1. Hard (4.83 stars, 589 notes)
2. Normal (2.92 stars, 305 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
some suggestions:

[General]
there are 2 .osb files in the beatmap pack.oop ok
also comboburst should be flip horizontally. i've made a new version for you.thank you a lot!
and i expect more kiai part in this map, but if you think it fine now...hmm

[Normal]
01:31:305(x) - add a note?nah
01:55:499(x) - ^nah
02:21:144(4) - add clap?add finish
03:04:208(x) - add a note? nah

[Hard]
00:01:305(x) - add a note?nah
00:05:176(x) - ^nah
00:17:515(4) - ends at 00:17:636?nah
00:35:660(2) - maybe a note here and a slider starts at 00:35:781, ends at 00:36:144arranged
00:39:531(x) - it's okay for now, but i prefer a note here.ok
00:43:402(x) - add a note?nah
00:45:700(x) - ^nah
01:06:386(2) - ends at 01:06:507?nah
01:50:902(6) - move to 01:50:781?nah
01:53:321(3) - [attachment=0:9dbd2]vuyvub.jpg[/attachment:9dbd2]maybe better?nah
01:55:136(x) - add a note?ok
02:18:604(x) - ^nah
02:39:289(2) - ends at 02:39:410?nah
03:40:257(2) - ends at 03:40:378?nah
03:42:434(4) - move to 03:42:313?nah

lovely songs, awesome mapping.Thank you~ >.<
so
star~

also thanks for you helping in the past time. especially for my first map. np^^

Combo1 : 37,170,250
Combo2 : 250,219,46
Combo3 : 164,242,57
Combo4 : 249,57,130

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod ~

Song's Info;
- Source; It should be Signal-P, you forgot the - ok

General;
- Maybe try these colors ?

Combo1 : 37,170,250
Combo2 : 250,219,46
Combo3 : 164,242,57
Combo4 : 249,57,130

hmm , I like better light color... so no change sorry><

Skin;
- Rin's bow is cut ;/ Maybe try this comboburst instead ? or try to find one that you like more

SPOILER

[attachment=0:619f1]comboburst.png[/attachment:619f1]

ee, I think this is fine. ;_;

Normal;
- 00:58:160 >> Finish at start ? ok
- 01:14:612 >> ^ ok
- 01:15:579 >> Finish ? ok
- 01:23:321 (3,4,5,6) >> Remove clap from (4,6) and add finish to all ok
- 01:30:095 >> Finish ? ok
- 01:31:063 >> ^ ok
- 02:57:434 >> Add a note here ? nah
- 03:28:725 >> ^nah
- 03:18:966 >> Remove clap and add finish ok
- 03:19:450 >> ^ok
- 03:40:741 >> Finish at start ok
- 03:50:660 >> Finish ? ok

Hard;
- 01:12:676 >> Too many whistles, take out the ones that are on a blue tick
- 01:28:160 >> ^
- 02:45:579 >> ^
- 03:01:184 (2,4) >> Remove whistles
- 03:46:668 (4,6) >> ^
all fixed~
* Star ~

Nivalis wrote:

:3

[Hard]
00:08:805 (2,1,2) - You can add whistle somewhere on these three sliders' beginning imo ok
00:33:483 (7,8) - One grid right and down for both? (for perfect square) ok
00:49:450 (4,5) - Just my suggestion, maybe remove clap at (4)'s end and replace clap at (5)'s beginning with whistle? I think variate hitsounds like this will sound better in taiko xD nah , sorry I don't care taiko in osu! diff xD
00:57:192 (4,5) - ^
02:12:676 (4) - Add whistle?hmm ,nah
03:12:918 (2,4) - Curve these a bit? nah
03:18:967 (5) - Change hitsound to finish? hmm ,ok

[Normal]
-> OD +1?ok
01:05:902 (1) - I think it's spaced too far compared to the previous (3), (4), and (5) oop , yes fixed
01:55:257 (5,6) - Place both 1 grid down to make a "better" square (I can't figure out the perfect square, though)ok
02:46:547 (1) - Move the endpoint down a bit, so it become symmetrical?ok

Mostly suggestions, another very nice map (:
* ! :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:33:483 (7) - delete , circle at 00:33:362 and 00:33:604 ?nah

awesome
I can't find anything 0.0