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Takatsuki Yayoi - Kirame Kirari

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Topic Starter
val0108
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月15日 at 19:04:48

Artist: Takatsuki Yayoi
Title: Kirame Kirari
Source: Idolmaster
Tags: yura
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5306kb
Play Time: 02:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.3 stars, 168 notes)
  2. Hard (4.93 stars, 407 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 586 notes)
  4. Normal (3.65 stars, 186 notes)
Download: Takatsuki Yayoi - Kirame Kirari
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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wow
Thite
1番!
ナツカシイ :oops:
kusakabe001
nice map!ヾ(゚ω゚)ノ゛
star~(◞≕≕◟‿,◞≕≕◟‵)
Patchouli
8-)
Hinacle
かわいい 8-)

star~!!
osuyo
nice まp :)
KSHR
modding ;)


[Normal]
これは致命的...
難易度設定がHardと同じ...

01:25:387 (2) - 前のスライダーとのスぺーシングの修正
01:26:220 (1) - remove new combo
01:27:054 (3) - new combo
02:08:720 (3) - 1grid right
(これをすると後のスぺーシングがズレるので、行う場合はこちらの修正も!)


[Hard]
00:39:887 (6) - x:136 y:96 ?
01:21:720 (4) - スぺーシング1.50を考えると、ちょっと離れてるかも
(でも修正したら後もズレるし、けどスぺーシングは......)オーバーヒート
01:57:221 (7) - x:120 y:120
02:25:220 (4) - 1,2,3,4でスぺーシングを統一したい場合は x:384 y:152


[Insane]
01:20:720 (1,2,3) - もしかしたらスぺーシングの指摘されるかも


starヽ(*´∀`)ノ
Topic Starter
val0108

KSHR wrote:

modding ;)


[Normal]
これは致命的...
難易度設定がHardと同じ...!?

01:25:387 (2) - 前のスライダーとのスぺーシングの修正no!
01:26:220 (1) - remove new combodone!
01:27:054 (3) - new combodone!
02:08:720 (3) - 1grid rightdone!
(これをすると後のスぺーシングがズレるので、行う場合はこちらの修正も!)


[Hard]
00:39:887 (6) - x:136 y:96 ?done!
01:21:720 (4) - スぺーシング1.50を考えると、ちょっと離れてるかもdone!
(でも修正したら後もズレるし、けどスぺーシングは......)オーバーヒート
01:57:221 (7) - x:120 y:120done!
02:25:220 (4) - 1,2,3,4でスぺーシングを統一したい場合は x:384 y:152done!


[Insane]
01:20:720 (1,2,3) - もしかしたらスぺーシングの指摘されるかもとりあえず放置しとく!


starヽ(*´∀`)ノ
ありがとうう!
Mercurius
8-)
Kotone
moe
Kurai
General
- You should use a 1024*768 background, so use this one ?
- Add "idolmaster" in tags ?

Normal
Overall difficulty -1
00:04:887 (3) - Try to stack the end of this slider with 00:03:387 (1) ?
00:20:554 (1) - The finish at the end sounds noisy to me and don't really suit the music, you should remove it and if you want, a finish will be nice at the beginning of 00:22:054 (1).
00:26:054 (1) - The beginning feels awkward to me. I suggest you to reduce it by 1/1 and move it 1/1 later.
02:40:721 (1,2,3,4) - As this difficulty is the easiest, you ought to transform them into sliders.

Hard
01:16:054 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very confusing part :/

Insane
01:26:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stack with 01:25:387 (1)

Star~
mooai
star~ :)
Topic Starter
val0108

KuraiPettan wrote:

General
- You should use a 1024*768 background, so use this one ?Thank you :3 done!
- Add "idolmaster" in tags ?done!

Normal
Overall difficulty -1done!
00:04:887 (3) - Try to stack the end of this slider with 00:03:387 (1) ?done!
00:20:554 (1) - The finish at the end sounds noisy to me and don't really suit the music, you should remove it and if you want, a finish will be nice at the beginning of 00:22:054 (1).done!
00:26:054 (1) - The beginning feels awkward to me. I suggest you to reduce it by 1/1 and move it 1/1 later.no
02:40:721 (1,2,3,4) - As this difficulty is the easiest, you ought to transform them into sliders.done!

Hard
01:16:054 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very confusing part :/done!

Insane
01:26:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stack with 01:25:387 (1)done!

Star~
thank you mod>w<"
Potofu
good map!!

star~~~★
banvi
wow
Suzully
;)
Caami
I love this song! *-* Star~
jericho2442
Design mod is gogo

you need to make a Easy ;p

Normal
you need to set a preview point for the map

00:20:554 (1) - i found this was rather ugly and didn't really play that good, a timing like this does play better to the flow of your map


Hard
00:11:387 (1) - space this note more so it has the same spacing as the combo before, just feels odd for this to start on such a closer spacing
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole part would flow much better by keeping the slower slider speed going through it ;)
01:21:720 (4) - make this longer so it ends on the next red tick rather then the blue, flows sooo much better xD
01:49:387 - 01:53:720 add a break at this point to be consistant with the other time, this empty space is kinda just a pointless hp drain xD
02:12:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - again would be much better to keep the slower slider speed here
02:27:387 (3,1) - this jump didnt really suit your map, maybe space this normal and it does increase the fun
02:38:054 (3,1) - same, reason behind me saying these is because all the map before it dont have a jump like this, so that really makes it feel out of place

Insane

00:05:720 (3) - this dont really work as a stack, makes it horridly hard to notice the timing of it
00:24:387 (1,2,3,4) - i found this rather blind and confusing to read :/
00:50:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream really dont suit such a soft part of the map, i do advise to nuke this stream xD
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - again i kinda think the faster slider speed here dont really suit
01:12:554 (3,1) - these being soooo close kills the flow of the combo after, it makes it feel like a mistake rather than a pattern, i advise to give this the same spacing as the combo before, you will need to respace it abit but it would make it play MUCH better
01:16:054 (1) - i kno this note is for pattern, but it really needs removing, it dont suit the map and by removing it it flows much better to the vocals you are following, just try it and you will see ;)
01:21:720 (1) - make this longer onto the red tick to flow to the vocals much better
(suggestion) 01:26:554 - maybe add a note here
01:45:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i found this abit confusing to read, i cant say why though, it seems to make sense but when i play it feels wrong
02:26:054 (4,1) - i would advise to space these more apart, atm it feels like this is a 1/4 note rather than a 1/2
02:32:720 (3,1) - hmmm this one seems to work though, maybe give the above one the same pattern as you did here


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maps are fun, just need to check some of them stuff out and make a easy, i do think you break your flow abit, and hopefully that mod will help to improve your maps greatly :)

best of luck
Topic Starter
val0108

jericho2442 wrote:

Design mod is gogo

you need to make a Easy ;plol ok.I make it

Normal
you need to set a preview point for the mapdone!

00:20:554 (1) - i found this was rather ugly and didn't really play that good, a timing like this does play better to the flow of your map
done!

Hard
00:11:387 (1) - space this note more so it has the same spacing as the combo before, just feels odd for this to start on such a closer spacingdone!
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole part would flow much better by keeping the slower slider speed going through it ;)no
01:21:720 (4) - make this longer so it ends on the next red tick rather then the blue, flows sooo much better xDdone!
01:49:387 - 01:53:720 add a break at this point to be consistant with the other time, this empty space is kinda just a pointless hp drain xDdone!
02:12:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - again would be much better to keep the slower slider speed hereno
02:27:387 (3,1) - this jump didnt really suit your map, maybe space this normal and it does increase the fundone!
02:38:054 (3,1) - same, reason behind me saying these is because all the map before it dont have a jump like this, so that really makes it feel out of placedone!

Insane

00:05:720 (3) - this dont really work as a stack, makes it horridly hard to notice the timing of itI put far
00:24:387 (1,2,3,4) - i found this rather blind and confusing to read :/done!
00:50:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream really dont suit such a soft part of the map, i do advise to nuke this stream xDno
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - again i kinda think the faster slider speed here dont really suitno
01:12:554 (3,1) - these being soooo close kills the flow of the combo after, it makes it feel like a mistake rather than a pattern, i advise to give this the same spacing as the combo before, you will need to respace it abit but it would make it play MUCH betterdone!
01:16:054 (1) - i kno this note is for pattern, but it really needs removing, it dont suit the map and by removing it it flows much better to the vocals you are following, just try it and you will see ;)no
01:21:720 (1) - make this longer onto the red tick to flow to the vocals much betterdone!
(suggestion) 01:26:554 - maybe add a note hereno
01:45:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i found this abit confusing to read, i cant say why though, it seems to make sense but when i play it feels wrongdone!
02:26:054 (4,1) - i would advise to space these more apart, atm it feels like this is a 1/4 note rather than a 1/2no
02:32:720 (3,1) - hmmm this one seems to work though, maybe give the above one the same pattern as you did hereno


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maps are fun, just need to check some of them stuff out and make a easy, i do think you break your flow abit, and hopefully that mod will help to improve your maps greatly :)

best of luck
thank you mod >w<"_!
oPOTATOo
good map!!!


すごく好きな譜面です~!
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