This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月24日 at 12:24:49

Artist: Owl City
Title: Fireflies (Adam Young Remix)
Tags: shinki yangzd88 ocean eyes
BPM: 90
Filesize: 3291kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.73 stars, 342 notes)
2. Shinki's Easy (1.44 stars, 138 notes)
3. yznoob's Normal+ (3.97 stars, 207 notes)

Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th beatmap.

Shinki's Easy by moe moe Shinki
yznoob's Normal+ by moe moe yangzd88

enjoy!

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yoooooooo 射星

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　　才……才不是来加星星的呢！

carry on! hope to be a good map!

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First to mod I guess.

326's Easy:
00:21:449 (1) stack with (2)
00;28:782 (3) stack with (4)
00:30;782 (1) stack with (4) look nicer.
02:01:449 (2) stack with (1)
02:38:782 (4) Symetrical, but a little bit touch up on it will make it look nicer.
Break time is a bit long too me

Edit:

Yznoob:
00:49:615 (3) was intentionally like this? http://puu.sh/1sBV Nothing wrong,but it a bit.. ugly
Hitsound is way too soft from beginning until 00:53:282. Consider make it 50%
As Zlodeuka said, some of the notes drop on blue ticks.
01:14:782 (1) Spinner is the same white tick with (1) slider
02:10:782 (1) End of slider meet/stack the early of slider. Will make confusion.

Hard:
01:45:615 (6) New combo?
01:55:949 (5) New combo?

PM request.

it would be better to increase BPM twice (180) though not necessarily mb...

Kiai Mod

start 00:53:449
finish 01:14:782
start 02:00:115
finish 02:18:782
start 02:21:449
finish 02:42:782
do Kiai Maud so everywhere! and add it to the yznoob's Normal.

[326's Easy]

too much scatter Normal and Soft hitsounds...

00:10:782 (1) - finish? (Volume 50%)
00:13:449 (1) - ^ (Volume 45%)
00:21:448 (1) - remove the new combo
00:21:782 (2) - new combo
00:24:115 (1) - remove the new combo
00:24:782 (2) - new combo
01:09:449 (1,2,3) - 3 combo is closer to 2

[yznoob's Normal]

Soft sounds at the beginning!I like it.

a lot of sliders, ending with blue ticks.they do not sound out there ... and may confuse

00:49:615 (3) - Put it on the slider! or do as well as here 00:26:449 (4,1)
00:47:449 (4) <3
01:13:782 (3) - new combo
01:14:115 (1) - delete new combo
01:37:282 (1) - move here 01:37:449 (1) and Soft Hitsound
01:37:782 (2) - soft
01:56:115 (3) - new combo
02:10:782 (1) - need a warning sign! or do so to make it clear in which direction to move
02:21:449 (1) - remove the new combo
02:21:782 (2) - new combo
02:25:783 (7) - ^
02:26:615 (1) - delete new combo

[Hard]

may start with the spinner?from here 00:08:115 if not then 00:11:115 (2) - new combo

00:19:449 (5) - new combo
00:21:782 (4) - ^
00:26:615 (5) - ^
00:27:782 (1) - delete new combo
00:27:949 (2) - new combo
00:29:949 (1) - move here 00:30:115
00:37:115 (1) - delete new combo
00:38:115 (5) - new combo
00:38:949 (1) - delete new combo
00:40:782 (5) - new combo
00:42:115 (1) - delete new combo
00:47:615 (6) - Soft. and Whistle
00:57:448 (2,3,4) - oops... spacing.should be so http://puu.sh/1s2N.
01:11:949 (7) - new combo
01:49:615 (1) - delete new combo
01:49:782 (2) - new combo
01:52:115 (1) - delete new combo
01:52:449 (2) - new combo

It would be better if there is one more complexity.Only the rhythm to the music! Because you have it everywhere under the choir...

STAR<3

._.326'sGD
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[326's Easy]
00:24:782 (2) - The end of this slider sounds nasty. Change it to soft hitsounds instead?
01:13:782 (1) - Soften the end of this spinner.

[yznoob's Normal]
01:14:865 (1) - Soften the end of this spinner.
02:40:783 (6,7) - Gap is too big for the timing.

[Hard]
00:57:782 (4) - One grid right.

Nice song and maps.

首先:
好長的break time...


[326's Easy]
00:26:115 (3) - 這裡的綠線為啥是N 0.0感覺怪怪的~
00:36:115 (3) - 在Slider的尾巴加上clap??
00:38:115 (3) - 加上clap??
01:52:782 (3) - 同00:26:115 (3)

[yznoob's Normal]
這感覺上向Normal+了0.0

00:20:115 (4) - Normal最好不要變速...
01:14:865 (1) - 開始至01:15:115 ??
01:37:282 (1) - 這樣的在Normal出現不知好不好0.0
01:58:949 (1) - 去掉這spinner,之後01:59:449跟02:00:115加上note
02:10:782 (1) - 這很好看= = 但是它讓我不知道他要往哪個方向跑...

[Hard]
00:29:949 (1) - 開始至00:29:449

star~^ ^

mod request by pm~~~~~~~~~
dat easy
od - 1 o3o
00:35:449 add a timing section with normal sample set and set clap.
01:01:449 whistle ~~~~~
01:10:115 clap?
01:54:115 soft sample on timing section and set whistle
01:55:449 clap
02:04:782 clap~~~ and remove finish ~~~
02:07:449 whistle
02:26:115 clap
and on the spinner : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73890

dat normal rename to hard ~~~ ~~
HEY WHATS UP WITH THE KIAI
00:12:782 clap~~
00:17:449 ^
00:19:282 one grid left and one grid down
00:38:115 http://puu.sh/1sOK
00:41:226 http://puu.sh/1sON
00:53:449 WHERES KIAI HASJKLDHASJKDHAKSJDHA

hard aoraoro
clap overmap here ha?
tick rate 2 plox
00:12:115 remove clap and put whsitle
00:21:782 whsitle
00:25:449 whislte

nice map by the way

你好

well..建議還是回一下modder的post吧, 後面的modder好知道你改過哪些東西

[Easy]
- 輕重hitsound反差好大, 很抱歉雖然從綠線可以看出你音效下的功夫很大, 但我只覺得太花俏, 用太多不同的東西了, KIAI部分的slider音量調整倒是不錯
<00:29:115> (4) 這條居然不是用輕/消音 音效啊!?
<00:40:115> (3) 結果這條反而消音了, 後面那個finish好突兀
<01:43:449> (4) S:clap
<02:15:449> (2) S:clap, 其實我覺得前面那兩個clap很莫名..這邊的clap是跟前面consistent, 而且後一大段反而都沒clap了
<02:18:115> (3) S:clap, (1) S:finish
<02:37:449> 這音效也未免太突然了吧..

[Normal]
- 感覺上稍微做些調整會是個很不錯的Hard, 做為Normal節奏挺多變的
<00:49:615> (3,4) same spacing, or stack
<00:56:782> (6) inconsistent spacing
<00:59:449> (2) ^
- no KIAI section? 另外副歌部分的whistle下的太飄逸了, 不太懂怎麼下的
<01:06:615> 前面的紅線下note, (1)延1/4拍到白線上比較好聽(結尾處不變)
<01:44:115> (5) stack
<01:58:782> (8) 既然(3)(5)都沒疊就拉出來吧
<02:05:449..> (1..) 這兩條和後面那個愛心上的whistle超級吵
音效感覺能下很多功夫..

[Hard]
- 聽不懂clap怎麼下的..沒辦法給你mod hitsound因為和我的價值觀差太多了
<00:57:615> (3) inconsistent spacing

Ayeen wrote:

First to mod I guess.
Yznoob:
00:49:615 (3) was intentionally like this? http://puu.sh/1sBV Nothing wrong,but it a bit.. ugly no sry
Hitsound is way too soft from beginning until 00:53:282. Consider make it 50% 30% is enough in the beginning.
As Zlodeuka said, some of the notes drop on blue ticks.
01:14:782 (1) Spinner is the same white tick with (1) slider It's not allowed? lol
02:10:782 (1) End of slider meet/stack the early of slider. Will make confusion. OK

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[yznoob's Normal]

Soft sounds at the beginning!I like it. thx!

a lot of sliders, ending with blue ticks.they do not sound out there ... and may confuse

00:49:615 (3) - Put it on the slider! or do as well as here 00:26:449 (4,1) OK.
00:47:449 (4) <3
01:13:782 (3) - new combo OK.
01:14:115 (1) - delete new combo OK.
01:37:282 (1) - move here 01:37:449 (1) and Soft HitsoundOK.
01:37:782 (2) - soft OK.
01:56:115 (3) - new combo OK.
02:10:782 (1) - need a warning sign! or do so to make it clear in which direction to move Already fix the snapped lol.
02:21:449 (1) - remove the new combo OK.
02:21:782 (2) - new combo OK.
02:25:783 (7) - ^ OK.
02:26:615 (1) - delete new combo sry but I think it's better now.

Samah wrote:

[yznoob's Normal]
01:14:865 (1) - Soften the end of this spinner. Why not lol
02:40:783 (6,7) - Gap is too big for the timing.

Disoy wrote:

[yznoob's Normal]
這感覺上向Normal+了0.0 ...

00:20:115 (4) - Normal最好不要變速... xsk这变速不是很难吧...
01:14:865 (1) - 開始至01:15:115 ?? No.
01:37:282 (1) - 這樣的在Normal出現不知好不好0.0 本来想合歌的...好像难了些
01:58:949 (1) - 去掉這spinner,之後01:59:449跟02:00:115加上note No.
02:10:782 (1) - 這很好看= = 但是它讓我不知道他要往哪個方向跑... 233 3个modder同时吐槽这个吗...

star~^ ^

Hyguys wrote:

dat normal rename to hard ~~~ ~~ Why= =.

HEY WHATS UP WITH THE KIAI
00:12:782 clap~~ lol in my nm there is no soft-clap.
00:17:449 ^ ^.
00:19:282 one grid left and one grid down no.
00:38:115 http://puu.sh/1sOK ...OK.
00:41:226 http://puu.sh/1sON Why..
00:53:449 WHERES KIAI HASJKLDHASJKDHAKSJDHA OK.

loveFantasy wrote:

[Normal]
- 感覺上稍微做些調整會是個很不錯的Hard, 做為Normal節奏挺多變的
<00:49:615> (3,4) same spacing, or stack No.
<00:56:782> (6) inconsistent spacing OK.
<00:59:449> (2) ^
- no KIAI section? 另外副歌部分的whistle下的太飄逸了, 不太懂怎麼下的
<01:06:615> 前面的紅線下note, (1)延1/4拍到白線上比較好聽(結尾處不變) No.
<01:44:115> (5) stack
<01:58:782> (8) 既然(3)(5)都沒疊就拉出來吧 No.
<02:05:449..> (1..) 這兩條和後面那個愛心上的whistle超級吵 ...OK
音效感覺能下很多功夫.. .

LOL thanks all modder
Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [yznoob's Normal].osu

(累死我了....)

Normal is the only difficulty w/o Kiai time.
It'd be better,if you fix it.

Over 20 seconds' break is too much,you may have some probs with ranking.

[Easy]
I'm not sure if offset is correct,but normal hitsounds sound so rough,really,maybe reduce volume at least?

00:29:115 (4) - Finish this slider at 00:30:115 (5).It sounds/plays much better.
02:32:115 (1) - Finish.

[Normal]
00:19:282 (2) - Kinda hard to read,really,nice rhytm,but that's what players would expect at last.
00:20:115 (4) - 0.5x? There's no slider tick,so..yes,let's say it can't be read normally.
00:49:615 (3,4) - Not for Normal difficulty..really,your freestyle mapping would be more appreciated in hard difficulties,but Normal needs to be just readable and expected,at least.
02:10:782 (1) - Slider arrow helps,but still..uh.

Awesome mapping style,but all these stylish things turns around you,because it's used be Normal,but it's not.

[Hard]
00:47:615 (6) - I'd remove this note.
00:51:448 (1,1,1,1) - Combo spamming.
01:57:782 - Add this note to keep the rhytm on.
01:58:115 (1,1,1,1) - Again,keep it in one combo.

Nice one.

Star.

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
00:19:282 (2) - Kinda hard to read,really,nice rhytm,but that's what players would expect at last. fixed00:20:115 (4) - 0.5x? There's no slider tick,so..yes,let's say it can't be read normally. lol...I think is well
00:49:615 (3,4) - Not for Normal difficulty..really,your freestyle mapping would be more appreciated in hard difficulties,but Normal needs to be just readable and expected,at least. ok
02:10:782 (1) - Slider arrow helps,but still..uh. already fixed in last post. btw 4 people said that this slider is...

Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [yznoob's Normal+].osu

fix

Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [326's Easy].osu

updated.
thank you for your modding!