01:04 Charlotte: こんばんは　ごまめるさん
01:05 Labyr: こんばんは　ごめまるです
01:05 Charlotte: もしよろしければまたテストお願いしてもよろしいですか? ごめまるさん!
01:06 Labyr: いいですよ　ごめまるです
01:06 *Charlotte is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1162191 Kicco - Amazing sky]
01:11 Charlotte: .../w\
01:12 Charlotte: もっと密度減らしてメリハリつけたほうがいいかな...?
01:12 Labyr: あー
01:12 Labyr: それはあるかも知れないですね
01:13 Labyr: 00:14:398 - 00:26:998  - 
01:13 Labyr: の間はもう少しスカスカにしてもいいかも?
01:14 Charlotte: 今見てて思いました。後に若干音圧強い(?)同パートがあるので前半落とします
01:14 Labyr: そうですね！

01:16 Labyr: 00:54:198  - 
01:16 Labyr: ここからのk kkd ddddkが若干叩きにくかったので
01:16 Labyr: 00:54:598 (295) - ここが丁度
01:17 Labyr: 00:54:198 (292) - これと同じドラムの音を出してるし
01:17 Labyr: k ddk ddddkでもいいな～って思いました
01:17 Labyr: or k ddk kdddk
01:19 Charlotte: とりあえずkdddkで
01:19 Charlotte: 変更しました
01:19 Labyr: はーい！

01:20 Labyr: 01:46:498 (601) - こいつを
01:21 Labyr: 01:46:898 - ここに移動させて
01:21 Labyr: change d
01:21 Labyr: で　ドラム音の通りになると思います
01:23 Charlotte: good!

01:25 Labyr: 00:10:798 (54,55,56,57,58) - ここのddkkd
01:25 Labyr: kkkkdでもいいかもですね
01:28 Charlotte: 00:10:598 - ここK
01:28 Charlotte: に変えてddkkdはkeepでもいいかなと思っちゃいました
01:28 Labyr: それでもいいかもですね
01:28 Labyr: 音圧的にはKのほうが違和感なさそう
01:29 Charlotte: 01:43:398 - 同様にchange

01:32 Labyr: あとは最後なんですけど
01:33 Labyr: 結構大幅に弄っちゃうかもしれないですけど
01:33 Charlotte: はい
01:33 Labyr: 01:12:598 (402) - 
01:33 Labyr: ここが
01:33 Labyr: 01:11:998 (400) - このBIGのﾃﾞｰﾝって音と同じなので
01:34 Labyr: 1/4構成を多少削って　BIG配置してもいいかもしれません
01:34 Labyr: 01:13:598 (409) -　01:14:198 (414) - 同様
01:35 Charlotte: 試してみます
01:36 Labyr: って自分で言っておいてなんですが　正直今の配置のままの方がしっくりくるので
01:36 Labyr: よけいな事言ってしまったかもしれないです；
01:37 Charlotte: では保留で今後Modもらってより良さそうな提案があれば変える方針にします!

1. 00:11:598 - add d
2. 00:12:198 - add d
3. 00:13:198 - add k
4. 00:13:398 - add d

1. 00:14:398 - to 00:14:348 -
2. 00:27:198 - to 00:27:148 -
3. 00:39:998 - to 00:39:898 -
4. 00:55:898 - add greenline(85%)
5. 01:21:548 - add greenline(80%, kiai mode)
6. 01:34:398 - to 01:34:348 -

1. 00:31:198 - add kat? I think that 4/1 at this position will not fit the song.

1. 00:05:198 - add kat? 他の部分がメロディとドラムを同時に拾っているように感じたので、この部分もノーツを追加してドラム合わせ、かつ分かりやすいリズムにするのはどうでしょうか。
2. 00:21:198 - add don? ^
3. 00:33:998 - add kat, and 00:34:198 (83) - change to don? ^
4. 00:49:998 - add kat, and 00:50:198 (127) - change to don? ^
5. 01:04:398 (168,169) - move to 01:04:598 - , and 01:05:398 (171) - delete? サビは主にボーカルに焦点を合わせているように感じたので、ここも同じようにボーカルをより重視した配置にするのもいいかもしれません。
6. 01:15:598 - add circle? ドラム+ボーカル合わせに。
7. 01:37:998 - add kat? イントロの同じ部分と同様の理由です。

1. 00:28:798 (117) - delete, and 00:28:598 - 00:28:998 - add don? ドラム+ボーカル合わせに。
2. 00:31:998 (129) - move to 00:31:798 - ? ^
3. 00:53:198 (217) - delete? あえて裏拍から入ることでだんだん強くなる音のフェードインをイメージしやすそう？ちょっとした提案程度に受け取ってください。
4. 01:12:798 (310) - change to don, and move to 01:12:598 - ? ボーカル合わせの統一を犠牲にして主張が激しい音に合わせる提案です。
5. 01:16:798 (330) - move to 01:16:598 - ? ドラム+ボーカル合わせに。

1. 01:47:098 - add circle? 青線で偶数打として完結させることで小節の頭の音が途切れる部分をより引き立たせられるかもしれません。

1. 00:09:798 (16,17,18,1) - add finisher? Stronger sound
2. 00:26:898 (44) - delete? Emphasize drum sound
3. 01:42:598 (16,17,18,1) - add finisher? Stronger sound
4. 01:47:098 - add circle? Emphasize the end point of drum sound

1. 01:47:198 (627) - delete? Emphasize the end point of drum sound

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13:47 Jonawaga: hi Nardo :3
13:49 Nardoxyribonucleic: hi~
13:49 Jonawaga: can I ask some quick questions about your GD?
13:49 *Jonawaga is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1166211 Kicco - Amazing sky [Nardo's Oni]]
13:49 Jonawaga: here?
13:49 Nardoxyribonucleic: sure
13:51 Jonawaga: 00:56:698 (308) - is the triplet here following something?
13:53 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes. It aims to accompany the increasing pitch of vocal.
13:54 Jonawaga: ahhh cool :3
13:55 Jonawaga: 01:22:598 (479) - why is this a k?
13:57 Nardoxyribonucleic: To follow the background claps
13:57 Nardoxyribonucleic: occuring at 01:22:598 - and 01:22:798 -
13:58 Nardoxyribonucleic: also this could reflect the lower vocal pitch at 01:22:398 (478) -
13:59 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:21:998 (477,478,479,480) - you may pair this constellation with 01:25:198 (492,493,494,495) -
14:00 Nardoxyribonucleic: They are the opposite while holding the last note as k for the snare.
14:00 Jonawaga: I see, thank you
14:01 Jonawaga: I still dont hear the claps you mentioned ;w;
14:02 Jonawaga: 01:22:398 - is there also a clap here? but it needs to be d for the kick or something right?
14:03 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yeah.
14:04 Jonawaga: 01:25:198 (492) - is this a snare mapped with d?
14:05 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes. My prime concern here is vocal pitch difference
14:05 Nardoxyribonucleic: You may compare 01:21:598 (476,477) - and 01:24:798 (491,492) -
14:05 Nardoxyribonucleic: The former is increasing while the latter is decreasing, thus the opposite arrangement
14:05 Jonawaga: 01:22:398 (478,479,480) - but then here your concern is the background claps?
14:07 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes, they are combined to form the resultant structure.
14:09 Jonawaga: ok, all good
14:09 Jonawaga: any concerns?
14:09 Jonawaga: or is it ready for bubble?
14:11 Nardoxyribonucleic: I think it is up to your decision :o
14:13 Nardoxyribonucleic: But I would say Muzukashii is mapped consecutively and needs some 2/1 breaks
14:17 Nardoxyribonucleic: while in Futsuu, 01:44:398 (278) - this note could be deleted for a break as well as consistency with 00:11:598 -
14:18 Jonawaga:   I think that was supposed to be for the electric guitar
14:22 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:11:598 - 00:12:398 - the electric guitar is identical at these spots, while there is still a good rest moment in the prelude
14:23 Nardoxyribonucleic: We do not need to map every elements in lower difficulties. Otherwise it may be demanding for beginners.
14:24 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1162878 Kicco - Amazing sky [Muzukashii]]
14:24 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:17:198 (69,70) - notes like these are not really necessary for example, could be removed for a rest
14:26 Jonawaga: I was thinking about that!
14:27 Jonawaga: 00:20:598 (80) - and remove this too, right? :#
14:28 Nardoxyribonucleic: It is also possible
14:29 Nardoxyribonucleic: for the spread
14:30 Jonawaga: 00:22:998 (91,93) - same?
14:30 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes, a bit overdone in this calm session
14:31 Jonawaga: okay, thank you so much Nardo >w<
14:36 Nardoxyribonucleic: You are welcome :3 00:51:598 (210) - 00:52:598 (214) - same reason too
14:37 Nardoxyribonucleic: especially when the upcoming 1/2 + 1/4 pattern is quite long
14:37 Jonawaga:  yeah >w<
14:38 Nardoxyribonucleic: A 2/1 rest would be good before and after kiai too
14:40 Jonawaga: 1/1? I think it would be difficult to fit a 2/1 rest in there
14:41 Nardoxyribonucleic: Not really difficult. 1/1 is not effective enough for an intermediate difficulty
14:42 Jonawaga: 00:55:098 (227,228,229,230,231) - remove all this?
14:43 Nardoxyribonucleic: No need. I have already mentioned one at 00:51:598 - as 2/1 break
14:44 Jonawaga: oh! I thought you were trying to say directly before the kiai
14:45 Nardoxyribonucleic: A possible spot for a post-kiai 2/1 rest would be to delete 01:31:398 (395,396) -
14:47 Jonawaga: 01:30:398 (389,390) - ?
14:49 Nardoxyribonucleic: Either way would work. By adding such breaks, continuous patterning could be resolved in Muzukashii
14:50 Nardoxyribonucleic: Other than these issues, the rest of the set seems okay.
14:51 Jonawaga: okay owo thank you so much