This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 31. Juli 2011 at 00:43:59

Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko
Title: Ruru (TV Size)
Source: Denpa Onna to Seishun Otoko
Tags: Louis Cyphre Lucifer Miu Matsuoka ed ending
BPM: 107
Filesize: 14722kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,38 stars, 186 notes)
2. Louis' Easy (0,23 stars, 55 notes)
3. Miu's Insane (4,6 stars, 180 notes)
4. Normal (3,43 stars, 133 notes)

Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size)
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (no video)
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The ED song from Denpa Onna to Seishun Otoko with extra cute video.
Video might be slightly ecchi.

Status:

Insane:100% by Miu Matsuoka
Hard:100%
Normal:100%
Easy:100% by Louis Cyphre

Use same tags for all difficulty as in this difficulty. Enjoy~
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Louis' Easy].osu

thx reqs~

[General]
add kiai.

[Hard]
0.06.798(6) - change circle.
0.09.041(5) - ^
0.12.756(7) - lol timing. move red and white tick.
0.14.648(1) - ^
0.17.172(4) - lol timing. move blue tick(end time)
0.23.059(4) - lol timing. move red tick(end time)

[Normal]
0.16.891(6) - lol timing. move blue tick(end time)
0.30.630(4) - spacing.

Here we go...

[Louis' Easy]


[Normal]
Mostly cosmetic stuff here. Grid-snap is completely messing with your spacing. Some parts just don't look good because of it (irregular hitobject overlapping: http://puu.sh/2CAs)
00:05:396 (3,4) - strange spacing (visually), I suggest moving (4) to 309/48
00:06:237 (6) - move to 264/147 to create a much nicer transition between (5) and (1)...
00:07:639 (1) - ...move to 264/88 as it is not stacked properly on (5) and...
00:07:920 (2) - ...move to 217/46 to fix spacing and allignment
00:14:648 (2) - move to 232/189 to place it in the middle under (1), spacing is kept intact
00:29:788 (3) - move to 205/68 and...
00:30:630 (4) - ...to 380/81 to fix spacing and allign them in a much better curve
00:31:471 (1,2,3) - maybe place them centered inside the curves: (2) @234/191, (3) @133/256 and (4) to fix spacing @298/185
00:46:611 (3) - this looks odd. I think changing the angle here can look "right" if you move the ending point of (3) to 92/307
00:48:854 (3) - ^ [Ctrl]+H
00:54:461 (3) - can be curved better around (2)
01:07:919 (2) - Maybe try and curve this around the following (1)?

[Hard]
The 1/8 snaps seemed weird at first but they do match the song.
00:06:658 (6) - maybe move ending point to 262/324 to match the curve
00:08:901 (5) - ^ to 257/324
00:11:844 (6) - maybe curving this more exactly around (7,8) will look better, make it more symmetrical to (1,3,4) and will fix the odd spacing to (7)
00:33:433 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:714 (2) - Maybe turn this into a "m"- or "v"-slider and place the red-sub-point exactly on the red tick to match the song or take this:

272,296,33714,2,0,B|227:289|217:245|217:245|164:241|155:191,1,160,0|2

00:35:115 (3) - new combo
01:13:527 (5) - curve this around following (1)


Very nice mapset! Hope the mostly cosmetic stuff will help at least a bit as I couldn't find anything "wrong"
~star

Hi~

General
You could make your Kiai more than just a burst; it would suit nicely if you kept it until the end of the song
Increase you first timing point's volume by 10%

Hard
You could really improve the overall look of you sliders by increasing the amount of points

00:15:489 (2) - This dosent look too nice
00:35:115 (8) - New combo
01:15:489 (1) - Maybe stack this under: 01:14:368 (1) -
01:09:041 (2) - Move this to X:488 Y:208
01:12:405 (1) - Replace whistle with finish
01:05:396 (1) - Move new combo forward one note?
01:24:181 (1) - Replace whistle with finish

Normal
00:04:274 (1) - Remove whistle to continue pattern or add a whistle here: 00:02:031 (2) -
01:01:190 (4) - This sounds like it should be the beginning of a new pattern and combo
01:01:471 (1,2,3) - Would be nice if these were rotated a little more each time...?
01:07:919 (2) - Move to X:208 Y: 144
01:14:087 (1) - Move new combo forward one note to continue pattern
01:22:218 (4) - Spacing
01:24:181 (1) - Replace whistle with finish

Louis' Easy
No Kiai time here? Just asking~
You could add more S finishes. For example; 01:01:190 (1) - beginning of this slider

01:16:891 (3,1) - Dont like how these two finishes are right next to each other. Sounds noisy
01:24:181 (3) - New combo?

This is pretty awesome!
Star~

Elio~

General

--Add kiai time somewhere..? preferably where you had those bookmarks.. yeah..

Hard

00:12:756 (7,8) - hmm, i never knew this wast he rhythm, i still got 300's tho by playing it as 1/2 tick notes tho. lol. just commenting on this cuz people will probably not figure the real rhythm out unless they go to editor.
00:15:489 (2,3,1) - this stack feels weird to me. I also actually hesitated a bit before actually playing combo 2. I thot you might have anti spaced or something >_>.
00:43:807 (2) - move this so it is symmetrical with combo 1?
[00:54:461 (5) - new combo
00:56:424 (1) - remove combo
00:56:704 (2) - new combo] i find that these combos work a lot better.
01:01:190 (4) - new combo
01:01:471 (1) - remove combo
01:12:125 (x,x) - i actualyl really want to add a note here and at 01:12:265.
01:23:059 (4) - I feel that it sounds better if you changed the the hitsound to Default Normal, removed the clap, and added a finish. (Obviously keep the last three notes S:C1) This sounds better just cuz it seems to add on to that magical sound of the harp (or whatver that instrument is... idk) imo. you could also decrease the volume a bit there too so the finish isn't too land idk about you.

Normal

00:07:639 (1) - why is this note slightly off combo 5 of the previous combo D:. it bothers me.
00:42:686 (3,1) - this is just my personal preference, but I don't really like this jump being here in a normal diff.
01:23:059 (4) - same as hard.

Easy

--The sliderslide hitsound is kinda like... loud D:

00:00:630 (1,2) - umm.. it really bothers me how this isn't on the same level D:
01:19:695 (1) - clap instead of finish at the beginning of slider, and finish instead of whistle at the end?
01:21:938 (2) - clap instead of finish at the beginning?
01:24:181 (3) - finish kinda sounds weird imo at the end.

Nice map! :3

Star~~

[General]
Offset seems to be off .. +15/+17 make it more correct though fine now (and it's the second time that happen to...)

well, only this though ( i liked the flow of the map.. and i could really find anything that wasn't nazi...)
ah, could you rename "Denpa Onna ED.MP4.AVI" in "Denpa Onna ED.avi" ?
and add tags "Electric Wave Woman and Youthful Man", "Dengeki Bunko", "ASCII Media Works", "Shaft", "Hitoma Iruma" and "Buriki"

will give some combobursts as that mod wasn't that usefull :3
need guests?

a comboburst for you :3

Easy & Normal: Perfect

Hard:
- Why not use sliders with more than 1 waypoint once in a while?
00:12:766 (7,8) - hmm it's "right" but it's hard to hit - not an error though
01:02:041 (3,4,5) - pattern doesn't feel so natural, but it's also not an error, just want to mention it ^^
I just think something like this could be better there: 01:11:294 (5) - e.g. sliders like this one would look better with 2 waypoints

Also nicht viel zu kritisieren, musst daher auch nix von dem o.g. wirklich tun, die Map enthält meiner Meinung nach keine wirklichen Fehler.

Nettes Lied - Sweet Map P:

Resnap all notes in Normal and Louis' Easy
That's all xD
/me runs

Aleks719 wrote:

Resnap all notes in Normal and Louis' Easy
That's all xD
/me runs

Now I feel stupid for forgetting that, lol.

star

thanks request~

All Suggestion

[General]

1. this video offset +550ms?
2. same as kiai all diffs?(kiai fountain)

[Louis' Easy]

• 
  AR,OD +1?

1. 00:05:125 (1) - spacing
2. 00:18:583 (1) - 1grid right
3. 00:20:826 (3) - 1grid left
4. 00:47:742 (2) - 2grid down,3grid right. and copy&paste,ctrl+h 00:49:985 (3) -
5. 01:01:200 (1,3) - same as 00:18:583 (1,3)
6. 01:24:191 (3) - I think that the sound of finish is large...(volume adjust to 50%?

[Normal]

• 
  

  Tenshi-nyan wrote:

  The jumps are intended and I want to leave them.

  hmm.. 00:47:742 (1) - 2.50x spaing too far from object... ;_;

1. 01:24:191 (1) - 1grid left
2. 01:25:312 (3) - add a finish,volume50%?

[Hard]

1. 00:45:489 (T) and 00:52:218 (T) this green line +10ms resnap please ._.
2. 00:35:125 (1) - 1grid left
3. 00:43:256 (1,2) - 1grid left
4. 01:01:200 (4) - [suggestion]NC and use 1.2x spacing? (01:01:481 (1) - remove NC)
5. 01:12:696 (2) - x:256 y:200
6. 01:25:312 (3) - add a finish and volume50%?

star~

Great song and map~
May I make an additional diff? It's a [Hard]

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great song and map~
May I make an additional diff? It's a [Hard]

Yeah, you can.

But note that I am picky, I may not add the diff if I don't like it.

Here you are~
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Miu's Hard].rar
The attachment included my diff's .osu file, a background for my diff and a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav'
Don't hesitate to replace the background of my diff if you hated it, or delete the 'soft-sliderslide.wav' if you don't want it.

Hope you'll like my difficulty!

I'll upload it if you add claps starting at 00:52:228.
You'd also have to increase the hitsound volume a bit, 30% is too quiet.


The diff is fine besides that.

There are some minor issues which I'll fix myself before uploading the diff.