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Ayana Taketatsu - Over the Starlight

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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月2日 at 19:14:22

Artist: Ayana Taketatsu
Title: Over the Starlight
Source: K-ON!
Tags: Nakano Azusa HTT HO-KAGO TEA TIME
BPM: 120
Filesize: 8300kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Over the Light (4.98 stars, 595 notes)
  2. Over the Star (2.98 stars, 251 notes)
Download: Ayana Taketatsu - Over the Starlight
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap

Over the Star=Normal
Over the Light=Hard
Skins by Nymph_

Hope you like it
And enjoy
Last edited by wcx19911123 , edited 27 times in total.
CoLarbRo
26 posts
Joined December 2010
CoLarbRo
顶
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
我推~ mod什么的一会再说~
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Hi

Combo1 : 243,221,146
Combo2 : 157,253,157
Combo3 : 255,155,205

nice map :)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
试着MOD一下 挑能接受的意见改吧~

Normal:

circle size +1? AR+1? OD+1? 因为歌超过4分钟 那么慢打起来真的好无聊..而且这是NORMAL又不是EASY..
试着加点Hitsound 没有HITSOUND太单调了.

00:30:871 (3) - 停在00:31:621怎么样?
00:53:746 (1) - 停在00:54:621怎么样? 因为这两句歌词跟的很紧 这样似乎比较连贯 不过你原来的摆法也可以 只是个建议.
00:55:746 (3) - 同上 结尾往后推2个小格到红线
02:50:871 (1) - 如果是按歌词的节奏的话 这个应该往前一格..不过那样似乎不太舒服

Hard:

..基本不按Distance spacing走呢 摆的好乱啊 不过要打也能打呢..不发表意见了 等厉害的MODDER来看..
节奏没感觉出来有什么错 也是得加HITSOUND
摆的有点太密集了 试着弄大间距 滑条之间多一些穿插? 而且有些重叠也很别扭 试着改改看吧... 这方面不敢班门弄斧了.
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
路过 明天有时间再看
OnizukaEikichi
82 posts
Joined February 2010
OnizukaEikichi
AZUNYAN KAWAIIII!
star :3
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Normal
Timing:
01:24:746 - move to 01:24:496

00:04:746 (5) - (nazi) ctrl+1 then 1 grif left
01:42:621 (3) - (nazi) ctrl+2 1 grid right
02:17:871 (3) - (nazi) ^?

Hard
more like to insane
02:57:371 (8,9,1) - confusing
03:42:371 (4) - new combo?
03:44:621 (6) - ^
03:46:621 (6) - ^
03:48:371 (1) - ^
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Hello!!! :) (You posted in a mod4mod queue so please mod one of my beatmaps too [they're in my signature or profile] )

[Hard]
Consider making the Approach Rate higher by one tick.
00:40:871 (4) Make more symmetrical pleeease

It's... it's so goood! Have a star.
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
Fixed
Thanks you all
@SapphireGhost:Sorry,but I will see your map soon,plz wait ;)
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
wait what, I don't find problems orz

star, and gool duck... uh good luck XD
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
star :D
PendHentai
4 posts
Joined September 2010
PendHentai
mark first~~star :)
loveFantasy
526 posts
Joined August 2008
loveFantasy
你好

[General]
- 音效下了很大的功夫, 辛苦了
- diff spread不佳, 考慮一下map一個[Easy], 雖然你的[Normal]間距很規矩bpm也只有120, 但新手仍然很不容易讀出哪些東西在藍線上 (1.0x spacing 3/4拍和1拍的間距差異並不是那麼明顯), [Hard]偏難
- 既然加了HTT在Tags, 你也可以加ho-kago tea time
- 建議挑地方下一段式的KIAI

[Normal]
<00:39:371> (4) 這格使用normal set, 並能大聲一點
<00:53:746> (1) normal-finish較好
<01:01:746> (1) ^
<01:21:871> (1) 這個note太安靜, 個人覺得可以用降音的normal-finish (30%-40%)
<01:43:121> new combo改放這, 下一個不放
<01:45:121> ^
<02:21:871> 其實我覺得(3,4)很適合合成一個spinner呢, 不過別下KIAI fountain
<02:53:746> 這格應該要有hitsound的

[Hard]
- 用太多reverse jump了, 一段有兩三個用來展現難度就夠了, 並不喜歡
<00:49:121> 用兩個circle較順
<01:01:746> (1,2,3,4)並不好讀, 考慮別重疊
<01:46:871> 加note (如果加了可能需要改擺放的位置)
<02:19:121> (2) 不好聽, 只在藍線或紅線上下circle都好聽點
<02:21:121> ^
<02:56:621..> (4..9) orz spacing

star
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
梓喵萌爆了~

[General]
敢不用默认combo color吗lol

[Hitsound]
N请使用C1然后去掉sliderside音
为神马高潮段没有hisounds 233

[Hard]
AR+2
00:57:871 (1,2,3) - 这段不知道想表达什么.
01:05:871 (1,2,3) - ^
后面几个低速段同
01:58:121 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 个人认为这种歌不合这种遮挡...
02:29:871 (1,1) - 这...隔太近了吧
03:19:746 (1) - reverse
03:23:746 (4,5,6,7,8) - orz spacing

~spacing觉得很不舒服 但是又说不出哪里....
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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
Fixed
Thanks you all
Waiting for further modding
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
Just go through a quick check and no main problems found.

/me shoots a star.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Looks great, only some minor combo suggestions, feel free to ignore if you disagree~ :3

[Hard]
combo-stuff
00:08:621 (6) - Maybe new combo?
00:33:746 (6) - ^
00:37:746 (6) - ^
00:41:746 (5) - ^
01:08:621 (6) - ^
01:27:746 (5) - ^
01:31:746 (5) - ^
01:35:746 (6) - ^
01:43:871 (5) - ^
02:27:871 (5) - ^
03:05:871 (5) - ^
03:15:371 (4) - ^
03:21:871 (8) - ^
03:53:746 (6) - ^

[Normal]
01:07:371 (4) - Maybe new combo?
01:34:871 (3) - Move the end square one grid left
01:46:996 (3) - New combo?
03:10:746 (2) - Move middle square one grid right

Look awesome, take my star<3
Bessy
145 posts
Joined September 2009
Bessy
0.0 之前没仔细看 音效是做的不错 但是.......

可以去看看Custom音效教程相关的帖子

比如：你这里大量使用了SampleSet:normal的hit音，虽然很合，不过代价是每个节拍都加两条绿线，太浪费人参了......

正确方法是用附件的soft-hitclap.wav（这个音和SampleSet:normal的hit音一样）,放到歌曲文件夹下，然后在timing设置-Audio设置中选择“Custom 1”
回到Compose里选择要发出hit音的那个note，应用clap音效
这样就能达到你想要的效果

不知道我表达清楚没有>__< 不会复杂的中文

[hard]

高潮部分完全没加音效

其他都很好的~

star~ 会使用Custom音效的话 你会是神mapper
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
taNa_Coppola
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