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k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix) [OsuM

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ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
ArcherLove
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 Nopember 2017 at 20:48:28

Artist: k*chan
Title: Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix)
Source: 僕だけがいない街
Tags: Sayuri Boku dake ga Inai Machi ED The Town Where Only I am Missing BokuMachi erased
BPM: 144
Filesize: 7316kb
Play Time: 04:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Biasa [NM] - 7Key (2,96 stars, 1852 notes)
  2. Caramel - 7Key (6,73 stars, 3748 notes)
  3. Mudah [EZ] - 7Key (2,05 stars, 999 notes)
  4. Sangat Sulit [MX] - 7Key (5,33 stars, 3191 notes)
  5. Sulit [HD] - 7Key (4,13 stars, 2697 notes)
Download: k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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https://soundcloud.com/dj-jomusicchanne ... ll-version
special thanks expew


RE-DL NEW MP3 2 march '17 (only change bitrate, nothing more)
Last edited by ArcherLove , edited 37 times in total.
DJ Profetti
DJ Profetti
chat mod
2016-07-05 15:42 ArcherLove: halo~ are you free for some testplay right now? ww
2016-07-05 15:43 DJ Profetti: ah sure
2016-07-05 15:43 ArcherLove: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020673 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix)]
2016-07-05 15:43 ArcherLove: beware jack and hp is draining
2016-07-05 15:43 ArcherLove: ending = jackjackjack
2016-07-05 15:48 ArcherLove: rip
2016-07-05 15:48 DJ Profetti: rip ;-;
2016-07-05 15:49 ArcherLove: aaa how was the LN part?
2016-07-05 15:49 DJ Profetti: there is a part strange
2016-07-05 15:49 DJ Profetti: 00:31:265 (31265|2,31890|0,32515|1) -
2016-07-05 15:49 DJ Profetti: no LN this part
2016-07-05 15:50 ArcherLove: the "ding ding ding ding" electronic sound
2016-07-05 15:51 DJ Profetti: can't hear it;-;
2016-07-05 15:52 DJ Profetti: i think it's okey if you don't rank
2016-07-05 15:53 ArcherLove: It's playability tho =w=
2016-07-05 15:53 ArcherLove: oh well
2016-07-05 15:53 ArcherLove: not rank for now
2016-07-05 15:53 ArcherLove: bn hopeless lN
2016-07-05 15:54 DJ Profetti: they don't love ln ;-;
2016-07-05 15:54 DJ Profetti: 00:47:723 (47723|2,47723|0) -
2016-07-05 15:54 DJ Profetti: reduce
2016-07-05 15:54 ArcherLove: okay
2016-07-05 15:54 ArcherLove: stop SV is cool ;www;
2016-07-05 15:54 ArcherLove: but okay :
2016-07-05 15:54 DJ Profetti: may be 00:47:723 (47723|0) - to note
2016-07-05 15:55 DJ Profetti: 00:56:265 -
2016-07-05 15:55 DJ Profetti: add more
2016-07-05 15:56 DJ Profetti: 00:56:890 -
2016-07-05 15:56 DJ Profetti: this too
2016-07-05 15:56 ArcherLove: 00:56:890 (56890|3) -
2016-07-05 15:56 ArcherLove: where should add
2016-07-05 15:56 ArcherLove: if add at 3 or 5 = awkward
2016-07-05 15:56 ArcherLove: zwz
2016-07-05 15:56 DJ Profetti: 5 i think
2016-07-05 15:56 ArcherLove: hm
2016-07-05 15:57 ArcherLove: http://puu.sh/pQRLM/3e0a74af58.png
2016-07-05 15:57 ArcherLove: do you think 5 or 6?
2016-07-05 15:57 DJ Profetti: 5
2016-07-05 15:57 ArcherLove: ok
2016-07-05 15:58 DJ Profetti: 00:58:035 (58035|0) -
2016-07-05 15:58 DJ Profetti: what this mean??
2016-07-05 15:59 DJ Profetti: 00:57:931 - i think should move to here
2016-07-05 15:59 ArcherLove: `actually I want that to be like 00:31:265 (31265|2,31890|0,32515|1) -
2016-07-05 15:59 ArcherLove: but forgot to remove
2016-07-05 15:59 ArcherLove: zz thanks
2016-07-05 15:59 ArcherLove: okay then moved
2016-07-05 16:00 DJ Profetti: 01:03:140 -
2016-07-05 16:00 DJ Profetti: add more
2016-07-05 16:01 DJ Profetti: 01:14:390 (74390|5) -
2016-07-05 16:01 ArcherLove: hmm
2016-07-05 16:01 DJ Profetti: look empty in 7
2016-07-05 16:01 ArcherLove: it's still first part so I refrain
2016-07-05 16:01 DJ Profetti: move to 7?
2016-07-05 16:02 ArcherLove: yes move to 7
2016-07-05 16:05 ArcherLove: if there is more could we continue later ..? I should do laundry x_x or post in forum :D
2016-07-05 16:05 ArcherLove: baii
2016-07-05 16:05 DJ Profetti: you can just leave for a while
2016-07-05 16:05 DJ Profetti: i mod very slow
2016-07-05 16:05 DJ Profetti: it's okey
2016-07-05 16:07 DJ Profetti: 01:14:390 (74390|5) -
2016-07-05 16:07 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/wHG6bQ2.jpg?1
2016-07-05 16:07 DJ Profetti: better pattern
2016-07-05 16:08 DJ Profetti: 02:04:181 (124181|5) - no sound
2016-07-05 16:09 DJ Profetti: 02:11:265 (131265|2) - move to 2
2016-07-05 16:10 DJ Profetti: 02:13:140 -
2016-07-05 16:11 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/XPdpjIS.jpg?1
2016-07-05 16:11 DJ Profetti: suggest
2016-07-05 16:11 DJ Profetti: 02:15:015 - add more
2016-07-05 16:12 DJ Profetti: 02:15:015 -
2016-07-05 16:13 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/vg1eg1f.jpg?1
2016-07-05 16:13 DJ Profetti: suggest
2016-07-05 16:13 DJ Profetti: 02:20:223 (140223|2,140223|4) -
2016-07-05 16:13 DJ Profetti: remove
2016-07-05 16:14 DJ Profetti: 02:20:640 - add more
2016-07-05 16:16 DJ Profetti: 02:34:442 (154442|2,154494|4,154546|1) - no sound
2016-07-05 16:18 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/bC7UzY9.jpg?1 maybe this?
2016-07-05 16:20 DJ Profetti: 02:40:431 (160431|4,160431|0,160535|0,160535|4) - there are sounds different, so maybe change column
2016-07-05 16:21 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/EYzlAE0.jpg?1maybe this?
2016-07-05 16:23 DJ Profetti: 02:41:265 -
2016-07-05 16:24 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/MK1ITrs.jpg?1 how about like this?
2016-07-05 16:24 DJ Profetti: 02:42:723 (162723|4,162723|6) - remove
2016-07-05 16:25 DJ Profetti: 02:42:931 (162931|2,162931|0) - what these mean??
2016-07-05 16:26 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/l2CaxkC.jpg?1 try this
2016-07-05 16:28 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/XpwtGnt.jpg?1 try it
2016-07-05 16:31 DJ Profetti: http://i.imgur.com/bBtfEcE.jpg?1 better
2016-07-05 16:31 DJ Profetti: 02:54:598 (174598|3) - change to dobble LN
2016-07-05 16:34 DJ Profetti: 03:16:473 (196473|3) - remove
2016-07-05 16:35 DJ Profetti: 03:15:640 - i think this part LN need shorter?
2016-07-05 16:36 DJ Profetti: maybe 1/12
2016-07-05 16:36 DJ Profetti: 03:20:431 (200431|5) - start at 03:20:483 -
2016-07-05 16:39 DJ Profetti: 04:08:140 (248140|1,248348|2,248556|3) - change to LN
2016-07-05 16:43 DJ Profetti: okey just it
2016-07-05 16:45 DJ Profetti: 00:08:765 - miss note;-;
2016-07-05 16:48 ArcherLove: a
2016-07-05 16:48 ArcherLove: I'M DONE
2016-07-05 16:48 DJ Profetti: nice)b
2016-07-05 16:48 ArcherLove: owo)b
2016-07-05 16:49 ArcherLove: checking your mod now
2016-07-05 16:49 ArcherLove: post log please zz
2016-07-05 16:49 DJ Profetti: okey

good luck this is nice map :D
projectc1
319 posts
Joined May 2013
projectc1
(random terrible sv mod + forgot to do this at yesterday)

01:48:140 (108140|4) - sampe 01:53:140 (113140|4) - 0.25x speed
01:57:515 (117515|2) - 01:57:723 (117723|4) - 01:57:931 (117931|3) - coba bikin SV jatoh di 3 note ini
02:55:640 (175640|3) - sampe 03:14:181 (194181|4) - 1.1x speed (mungkin ini suggesti agak aneh, tapi menurut gue disini tempo lagunya lebih cepet)
03:14:390 (194390|2) - 03:14:598 (194598|5) - 03:14:806 (194806|4) - 03:15:015 (195015|3) - 03:15:223 (195223|1) - 03:15:431 (195431|2) - 5 part ini dibuat sv jatoh cocok keknya
03:15:848 (195848|3) - sampe 03:25:223 (205223|2) - 0.25x speed
03:25:640 (205640|4) - sampe 03:30:431 (210431|4) - 0.75x speed
03:45:848 (225848|4) - sampe 03:50:431 (230431|3) - 0.5x speed
03:51:160 (231160|5) - sampe 03:55:431 (235431|3) - (cuman nanya, emang boleh ya 7 note LN bersamaan? gue liat dari part sini mungkin ada 3x mesti pencet 7 note jadi ya agak susah kena ranked)

gue rasa itu aja, silahkan reject kalo misalnya ga penting" amat

also evil jack for sure zz
BilliumMoto
osu!mixer II
190 posts
Joined January 2014
BilliumMoto
Modding from:

BilliumMoto's Mania Workshop


First Impressions:
Song is a nice breath of fresh air, the mapping for this song is certainly interesting, most of it works, some of it doesn't. Has a lot of potential but can be significantly improved.

tinkerings inside
Check your offset, it feels like it should be around 615

[Caramel]
00:00:848 (848|4,1056|6) - the first one can barely be heard, while the second one is a clear note that's part of the melody. the two shouldn't be equal like they are mapped, make the second a double or delete the first
this problem repeats at least seven more times

00:11:265 (11265|3,11265|0,11265|1) - are these small clicks worth three notes? they feel better just being one note. When the kick comes back in full force at 00:20:640 (20640|0,20640|6,20640|3) I can understand the triples, but not here.

00:10:848 (10848|2,10848|4,11056|2,11056|4) - these chords are the same as 00:11:473 (11473|6,11473|4,11681|6,11681|4) so they should be mapped in the same columns. this mistake occurs at least seven more times, at least you fixed it later on starting 00:20:848

00:30:848 (30848|6,31056|4) - the LNs starting here should be 1/4 shorter, keep them short until the long ones begin to make sense around here 00:40:640 (40640|4)

Because 00:58:348 (58348|1,58348|5) and 00:58:556 (58556|5,58556|0) are doubles, these should be doubles too: 00:58:973 (58973|3,59181|6)
This inconsistent layering happens one more time

01:18:140 (78140|6) - the music doesn't change that much, but your layering becomes drastically more dense. keep your layering consistent between the section before this note and the section after this note

01:36:056 (96056|0,96473|2,96473|1,96681|1,96890|1) - Be wary of very awkward patterns like this, I've let a lot of them pass but this one is a bit too much
The jacks are fine for the most part though

01:57:306 (117306|3) - The SV change here is difficult to predict, but it should be fine after a few plays for most players.

02:21:890 (141890|5) - Too long?

02:33:140 (153140|0,153140|5,153140|2,153348|4,153348|1,153348|0,153556|3,153556|0,153556|6,153765|3,153765|2,153765|5,153973|3,153973|1,153973|4,154181|6,154181|3) - careful, this is one big awkward mess, and quite a difficulty spike. and the music doesn't change all that much here

02:34:442 (154442|2,154494|4,154546|6) - Delete these notes, burst doesn't start until 02:34:598 (154598|1)

03:03:140 (183140|5) - Make this end 1/2 shorter, the LNs here are becoming really really messy
I want to say more about these LN patterns but you probably know more about these than I do

03:21:265 (201265|6) - ghost-ish note? it's really quiet and hard to hear while playing

03:26:056 (206056|1,206681|0) - make this 1/2 shorter to match vocals, this happens a few more times

03:30:640 (210640|1) - get everything from here to the end tested by some good players lol

03:57:515 (237515|4) - mmm finger-independence jacks, might be overkill but get some good testplayers to see if it's okay

It's quite a long map, and it takes about 3 and a half minutes before it suddenly gets to the hard part. That's going to annoy a lot of people.

[MX]
00:00:848 (848|5,1056|3) - same problem from Caramel

00:11:265 (11265|2,11265|3,11265|0) - same problem from Caramel

00:20:848 (20848|4,20848|2,21056|2,21056|4) compared to - same pitch relevance problem as Caramel

00:58:348 (58348|5) - the 1/4ths begin here, a similar mistake is made at 01:00:848 (60848|1)

02:15:640 (135640|2) - add a note here?
02:17:515 (137515|1) - ^
02:18:140 (138140|4) - ^ happens a few more times too

02:30:640 (150640|4) - this part is quite hard in comparison to the rest, a significant difficulty spike, maybe it's a bit too much

02:42:827 (162827|5,162931|1,162931|5,163035|1) - why does the jack change columns? is there something significant on the 1/2 that's not on the other jack notes?

02:45:640 (165640|6,165640|0,165640|3) - LNs end earlier, this happens at least three more times

02:48:140 (168140|1,168140|0,168140|5,168140|6) - should also be shorter, happens at least three more times

02:59:390 (179390|5,179806|4) - why isn't this symmetrical to 02:59:390 (179390|1,180015|2) ?

03:12:515 (192515|0) - what is this LN corresponding to

03:17:306 (197306|5) - move to same column as 03:16:681 (196681|2) because vocal pitch

03:19:806 (199806|2,200223|3,200483|5) - move these one or two columns to the right because of vocal pitch

03:21:265 (201265|2) - can't hear what this note corresponds to

03:21:681 (201681|5,201890|4,202098|3,202306|2) - - Have these follow pitch of the vocals, maybe 1224

03:22:723 (202723|4) - not sure what this corresponds to, if it is to the synth then you also need to layer the synth everywhere else in this section

Double check that all your jacks towards the end start at the right place, most of them feel like they begin too early. For example, 03:56:369 (236369|5) - should be deleted. You did get 04:00:015 (240015|4,240223|4,240327|4,240431|4,240535|4) right though. If it's hard for you to tell, try closing your eyes and listening to the music carefully.

03:53:140 (233140|6,233140|0,233765|0,233765|6) - these are too long

03:58:765 (238765|3,238765|1) - isn't there a note change in the middle of this LN? happens at least two more times

Final impressions:
I can see that you don't care much for pitch relevance, but it would be nice if you could make more variations in your patterns that aren't only variations of 1234567 or 1357 or 246.
However, it's still an enjoyable map, and with some polishing can really become something quite nice. Good luck on ranking!
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
ArcherLove

BilliumMoto wrote:

Modding from:

BilliumMoto's Mania Workshop


First Impressions:
Song is a nice breath of fresh air, the mapping for this song is certainly interesting, most of it works, some of it doesn't. Has a lot of potential but can be significantly improved.

tinkerings inside
Check your offset, it feels like it should be around 615

[Caramel]
00:00:848 (848|4,1056|6) - the first one can barely be heard, while the second one is a clear note that's part of the melody. the two shouldn't be equal like they are mapped, make the second a double or delete the first
this problem repeats at least seven more times

00:11:265 (11265|3,11265|0,11265|1) - are these small clicks worth three notes? they feel better just being one note. When the kick comes back in full force at 00:20:640 (20640|0,20640|6,20640|3) I can understand the triples, but not here. well mostly it is just playability thing! I will change it if in future modding there is someone tell me that this is overnote!

00:10:848 (10848|2,10848|4,11056|2,11056|4) - these chords are the same as 00:11:473 (11473|6,11473|4,11681|6,11681|4) so they should be mapped in the same columns. this mistake occurs at least seven more times, at least you fixed it later on starting 00:20:848 the very same as reason above! it's only about playability really!

00:30:848 (30848|6,31056|4) - the LNs starting here should be 1/4 shorter, keep them short until the long ones begin to make sense around here 00:40:640 (40640|4)

Because 00:58:348 (58348|1,58348|5) and 00:58:556 (58556|5,58556|0) are doubles, these should be doubles too: 00:58:973 (58973|3,59181|6)
This inconsistent layering happens one more time

01:18:140 (78140|6) - the music doesn't change that much, but your layering becomes drastically more dense. keep your layering consistent between the section before this note and the section after this note it is empashizing the vocal too!

01:36:056 (96056|0,96473|2,96473|1,96681|1,96890|1) - Be wary of very awkward patterns like this, I've let a lot of them pass but this one is a bit too much um, this is not awkward if you train more LN at o2jam, no no not because playstyle, because this is a normal pattern at o2jam? not really awkward! but, I will change it if in future modding there are people tell me to change again!
The jacks are fine for the most part though

01:57:306 (117306|3) - The SV change here is difficult to predict, but it should be fine after a few plays for most players. It is fine then!~ so this song not become pp map, I should make the SV a bit harder too ..

02:21:890 (141890|5) - Too long? It is not! If you see this LN's ending 02:20:640 (140640|6,140640|4) - also the same as 02:21:890 (141890|5) - this!~

02:33:140 (153140|0,153140|5,153140|2,153348|4,153348|1,153348|0,153556|3,153556|0,153556|6,153765|3,153765|2,153765|5,153973|3,153973|1,153973|4,154181|6,154181|3) - careful, this is one big awkward mess, and quite a difficulty spike. and the music doesn't change all that much here I want to make something like "be ware! something is gonna be a bit harder after!"

02:34:442 (154442|2,154494|4,154546|6) - Delete these notes, burst doesn't start until 02:34:598 (154598|1)

03:03:140 (183140|5) - Make this end 1/2 shorter, the LNs here are becoming really really messy
I want to say more about these LN patterns but you probably know more about these than I do Yes, the reason is "for playability" again!~

03:21:265 (201265|6) - ghost-ish note? it's really quiet and hard to hear while playing but it is there so it's okay?

03:26:056 (206056|1,206681|0) - make this 1/2 shorter to match vocals, this happens a few more times

03:30:640 (210640|1) - get everything from here to the end tested by some good players lol

03:57:515 (237515|4) - mmm finger-independence jacks, might be overkill but get some good testplayers to see if it's okay

It's quite a long map, and it takes about 3 and a half minutes before it suddenly gets to the hard part. That's going to annoy a lot of people.

gemboyong got S 900K, _s h i r o_ 910? I forgot xD they said it is fine, the LN is good for them :o
I forgot some people I ask for testplay, but don't worry, I always make sure to test themse myself and ask for opinion from o2jam player more!

[MX]
00:00:848 (848|5,1056|3) - same problem from Caramel

00:11:265 (11265|2,11265|3,11265|0) - same problem from Caramel

00:20:848 (20848|4,20848|2,21056|2,21056|4) compared to - same pitch relevance problem as Caramel

00:58:348 (58348|5) - the 1/4ths begin here, a similar mistake is made at 01:00:848 (60848|1)

02:15:640 (135640|2) - add a note here?
02:17:515 (137515|1) - ^
02:18:140 (138140|4) - ^ happens a few more times too

02:30:640 (150640|4) - this part is quite hard in comparison to the rest, a significant difficulty spike, maybe it's a bit too much you think so? for now I will move the short note to 6 ..

02:42:827 (162827|5,162931|1,162931|5,163035|1) - why does the jack change columns? is there something significant on the 1/2 that's not on the other jack notes? so it become not boring and have a bit of difference from before!

02:45:640 (165640|6,165640|0,165640|3) - LNs end earlier, this happens at least three more times

02:48:140 (168140|1,168140|0,168140|5,168140|6) - should also be shorter, happens at least three more times

02:59:390 (179390|5,179806|4) - why isn't this symmetrical to 02:59:390 (179390|1,180015|2) ? so it's not become too hard?

03:12:515 (192515|0) - what is this LN corresponding to

03:17:306 (197306|5) - move to same column as 03:16:681 (196681|2) because vocal pitch

03:19:806 (199806|2,200223|3,200483|5) - move these one or two columns to the right because of vocal pitch

03:21:265 (201265|2) - can't hear what this note corresponds to like this 03:11:890 (191890|1) - sound you hear the sound fading in, right? that's it!

03:21:681 (201681|5,201890|4,202098|3,202306|2) - - Have these follow pitch of the vocals, maybe 1224

03:22:723 (202723|4) - not sure what this corresponds to, if it is to the synth then you also need to layer the synth everywhere else in this section

Double check that all your jacks towards the end start at the right place, most of them feel like they begin too early. For example, 03:56:369 (236369|5) - should be deleted. You did get 04:00:015 (240015|4,240223|4,240327|4,240431|4,240535|4) right though. If it's hard for you to tell, try closing your eyes and listening to the music carefully. yeah it is so hard even with 50% playback ,the sound just tooo low :o thank you deleted!

03:53:140 (233140|6,233140|0,233765|0,233765|6) - these are too long

03:58:765 (238765|3,238765|1) - isn't there a note change in the middle of this LN? happens at least two more times changein LN to the hand that doing the jack is too hard

Final impressions:
I can see that you don't care much for pitch relevance, but it would be nice if you could make more variations in your patterns that aren't only variations of 1234567 or 1357 or 246.
However, it's still an enjoyable map, and with some polishing can really become something quite nice. Good luck on ranking!
Thank you for your detailed and impressive mods as always!
And yes! I don't really intend to take PR for mapping, why? Well .. I still do not have many experience, and make enjoyable pattern + PR is a bit our of my skill ..., sorry!
And also, I don't really into technical mapping, so maybe there are many error about consistency, I'm sorry again about that!

No reply means applied!
I tried to reply with my reasoning as I can think of when I map that part!
I will try to mod your map but iti s 4K and weird song so maybe only a little xD
MadBricktree
468 posts
Joined August 2014
MadBricktree
Mod from ngeng queue/discord
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Since I can't do much about the playability of this map (yay I suck at noodles) I'll just try going over SVs.

Caramel
00:46:870 - ~ 00:48:120 - Since the SV values of this section seems to be trying to decrease by 0.15 every 1/1, I feel that the numbers at 00:47:703 - ~ 00:48:015 - should be readjusted to be 0.25x overall to be more predictable (it is currently 0.5125x overall.)
My recommended values are 00:47:703 - 0.15x, 00:48:015 - 0.55x.

00:49:995 - ~ 00:50:515 - The SV values in this section may not be easily readable as it makes the LNs look around 1.43 times shorter than they are supposed to be. It is advisable that you adjust the numbers to make them add up to 1x, either by replacing the 0.1x with 0.7x, replacing 1.3x with 1.9x, or changing both to some other pairs like 0.5x/1.5x and 0.01x/1.99x.

00:52:495 - ~ 00:53:015 - , 02:19:995 - ~ 02:20:515 - , and 02:37:495 - ~ 02:38:015 - The same applies to these sections

02:19:370 - ~ 02:19:682 - Similar stuff, except a bit shorter.

03:14:370 - ~ 03:15:515 - The same SVs values over a longer section.

00:57:911 - ~ 00:58:015 - In this case, the LN looks 1.25 times shorter than it is supposed to be. Likewise, it is advisable to replace some values to make the section 1x overall, either by replacing 0.3x with 0.7x, replacing 1.3x with 1.7x, or changing both to some other pairs like 0.5x/1.5x and 0.01x/1.99x.

02:17:495 - ~ 02:18:015 - The same as above

01:06:870 - 01:07:599 - On the other hand, the LNs in this section looks around 1.13 times longer than they are supposed to be while the gaps between the notes seem 1.33 times shoter than they actually are. I recommend that you edit the SV values in the LNs to make the LN look as long as they are, and add another SV value in the gap, or at the end of the LN, to make the gaps look as long as they are supposed to be.
Suggestions
Suggestion1
01:06:870 - 1.5x
01:06:922 - 0.5x
01:06:974 - 1x
01:07:078 - 1.5x
01:07:130 - 0.5x
01:07:182 - 1x
01:07:286 - 1.5x
01:07:338 - 0.5x
01:07:390 - 1x
01:07:495 - 1.5x
01:07:547 - 0.5x
01:07:599 - 1x
Suggestion2
01:06:870 - 1.25x
01:06:922 - 0.75x
01:06:974 - 1x
01:07:078 - 1.25x
01:07:130 - 0.75x
01:07:182 - 1x
01:07:286 - 1.25x
01:07:338 - 0.75x
01:07:390 - 1x
01:07:495 - 1.25x
01:07:547 - 0.75x
01:07:599 - 1x
Suggestion3
01:06:870 - 1.5x
01:06:922 - 0.5x
01:07:026 - 1.5x
01:07:130 - 0.5x
01:07:234 - 1.5x
01:07:338 - 0.5x
01:07:442 - 1.5x
01:07:547 - 0.5x
01:07:651 - 1.5x
01:07:703 - 1x
Suggestion4
01:06:870 - 1.25x
01:06:922 - 0.75x
01:07:026 - 1.25x
01:07:130 - 0.75x
01:07:234 - 1.25x
01:07:338 - 0.75x
01:07:442 - 1.25x
01:07:547 - 0.75x
01:07:651 - 1.25x
01:07:703 - 1x

01:27:495 - ~ 01:27:911 - This section too isn't very readable as the LN is stretched by 1.2 and the section is around 0.68x overall. It is highly recommended that each SV sections are split between the gaps between two objects, thus meaning that another SV should be added inside the LN, or simply removed. My personal recommendation is to simply start the SV at 01:27:599 - and end at 01:27:911 -, perhaps like the following.
01:27:599 - 2x
01:27:703 - 0.5x
01:27:911 - 1x
or
01:27:599 - 0.5x
01:27:703 - 1.25x
01:27:911 - 1x

02:23:745 - The LN here actually looks 1.11 times shorter than it's supposed to be. To make the values right, you should either move the SVs at 02:23:745 - & 02:23:953 - 1/4 higher, or change either value to be stronger/weaker to add up to 1x overall (eg. 1.5x -> 1.75x or 0.5x -> 0.67x)

03:34:370 - ~ 03:35:620 - I feel that instead of stretching the gap at 03:35:515 - by 1.3x, reducing the value of 03:35:203 - and adding another value at 03:35:411 - to offset the reduction will produce similar effects while not sacrificing playability.
Example
03:35:203 - 0.3x
03:35:411 - 1.1x
03:35:515 - 1x

03:56:140 - Similar to the last point, the gap seems to be stretched by 1.3 times than it's supposed to be. I recommend that you add a SV value at 03:56:192 - to offset the other SV (0.7x if you're keeping 1.3x, if you feel that the effect becomes too small to notice, you can try the following.)
Reference
03:56:140 - 1.7x
03:56:192 - 0.3x
03:56:245 - 1x
If you feel that my suggestion feels a bit awkward, you can try increasing the slowjam little by little for a smoother transition like the following.
Reference
03:55:620 - 0.7x
03:55:828 - 0.8x
03:56:036 - 0.9x
Sorry that I couldn't go over the notecharting (I really should learn more noodles)
Good luck on ranking

Pew pew
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
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Topic Starter
ArcherLove
thanks serial number

adding 
 236140,-58.8235294117647,3,1,1,30,0,0
236240,-333.333333333333,3,1,1,30,0,0
236245,-100,3,1,1,30,0,0
for 03:56:140 -

and soe SV are intended like that so it can show the original lenght of LN

thnkss!
Koibenii
267 posts
Joined March 2013
Koibenii
Hi! Mod requested from #kudosu-farm :D

General:
1. You may want to reduce the bitrate of the audio to 192kbps :)

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Biasa

  • 03:00:620 - shouldn't there be a double here? preferably at [2], like what you did at 02:59:370 (179370|2,179370|4,179370|6) - three-key presses to emphasize the kicks
    03:03:120 - also here: shouldn't the LN be accompanied by a single note, preferably at [7]?
    03:06:245 (186245|2) - should be a double?

Sulit

  • 00:30:213 (30213|4,30421|4,30630|2) - maybe swap columns? since you already did 00:28:338 (28338|4,28546|4) just to avoid redundancy
    02:03:338 (123338|2,123755|4) - pattern suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7096286 just to ease up on the usage of white notes. feel free to reject :p

Sangat Sulit

  • 02:42:703 (162703|5,162807|5,162911|5,162911|1,163015|1) - why not put the jack part only at [6]?
    04:20:620 (260620|1,260828|1) - maybe remove? for consistency because you only used doubles at the next measures like at 04:21:870 (261870|3,261870|1,261870|0,262078|0,262078|3)

Okay maybe that's it for my mod, very sorry if its super short :( and i'm not really capable of modding 6* diffs because I don't know what's really appropriate to rank those stuff. Anyways I hope my mod helped, no kds if it didn't help. Best of luck!
ArcherLove
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Topic Starter
ArcherLove
thanks! applied all except the double and jack at 6~

jack all at 6 too hard ;w;
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
[Biasa]
Turn off widescreen support
Turn off countdown
00:10:620 - Add one for the finish sound, quite audible
01:20:620 (80620|6,81036|4,81453|0,81870|2,82286|4,82703|6) - Should end at red tick
02:45:620 (165620|5,165620|1) - End at 02:46:036 - , like you did for the 01:18:120 -
02:46:245 (166245|3,166870|0,166870|6,167495|3) - Same with those
03:08:745 (188745|2) - Isn't this suppose to star at 03:08:953 - , 100% same sound with 03:06:453 - and you use different timing
[Sulit]
So you use 620 as offset for this diff and 630 for the other diff
01:07:713 (67713|1,67739|2,67782|3,67817|4,67869|5,67921|6) - Too much
02:45:630 (165630|3,165630|0,165630|6,166255|4,166255|2,166255|0,166255|6,166880|1,166880|5,166880|3) - Whats the reason you extend those LN when the sound is actually finish at red/white tick
[Sangat Sulit]
01:10:099 (70099|6,70203|6,70307|6,70411|6,70515|6) - Instead of putting the jack at 7th col, change col with 01:09:995 (69995|5,70620|5) - so the jacks can be played with you middle finger
01:12:495 - if you accpet the previous mod
00:58:745 (58745|6,58745|6) - Quality
02:35:828 (155828|2,156036|1,156245|0,156245|5,156245|3,156245|4,156245|6) - So how a membrane keyboard player can play this

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ArcherLove
1,434 posts
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Topic Starter
ArcherLove

YaHao wrote:

[Biasa]
Turn off widescreen support
Turn off countdown
00:10:620 - Add one for the finish sound, quite audible
01:20:620 (80620|6,81036|4,81453|0,81870|2,82286|4,82703|6) - Should end at red tick
02:45:620 (165620|5,165620|1) - End at 02:46:036 - , like you did for the 01:18:120 -
02:46:245 (166245|3,166870|0,166870|6,167495|3) - Same with those
03:08:745 (188745|2) - Isn't this suppose to star at 03:08:953 - , 100% same sound with 03:06:453 - and you use different timing
[Sulit]
So you use 620 as offset for this diff and 630 for the other diff changed
01:07:713 (67713|1,67739|2,67782|3,67817|4,67869|5,67921|6) - Too much
02:45:630 (165630|3,165630|0,165630|6,166255|4,166255|2,166255|0,166255|6,166880|1,166880|5,166880|3) - Whats the reason you extend those LN when the sound is actually finish at red/white tick actually playability, but reduced because HD diff
[Sangat Sulit]
01:10:099 (70099|6,70203|6,70307|6,70411|6,70515|6) - Instead of putting the jack at 7th col, change col with 01:09:995 (69995|5,70620|5) - so the jacks can be played with you middle finger
01:12:495 - if you accpet the previous mod
00:58:745 (58745|6,58745|6) - Quality XD
02:35:828 (155828|2,156036|1,156245|0,156245|5,156245|3,156245|4,156245|6) - So how a membrane keyboard player can play this I acatually play with membrane.. but yes because this map isn't for ranked at first sorry >< :?

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thank youu very helpful!
c36098651
146 posts
Joined November 2012
c36098651
offset 620 ==> around 650

er....... I think that's it!
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
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Topic Starter
ArcherLove
sorry for not reply last night ;w;

but not deleting notes because it's for playability!

so people not confuse to press

@BN/QAT : c360 helped me in testing and give feedback
Cra Dow
203 posts
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Cra Dow
This map is very cool..
Garalulu
933 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
HI I WANT KUDOSU THX
failure & victory log
14:46 ArcherLove: aaaaaaaaa lulu hai
14:46 ArcherLove: can you test something?
15:25 Garalulu: owo
15:25 Garalulu: I was afk
15:25 Garalulu: and i'm here
15:25 ArcherLove: hai
15:25 ArcherLove: can test? owo
15:25 Garalulu: yap
15:26 Garalulu: np
15:26 *ArcherLove is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020673 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix)]
15:26 ArcherLove: MX is ok if fail caramel ><
15:26 Garalulu: oh
15:27 Garalulu: I have this
15:27 Garalulu: lol
15:27 ArcherLove: 1oh rip
15:27 Garalulu: human is icon of adventure
15:27 Garalulu: so caramel
15:27 ArcherLove: is icon of sweetness
15:31 Garalulu: aaaaaaaaa
15:31 ArcherLove: rip
15:31 Garalulu: 13 13 13 13
15:31 Garalulu: lol
15:31 ArcherLove: jackk intensifies
15:32 Garalulu: noodle noodle
15:32 ArcherLove: aa that's why I ask to MX ;w;
15:32 Garalulu: OKI THEN MX
15:32 ArcherLove: nx clear fail on caramel
15:37 *Garalulu dies
15:37 ArcherLove: nice clear xD
15:37 Garalulu: jack intensifies
15:37 ArcherLove: quick irc please o3o
15:37 Garalulu: yeap
15:37 Garalulu: caramel for rank?
15:38 ArcherLove: ya
15:38 ArcherLove: owo
15:39 Garalulu: 01:00:754 - missing note
15:39 *Garalulu is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1024656 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix) [Sangat Sulit [MX]]]
15:40 Garalulu: 01:02:316 (62316|0,62316|4,62316|2) - double is fine
15:40 ArcherLove: added at 3
15:40 ArcherLove: 1234567
15:40 ArcherLove: all ok
15:40 Garalulu: 01:01:900 (61900|0,61900|4,61900|6,62525|3,62525|1,62525|5) - only that sound for triple
15:40 ArcherLove: oki owo
15:41 Garalulu: jacks are umm
15:41 Garalulu: for et
15:42 ArcherLove: ((((((((((pls no delet))))))))))
15:42 Garalulu: 01:34:816 (94816|4) - that sound maybe two different sound
15:42 Garalulu: 01:35:025 - at this
15:42 Garalulu: 01:33:566 (93566|1) - this too
15:43 Garalulu: 01:35:650 - adding a mini SV at this is also not bad
15:43 ArcherLove: what kind of sv?
15:44 ArcherLove: and that sound is the same actually, but drum make it "slightly" different
15:44 ArcherLove: owo
15:44 Garalulu: wait
15:45 Garalulu: etc
15:45 ArcherLove: wat
15:45 Garalulu: 01:34:400 - x2.0
15:46 Garalulu: 01:34:452 - x0.67
15:46 Garalulu: 01:34:608 - x1.0
15:47 ArcherLove: aah
15:47 ArcherLove: that kind of blink
15:47 ArcherLove: I think I'll add some in caramel
15:47 ArcherLove: not in mx ;w;
15:47 Garalulu: oki
15:47 ArcherLove: oki
15:48 Garalulu: 01:45:858 - 01:46:170 - this sound is more stronger and longer than 01:45:233 - 01:45:545 -
15:48 Garalulu: resize LN or add some ln?
15:49 Garalulu: 01:47:733 - 01:48:045 - and this is more quiet than 01:47:108 - 01:47:420 -
15:49 ArcherLove: rearranged
15:50 ArcherLove: deleted quiet
15:50 ArcherLove: adding some louder
15:50 ArcherLove: http://puu.sh/u8naF/ca0c11aac9.jpg.
15:51 Garalulu: owo>b
15:51 Garalulu: 02:07:525 - 02:08:150 - make this simillar with 02:06:275 - 02:06:900 -
15:52 Garalulu: I think they are same sound
15:52 Garalulu: same feeling
15:52 Garalulu: owo
15:53 ArcherLove: different sound ;w;
15:53 Garalulu: i mean
15:53 Garalulu: 02:06:275 (126275|2,126483|6,126691|4) -
15:53 Garalulu: this structure
15:54 Garalulu: at caramel diff, they are simillar
15:55 ArcherLove: http://puu.sh/u8nrm/e26ce79d8f.jpg
15:55 ArcherLove: yapyap
15:55 ArcherLove: donee
15:56 Garalulu: 02:26:691 - 02:27:525 -
15:56 Garalulu: oh 02:26:900 - 02:27:525 -
15:56 ArcherLove: wat
15:56 Garalulu: umm english is difficult :3
15:56 Garalulu: wait
15:57 ArcherLove: ;ww;
15:57 ArcherLove: google transalte XD
15:57 Garalulu: 02:26:900 (146900|1,147108|0,147316|0) - make this 1/2
15:57 ArcherLove: korean -> japan -> english
15:57 ArcherLove: owo
15:57 Garalulu: they have long sound at this
15:57 ArcherLove: oo
15:57 ArcherLove: like this http://puu.sh/u8nC3/c059a3d49d.jpg
15:58 Garalulu: good translation
15:58 ArcherLove: 'w')b
15:58 Garalulu: 02:30:025 (150025|4) - delete this
15:58 Garalulu: they don't have this at caramel
15:59 Garalulu: and not to long sound
15:59 Garalulu: *too
15:59 ArcherLove: ok
15:59 ArcherLove: should I move 02:30:025 (150025|0) - to 5?
16:00 Garalulu: do it if u want
16:00 Garalulu: :3
16:01 ArcherLove: ;wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww;
16:01 Garalulu: OWOWO
16:01 ArcherLove: not moving then
16:02 Garalulu: 02:34:400 - 02:35:025 -
16:03 Garalulu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7354587 how about this
16:04 ArcherLove: @o@
16:04 ArcherLove: good
16:04 ArcherLove: oki
16:06 Garalulu: oki done
16:06 Garalulu: last part : jack jack jack
16:07 ArcherLove: XDD
16:07 ArcherLove: oki thanks postlog please owo
16:07 Garalulu: owo
Kim_GodSSI
Former osu!mania 7K Champion: 2018
358 posts
Joined December 2012
Kim_GodSSI
Modding From :

Team Symphony Mania Modding Queue

Mod
[NM]

00:12:525 (12525|1,12733|2,12941|3) - move to one left ?
01:12:941 (72941|3) - I think you choice voice.. so this note move to 01:12:733 - there. end time is 01:13:150 - here
01:15:233 (75233|5) - LN ?
03:05:545 - Add note 5
03:06:275 - It have to 2 notes if you want 03:08:775 - this pattern

[HD]

00:20:025 (20025|5) - move to 7
00:26:900 (26900|1) - move to 1
00:35:650 - how about

this pattern?
00:50:233 (50233|1,50233|3) - move to 3 5
00:52:733 (52733|4,52733|6) - move to 4 6
01:25:650 - ~ 01:26:900 - melody is going to down so you have to change pattern for down hmm.. if you think it have to change do it
02:03:983 (123983|2,125233|4) - how about

this pattern
02:28:879 (148879|4,148983|3,149087|2,149191|1,149295|0) - change to LN
03:08:775 - this part have to change

like this

[MX]

01:02:733 (62733|6) - move to 5 and 01:02:941 (62941|2) - move to 5
02:42:316 (162316|1) - LN end time 02:42:525 -
02:52:525 - one note Add
04:02:316 (242316|4,242525|4) - I think this part have to change

[Caramel]

00:57:941 (57941|0) - move to 3
01:21:066 - this part

how about this ?
02:06:691 (126691|5) - LN end time is 02:06:900 -
02:07:941 (127941|1) - ^
02:29:295 (149295|6) - Delete
02:33:150 (153150|2) - LN end time is 02:33:462 -
02:33:775 -

how about this?
02:40:025 (160025|2,160025|4,160129|2,160129|4,160233|2,160233|4,160337|2,160337|4) - move to 2 6 and 02:40:441 (160441|5,160441|1,160545|1,160545|5) - move to 3 5 also 02:40:650 (160650|2) - move to 2 02:40:650 (160650|4) - move to 6
02:42:733 (162733|1,162733|2,162941|1,162941|2) - ghost sound
03:39:400 -

how about this?
03:41:900 (221900|2) - LN end time is 03:42:420 -
03:58:150 -

how about this?
04:00:650 -

how about this?
04:05:233 (245233|0,245233|3) - LN end time is 04:05:545 -
04:15:650 - ~ 04:16:170 - this pattern have to change like 04:16:900 - ~ 04:17:420 -

Good luck :)
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
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Topic Starter
ArcherLove

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From :

Team Symphony Mania Modding Queue

Mod
[NM]

00:12:525 (12525|1,12733|2,12941|3) - move to one left ?
01:12:941 (72941|3) - I think you choice voice.. so this note move to 01:12:733 - there. end time is 01:13:150 - here
01:15:233 (75233|5) - LN ?
03:05:545 - Add note 5
03:06:275 - It have to 2 notes if you want 03:08:775 - this pattern

[HD]

00:20:025 (20025|5) - move to 7
00:26:900 (26900|1) - move to 1
00:35:650 - how about

this pattern?
00:50:233 (50233|1,50233|3) - move to 3 5
00:52:733 (52733|4,52733|6) - move to 4 6
01:25:650 - ~ 01:26:900 - melody is going to down so you have to change pattern for down hmm.. if you think it have to change do it it is called "reverse pitch" XD so I will keep for now :D
02:03:983 (123983|2,125233|4) - how about

this pattern
02:28:879 (148879|4,148983|3,149087|2,149191|1,149295|0) - change to LN
03:08:775 - this part have to change

like this

[MX]

01:02:733 (62733|6) - move to 5 and 01:02:941 (62941|2) - move to 5
02:42:316 (162316|1) - LN end time 02:42:525 -
02:52:525 - one note Add
04:02:316 (242316|4,242525|4) - I think this part have to change

[Caramel]

00:57:941 (57941|0) - move to 3
01:21:066 - this part

how about this ?
02:06:691 (126691|5) - LN end time is 02:06:900 -
02:07:941 (127941|1) - ^
02:29:295 (149295|6) - Delete
02:33:150 (153150|2) - LN end time is 02:33:462 -
02:33:775 -

how about this?
02:40:025 (160025|2,160025|4,160129|2,160129|4,160233|2,160233|4,160337|2,160337|4) - move to 2 6 and 02:40:441 (160441|5,160441|1,160545|1,160545|5) - move to 3 5 also 02:40:650 (160650|2) - move to 2 02:40:650 (160650|4) - move to 6
02:42:733 (162733|1,162733|2,162941|1,162941|2) - ghost sound there is sound but little volume .. changed to better~~
03:39:400 -

how about this?
03:41:900 (221900|2) - LN end time is 03:42:420 -
03:58:150 -

how about this?
04:00:650 -

how about this?
04:05:233 (245233|0,245233|3) - LN end time is 04:05:545 -
04:15:650 - ~ 04:16:170 - this pattern have to change like 04:16:900 - ~ 04:17:420 -

Good luck :)
verry good modding~ thank you~
no reply = apply
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening 
19:14 ArcherLove: hai zen is now a good time to ask for sv suggestion
19:14 Evening: yes
19:15 *ArcherLove is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020673 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix)]
19:15 ArcherLove: caramel diff 'w')b
19:19 Evening: oki looking thru now
19:20 ArcherLove: okies
19:20 Evening: 00:09:400 (9400|6,10650|5) -  think you can do a smoother transition to the slowjam here
19:21 ArcherLove: like, slowly getting slower?
19:22 Evening: yea, not too sure about instantly transitioning into a slowjam
19:22 ArcherLove: well added .95 and .85
19:23 ArcherLove: at 00:09:400 (9400|6,10025|5) -
19:23 Evening: was thinking that you can use the sv tool to make it slower (it's as smooth as you can get)
19:23 Evening: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/3740759/svc.html this tool
19:23 ArcherLove: too much pain _(:3
19:24 Evening: o oki
19:24 ArcherLove: zz not bad but I prefer use manual
19:25 Evening: 01:10:025 (70025|4) -  not planning to stutter this?
19:26 ArcherLove: which mean suttering all other jack .. hmm not now I guess
19:26 ArcherLove: let the player have some "easy" thing
19:26 Evening: 01:27:525 (87525|6,87525|2,87941|5,87941|2) - visually, during play, this looks a bit too close (i accidentally hit early here) not sure if you wanna fix that
19:28 ArcherLove: hmm I don't have any idea
19:29 ArcherLove: well I'll manage
19:29 ArcherLove: 01:27:577 - for the .5
19:30 Evening: hmm
19:32 Evening: a few options to fix that 1) 01:27:655 - move the 0.5 here 01:27:629 -  add 6.5x SV 2) 01:27:681 - move 0.5 here 01:27:629 - add 3.5x SV
19:34 Evening: 01:56:900 (116900|4,116900|2,117316|3) - not sure if you plan to make this sightreadable '_>'
19:35 ArcherLove: ^ that troll sv so intentional
19:35 ArcherLove: also for the 01:27:655 - I'll use ... wait let me just combine and.. wait
19:38 ArcherLove: yap use http://puu.sh/u8DCs/954da67970.txt
19:38 Evening: 02:45:650 (165650|3,165650|1,165650|0,166275|0,166275|1,166275|5,166275|4,166275|2) - think you can try to put a stop at the end of the LN and jump to the next LN here
19:40 ArcherLove: ok
19:40 ArcherLove: at the end use 1.5
19:40 ArcherLove: and 1.0 at  02:46:847 -
19:41 Evening: think reversing it would be better (?)
19:41 Evening: like 1.0 then 1.5
19:41 Evening: or 0.8 then 1.5
19:42 ArcherLove: hmm but it's "easier" to read 1.5 --> 1.0
19:43 Evening: o oki 
19:43 ArcherLove: =w=)b
19:44 Evening: well, one thing you can do is to add a slower sv on the last LN
19:45 Evening: otherwise idk anyother suggestions that don't require like 1 hour of work 
19:45 ArcherLove: do 0.75 good?
19:45 ArcherLove: it's okay this simple is ok
19:46 Evening: yea, should be fine with most values >0.4
19:46 ArcherLove: okayy thanks zeen post log please owo
19:46 Evening: o oki o wo
Soul Evans
Elite Mapper
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Soul Evans
Easy dude, it's just 1.97
2017-03-01 09:21 ArcherLove: wat diff
2017-03-01 09:22 Soul Evans: easy
2017-03-01 09:22 Soul Evans: 00:13:983 - ok so for the sake of more variation 
2017-03-01 09:22 Soul Evans: you should change
2017-03-01 09:22 Soul Evans: 00:15:233 - 
2017-03-01 09:22 Soul Evans: these two LNs here
2017-03-01 09:22 ArcherLove: wat
2017-03-01 09:22 Soul Evans: since it's the same pattern and it felt dull
2017-03-01 09:22 ArcherLove: oh
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: I see
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: 00:13:983 (13983|0,14400|2) - is continuation from 00:12:733 (12733|1,13150|4) -
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: so I will change
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: 00:15:233 (15233|6,15650|4) -
2017-03-01 09:23 Soul Evans: 00:17:733 (17733|4,18150|5,18566|6,18983|3,19400|4) - this feels a bit unbalanced and hand biased 
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: to 5-4
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: 6-5
2017-03-01 09:23 ArcherLove: I mean
2017-03-01 09:23 Soul Evans: so i recommend 00:19:400 (19400|4) - 
2017-03-01 09:23 Soul Evans: moving this
2017-03-01 09:24 ArcherLove: 00:18:983 (18983|3,19400|4) - ctrl+h --> move 1 col to left
2017-03-01 09:25 Soul Evans: 00:32:941 (32941|0,33150|1) - do you think this is a bit hard to play for a noob player
2017-03-01 09:25 Soul Evans: especially since it's a uh ln
2017-03-01 09:26 Soul Evans: 00:38:983 (38983|0) - moving this to column 7 would be ideal 1 it would be more comfy to hit and 2 it follows pitch 
2017-03-01 09:26 Soul Evans: since the girl is like te (low) ei (low) maaaa (high)
2017-03-01 09:26 ArcherLove: hmm no changing for now because for symetrical and visual
2017-03-01 09:26 Soul Evans: so on to like col 7 or 6
2017-03-01 09:27 ArcherLove: also it can be a reverse pitch
2017-03-01 09:27 Soul Evans: but is it reversed pitch consistently 
2017-03-01 09:27 Soul Evans: like all high pitch on the left?
2017-03-01 09:27 ArcherLove: yes
2017-03-01 09:27 ArcherLove: but it's not for all throughout the map
2017-03-01 09:27 Soul Evans: ah ok then
2017-03-01 09:28 ArcherLove: well you know I kinda random when mapping, just follow feeling and song
2017-03-01 09:28 ArcherLove: pattern for song so sometime not consistent
2017-03-01 09:29 Soul Evans: feeling of song sure but don't do that if you're gonna abandon playability for it lol
2017-03-01 09:30 Soul Evans: 01:06:900 - 01:07:108 - think you can add notes on these
2017-03-01 09:30 ArcherLove: it's not hard right
2017-03-01 09:30 ArcherLove: it's kind of o2jam easier song tho
2017-03-01 09:30 Soul Evans: first on 1 and second on 5
2017-03-01 09:30 ArcherLove: ah for that part I only map t he vocal
2017-03-01 09:30 Soul Evans: 4*
2017-03-01 09:31 Soul Evans: 01:13:775 (73775|0,73983|1) - this is seperate from the sound you used 
2017-03-01 09:31 Soul Evans: aka the vocals 
2017-03-01 09:31 Soul Evans: so why is it tied to gether 
2017-03-01 09:31 Soul Evans: i'd seperate 01:14:191 (74191|2) - 
2017-03-01 09:31 Soul Evans: to not be confused while playing it
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: 01:14:816 (74816|6) - this kinda extends at 
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: 01:14:816 (74816|6) - 
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: 01:15:233 - 
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: **
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: 01:15:025 (75025|3) - this should be shortened though
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: i know you're mapping the other sound but
2017-03-01 09:34 ArcherLove: yep but cut it because 01:15:025 (75025|3) -
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: you've been consistently 
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: following vocals
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: so why stop
2017-03-01 09:34 Soul Evans: lol
2017-03-01 09:34 ArcherLove: yea
2017-03-01 09:35 ArcherLove: only map the loudest sound
2017-03-01 09:35 ArcherLove: 'w')b
2017-03-01 09:35 Soul Evans: i'd still recommend making that ln on 4th col to be mapped at vocals tbh
2017-03-01 09:36 ArcherLove: ok
2017-03-01 09:36 ArcherLove: changed
2017-03-01 09:36 Soul Evans: 01:53:150 - 
2017-03-01 09:36 Soul Evans: oh come on that's too cruel 
2017-03-01 09:37 Soul Evans: LOL
2017-03-01 09:37 ArcherLove: it's easy...
2017-03-01 09:37 ArcherLove: come oon
2017-03-01 09:37 ArcherLove: only press space
2017-03-01 09:37 ArcherLove: not other
2017-03-01 09:37 Soul Evans: even if that was on another column it would still be hard 
2017-03-01 09:37 Soul Evans: not to mention inconsistent
2017-03-01 09:37 Soul Evans: also literally on the weakest finger of player
2017-03-01 09:38 Soul Evans: i doubt i would get 300 gs from that lmao
2017-03-01 09:38 ArcherLove: that's why it's on col 4
2017-03-01 09:38 ArcherLove: (((((PLAY MORE)))))
2017-03-01 09:38 ArcherLove: well if someone ask me to change again I will change
2017-03-01 09:38 Soul Evans: ((((THEY ARE NOOB PLAYERS THIS IS A NOOB DIFF)))
2017-03-01 09:39 ArcherLove: to 6-5 3-2
2017-03-01 09:39 ArcherLove: (((((THAT'S WHY PLAY MORE))))
2017-03-01 09:39 Soul Evans: 02:08:150 (128150|4,128775|2,128983|4) - this pattern kinda feels inconsistent and out of place imo
2017-03-01 09:39 Soul Evans: 02:11:483 (131483|2,131900|0,132108|1,132316|2) - fam left hand bias there
2017-03-01 09:39 Soul Evans: 02:11:483 (131483|2) - maybe this could work if you moved it to 4
2017-03-01 09:40 ArcherLove: 02:11:066 (131066|4,131483|2) - moved to 6-5
2017-03-01 09:41 Soul Evans: 02:34:400 (154400|2) - do you think a chord for this sound might be a bit much? considering that you haven't used a chord so far 
2017-03-01 09:41 Soul Evans: and the sound isn't really loud enough 
2017-03-01 09:41 Soul Evans: so maybe 1 note would be ideal
2017-03-01 09:42 Soul Evans: 02:44:816 - you haven't mapped vocals for this one
2017-03-01 09:42 Soul Evans: don't see consistency in that 
2017-03-01 09:42 ArcherLove: 2 for snare is ok
2017-03-01 09:42 Soul Evans: sure you want to follow the other song but that would just leave it out of the place in terms of scructure
2017-03-01 09:42 ArcherLove: because 02:44:400 (164400|2,164608|4,164816|6,165025|3,165025|0) -
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: it's okay
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: that is intended
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: I only map the loudest sound
2017-03-01 09:43 Soul Evans: 02:45:650 - 
2017-03-01 09:43 Soul Evans: this feels kinda off
2017-03-01 09:43 Soul Evans: you either map the vocals or the beats
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: ikr
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: let's say
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: for both
2017-03-01 09:43 ArcherLove: d:
2017-03-01 09:44 Soul Evans: felt off to me tbh
2017-03-01 09:44 ArcherLove: at least it has continuation
2017-03-01 09:44 ArcherLove: 02:46:275 (166275|4,166900|2,167525|4) -
2017-03-01 09:44 Soul Evans: cool then
2017-03-01 09:44 Soul Evans: welp that's it from me lol
2017-03-01 09:45 Soul Evans: don't really like the song choice that much tbh 
2017-03-01 09:45 Soul Evans: i like the original lol
2017-03-01 09:45 Soul Evans: about the BG who is the girl on the left?
2017-03-01 09:45 Soul Evans: i sure know as hell it's not the little girl 
2017-03-01 09:46 Soul Evans: considering the girl had short hair still when she grew up
2017-03-01 09:46 ArcherLove: it's airi
2017-03-01 09:48 ArcherLove: EZ only then? post log please 'w')b
Garalulu
933 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
ez diff
16:57 ArcherLove: alo
16:57 ArcherLove: are u free
16:57 ArcherLove: to buy right now
16:58 Garalulu: free
16:58 ArcherLove: I'll buy you now for irc mod please ;;
16:58 *ArcherLove is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020673 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix)]
16:58 ArcherLove: ez or nm or hd
16:59 Garalulu: oh this
16:59 ArcherLove: new diff
16:59 ArcherLove: EZ
16:59 ArcherLove: kk
16:59 Garalulu: wait
16:59 ArcherLove: so need some mod
16:59 Garalulu: to download
16:59 ArcherLove: only add new diff + change mp3 bitrate 320 --> 192
17:00 Garalulu: 4:25 and 5 diff
17:00 Garalulu: u et
17:00 ArcherLove: I ded after mapping
17:00 ArcherLove: deeeed
17:00 *Garalulu is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1227379 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix) [Mudah [EZ]]]
17:00 *ArcherLove is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1227379 k*chan - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna(dj-Jo Remix) [Mudah [EZ]]]
17:02 Garalulu: 01:01:900 - 01:25:650 -
17:02 Garalulu: this part has no single note
17:02 Garalulu: waw
17:03 Garalulu: you can add some notes for drum
17:03 ArcherLove: I think I need to add many for that
17:03 ArcherLove: no for now ;;
17:03 Garalulu: yapyap
17:04 Garalulu: 03:54:816 (234816|0,234816|3,234816|4) -
17:04 Garalulu: triple at ez is too much
17:04 ArcherLove: I see that seems ugly aaaaaaa
17:05 Garalulu: aaaaa
17:05 Garalulu: maybe you turned up at last part
17:05 Garalulu: lol
17:05 ArcherLove: http://puu.sh/uoVUj/903c677321.png
17:05 ArcherLove: zz
17:06 Garalulu: 03:57:525 (237525|4,237525|3,237525|2) - same reason
17:06 Garalulu: and also many triple
17:06 ArcherLove: for last part
17:06 ArcherLove: I think it's ok
17:06 ArcherLove: because ending kiai
17:06 Garalulu: oki
17:07 ArcherLove: hmm need to be a bit harder ^w^
17:07 Garalulu: ^w^ oh you still didn't die oki It's your turn
17:07 Garalulu: evil archer
17:08 ArcherLove: wat turn now
17:08 Garalulu: it's joke
17:08 ArcherLove: ;w;
17:09 Garalulu: maybe beginner will die at last part
17:09 Garalulu: just say about that
17:09 Garalulu: said
17:09 Garalulu: owo
17:09 ArcherLove: owo oki
17:09 ArcherLove: quick test on HD please 'w'
17:09 ArcherLove: testplay asdf
17:09 ArcherLove: then post log xD
17:09 Garalulu: xD
17:09 Garalulu: yay
17:10 ArcherLove: ((I hope BN won't notice free kudosu))
17:10 Garalulu: =w=
17:10 Garalulu: free kudosu
17:13 ArcherLove: nice S
17:13 Garalulu: pp smell
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