First off, it seems that something went wrong with uploading your map, so please try another full upload. I renamed the old mapset, updated, and was able to see that you at least fixed the old offset, but here's my previous mod again anyway for reference:
[General]
*Offset was noticably late. Try -12. (Fixed already I think)
*Mia Mont - Lolah (Gonzvlo).osb: Not sure why this is here?
*Using BG.jpg for the song selection screen and map thumbnail really isn't the best idea. Something more appropriate should have been used for the thumbnail; remember that you can always fade the image out before the map begins.
*Spinner elements: Not sure why "spin" has an exclamation mark while clear/osu don't, but that's a vey minor thing, of course.
*No preview point was set. >.>;;
*Tags: Gonzvlo and Gonz aren't needed since it's his map; Erufen, Kenezz, and Vicho aren't needed since searching any of those in would yield the full name tag. (Obviously switch out Erufen with Gonz since the map creator changed)
*Expected a spinner at the end of each difficulty that fades out into silence, but that's just what I would have done. P:
*SB isn't correct at the beginning. The moon bg is shown for a split second and then jumps to the full black bg.
*The rest of the storyboard was amazing, and really fit the mood of the song. However, my one complaint is that the breaks felt a bit empty. I wish that there had been more visual interaction during those to keep the player interested.
*The skin was a bit bright (and I can see many people removing it before playing), but overall I thought it was nice.
*I like the cursor, but it's a bit too bright and just turns into a ball of white during most of the song; especially during kiai when all of the flashy lighting effects appear.
*Combo colors 1 and 3 were pretty identical... I would have liked to seen them a bit more distinct from each other.
[Easy]
01:46:146 (2,1) - Would have flowed better as a slider.
03:18:421 (6,1,2) - spacing is incorrect
[Normal]
00:32:697 (1) - red tick was a bit unexpected. Maybe changing 00:32:077 (3,1) to a slider would have worked better.
00:42:008 (1,2,3) - I really don't like the large jumpy spacing here. It's the only time I see it in the diff, which really isn't consistent overall.
00:45:318 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:870 (3,4,1) - why overlap one and not the other? o.o;
01:58:766 (3,4,1) - try to avoid stacking notes like this; it can be a bit confusing
03:27:525 (1) - comes a bit early after the last spinner... maybe shorten the spinner by 1/2?
[Hard]
*1.2x and 1.35x speed changes felt awkward since they were only used in the second chorus.
00:34:559 (8,1,2,3) - I read this fine, but the distance spacing is really incorrect.
00:37:663 (2) - ffffffff those unsymmetrical sliderticks
01:13:042 - expected a note here and missed :/
02:50:283 (1,2,3,4,1) - a bit confusing to read because of the stacking (the mass of overlapping stacked notes is too much)
03:03:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Easy to play, but the stack leniency makes this look a bit odd.
I'd definitely like to remod this eventually, so remember to call me back after you get more mods!
