렀는데 틀린기분? 같은게 들더군요.
■ 01:19:471 (1) - 매애애우 개인적인 관점이라 무시하셔도 좋습니다. 이부분에서 끝나는 줄 알고 손을 놨습니다. 근데 아니더군요 ㅠ 인센보다 ar이 빨라서 그 다음노트는 보이지도 않고 노래는 잔잔해져서 브레이크 타임이라고 인식하기 좋았습니다.

윗부분은 그냥 무시하셔도 되는 잡소리들이고 모딩 하겠습니다.

■ 02:51:471 (4,5) - 이 슬라이더초밥도 02:53:071 (4,5) - 이런식으로 하시는게 어떨까요? 02:55:471 (1,2) - 이부분도 그런식이니까요.
■ 02:56:271 (1) - 루나틱에서 언급드린 부분입니다. 만약 루나틱에서도 안고치셨다면 이부분도 두는게 낫겠군요.
■ 03:19:871 - ㅇㅇ..
■ 항상 점프들이 상당히 맘에드는 흐름입니다 :)

과제한 후에 한 모딩이라 그런지 매우 잡소리가 많은듯 하네요. 죄송 ㅠ
굿럭입니닷
Topic Starter
Dailycare

Down wrote:

M4M각입니다.

[General Setting]
何もありません。

[Normal]
ㅠㅠ

[Hard]
■ 01:39:471 (3,2) - 너무 붙어보여서 시각적으로 불안정해 보입니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5266794 이런식으로 (3)번슬라를 굽혀주시던가 거리를 벌려주세요. // 넵 하지만 저런 식으로 굽히진 않았습니다
■ 02:13:871 (1) - 블랭킷이라면 상당히 나간듯한..? // 블랭킷 어렵습니다아..
■ 03:13:071 (1,2) - 보컬을 따라가서 괜찮긴 한데 앞부분에는 계속 1/2박자를 나눠서 사용하시다가 1/1슬라가 나오니 약간 어색하다고 느꼈어요. 누르고 있는 느낌을 주면서 박자를 표현하기 위해 1/2리버스슬라들로 대체해도 괜찮다고 생각합니다. // 엇 일단 이거는 넘어갈게요. 나중에 고쳐볼게요. 그렇다해도 1을 1/2 리버스 슬라로 만들 것 같진 않아요ㅠㅠㅠ
■ 03:19:871 - 이부분에 클리커블이 있었으면 좋겠습니다. 음이 굉장히 강하거든요.. // 이건 맨 밑에서 설명해드릴게요....

[Lunatic]
■ 00:50:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 취향저격당함; // 헉...
■ 02:49:071 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 직선플로우 같아서 치기 어려울 것 같은데 데케님 맵에서 많이 보이는 패턴이라 흠.. // 앗 이건 일부러 치기 어려우라고 직선쓴게 맞고.. 노래랑도 그다지 안 맞는 것 같지도 않아서.. 더 지적 들어온다면 고칠게요ㅠㅠ
■ 02:56:271 (1) - 노래 느낌상 다른부분들과 다른 이부분에 들어갈 슬라이더는 S자형 보다는 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5266928 번개(?)모양 슬라이더가 들어가는 것은 어떻게 생각하시나요? 맵 전체적으로 S자형을 쓰셨는데 분위기 전환용도로 괜찮아 보입니다. // 헐 굿
■ 03:13:071 (1,2) - 하드에서 언급드린 부분입니다. 만약 하드에서도 안고치셨다면 이부분도 두는게 낫겠군요. // 이것도 역시.. (2)만 고치는걸 고려하겠습니다
■ 03:19:871 - 이부분도 클리커블.. 하드는 몰라도 루나틱인 만큼 3/4슬라와 서클하나로 표현할 수 있지 않을까요?
■ 03:44:271 (5,6) - 거리가 엄청 멀다고 생각해요. 이정도 거리는 마지막 끝내는부분(03:50:671 (5,6) - )같은곳에 넣어주는게 더 어울린다고 생각합니다.

[Poi]
■ 00:21:471 - , 00:34:271 - ~etc.. 혹시 이곳 힛사들은 왜 제거하셨는지 알 수 있을까요? 제가 저번에 텟플할때는 이부분 누르는 느낌이 거의 안나서 어색했습니다. 뭔가 눌렀는데 틀린기분? 같은게 들더군요. // 음.. 이건 앞에서 3/4리버스슬라를 써서.. 근데 없애봐도 어색해서 일단은 냅둘게요 ㅠㅠ
■ 01:19:471 (1) - 매애애우 개인적인 관점이라 무시하셔도 좋습니다. 이부분에서 끝나는 줄 알고 손을 놨습니다. 근데 아니더군요 ㅠ 인센보다 ar이 빨라서 그 다음노트는 보이지도 않고 노래는 잔잔해져서 브레이크 타임이라고 인식하기 좋았습니다. // 앗 이건 어떻게 할 수가.. 슬라이더를 쓰기엔 그다지 적합하진 않아보이는 부분이어서..

윗부분은 그냥 무시하셔도 되는 잡소리들이고 모딩 하겠습니다.

■ 02:51:471 (4,5) - 이 슬라이더초밥도 02:53:071 (4,5) - 이런식으로 하시는게 어떨까요? 02:55:471 (1,2) - 이부분도 그런식이니까요.
■ 02:56:271 (1) - 루나틱에서 언급드린 부분입니다. 만약 루나틱에서도 안고치셨다면 이부분도 두는게 낫겠군요. // 아 저도 직선이 좋아보이는데 이건 1/4 슬라들때문에 어쩔 수가없네요ㅠㅠㅠ
■ 03:19:871 - ㅇㅇ..
항상 점프들이 상당히 맘에드는 흐름입니다 :) // 감사합니다 xD

과제한 후에 한 모딩이라 그런지 매우 잡소리가 많은듯 하네요. 죄송 ㅠ
굿럭입니닷
그.. 3분 19초에 그건 사실, N a s y a가 찍은 맵에 대한 약간의 오마쥬....라고할까요.. 사실 서클 두개로 놓든 3/4와 서클로 놓든 변속을 준 1/1 슬라의 느낌을 따라가긴 어렵다고 생각해요.. 근데 나샤맵보니까 저기에 쨍~하는 소리가 들어가서 일단 추가해봤습니다 ㅠㅠ

모딩 감사합니다!
Satellite
if you are ready call me ~ #mark
FCL
hi iam flc
  • [general]
  1. are you really need a osb? I think not
  2. anime picture in your mp3 must be deleted cuz ranking criterias said so
  3. idk about your bf, this size is acceptable but a any another anime picture with 1366x768 size would be better

  • [osu (insane)]
  1. maybe increase hp by 0.5 at least? 6 hp seems small for the hardest diff, also same has the lunatic diff
  2. 00:23:671 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these patterns sounds pretty quiet since volume of the song was increasing. I would add normal sampleset for their or increase volume to 90%
  3. 01:05:071 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - as you could heard these patterns was accompanied by extra instrumentals, so adding something like claps normal samplesets would be great. also same for similar
  4. 01:07:271 (2) - just feel that whistle on head sounds better than on tail cuz vocal. same for similar
  5. 03:03:071 (4) - normal sampleset sounds better imo
  6. 03:04:671 (3) - soft-whistle would be cool too
  7. 03:11:071 (3) - ^
  8. 03:14:271 (3) - ^ same idk, these beats have pretty loud vocal so why not
  9. 03:19:471 (1) - soft-whistle on head
  10. 03:44:671 (1) - adding of normal sampleset on tail sounds.... epic idk, really feel it good
  11. really can't say something about patterns, they looks great for my eyes. Only some issues about hitsounds, but only in my opinion

  • [need (lunatic)]
  1. 00:49:471 (3) - feels bad because red tick is at strong vocal, so doing him clickable would be have more sense
  2. 00:49:871 (4) - should be nc I guess
  3. 01:14:971 - maybe map him? Sounds like clickable

  • [more]
  1. 02:10:471 (5,6,1) - since you didn't use so much distance as here, I would recommend reduce similar patterns, imo they looks kinda hard for 2.8
  2. 03:09:871 (1) - 1.7 distance also doesn't look good for me, At least 1.5 would more acceptable for 2.8

  • [dailycare]
  1. okay, nothing to say
you must ask satellite for bubble, this mapset is ready
Topic Starter
Dailycare

FCL wrote:

hi iam flc
  • [general]
  1. are you really need a osb? I think not // I think so lol
  2. anime picture in your mp3 must be deleted cuz ranking criterias said so // it is just .. album cover.. hm, i'm gonna make sure of it until next modding
  3. idk about your bf, this size is acceptable but a any another anime picture with 1366x768 size would be better // oops it's still good for me xd

  • [osu (insane)]
  1. maybe increase hp by 0.5 at least? 6 hp seems small for the hardest diff, also same has the lunatic diff // made it seven xd
  2. 00:23:671 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these patterns sounds pretty quiet since volume of the song was increasing. I would add normal sampleset for their or increase volume to 90% // increased them to 85%, but i just added normal-hitnormal only at each downbeats
  3. 01:05:071 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - as you could heard these patterns was accompanied by extra instrumentals, so adding something like claps normal samplesets would be great. also same for similar // uh um, but it's just fine for me TwT
  4. 01:07:271 (2) - just feel that whistle on head sounds better than on tail cuz vocal. same for similar
  5. 03:03:071 (4) - normal sampleset sounds better imo
  6. 03:04:671 (3) - soft-whistle would be cool too
  7. 03:11:071 (3) - ^
  8. 03:14:271 (3) - ^ same idk, these beats have pretty loud vocal so why not // cuz im noob at hitsoundings :p
  9. 03:19:471 (1) - soft-whistle on head
  10. 03:44:671 (1) - adding of normal sampleset on tail sounds.... epic idk, really feel it good
  11. really can't say something about patterns, they looks great for my eyes. Only some issues about hitsounds, but only in my opinion // lol thanks!

  • [need (lunatic)]
  1. 00:49:471 (3) - feels bad because red tick is at strong vocal, so doing him clickable would be have more sense // hmm right. but current rhythm is not bad imo and if i fix them, i might change whole patterns lol. So i didn't fix them sorry ;w;
  2. 00:49:871 (4) - should be nc I guess
  3. 01:14:971 - maybe map him? Sounds like clickable // oh no that's not a good choice imo xD

  • [more]
  1. 02:10:471 (5,6,1) - since you didn't use so much distance as here, I would recommend reduce similar patterns, imo they looks kinda hard for 2.8
  2. 03:09:871 (1) - 1.7 distance also doesn't look good for me, At least 1.5 would more acceptable for 2.8

  • [dailycare]
  1. okay, nothing to say // ^^b
you must ask satellite for bubble, this mapset is ready

damn i really love those suggetions about hitsounding thx xD
Topic Starter
Dailycare
Removed anime pic, updated
Dia
discord
그보다 길어,..
Dailycare - Today at 8:50 PM
그래서
노말하드만해주면댐
ㅋㅋㅋㄴㅋ
Dia - Today at 8:50 PM
00:18:671 (3) -
이거
밑으로 휘어 보면
어떨지
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아니님
지금 하시는거?
ㄱㄷㄱㄷ
Dia - Today at 8:51 PM
노오말
00:20:271 (1) -
이건 안휘어서
2번슬라랑
평행한게
좋은듯
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2번
휘게했음
Dia - Today at 8:52 PM
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
1번을 안휘는게
나은거같은데
ㅠㅠㅠ
Dailycare - Today at 8:52 PM
별 차이 없을듯..
Dia - Today at 8:52 PM
00:31:471 (3,4,5) -
이질감이느껴짐
Dailycare - Today at 8:53 PM
../
왜영
Dia - Today at 8:53 PM
몰라요
생긴게
맘에안들게ㅐ 생겻어
Dailycare - Today at 8:53 PM
;;
일단
이거
3머리랑 4,5랑 1머리랑
마름모만든거여서
ㅠㅠ
Dia - Today at 8:53 PM
이거
노말
모딩안받아도
랭크 될거가튼데
ㅋㅋ
Dailycare - Today at 8:53 PM
아니
새틀라이트가
3개받아오고
말하래여
Dia - Today at 8:54 PM
ㅋㅋ
모딩을?
아니면
노말 모딩은ㄹ?
Dailycare - Today at 8:54 PM
모든난이도
모딩 3번씩
이제아마..
Dia - Today at 8:54 PM
ㅅㅂㄴ ㅋㅋㅋ
Dailycare - Today at 8:54 PM
노말만남앗을걸요
Dia - Today at 8:55 PM
01:37:871 (4,5,1) -
곡선을 더 강조해보는건
어떰
Dailycare - Today at 8:55 PM
이건

곡선을 강조하라는건
3을꺾으란소리?
Dia - Today at 8:55 PM
3을
위로
꺾고
4번 서클을 좀 위로 올리면
아냐
걍납둬용
Dailycare - Today at 8:56 PM
?
고쳤는데

Dia - Today at 8:56 PM

고쳣음
고치시구
Dailycare - Today at 8:56 PM
ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
Dia - Today at 8:56 PM
02:09:471 (5) -
반대쪽으로 꺾는게
흐름에 더좋을ㄷ스
Dailycare - Today at 8:57 PM
아 이거근데
Dia - Today at 8:57 PM
http://puu.sh/pdULp/aa46ab3880.jpg

Dailycare - Today at 8:57 PM
클릭으로
바로이동못하니까
넘힘듬ㄹ다
Dia - Today at 8:57 PM
02:24:271 (6,1) -
이런 거 티도안나는데
그냥 가운데 틱 없애면안됨 ㅋㅋ?
Dailycare - Today at 8:58 PM
ㄱㄷ
님ㅇ리단
저위에건
안고쳤ㅇ슴
Dia - Today at 8:58 PM

Dailycare - Today at 8:58 PM
그래도

저거
직선보단
살짝 휜게 좀더보기좋읃ㅅ
제기준에선
Dia - Today at 8:58 PM
ㅇㅋ
스타일
차이니
Dailycare - Today at 8:58 PM
yup
Dia - Today at 8:59 PM
잡을게
있어야
잡ㅈ지
젠장ㅋㅋ
Dailycare - Today at 8:59 PM
개많음

잘찾아보셈
Dia - Today at 8:59 PM
03:19:471 -
여기서 부터
시작하는게어떰
Dailycare - Today at 8:59 PM
근데저거
저따노트두면
변속쓰고싶은데
님 노말에서 변속쓰면
보기가 좀 그럼
Dia - Today at 8:59 PM
변속
안쓰면
되잖슴
..
Dailycare - Today at 8:59 PM
안쓸수가
없증ㅁ
Dia - Today at 9:00 PM
변속
안쓰고
http://puu.sh/pdUVw/56f248d60a.jpg

이렇게만 해줘도 괜찮을거같은데
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Dailycare - Today at 9:00 PM
님저건
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Dia - Today at 9:01 PM
제가요즘
반스택에 빠짐
Dailycare - Today at 9:01 PM
흐음..
저건별로같은데..
Dia - Today at 9:01 PM
대충여 ㅋㅋ
Dailycare - Today at 9:01 PM
긍까
ㅠㅠㅠ
Dia - Today at 9:02 PM
03:47:471 (3,4) -
왜나눈거임
ㅋㅋ
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힛사때매
슬라끝으로 고치긴
좀 귀찮았음
Dia - Today at 9:03 PM
님아,.
소리도 안나뉘는ㄷ에 클릭두벙는
Dailycare - Today at 9:03 PM
크게상관없을듯
Dia - Today at 9:03 PM
너무해
Dailycare - Today at 9:03 PM
ㅇㄷㅇㄸ?
Dia - Today at 9:03 PM

괜찮으려나
기타소리랑
보컬 따로햇다하면..

Dailycare - Today at 9:03 PM
ㄱㅊ음저거
Dia - Today at 9:03 PM
모딩끝
Satellite
[Tags]
  1. Iceon kamase-tora かませ虎Yuuhei Satellite 幽閉サテライト Touhou flandre scarlet フランドール・スカーレット 魔法少女達の百年祭 The Centennial Festival for Magical Girls 東方紅魔郷 Embodiment of Scarlet Devil extra stage theme 上海アリス幻樂団 ZUN 例大祭 Reitaisai
[Normal]
  1. AR-1 or -0.5 AR5 is too early in mapset without Easy diff.
  2. 00:30:671 (2,3) - The right side is tight. so Move left placement pattern ?
  3. 01:17:871 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. It is hard to watch the flow to reverse a little. so If you can changed pattern. I think changed another pattern more better.
  4. 02:41:071 (1) - It is slightly difficult in the Normal diff without Easy. so remove 1/2 slider changed to circle better.
  5. 02:49:871 (2,3) - Consecutive 1/2slider is dangerous. so changed this rhythm ?
  6. 03:48:271 (1) - same as 02:41:071 (1) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:871 (3,4,5) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. move 00:41:871 (3) - stack 00:42:271 (5) - ?
  2. 00:48:271 (3) - same as above.
  3. 00:52:071 (5,6,1) - more better Nc pattern w
  4. 02:00:271 (3) - same as 00:48:271 (3) -
  5. 02:06:671 (3) - w-why not circle + circle pattern ???
  6. 02:10:471 (5,6,1) - same as 00:52:071 (5,6,1) -
  7. 03:05:871 (3) - same as 00:48:271 (3) -
  8. 03:12:271 (3) - same as above.
  9. 03:16:071 (5,6,1) - same as 00:52:071 (5,6,1) -
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:25:871 (4) - forgot add nc ?
  2. 02:48:871 (4,5,1) - nc pattern same as hard diff.
[poi]
  1. 00:52:671 - remove BreakTime
  2. 01:25:871 (3) - add nc w
  3. 02:11:071 - same as above.
  4. 03:44:671 (1) - missing nc ? remove nc better. you r pattern 02:37:471 (3) - 01:19:071 (3) -
looks good mapset. call me back. if you are Readycare ~
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