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ClariS - Neo Moon

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eveless
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eveless
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月18日 at 18:01:50

Artist: ClariS
Title: Neo Moon
Tags: eveless irony sorda s_o_r_d_a Alace Alazy
BPM: 74
Filesize: 6458kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alace's Taiko (4.94 stars, 856 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 582 notes)
  3. S o r d a's Normal (2.71 stars, 229 notes)
Download: ClariS - Neo Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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05.02 Add lyric sb
05.03 Changed new bg
05.07 Add S o r d a's Normal
05.07 Add ugly skin/deleted sth
05.08 Finished Hard , move to pending
05.14 Add Alace's taiko
Last edited by eveless , edited 14 times in total.
kiririn_
218 posts
Joined February 2010
kiririn_
啊
NanaDesu
NanaDesu
再見姐
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
求E姐做专辑里的ココロの引力
嘛~这首也挺喜欢的 :D

star
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
0.0/
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
hi eveless sama >~</
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
owari->~</

Download: ClariS - Neo Moon (goodbye) [Normal].osu
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
8-)
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol
fight eveve
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
kyaa eve-sama~!
比起前一個我喜歡新的背景 :oops:
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
:shock:
Raging Bull
2,785 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Tried doing M4M, but nothing really bothered me. >.< Starred. Good map.
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
E姐好 > <

All suggestions

[General]
BG不1024×768么？

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:02:840 (1) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86005
00:20:272 (2) - 1 gird left
00:22:704 (X) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86006
00:36:084 (5,6) - I think not to track is better
00:50:273 (7) - end at 00:50:476
00:55:341 (x) - add circle
01:41:152 (8,9) - spacing
01:46:625 (5,6) - stream should be the same spacing between circles imo
02:04:463 (5) - move to 02:04:260
02:10:138 (6) - clap
02:10:949 (8) - vol down finish
02:15:003 (4) - clap , I ignored same suggestions after this

[Hard]
00:10:948 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:19:260 (3,4) - ctrl+r
02:25:138 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol , nowcombo or remap plz
awesome diff > <

OK,that's all
Star
chungskale
120 posts
Joined December 2009
chungskale
I can't see the insane diff. :S
did you full submitted? or maybe sever delay
I enjoy this song! Relaxing :D
Ok..not much to pick, opinions~
[S o r d a's Normal]
  1. i dont understand Normal diff. much :S but just imo there are some places should add some notes or slider. A bit waiting too long~
  2. 00:09:326 (1) - not really match o.o maybe start on blue line
  3. 00:12:164 (3) - maybe half it and start at 00:12:569 -
  4. 02:56:354 (4) - move to 02:56:152 -

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:448 (2,3) - this confused me. maybe try to be like this?
    SPOILER
  2. 02:55:341 (5) - use clap instead?
  3. 02:58:179 - clap too?
  4. 02:58:584 (2) - use finish instead?
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

wcx19911123 wrote:

E姐好 > <

All suggestions

[General]
BG不1024×768么？

[Hard]
00:10:948 (3,4,5) - spacingk
01:19:260 (3,4) - ctrl+rno , on purpose
02:25:138 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol , nowcombo or remap plz new combo
awesome diff > <

OK,that's all
Star

chungskale wrote:

I can't see the insane diff. :S
did you full submitted? or maybe sever delayoh...mistake , it's Hard not Insane lol
I enjoy this song! Relaxing :D
Ok..not much to pick, opinions~
[S o r d a's Normal]
  1. i dont understand Normal diff. much :S but just imo there are some places should add some notes or slider.I think is fine , this map just follow the lyric..old mapping style i guess , likes this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15950 .
    Any ways , leave Normal's mod to Sorda o.o


    [Hard]
    1. 00:03:448 (2,3) - this confused me. maybe try to be like this?
      SPOILER
      changed , another way tho
    2. 02:55:341 (5) - use clap instead?[/color]
    3. 02:58:179 - clap too?^
    4. 02:58:584 (2) - use finish instead?k[/color]
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
Good Map, Star.
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
claris :)
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a

wcx19911123 wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:02:840 (1) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86005
00:20:272 (2) - 1 gird left
00:22:704 (X) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86006
00:36:084 (5,6) - I think not to track is better
00:50:273 (7) - end at 00:50:476
00:55:341 (x) - add circle
01:41:152 (8,9) - spacing
01:46:625 (5,6) - stream should be the same spacing between circles imo
02:04:463 (5) - move to 02:04:260
02:10:138 (6) - clap
02:10:949 (8) - vol down finish
02:15:003 (4) - clap , I ignored same suggestions after this
All Fixed

chungskale wrote:

I can't see the insane diff. :S
did you full submitted? or maybe sever delay
I enjoy this song! Relaxing :D
Ok..not much to pick, opinions~
[S o r d a's Normal]
  1. i dont understand Normal diff. much :S but just imo there are some places should add some notes or slider. A bit waiting too long~
  2. 00:09:326 (1) - not really match o.o maybe start on blue line Changed
  3. 00:12:164 (3) - maybe half it and start at 00:12:569 - no changed
  4. 02:56:354 (4) - move to 02:56:152 -Fix
thanks mod
wcx19911123 and chungskale
and some changed
IRC some advice by swish

Download: ClariS - Neo Moon (goodbye) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
Suzully
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Suzully
ClariS :!:
loveFantasy
526 posts
Joined August 2008
loveFantasy
液 渣mod

[General]
- LetterboxInBreaks統一, 一個有開一個沒開..
- 勾display storyboard in front of combo fire.
- 有些歌詞sb左邊的字邊框被切了一些啊233
- 由於有custom hitcircle, 建議強迫白色slider邊框. 我的custom skin是黑邊框啊T_T

[Sorda's Normal]
<00:09:529> (1,2) delete (2) and repeat (1) 1 more time bring better visual effect
<00:17:434> (2) add whistle here
<00:52:098> (3,4) is this spacing intentional..?
<01:05:273> (2) adjust shape a bit (2nd node: x:125 y:80) pic:
SPOILER
<01:09:125> add a note
<01:21:490> (6) whistle here instead, clap is barely hearable
<01:24:327> (T) unused timing section, remove
<01:35:273> (4) add clap or whistle here
<01:39:936> (5) new combo for consistency
<01:41:354> (9) add clap or whistle here
<01:43:584> (1) finish endpoint instead of startpoint
<01:52:300> (T) hmm..end KIAI during break? move it to 1:50:679?
<02:45:409> (T) unused timing section, remove
- 2nd KIAI: almost same rhythm to 1st KIAI, so apply same mods
<02:54:530> (4) new combo here, keep the same combo color arrangement as 1st KIAI?
<03:07:503> (4) new combo

[Hard]
- 有些同時下了whistle和clap的地方都感覺只需要clap? 像是
<01:18:652> (2), <01:37:503> (1) <01:39:733> (2,5) 等等...

<00:09:934> (2) new combo挪來這?
<01:10:341> (1,2,3) 微調一下位置keep 1.0x spacing
<01:23:922> (1) new combo move to <01:24:530> (3)?
<01:31:017> (7) 拔掉whistle?
- 好多高白線前的紅線finish啊o.o..
<02:19:057> (3..) 個人感覺下這樣的節奏比較好聽

<02:48:246> (6) keep spacing imo
<02:50:273> (5) 移到(3)和(4)起點的中間?
- 這張排得真好看:3
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