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ZLOdeuka-

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-07T15:28:51+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 марта 2011 г. at 14:57:53

Artist: Tianshi
Title: Melancholic
Source: Junky
Tags: Kagamine Rin ShaggoN galvenize Vocaloid Vocaloid2
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5976kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:

Collab (4,99 stars, 613 notes)
Hard (4,8 stars, 470 notes)
ShaggoNormal (3,05 stars, 247 notes)

Download: Tianshi - Melancholic
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The map is ready!

Skin by Bittersweet <3

Normal ~ ShaggoN

Collab ~ ZLOdeuka ~ galvenize ~ ShaggoN

Hard ~ ZLOdeuka

Original ~ Kagamine Rin - Melancholic

Last edited by ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-27T10:59:53+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

IceBeam

osu! Alumni

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IceBeam 2011-03-07T15:31:52+00:00

Gomo Psivarh

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Gomo Psivarh 2011-03-07T16:10:57+00:00

Halo

[Hard]

Recalculate slider length

00:33:195 (5) - Length is incorrect
01:04:480 - 01:09:087 This part seems off sync

especially 01:04:480 (1,2,3) , 01:06:195 (2,3,4) , 01:07:909 (1,2,3,4)
However i dont know how to change them and whether they should be changed

02:40:480 (1,2,3) - stack them. Reverse (1),(2) and move (1,2,3) all to center, then reverse (1) and (2) again.
01:40:909 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked
02:02:552 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:01:909 (1,2,3,1,2) - Flip them vertically?

GOOD!
BONUS 80000

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-07T16:13:57+00:00

Gomo Psivarh wrote:
Halo

[Hard]

Recalculate slider length

00:33:195 (5) - Length is incorrect
01:04:480 - 01:09:087 This part seems off sync especially 01:04:480 (1,2,3) , 01:06:195 (2,3,4) , 01:07:909 (1,2,3,4)
However i dont know how to change them and whether they should be changed
02:40:480 (1,2,3) - stack them. Reverse (1),(2) and move (1,2,3) all to center, then reverse (1) and (2) again.
01:40:909 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked
02:02:552 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:01:909 (1,2,3,1,2) - Flip them vertically?

GOOD!
BONUS 80000

Thank u ~ my best friend ^^

Cat

772 posts

Joined May 2009

Cat 2011-03-07T17:04:43+00:00

:3

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-07T17:05:29+00:00

Nyau ~

rockleejkooo

329 posts

Joined June 2010

rockleejkooo 2011-03-07T17:12:02+00:00

star o/

K o h a k u

233 posts

Joined August 2009

K o h a k u 2011-03-08T02:26:02+00:00

hi~

nice too meet you!

suggest about hit sound a bit

[Hard]

01:55:480 (3)remove whistle and add clap
02:02:338 (3)-^
02:04:052 (4)-^

I think better

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cute rin and song <3
star~

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-08T14:23:03+00:00

K o h a k u wrote:
hi~ nice too meet you!

suggest about hit sound a bit

[Hard]

01:55:480 (3)remove whistle and add clap
02:02:338 (3)-^
02:04:052 (4)-^

I think better
--------------------------------------------------
cute rin and song <3
star~

Yes! so much the better! thanks ~ ^^

Fight69

1,639 posts

Joined January 2010

Fight69 2011-03-08T15:58:19+00:00

Hello~

[General]

Your mp3's bitrate is too high (320kbps), it should be between 128kbps~192kbps
You need a new reencoded mp3, so here is one just for you ! (192kbps)

http://www.mediafire.com/?qc9u5rnboogpcw4

For the new offset, I've found : 826
But I'm not sure at all, it should be great if someone can confirm it

Don't forget to resnap everything, especially the inherited timing section, they are a bit messed up now :<

[Hard]

01:04:254 - Add a circle here
01:07:683 - ^

Nice

~Starz'd !

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-08T16:03:01+00:00

Fight69 wrote:
Hello~

[General]

Your mp3's bitrate is too high (320kbps), it should be between 128kbps~192kbps
You need a new reencoded mp3, so here is one just for you ! (192kbps)

http://www.mediafire.com/?qc9u5rnboogpcw4

For the new offset, I've found : 826
But I'm not sure at all, it should be great if someone can confirm it

Don't forget to resnap everything, especially the inherited timing section, they are a bit messed up now :<

[Hard]

01:04:254 - Add a circle here
01:07:683 - ^

Nice
~Starz'd !

really t.t

Thx ~

senaya

osu! Alumni

5,798 posts

Joined March 2010

senaya 2011-03-09T07:45:11+00:00

таг, ну.

[General]
zlohard.png и sv.png - слишком много эфектов типа outer glow и stroke. трудночитаемо.
sv.png - 1528*548 это тебе зачем такое толстое? мб сделаешь меньше?

[Hard]
00:46:683 (2) - зачем меняешь скорость слайдера? песня не меняется же.
01:01:468 (4,5,6,7) - спэйсинг везде разный. так было задумано, типа для харда?
01:04:897 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - грид лвл 3, потом сделай покрасивее типа http://puu.sh/19Yj?
01:56:540 (2,1) - мне не нравится этот спейсинг. но это лично моё мнение)
01:58:040 (2,1) - ^
03:09:183 (5) - сделай http://puu.sh/19Yu или http://puu.sh/19YD?
03:12:611 (6) - ^
03:16:040 (6) - ^

galvenize

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galvenize 2011-03-09T12:08:06+00:00