pishifat wrote:

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normal
{omitted stack being poo}
00:11:785 (3,4) - going from 1/2 overlap into a 1/1 stack = panic. unstacking is easy mode (which you probably want on lowest diff z) yup fixed
um kiai onwards you're switching between 1 and 2 measure combos consistency dood yep dood fixed

hard
00:13:083 (3) - sik 1/12 xd nice
01:09:515 (1,2) - spacing brokeum done

lol
00:11:137 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - kinda lol to have sliders represnt the stronger thing and circles represent the notspecial. switching them > switched them
00:23:461 (3,1) - your overlaps for these 1/1 gaps are cool but u aren't keeping their overlap amounts consistent at all:( like comparing this to the last one 00:41:623 (3,1) - or any inbetween it's like you're breaking your own concept yup
01:06:596 (7,1) - spacingwhytho ups sorry fixed

huh
hitsoudns will probably apply ot everywhere
01:05:137 (3) - 01:07:731 (3) - 01:10:326 (3) - 01:12:920 (3) - normal sampleset doesnt really work when no kick in the song i know there's no kick here, but here I didn't want to leave a blank felt so lame to play It was like that before.. so I decided to use kicks here since i placed a circle there, i don't think it's that bad while playing..
01:24:110 (3) - 00:42:920 (1) - missingclaptho added

wish you would pay more attention to how objects can compliment each other visually:( the way you're mapping now is acceptable, but still not something mappers would consider great. making a cool map will take more than placing objects wherever it ~flows~
showing a clear image of "these are the concepts my map uses" is the best way to start improving that. im sure you already know some concepts that you use in your current mapping (which could benefit from more strictness), so hopefully that isn't too vague
that's more something to do with future maps tho yeah i see dude i'll try to work it out thanks

DavidEd wrote:

Cute <3

General
the song is quite short so imo you should add an easy in there to appeal to all types of players I don't agree, since this BPM and the actual difficulty of the normal is not that hard for begginners, I think it's okay tbh. And also yeah, the rythmn in this normal are pretty easy compared to other normal you can usually see.

hard?
00:13:731 (1,4) - these are pretty close to each other yup fixed
00:15:515 (2,3) - if your intention was to blanket these, it needs a fix up ok, but i think this blanket was already pretty cool xd
00:16:001 (4,1) - ^ ye here didn't want to blanket it
00:59:623 (2,4) - doesnt look pretty imo, blanket 4 onto 2 slider end? oo wtf this is a mistake by me xd i fixed it mb
01:04:326 (1,2) - theyre 2 pixels away from each other, doesnt look that good. move 2 out a bit? yup

some overlaps makes this diff hard to read (maybe thats just me) in parts like this 01:06:596 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - but its not bad i think those overlaps you noticed are not that bad and actually fits and play good, i'll wait for more opinion on this tho. But I'll take it in consideration.

insane?
noooo why lower cs than the extra ;_; it should be the opposite imo imo uhh i think this is ok tbh, like you can hear sounds, are it actually plays cool xd
00:03:028 (4,5,6,7) - there's nothing too audiable to emphasize here, so delete those notes and add a 1/2 slider or 2 notes instead
00:19:407 (2,4) - too close, spread out a tiny bit ok done

cool ^^

uhh?
higher cs than insane? should be opposite?
00:32:704 (3) - ctrl+g plays betteryup, done.
01:05:299 (4,1) - too close, bend 1 more okk
01:16:001 (1) - move to x:224 y:176 uuuuu noo looks bad imo

love the map, rank it ;3
(if theres anything) you dont understand, pm ingame

good luck mate <3