1. Another Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 889 notes)
2. Another (5 stars, 654 notes)
3. Easy (2.37 stars, 152 notes)
4. Hyper (4.96 stars, 331 notes)
5. Normal (4.41 stars, 243 notes)

1. HP drain -1. It has the same score, it plays the same (very few misses kills you instantly), but makes the slower parts much more stable (instead of steadily losing hp, it just keeps it the same).
2. I suppose your combos are set up for tag play so I won't go nazi on it, I'm just gonna list some places where a combo change could be better.
3. 02:00:680 (8) - New combo. This just looks and sounds much better if they go 1234 instead of 891011. (although this may be worded badly, you can't really hear new colors and numbers, right?)
4. 03:59:852 (8) - ^

1. No preview point set (others have 75163, this one has -1).
2. HP drain +3. In the current state you can miss about 10 notes and still be alive (in slower sections). After that you hit 2 sliders and your hp goes up too fast. At 7th tick the hp drain looks good, although it still shoots up really fast on drrr sliders, but I guess you can't really avoid this.
3. Combo colors are different to that of the other 2 diffs. Not sure if it's something unrankable, but just leaving it here as a reminder.
4. 00:03:991 (1) - End it on a red tick before. You can't really have it end that close to a next note, just looks bad.
5. 00:07:301 (1) - ^
6. 00:10:611 (1) - ^
7. 00:27:163 (5) - New combo.
8. 00:33:784 (5) - ^
9. 00:47:025 (5) - ^
10. 00:56:956 (4) - ^
11. 02:26:335 (5) - ^
12. 02:32:956 (5) - ^
13. 03:00:266 (3) - Clap?
14. 03:39:161 (1) - Looks ugly. You need grid 4 to make it look pretty. Look here.
15. 03:57:368 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider?
16. 04:07:299 (6) - Why not put new combo here and remove it from the next note? Looks better and it's a large white tick.
17. 04:25:506 (5) - New combo.
18. 04:39:575 (5) - I suggest a new combo here as well. Probably not really necessary but it looks better.

1. Put OD on 6th tick atleast. It's too low currently. Put Hp drain on 7th tick. It's also too low currently.
2. 00:35:232 (7) - Make a default hitnormal on this note as well? Just for consistency.
3. 01:01:508 - 01:01:922 - Why not map this part? Atleast to finish the section properly.
4. 01:35:439 (2,4) - nazi 1 grid left.
5. I guess it's not finished so I'll stop here, just tell me when you are and I'll go through it again.

theMikeAG wrote:

tl;dr

Saten-san wrote:

General:
Offset: 2 360 sounds better to me :3

Couldn't find anything else that was odd imo


have a kd star~

Medi-chan wrote:

Here you go Shiirn. Shorter than I thought it would be by far.

SPOILER

[Easy]

00:35:480 (1) - Move third tick up one and right one
00:36:308 (2) - Move third tick two up
00:37:135 (3) - Move third tick one up and one left
00:37:963 (4) - Move slider right one, and third tick one up and one left
00:38:790 (5) - Same as above
00:49:549 (3) - Move third tick down one
01:01:963 (1) - Move second tick right two
01:09:411 (2) - This looks wierd and good at the same time. I would add another tick after the fourth one though to make the slider curve up more. I would have a link, but I can't recreate that slider perfectly.
01:11:894 (1) - Move second tick left three
02:32:583 (2) - One grid up


[Normal]

omfg I like it what?!


[Hyper]

02:41:377 (1) - uh, why the spinner? There's nothing there like... at all.

other than that nothing


[Another]

02:41:324 (1) - Once again, I just don't understand the point of this spinner.

Where did my 55 million points go?


Another [Another Roko-Don's Taiko]

01:46:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I thought these were 1/8th honestly when I was like "wtf I just hit that?!" Then I checked and was like "damn it I'm still slow "

nice map, although very don heavy.

1. Remove "stream" from tags.
2. Add Rokodo to tags.
3. I suppose you were changing offset for any reason, this made all your timing sections a bit off. Fix the timing sections so they are on their proper ticks.
4. Difficulty mod: OD +1(or even +2, have some players test this with +2 would be best, to me +2 seems good, could full 300 most of the streams). OD 4 feels a bit silly for the hardest diff. (that short spinner still gets 2k with OD 6).
   Also, HP drain +1. While playing, streams are slowly regenerating your HP, drr sliders regenerate it a bit faster and it's perfectly stable on less mapped sections.
5. 01:08:566 (1,2) - Maybe start this combo at the top center? Just so they don't stack on the small stream because no other notes in this section start on top of the stream. Nothing major, just a suggestion. Look here.
6. 01:21:808 - Personally I really really really hate kiai on spinners. I suggest you make a fountain here just for the start and then turn it off. Using default skin or any similar skin makes spinners really difficult to spin properly under kiai because of all those bloom effects and what not making the center not visible with all those effects on the cursor. Up to you to decide though.
7. 02:14:773 (4) - New combo. Remove it from the next note though.
8. 02:21:393 (2) - New combo? (keep others though)
9. 02:31:118 (6) - New combo? (same as the above)

1. Add Rokodo to tags.
2. Just like in Another, fix the timing sections.
3. Difficulty mod: HP drain +1. This doesn't make the map harder, but it doesn't make it stupidly easy like it is now. Currently you are allowed to miss 3-4 sliders and still be alive, then you hit one slider and one short DRR slider and you're near max Hp again.
   I would argue that HP drain +2 is actually better, however on slower parts, or should I say less mapped parts (00:42:084 - 00:55:325) you won't gain any HP, but it will be stable. There is a small issue though, because 00:48:704 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have new combos on (3) in each, HP will slightly drop with the +2 change. Playability would be best if you could change these combo patterns to 1-2 1-2 etc and increase drain by 2 if you ask me. If you're not up for it, you can accept the minor HP loss on these parts or just do the +1, while the +1 is still making the map a bit too easy.
4. 00:54:497 (1) - Remove new combo?
5. 01:21:808 - Same like in Another, up for making a kiai burst only and removing the kiai time throughout the spinner?
6. 01:21:808 (1) - End this spinner at 01:22:635 just like in Another? The spinner is good enough to fit "hard" difficulty profile by being 2k @auto if you ask me.

1. Add Rokodo to tags.
2. Just like in Another, fix the timing sections.
3. Difficulty mod: AR -1. Normals don't play well with AR higher than 5 if you ask me.
4. 01:19:325 (2) - Try to split this into a regular returner and a circle, because this is not something you want to have in a Normal diff, incredibly hard to read for lower level players. I actually failed here myself lol. Or, you can just make a returner and reposition the timeline a little, what I mean by this is this. Just having 4x of these is quite simple and it fits.
5. 01:21:808 - Same like in Another and Hyper, up for making a kiai burst only and removing the kiai time throughout the spinner?
6. 02:12:291 (2) - Same as @01:19:325. (minus the failing part here! lol)

1. Add Rokodo to tags.
2. Fix the timing sections. Also, you have many obsolete timing sections which don't do anything, check the timeline around 02:27:601 for example. Also 02:37:946. Maybe I missed a few so while you're fixing the timing sections try to find those other obsolete ones.
3. Difficulty mod OD+1. OD 1 is just silly and OD 2 still allows ~35ms later hits to be 300.
4. 00:47:877 (1) - Remove new combo. Add it on the next note instead.
5. 01:21:808 - Same idea about kiai and spinners.
6. 02:09:394 - Add note?

lolcubes wrote:

tl;dr

Zelos wrote:

stuff stuff stuff

Charles445 wrote:

irc mod
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