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Tegomass - Kiss~Kaerimichi no Love Song~ (TV SIZE)

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HeatKai
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 5 June, 2011 at 11:17:30 PM

Artist: Tegomass
Title: Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size)
Source: Lovely Complex
Tags: TristanShi Samiljul Mekadon Atsushi Otani Koizumi Risa
BPM: 132
Filesize: 11174kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.76 stars, 297 notes)
  2. Hard (4.64 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Hw&TS's Taiko (5 stars, 361 notes)
  4. mekadon's Easy (1.88 stars, 75 notes)
  5. Normal (3.95 stars, 139 notes)
Download: Tegomass - Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size)
Download: Tegomass - Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size) (no video)
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Last edited by HeatKai , edited 92 times in total.
taNa
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8-)
Starrodkirby86
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Just helping a newbie mapper.

I'm not going in-depth until things get serious here, i.e. after 8 stars and plenty of mods, but I will give a general opinion of it all. :)
And that, there are a lot of traits that show it's a newbie map, but you have some ideas of where you're going, and that's a good start. We'll just need to get your map refined, cleaned, and ironed out of any minor errors before ranking.

Some of these things include slider shapes, pattern placement, and combos, but, as I said before, I'm not going to go in-depth. I'll leave that up to future modders. xD

Some changes from the first version:
[Little JumpingStreams]:
  1. 00:36:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Timing moved to have a less confusing pattern.
  2. 00:44:296 (1,2,3) - Spaced farther out.
Good luck!
HeatKai
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taNa wrote:

8-)
thanks taNa
HeatKai
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Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Just helping a newbie mapper. Kirby , I have a feeling . XD

I'm not going in-depth until things get serious here, i.e. after 8 stars and plenty of mods, but I will give a general opinion of it all. :)
And that, there are a lot of traits that show it's a newbie map, but you have some ideas of where you're going, and that's a good start. We'll just need to get your map refined, cleaned, and ironed out of any minor errors before ranking.

Some of these things include slider shapes, pattern placement, and combos, but, as I said before, I'm not going to go in-depth. I'll leave that up to future modders. xD

Some changes from the first version:
[Little JumpingStreams]:
  1. 00:36:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Timing moved to have a less confusing pattern.
  2. 00:44:296 (1,2,3) - Spaced farther out.
Good luck!
TTTL
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☆ミ
HeatKai
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TTTL wrote:

☆ミ
yeay :D
y u c a
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y u c a
hi~:3

General

not change combo coloer?
set preview point(both diff)

Normal

00:03:614 (4) - new combo
00:05:887 (1) - too ugly Orz....
00:08:160 (2) - new combo
00:27:705 (3) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - ^ and end time 00:30:660



Little JumpingStreams

00:00:660~00:11:114 - add more hitsound
00:18:160 (7) - new combo
00:35:091 (5) - ^
00:45:432 (4) - end time00:45:887
00:46:114 (x) - add note and new combo
00:59:523 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:296 (9) - new combo
01:24:750 (1) - too ugly Orz....


both diff can more add good note

good luck :3
HeatKai
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y u c a wrote:

hi~:3

General

not change combo coloer?
set preview point(both diff)done

Normal

00:03:614 (4) - new combo
00:05:887 (1) - too ugly Orz....
00:08:160 (2) - new combo
00:27:705 (3) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - ^ and end time 00:30:660

all fixed

Little JumpingStreams

00:00:660~00:11:114 - add more hitsound
00:18:160 (7) - new combo
00:35:091 (5) - ^
00:45:432 (4) - end time00:45:887
00:46:114 (x) - add note and new combo
00:59:523 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:296 (9) - new combo
01:24:750 (1) - too ugly Orz....

fixed
both diff can more add good note

good luck :3
the love shaped slider kinda hard to make , so it's ugly xD
thx for the mod :)
mekadon_old
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[Normal]
Slider Velocity is a little too high IMO. About 1.2 should be fine.
00:02:250 (3) - Could be shaped better
00:05:887 (1) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - wtf
00:33:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fits unperfectly. Notes before it feels easier. Make Slider+slider+slider or whatever.
00:44:182 - kiai flashes are irritating IMO
00:49:978 (8) - 1 grid right (grid size 4)

Littleblahblah
OD feels low. Make it higher by 1.
00:15:205 (11) - Spoils the ENTIRE STREAM. Remove whistle and add finish.
00:34:750 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - reminds me of AngelHoney lol
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - no no no modders will rage when they see this.
00:52:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

Also, resized the BG to reduce lagging. (My old PC lags, so after resized it seems fine at 72fps or so)


lacks difficulties IMO.

starring when I feel like I want to star it so don't ask me yet ;3
HeatKai
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mekadon wrote:

[Normal]
Slider Velocity is a little too high IMO. About 1.2 should be fine.
00:02:250 (3) - Could be shaped better
00:05:887 (1) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - wtf
00:33:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fits unperfectly. Notes before it feels easier. Make Slider+slider+slider or whatever.
00:44:182 - kiai flashes are irritating IMO
00:49:978 (8) - 1 grid right (grid size 4) all fixed except for kiai xD

Littleblahblah
OD feels low. Make it higher by 1.
00:15:205 (11) - Spoils the ENTIRE STREAM. Remove whistle and add finish.
00:34:750 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - reminds me of AngelHoney lol
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - no no no modders will rage when they see this.
00:52:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ for the new combo stream later. other fixed.

Also, resized the BG to reduce lagging. (My old PC lags, so after resized it seems fine at 72fps or so)


lacks difficulties IMO.

starring when I feel like I want to star it so don't ask me yet ;3
all done :)
the BG also thanks mekadon :)
Cute Bunny
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[ Normal ]
00:04:750 (6) - spacing
00:26:569 (2) - new combo
00:33:387 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3)stick or (4) move [ x:88 y280 ]
00:37:023 (1) - No signs of the slider so -.-

[ Little JumpingStreams ]
00:05:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing. all fix or spacing
00:15:205 (11) - move [ x:345 y:296 ]
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why new combo? All remove combo
00:52:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

oh... Something more is not enough D:
But, you can become a great mapper
Good luck ^_^;

EDIT :: IRC remod // STAR~★
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regenz
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regenz
overall general :o

AudioLeadIn: 1996 change to AudioLeadIn: 2000
enable custom color even you don't use any different colors form default.
delete tags Lovely complex Tegomass because it's already at artist and source.

Normal

General
Slider velocity is to high for normal plz reduce it.
lower all volume to 70 percent for soft sounds. (Little JumpingStreams also )


00:04:750 (6) - wrong space
00:05:887 (1) - make this more a bit good shape it's fine now but can better
00:15:205 use normal sound with 30 percent volume here.
00:22:705 (1) - can you change this to more varies of notes.
00:31:569 (1) - change this same like previous slider ? for vocal fit.
00:45:205 (4) - clap
00:47:023 (2) - clap
00:45:432 (5) - finish at tail
00:47:023 (2) - clap
00:48:841 (6) - clap
00:49:296 (7) - whistle at tail
00:49:978 (8) - clap at tail
00:50:887 (1) - change this to some note not fit for spin
for hitsound placing at BIG white tick star form this place(00:53:387 (6) -
whistle at 3rd whitetick place clap ( if you don't understand ) place whistle at big white line(1st) next white(2rd) don't place next white (3rd)place clap next white don't place (4th) ok there are big white line(1st) again so place whistle and it's loop i think u got it now.
00:57:023 (3) - change to the spinner end at 01:00:205 start same as slider. (this is apply to Little JumpingStreams also )
01:14:523 (1,2,3,4) - delete this
01:15:659 (1) - move this to 01:14:750 and end at 01:17:023

Little JumpingStreams

hmm there are a lot of things you should learn the things that you are do at this difficault call overmap
00:29:296 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this stream not fit the songs
00:31:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - also ^

and newcombo colour we have a purpose when newcombo color
when 1. hard predict note and have tricky that it ''ll make a player play more easier.
2. Jump distance change everthings
3. for vocal lyric change
4. etc

No just place like 00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - oh this is rainbow ... nono

also 00:04:750 (6) - about 1/4 return also about all of slider that have return you MUST make return slider tail see Clearly.
01:24:750 (1) - try more to make it good shape .it's ugly .

**** I can't Deep mod here becoz you need to do a lots . it's better to remap.
you need to know how to mapping (to get rank)
*** If you want to make a stream try to follow some songs that have a good fun drum it's don't overmap at all if you follow drum.
but i don't think this song fit for stream.
** I can't give you star. because your map is still need to improve a lot.
* Goodluck
LuPiiTa
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hehe
☆~
HeatKai
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All fixed. :o
mekadon_old
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btw offset: 658
sounds better imo
HeatKai
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mekadon wrote:

btw offset: 658
sounds better imo
if i use that offset , should i snap first ?
mekadon_old
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heatwave95 wrote:

mekadon wrote:

btw offset: 658
sounds better imo
if i use that offset , should i snap first ?
no. Also don't kudosu that post.
HeatKai
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=.=
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goodness~ :)
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