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ATC - Around The World (Nightcore Mix)

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Tony
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Tony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, April 15, 2011 at 9:16:30 PM

Artist: ATC
Title: Around The World (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: -_S_e_k_a_i__- A Touch of Class
BPM: 157.13
Filesize: 3678kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.99 stars, 488 notes)
  2. Normal (3.97 stars, 268 notes)
  3. -Sekai-'s Easy (1.39 stars, 153 notes)
Download: ATC - Around The World (Nightcore Mix)
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2nd beatmap <3
Lalalala!
Last edited by Tony , edited 71 times in total.
miss_dior
miss_dior
done i hope you like it
:)

Download: ATC - Around The World (Tonoicutzu) [miss_dior's Normal].osu
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
[General]
Preview Points where? Set them in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
At all diffs:
00:19:254 - till here form start I think you should put the volume down. Claps are too loud for me..
00:31:472 - till here you should use lowered volume too, but higher than you use at start. Something in-between them.
01:02:016 - from here till 01:08:125 same as above: medium volume.
02:47:393 - starting from here you can notice the unpleasant sound that sliders make. Maybe mute it?
And also I think that you used too much hitsounds, sometimes it's tiering to play through them all D:

[Normal+]
Maybe circle size +1?
02:03:486 - map this space before the spinner or add a break.
02:12:649 (5) - no clap here? why?
02:58:083 (1) - finish him at 02:59:420 so it will end when music stops?

[miss_dior's Easy]
01:18:815 (4) - you use A LOT of finishes, but you don't use one where the song has? why is that?
01:23:015 (5) - clap, 01:23:397 (1) - finish at start and remove at end?
01:37:141 (4) - repeat another time, finish at end and at 01:38:669 (5) ?

[Insane]
If you lower the AR, you can rename it to Hard, because it's not that hard itself. But it's up to you.
01:30:747 (6) - 1 grid up
02:10:740 - imo, compared with the rest of the song (and other diffs) you need more hitsounds from this point till the end.
02:21:145 (6) - 1 grid up
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
General:
Set Preview Point

miss dior's easy:
00:31:472 - change the shape of this slider a little.
01:10:416 - ^
Don't forget to delete all the unused lines on this diffcilty after: 01:44:778

Tonoicutzu's Normal:
well,it looks like 'Hard' difficulty :) Put the circle size between Large and Normal. and put Approach Rate on 4. But still it has a lot of notes here :/ I think it will be better if you just rename it in: Hard :)
00:28:418 - this repeat slider had to end in: 00:29:181
01:13:088 - change a little the shape of this slider
01:56:995 - O.O Cool!
02:58:083 - end this spinner in: 02:59:420

Insane:
02:58:083 - finish this spinner in: 02:59:420. Awesome diffculty!
And I know this song - I like it ;) Star!
Tony
1,510 posts
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Topic Starter
Tony
Well, i have changed most of what you two said :)
thanks alot! :o
Hinacle
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Hinacle
star~!!
ReVeNg3r
660 posts
Joined August 2010
ReVeNg3r
;)
Raffey
11 posts
Joined October 2010
Raffey
:)
Puskin
14 posts
Joined May 2010
Puskin
star :D
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Suimya
;)
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wmfchris
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[general]
Tag guest diff maker's name
countdown box are not unique, either close in all diff or on in all diff
lol the .osb is blank, delete and full sub.

[Insane]
00:07:609 (4) - down 1 grid
00:10:664 (5) - up 1 grid
00:15:627 (5) - make this in better shape... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59014
00:20:209 (3~8) - clap clap clap is so loud, try to clap (or use whistle instead) in the last note of stream only, same as many coming pattern please check them yourself
[When there's 7-plet (as I see many in your diff), you can try to use clap on the 3rd and 7th beat]
- also, (6,7,8) uneven spacing
00:34:526 (6) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
00:37:852 (2) - ^
00:38:535 (6) - ^
00:40:635 (5) - ^
01:05:643 (3) - whistle, no clap
01:26:451 (6) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
01:40:769 (4) - the pattern is finish in second tick
01:50~01:55 - random clap, use softer hitsound + regular clap, spinner remove clap
02:23:340 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
02:23- fix the unregular NC pattern

[Normal+]
USE SOFTER HITSOUND, at least reduce 1/3 of the hitsound
softer part: use regular whistle instead of clap?
00:31:472 (6) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
00:34:526 (5) - ^
00:37:581 (3) - ^
00:40:635 (3) - ^
00:53:998 (s) - finish?
01:06:598 (2) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
01:13:088 (3) - ^
01:16:143 (2) - ^
...

Two things to do:
-claps are too loud for this, I strongly recommend you to try soft whistle, or you can greatly reduce the hitsound. Add some variation, like greater sound in the kiai part.
-regular new combo arrangement, especially during the "la la la" part

[Easy]
ok.

star~
Tony
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Topic Starter
Tony
All fixed~ :) ;)
vladutz65
6 posts
Joined July 2010
vladutz65
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eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
Add -Sekai- Tonoicutzu in tags

[Insane]
let all green lines in line (means Volume's line)
maybe need more hitsounds...
maybe some stream's distance is too hard :x
hp and od are both high for me :<

other seems fine to me

[Normal]
AR+2 OD-1 or 2 HP-1
00:45:997 (4,5) - to use clap instead of finish
00:49:051 (4,5) - ^
same with others

01:26:470 (1,2) - too jump for a normal i think


[Easy]
AR+1

01:24:943 (2) - spacing
Tony
1,510 posts
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Topic Starter
Tony
SOME ISSUES FIXED :) THANKS :)
Infinity_old
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Infinity_old
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Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Hii, sorry for late reply/mod,... Anyways, it is scary how this song firstly is like nightcore but then I hear the difference lol. And thanks for making this song, i heard it before and i like/d it :]

General:
Slider ticks can't be silenced.
You changed the timing and therefore where you were starting other timing sections (e.g Kiai), it does not start on a note. Place all of the timing section on notes please.
I feel multiple speed sections here, it is especially weird at the beginning of Easy, yet all difficulties would feel better with a some timing sections. Maybe do x0.75 till kiai time (put x1 speed back then)~

Easy:
I think the hitsounds volume should be lower by 3 or 4~ (Song Setup --> Audio), like in Normal+

Normal:
0:14:305 - I don't really like how this sounds... put triple circles there instead
0:16:214 - This is where New Combo should start, not on note after
1:42:125 - New combo?
2:19:926 - This is where New combo should start, not on note after.
2:35:199 - ^
2:38:253 - New combo
2:39:781 - Remove New combo
2:40:163 - New combo

...and I did not find anything to poke at in Insane, well done~ :)
Tony
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Tony
updated~
:)
_Kiva
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_Kiva
[insane]

Clap sounds to add(y add clap , sound not bad to me):
00:22:705 (2)-
00:24:614 (3,5)-
00:40:842 (1) -
01:11:579 (2) -
01:14:443 (1) -
01:17:688 (2) -
01:23:797 (2) - put clap on and remove clap from 01:24:179 (5) -
01:26:852 (2) -
01:29:907 (1) -
02:17:253 (2) -
02:20:307 (1)



00:18:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - move 2 grids looks nicer
00:19:460 (1) - put it closer to slider end will be better .. i tryed few times but easy to break slider here
00:40:842 (1) - 01:11:579 (2) - 01:14:443 (1) - 01:17:688 (2) - 01:26:852 (2) - 01:29:907 (1) - 02:17:253 (2) -02:20:307 (1) - clap
02:01:216 (3) - how about rotate slider by 180 (CTRL+< 2TIMES) , if you did dont forget spacing for 02:01:980 (4) -
02:02:744 (5) - finish
02:44:553 (1) - spacing?
02:53:335 (1) - left 1 grid
02:55:435 (1) - right 1 grid
02:56:390 (4) - up 1
Tony
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Tony
thanks! spacing fixed~ i think the hitsounds are good the way they are :)
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