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07th Expansion - System0

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Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 марта 2011 г. at 10:59:27

Artist: 07th Expansion
Title: System0
Source: Umineko no Naku Koro ni
Tags: ch1ka
BPM: 138
Filesize: 5594kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ch1ka's Normal (3,87 stars, 251 notes)
  2. Easy (1,71 stars, 150 notes)
  3. Hard (4,92 stars, 462 notes)
Download: 07th Expansion - System0
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Believing oneself to be perfect is often the sign of a delusional mind...
Small words, from a small being, trying to attack what it doesn't understand!
Last edited by Reiji-RJ , edited 15 times in total.
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Ch1ka
STAR~ :3
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Ну,поехали..

Надо удалить файл -45 - System 0 (Reiji-RJ).osb,он не соответсвует названию,ди а не нужен в целом.

[Easy]
00:33:243 - Слишком короткий брейк :| анракнбл.
00:55:852 (1) - Финиш?
01:17:156 (1) - Я бы урал ноту,без неё ритм как-то правильнее.
01:42:808 (1,2,3,4) - Может тут звук потише сделать? Или софт?
02:16:286 (4) - Вот тут бы тоже убрал ноту.

[Ch1ka's Normal]
01:30:634 - Я бы тут финиш добавил,он как бы разделяет две логические части.
01:40:634 (7) - Свинь её так,что б сиркл стакнулся с 01:42:373 (4).
02:12:373 - Тут бы тоже финиш не помешал.
02:40:852 - Если уж начал ритм с финишами,то надо дальше продолжать,или тут убери тогда.
Если оставишь,то добавь сюда:
02:41:504 (3) -
02:45:417 (3) -

[Hard]
00:34:982 (1) - Финиш?
02:33:243 (4) - Мне кажется нужно заменить на финиш.

Что ещё сказать? Молодцы,оба ;)
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Все исправила, ждем Чику :3
Спасибо большое :D
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Ch1ka
Исправлено :3

Download: 07th Expansion - System0 (Reiji-RJ) [Ch1ka's Normal].osu
Caami
78 posts
Joined March 2010
Caami
Star ~ ;) :)
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Привет

General
Удали .осб
и удали when they cry из тагов
может сделать желтое комбо чуть почище? это так, мнение

Easy
00:37:591 (4) - новое комбо
(предложение)
01:42:808 (1,2,3,4) - можно на этих 4х серклах сделать "растяжку" по громкости звуков, а спиннер вообще сделать полностью тихим
Хорошая изя получилось

Ch1ka's Normal
HP на одну секцию меньше

Hard
все хорошо

Прекрасная работа, буду ждать ранка
Стар и еще одна кудо от меня :3
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Vass_Bass, все исправлено, спасибо огромное за мод и за кудо стар *о*
Желтый цвет не стала менять, он мне нравится :3
Mizu_banned
Mizu_banned
IRCMod. 8-)
Last edited by Mizu_banned , edited 1 time in total.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Ahhh, the beginning of this song always creeped the hell out of me when I was reading umineko..=u=; Awesome map, btw<3 ・w ・
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray
This maps is fine
star~
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Only issue I got:
Hard
Start it at the same time as the other diffs. Keep it consistent

No kudosu here

Good luck with this map, nicely done ^_^
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite
perfect
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Hey, here's my mod. Green stuff can be ignored completely, they are just a design opinion.

[Easy]:
  1. 02:28:460 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid down so it's in line with (1) in the same combo.
[Ch1ka's Normal]:
  1. 00:08:026 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) by 1 grid up and (4) by 1 grid to the right, so it makes a nicer cross shape.
  2. 00:29:765 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) by 1 grid up to stay in line with (2). Move (4) by 1 grid up to fix distance.
  3. 00:31:504 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing looks a little weird. Try placing them like this. Also, to do so, turn off distance snap when you move (1) into position, but turn it on afterwards. The spacing between the last combo and this one is a bit larger than the current scale but it doesn't look confusing or wrong. (if you made the nazi changes above)
  4. 00:43:678 (1) - Consider adding a clap on a tick at 00:44:547.
  5. 00:56:721 (2,3) - (nazi) Move (2) by 1 grid up. This forms a nice triangle between the start of slider (2) in the previous combo, the end of the previous slider and this note. Also, move (3) by 1 grid down and 1 grid left. Looks better since later on there will be a note on exact position.
  6. 02:08:895 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing looks a little weird. I suggest to switch to grid level 4 and reposition them in the line to get better spacing. Like this. They are positioned a bit lower than before as well, so you will need to position the next combo (sliders (1) and (2)) by 1 grid down as well, spacing after that looks okay.
[Hard]:
  1. HP drain +1.
  2. 00:22:808 (5) - New combo.
  3. 00:26:721 (7) - ^
  4. 00:29:765 (6) - New combo and fix the spacing between current (6) and (7) to match the combo's spacing.
  5. 01:19:221 (7) - (nazi) 1 grid down and 1 grid to the right. It looks better. :)
  6. 02:27:156 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) by 1 grid down and 1 to the left. Do the same with (4). This way 1-2-3-4 will shape a square.
  7. 02:28:243 (1,2,x) - Just like the above, but move them to the right instead of left. After you do this change this, move (5) by 1 grid down and 1 to the right, (6) by 1 grid right, and finally (1) by 1 grid to the right. Spacing looks okay afterwards.
  8. 02:45:634 (8) - New combo.
  9. 02:46:069 (1) - Remove new combo.
There. Apologies for lots of nazi mods, but since I couldn't find anything wrong apart from some minor spacing issues, I tried my best to clean this map a little.
Hope it helped. Great map and star. :3
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
lolcubes, all fixed. Waiting for Ch1ka.
Thank you a lot!~
Also thanks to all who stared it :3
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Ch1ka
Thank you for mod!
All fixed.

Download: 07th Expansion - System0 (Reiji-RJ) [Ch1ka's Normal].osu
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Sweet~
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
Niiiice map >wwww<

shoot my lovely star ~ :)

then it's my mod time.
Just suggestion =)

[Ch1ka's normal]
00:33:026(5)-add note ;3?
01:32:373(4)-i think this note should be on the same line with (1)? :3
01:32:808(5,6)-(5) one grid right and one grid down; (6) should be on the same line with (4)

other diffs i can't find problem :3

good map with nice hitsounds! go ahead !~
Last edited by Axey , edited 1 time in total.
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
ya o/
All suggestion :3

[Easy]
00:38:026 (5) - Remove whistle
00:41:504 (3) - ^
00:44:982 (3) - ^
00:46:721 (5) - Remove whistleand add clap
00:48:460 (7) - ^
00:51:939 (3) - Remove whistle
00:54:113 (3,5) - ^
00:58:895 (4) - ^
01:00:634 (2) - Remove whistle and add clap
01:02:373 (4) - clap

[Ch1ka's Normal]
00:36:721 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:678 (1) - ^
00:47:156 (1) - ^
00:52:373 (1) - ^
00:55:852 (1) - ^
01:23:678 (1) - ^
01:18:460 (1) - 1grid right
02:33:026 (8) - 1grid up

[Hard]
00:41:721 (9) - add whistle
00:52:156 (8) - ^
00:53:895 (4) - ^
00:55:634 (11) - ^
00:54:113 (5) - new combo
00:54:113 (5) - ^
02:42:373 (6) - ^
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Hijiri Tezuka, BakaHuang, val0108, thanks a lot >w<
Some fixed~
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