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Serebro - Breath

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Louis Cyphre
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Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 марта 2011 г. at 19:34:51

Artist: Serebro
Title: Breath
Tags: russian
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7258kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 604 notes)
  2. Normal (2,61 stars, 239 notes)
Download: Serebro - Breath
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Don't really like russian songs, but this is awesome, so enjoy~

Thanks to wanhyrzh for some skin elements
Thanks to MLGnom for his nubmer images from his Reisen Udongein Inaba skin.
Thanks to jericho2442 for cutting mp3.
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 12 times in total.
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
little IRC modding <3
Star
rockleejkooo
329 posts
Joined June 2010
rockleejkooo
star :3
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
-maJu
:)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Sexy stuff.

irc mod.
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
here is IRC mod with CDFA:
SPOILER
02:08 <CDFA> : Too lazy to do a non-irc mod.
02:08 <CDFA> : Sooo~.
02:08 <Louis_Cyphre> : ok
02:08 <Louis_Cyphre> : let's go
02:08 <CDFA> : Insane: 01:13:634 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider
02:08 <Louis_Cyphre> : done :3
02:09 <Louis_Cyphre> : i guess that's all
02:09 <CDFA> : Still looking >w<~
02:10 <CDFA> : This is a VERY nicely made map, though >:3~
02:10 <Louis_Cyphre> : thanks)
02:11 <CDFA> : yw >w<
02:12 <CDFA> : 02:53:516 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:12 <Louis_Cyphre> : ninja
02:12 <Louis_Cyphre> : done
02:12 <CDFA> : uguu >;3~
02:13 <Louis_Cyphre> : :3
02:13 <CDFA> : Normal:
02:14 <CDFA> : 00:48:928 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:15 <Louis_Cyphre> : done
02:15 <CDFA> : uguu~
02:17 <Louis_Cyphre> : mapped in 1 day
02:17 <Louis_Cyphre> : haha
02:17 <CDFA> : Done :D~
02:17 <CDFA> : Good job Louis-sama >w<~
02:17 <Louis_Cyphre> : post
02:17 <Louis_Cyphre> : :3
02:19 <CDFA> : Posted~
02:19 <Louis_Cyphre> : you have added this as a favourite?
02:19 <Louis_Cyphre> : O_o
02:19 <CDFA> : It's a nicely made map, and a cool song >w<~
02:20 <Louis_Cyphre> : :O
02:20 <CDFA> : :O
02:20 <Louis_Cyphre> : i'm glad to hear that
02:20 <CDFA> : uguu~
02:20 <Louis_Cyphre> : :○
02:20 <CDFA> : Now get it ranked like a boss :D
02:20 <Louis_Cyphre> : well submitted some hours ago
02:20 <Louis_Cyphre> : some mods, and MAT hunt
02:20 <CDFA> : uguu >w<~
02:22 <Louis_Cyphre> : man
02:22 <Louis_Cyphre> : post our discussion in topic
02:25 <Louis_Cyphre> : CDFA

Thanks for modding. And thanks for stars.
batman
118 posts
Joined May 2010
batman
:D
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[Normal]

01:06:222 (1) - you should delete this spinner and map until the second spinner it feels tiring to spin 2 long spinners at the same time imo.

other than that, it's fine.

[Insane]

~ Nothing

nothing major in particular so have a star.
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
add a source!
Story board idea
make a storyboard with english subtitles and one with russian
subtitles?


Normal
02:14:327(4) make this a little more curvy?

02:15:744(5) same

02:23:509(1,3) same




star for nice song
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
offset should be 15023...

well the mapset is fine to me except some jumps in Insane. they come too suddenly... consider making them closer or adding a halt to the rhythm.

01:26:333 (6,1)
01:30:215 (10,1) - and the slider from red tick plays a little awkward because of the jump.

star
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
add a source!
Story board idea
make a storyboard with english subtitles and one with russian
subtitles?
Hi.

No changes in all 3 mods. Thanks for taking attention and stars.
nicktoons
174 posts
Joined June 2010
nicktoons
в общем:
Мне понравились мапы.
сделай, или попроси кого нибудь сделать сб (злодейку например, она любит русские мапы, может она сделает тебе сб)
Тебе нужно матов просить модить, а не простых юзеров (ну меня точно можно было не просить =)) уж слишком правильная песня
Добавь хит саундов, хотя я их сам не переношу (только портят песню)
ну чел... хороший битмап, трудно придраться к чему-либо... есть пару предложений.
нормал вроде в поряде.
инсейн, есть лишь пару предложений:
01:20:156 (4,5,6) - вот таких штук и в начало тоже добавить.
02:08:156 (4) - добавить сёркл?
02:10:980 (2) - ^
02:40:980 (2) - ^
02:41:686 (4) - ^
03:06:038 (4) - ^
ну конечно, звезда =)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Матам принципиально надо чтобы мапе было 500 лет. Я и сам могу сделать, просто не хочу. Проверю когда домой прийду.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
heya :D

Insane
01:58:450 (6) - The clap on the slidertick kind of distacted me, but since I tend to do stuff like this myself I can't really say anything against it.
But maybe it still would be better to turn this into a 2/1 repeat slider?

Normal
00:27:391 (1) - those sliders ( I see more of them in the diff ) look nice, but sound a little bit weird. I don't like long sliders and would prefer it if you'd change them to something like this
SPOILER
01:18:215 - add a note?
01:18:568 (3) - remove note?
01:18:921 - add note?
01:30:568 (1) - long slider ._.
01:40:803 (4) - add whistle
01:41:509 (6) - ^
02:21:038 - add note?
03:01:627 (5) - long slider LOL
03:10:097 (1) - ^^ :OO
03:22:450 (3) - add whistle
03:23:168 - add note
03:32:686 (1) - you really like long sliders. well, I don't.


Sorry to complain about the looooong sliders D:
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Fixed only whistles, thanks for modding.
La Cataline
osu! Alumni
1,025 posts
Joined March 2010
La Cataline

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Don't really like russian songs
fix your combos naow
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Okay, bubbled.

Evidence of IRC modding
22:51 <Jarby> : On Insane:
22:51 <Jarby> : 00:50:686 (3,4,5) - Move these down one space because 3 overlaps with the slider edge and it looks odd.
22:52 <Jarby> : 00:55:980 (8,9,10) - Could you also tone down the jumps here a bit?
22:54 <Jarby> : Er, the jumps? I meant to lower the spacing. I think they're unreasonably difficult.
22:55 <Jarby> : 01:52:450 (1,2) - And I think this jump just doesn't make sense.
22:56 <Jarby> : 02:24:038 (4,5,6,7,8) - Nor this spacing increase thing.
22:57 <Jarby> : I just don't think it fits.
22:57 <Jarby> : A regularly spaced pattern would be more effective.
23:00 <Jarby> : Also, this map does need breaks.
23:02 <Jarby> : 01:00:215 - to 01:10:803 - and 02:41:862 - 02:52:450 -
23:02 <Jarby> : That's the best break spots I believe.
23:03 <Jarby> : Just make sure to arrange patterns and combos accordingly
23:03 <Louis_Cyphre> : 01:08:862 (1) - can i let is stay?
23:03 <Louis_Cyphre> : it*
23:04 <Louis_Cyphre> : 02:50:509 (1) - and this
23:04 <Jarby> : Actually, move the start 1/2 back on both of those.
23:04 <Jarby> : Fits the context better with the breaks.
23:04 <Jarby> : But yes, they can stay and be good.
23:08 <Jarby> : And on Insane, 03:03:391 (5) - move one space up to make this form a triangle properly.
23:10 <Jarby> : And on to Normal.
23:10 <Jarby> : 00:17:862 (5) - I'd put a new combo here and remove the new combo on the next object. I think this looks
23:10 <Jarby> : cleaner with the symmetrical patterns and everything.
23:23 <Jarby> : I neglected to mention this one thing on Insane...
23:24 <Jarby> : 02:40:450 (1,2) - Move these outwards one space so that the edges don't overlap with the next object.
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Thanks a lot :)
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
-15,035 seems to work better as the offset in my opinion (Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections if you change)
-Seeing as everything has a blue/green tone you might want to skin the spinner stuff too? Red/yellow doesn't fit too well

Alot of people dislike 2 difficulty mapsets these days as they don't give too much variety to the player, it would be nice if you could make an in between difficulty to balance everything out (you aren't forced to)



EDIT:
Ok you can keep things as they are if that is how you want them~
Louis Cyphre
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Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
-15,035 seems to work better as the offset in my opinion (Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections if you change)
I'll stand on Card_N'FoRcE offset :P

thanks James for taking a look ;)
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