1. Blossom (5.74 stars, 1118 notes)

1. 00:10:145 (1) - dont like how the circle shape at the beginning of the slider isnt blanketing anything,
   seems kinda pointless for it to be a blanketing shape if it isnt. I'd move 00:15:770 (1) -
   to make the slider blanket the end of the slider or just make a new shape for the slider entirely,
   especially since ur blanketing with the other sliders in the intro
2. 01:22:332 (2,3) - I dont like stacks like this, it's pretty weird. prolly just me tho l o l
3. 02:01:863 (2,1) - the break in rhythm between sliders feels weird to me, i get wot ur implyin
   but i dont like it. especially since hitsounds are p r e t t y similar to the hats in the song which
   are streamy x d. I think changing the hat hitsounds in this specific part or changing the rhythm
   would b better
4. 02:13:895 (1) - direction of this slider feels wonky in regards to where ur comin from in the last
   stream, it's doable just wonky

Jaitonat wrote:

Blossom

1. 00:10:145 (1) - dont like how the circle shape at the beginning of the slider isnt blanketing anything,
   seems kinda pointless for it to be a blanketing shape if it isnt. I'd move 00:15:770 (1) -
   to make the slider blanket the end of the slider or just make a new shape for the slider entirely,
   especially since ur blanketing with the other sliders in the intro // y does everything have to be a blanket ):
2. 01:22:332 (2,3) - I dont like stacks like this, it's pretty weird. prolly just me tho l o l
3. 02:01:863 (2,1) - the break in rhythm between sliders feels weird to me, i get wot ur implyin
   but i dont like it. especially since hitsounds are p r e t t y similar to the hats in the song which
   are streamy x d. I think changing the hat hitsounds in this specific part or changing the rhythm
   would b better // i think its pretty harmless tbh. it needs to have a general level of intensity lower than the last section anyway and this helps accomplish that
4. 02:13:895 (1) - direction of this slider feels wonky in regards to where ur comin from in the last
   stream, it's doable just wonky // its slow enough where direction doesnt rly matter all that much

not rly much i wanted point out tbh good map x d

1. 01:30:770 (1,2,1,2) - i think these should be reduced a bit, feels a bit unwarranted for two random jumps in the section to be this huge compared to the rest and the stream afterwards
2. 02:33:270 (1,2,1,2) - yea same, just feels a bit too big
3. 03:43:113 - i just find it funny here that the echoing voice doesnt fade out it just stops
4. 04:04:520 (2,1) - 04:09:520 (1,2) - find it triggering that one is stacked while the other isnt
5. 04:20:770 (1,2,3,4) - usually you emphasize these 2 jumps? any reason why you dont here
6. 04:22:879 (2,3) - might just be me but this seems a bit easy to misread as a triple because of the stacking, maybe move it off a bit
7. 05:02:801 (2,3,4) - move down a bit, slightly touches the hp bar

handsome muscle wrote:

Cool! Randomly passing by. Need mod?

1. 00:31:707 (1,2,3,1) - could be pentagon instead since 5 note phrase
2. 01:22:332 (2) - ctrl+g for flow?
3. 01:30:145 (1,2,3,4) - increase spacing to give the feeling of acceleration since you did that with the last 2 combos
4. 02:01:863 (2,1) - an overlap like this would look better i think
5. 02:13:582 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is the only stream of its kind in the entire map, change it since it stands out too much
6. 02:32:645 (1,2,3,4) - refer to 01:30:145 (1,2,3,4) -
7. 03:45:145 (4,5,6) - how about rhythm like this to make downbeat clickable? (same goes for 03:55:145 (4,5,6) - ofc)
8. 03:51:395 - make downbeat clickable too
9. 05:17:645 (2) - forgot nc? you have an nc every slider for this section except this one

1. 00:27:645 (1,1) - this looks off
2. 05:22:645 (2) - is it just me or the star shape isn't rly parallel from both sides?

Yohanes wrote:

Hello! sorry for the wait
omg, non denpa song by nanahira

Blossom
- 00:58:895 (1) - super nazi, how about adding white point on the straight path? It just looks weird & unbalanced to me atm http://puu.sh/vekLE/7c4d2d12b0.jpg // i'd rather keep as is
- 01:37:176 (1) - I don't really like how this one play to be honest. The anti-flow makes it quite counter-intuitive to what the song might suggest. Your other pattern on the similar section has an actual flow on it 01:41:395 (1,2) - & 01:52:176 (1,2) -
- 01:38:270 - I think this rhythm should be clickable how about something like http://puu.sh/vekSV/174e8aa4c8.jpg instead // i like how this pattern works rn
- 01:41:863 - How about putting whistle or something to at least give some feedback on the sliderhead?
- 01:47:176 (2) - Ctrl+G this slider? To give more emphasis onto the next circle 01:47:488 (3) -. Or you can do something similar to make (3) get stronger emphasis
- 02:30:145 (3,4) - It's following the drum more if you ctrl+g this rhythm http://puu.sh/velkP/c2bac5e10c.jpg // i wanted the sound on the red tick to be clicked
- 02:34:832 (1,2,3) - Its quite weird to me that near the end, you slow down the stream instead of sped it up lol
- 02:45:770 (1,2,3,4) - How about something like this? Feels hollow if you map the clap with a sliderend and then left the lext beat unmapped http://puu.sh/veluK/94093a283d.jpg // i value the whistle a bit more to preserve melody
- Based on the bell sound, the stream should start at 05:02:020 - or 05:02:098 - instead. // ik, but i like how i made this pattern :d

Nice Map! although I can't really play it properly, I hope this helps a bit
Good Luck!

Wanko wrote:

Not the biggest fan of Camellia but let's try it

SPOILER

Blossom:
00:22:020 - could make a sharp turn here, like you did for this kind of sound before. // id rather keep shape
00:42:332 (3,2) - overlap, not sure if intentional or not // changed
01:04:520 (3) - This sound is kinda stronger than (2) so I'd make it a jump instead, like this maybe http://screenshot.sh/mMijS1JzAN9cD // just unstacked instead
01:11:395 (1) - Could place it like this instead http://screenshot.sh/mK7Be1xLLSImv // eh i like how its placed right now, overlaps are my thing
01:17:645 (1,2,3,4) - really threw me off when playing, I think placing a note at 01:17:723 makes a bit more sense, even if it's not following drums 100%. // think its fine, contrast here is nice
01:34:754 (2) and 01:35:379 (3) - Kinda overmapped imo, would map 01:35:691 and 01:35:848 and make 01:35:926 (2,3) into a slider instead // tbh the entire chorus is over a continuous 1/4 track
01:39:363 (3) - 2 nearly stacked singletaps would work better imo // idk what u mean
01:44:363 (3) - ^ // ^
01:56:082 (4) - Could end it at 01:56:316 and place another slider at 01:56:395 - 01:56:551 // want to keep
02:18:895 (1) - Hmm, move it to x:76 y:44? Think that's more in the middle // changed
02:36:395 (1,2,3) - I don't think this fits too well, http://screenshot.sh/mMiLQRyFTxGS1 maybe? // your suggestion seems a bit unnatural in rhythm imo
02:42:332 (2,3) - could make a triple here // did a triple right before instead
02:46:082 (4) - a bit weird to have that strong sound on a sliderend, when you map it as jump just half a sec later 02:46:707 (3) - http://screenshot.sh/mFcQOZPLXnfjl // im prioritizing melody here
03:09:676 (4,1) - stack them completely // changed
04:25:770 (1) - really throws me off. I know there's a sharp turn on that slider but I'd make it shorter anyway // made it more intuitive
04:30:066 (3,1) - weird spacing? I'd assume it should be the same as 04:32:566 (3,1) // changed
04:51:629 (2,3) - move to x:273 y:368 to avoid overlap // intentional overlap
05:12:488 (2,3,1) - If my ears don't play tricks on me, this part is 1/3 http://screenshot.sh/odR4vzeTxB6BR // its 1/4 lol

Well, that's all... Hope you found it helpful

Kanari wrote:

sb ~ https://puu.sh/vnp1i.zip
the parts where the notes are highlighted may look off while in the editor but they're fine when you actually play the map

the bg was one pixel off so i included a new one for you xD