1. Hard (4.57 stars, 246 notes)
2. Normal (2.71 stars, 160 notes)

Gcode wrote:

All suggestions. Nothing imminent.

Normal
00:02:964 (1) - XD

Hard
00:06:579 (4) - One grid leftok
00:18:386 (1) - Remove new combono
00:19:350 (1) - Add new combono
00:46:699 (2) - One grid updone!

Krisom wrote:

I can't quite tell if there's a BPM reduction at the end (I mean, there is one, but I can't get it right), but the offset seems to be just a tad off for me.
Anyways! The offset that worked the best for me was 1046, might wanna try that one.ok!

Also, small mod

General-
·Add more lead in. 1000 seems to be too little.ok.I put 2 lead-in:>
·Add to tags "Disney Aladdin" I would even venture to say "Aladdin" should be the source but won't confirm anything now.done!

Hard-
00:28:033 (1) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, sounds too rough x_xdone!
00:39:600 - Kiai should start here, since the cymbals and the music overall makes the emphasis here. If you change this, do the same on normal. Might wanna add a pre-spinner note here too. I'd suggest you a very neat finish hitsound but maybe later done!I will add some kind of sounds:O
00:55:021 - same as above, try to start the kiai here since it matches better the music. Also, add a finish at this time to the end of 00:54:539 (3).done!
01:08:515 (3,4) - Remove the whistles from the body of the slider ~done!
01:12:130 (1,2) - These ones play nice.XD
01:13:094 (1,2) - But these ones are very rough to play. Might wanna try to space them closer, after all, it's just 1/4 away on a 124 BPM song.I think about a solution x_x
01:29:720 - Same as 00:55:021 and 00:39:600done!
02:00:564 - Should end the previous kiai heredone!
Also, at the end, there's tons of sliderwhistle'd bodies. Try to get rid of them ok
02:17:672 (1) - Extend to 02:23:636 - (Warning, 1/8). It sounds very epic with whstle + finish with 40% of volume. Try it!done!but,I put hitsounds in 30%

Whew, and I thought I was just going to check the timing ~haha xd

banvi wrote:

[General]
こういう静かな曲はサイレントsliderslide入れたほうがいいかもしれない
[attachment=0:e870b]soft-sliderslide.zip[/attachment:e870b]wow!!ありがとうう！！

hitsound...とくにfinish音がうるさく感じるのでもう少し音量下げたほうがいいかもしれません全体２０％ダウン！

[Normal]
00:44:660 (T) この緑線は不要？done!
00:54:058 (1) 後ろの方にfinish? done!
01:28:756 (2) ^done!
01:21:527 (T) この緑線は不要？done!
01:28:756 (2) 後ろの方にfinish?done!
01:51:648 (T) この緑線は不要？done!
02:00:082 (T) ^done!


[Hard]
00:07:792 (6) grid lv4で１個左？done!
00:30:925 (2,1) spacingもうちょっと広げてみては？done!
01:27:552 (4) 対称になるようにもうちょっと形を整えてみては？done!
01:29:238 (2) 後ろの方にfinish?done!
02:03:214~ 　silder自身につけるwhistleを外した方がいいと個人的に思いますまだスライダーにﾎｲｯｽﾙ入ってるやつがいたとは・・・！done!
!
（調教が）素敵過ぎて信じられないyes!!

1. 00:34:780 (3,4,1) - shape them more symmetrically

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:

1. 00:34:780 (3,4,1) - shape them more symmetrically

done!

consider to make the volume for non-KIAI parts 30%?done!

and only thing is the bpm for the final part lollol

useless mod orz, don't kudosu

Kitsuneko wrote:

timing help in IRC （間違ってたらごめんなさい;_;）

Good luck!
Star here~ ☆

PS: aah , no kds thx !

arien666 wrote:

Just worries about some jumps of [Hard] but
the other things are great :3

So... Okay ;_;

James2250 wrote:

-Your timing sections do not match up on both difficulties (Normal has an offset at 135,237 while Hard has one at 135,249) Same for the ones after this
-I don't know about the timing sections at the end, I would get another good timer to double check to make sure those are all correct
-Your kiai should be the same on Normal and Hard if possible

All of the maps check out (although Hard has slightly more jumps than I would expect for this type of song but that's fine) Just try and get all of your timing points looked at again