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Starset - Satellite (Cut Ver.)

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Starset
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Starset
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 27 mars 2022 at 9:37:48 PM

Artist: Starset
Title: Satellite (Cut Ver.)
Tags: hb24 space rock english male vocalist vocals razor & and tie short ver version vessels pop forza horizon 4 four ost xs fh4 Yumerios
BPM: 154
Filesize: 4469kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,61 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Hard (3,33 stars, 215 notes)
  3. Insane (4,58 stars, 281 notes)
  4. Normal (1,97 stars, 132 notes)
Download: Starset - Satellite (Cut Ver.)
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Starset - Back to the Earth

No I didn't make the song, I'm just a fanboy
Last edited by Starset , edited 32 times in total.
Seolv
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Seolv
first!
Starset
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Starset
no
Log Off Now
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second!

m4m sopry for bad mod

[easy]

00:03:617 (4) - nc? start of a new vocal line
00:09:851 (4) - nc? ^
00:14:916 (4) - i would have this just as a single circle, circles are easier for noobs than sliders and having a short 1 beat rest here would be valuable to the player, since there are no major beats on the white tick, a circle would work better for play-ability imo
00:18:033 (4) - maybe add a red point in the middle of the slider to create a fake blanket on 00:17:253 (3) - ?
00:20:760 (3) - similar comment to 00:14:916 (4) - i would remove the repeat on this slider to give the players a bit of a rest
00:25:046 (1) - i don't think this nc is needed
00:44:916 (2) - same comment as 00:18:033 (4)
00:53:098 (1) - the end of this slider has a really strong note on it whilst 00:54:266 (2) - has barely anything but is clickable, maybe consider trying a rhythm like this to better hit that sound?
00:59:331 (1,2) - ^ same, although since there is a vocal if you leave this one i guess its fine too
01:07:903 (4) - same comment as 00:14:916 (4) - 00:20:760 (3) -, this map is pretty intense for an easy because there are very few skipped beats, to make the diff less dense and more noob friendly i would just have (4) as a single circle
01:14:136 (4) - ^

[normal]

00:23:487 (4,5,6,1) - i would actually have the (1) where the (4) starts since the vocal is still continuing, at the moment you have the more dense rhythm for the vocal than you do the drum fill
01:17:643 (7) - turn into 1/2 slider? there is still a note on the red tick :p (although its a bit quieter)

[hard]

is ok

[in space nobody can hear you scream]

00:18:227 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - i would make the angle on these two 'less aggressive' since its kind of hard to hit atm for a 4.4~*
00:33:033 (2) - :thinking: i would try make a better shape than this, it looks super out of place considering the previous sliders used in the map
00:39:851 (1,2,3,4) - maybe have reduced spacing for this part of the stream? just an idea since the first 4 drum notes are different to the second 4

nice map gl
Starset
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Starset

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second!

m4m sopry for bad mod

[easy]

00:03:617 (4) - nc? start of a new vocal line
00:09:851 (4) - nc? ^
00:14:916 (4) - i would have this just as a single circle, circles are easier for noobs than sliders and having a short 1 beat rest here would be valuable to the player, since there are no major beats on the white tick, a circle would work better for play-ability imo //imma wait before having to remap all that
00:18:033 (4) - maybe add a red point in the middle of the slider to create a fake blanket on 00:17:253 (3) - ? //no, it creates a certain pattern with next slider
00:20:760 (3) - similar comment to 00:14:916 (4) - i would remove the repeat on this slider to give the players a bit of a rest
00:25:046 (1) - i don't think this nc is needed //i think its a big downbeat and i just cant help myself adding nc
00:44:916 (2) - same comment as 00:18:033 (4)
00:53:098 (1) - the end of this slider has a really strong note on it whilst 00:54:266 (2) - has barely anything but is clickable, maybe consider trying a rhythm like this to better hit that sound? //it just sounds weird to have a circle on that cymbal so im keeping it
00:59:331 (1,2) - ^ same, although since there is a vocal if you leave this one i guess its fine too
01:07:903 (4) - same comment as 00:14:916 (4) - 00:20:760 (3) -, this map is pretty intense for an easy because there are very few skipped beats, to make the diff less dense and more noob friendly i would just have (4) as a single circle
01:14:136 (4) - ^

[normal]

00:23:487 (4,5,6,1) - i would actually have the (1) where the (4) starts since the vocal is still continuing, at the moment you have the more dense rhythm for the vocal than you do the drum fill //i drum fill 1/4 logically cuz its not playable on normal diff but 1/2 are
01:17:643 (7) - turn into 1/2 slider? there is still a note on the red tick :p (although its a bit quieter) //wouldnt it be a lot of clicking? im afraid it would be harder then kiai lol

[hard]

is ok

[in space nobody can hear you scream]

00:18:227 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - i would make the angle on these two 'less aggressive' since its kind of hard to hit atm for a 4.4~* //u can pass that stream without touching ur mouse its just for asthetics imo
00:33:033 (2) - :thinking: i would try make a better shape than this, it looks super out of place considering the previous sliders used in the map //no
00:39:851 (1,2,3,4) - maybe have reduced spacing for this part of the stream? just an idea since the first 4 drum notes are different to the second 4 //i would reduce spacing for the non-clap circles if u ask me and yea

nice map gl
thx for modz
LowAccuracySS
605 posts
Joined October 2015
LowAccuracySS
m4m from queue, sorry for bad mod : (

[General]

No combo colors?

[Easy]
00:03:617 (4) - New lyric, NC?
00:09:851 (4) - ^
00:28:162 (1) - Half that slider and put a circle where the sliderend is, fits the music better and is overall better gameplay
00:30:111 (4) - If you follow what I asked above, NC?
00:54:656 (3) - Make second slider anchor white and lower it, like this:


Solid diff! :D

[Normal]
I didn't find anything wrong with this diff specifically. good job!

[Hard]
00:01:279 (3) - Snapping this at 1.2x distance snap makes the transition from 2 to 3 easier, and fits the difficulty. You don't have to snap anything else in this section, as you can break distance snap on objects one or twice, if I remember correctly.
00:03:033 (6) - NC, and don't NC at 00:03:227 (1)
00:09:266 (6) - NC, as this is starting a new section of music.
00:09:851 (2,3,4) - You go from following the drums of the music at the start to following the vocals at 2, 3, and 4- and then back to drums at 5, which ends up being ultimately confusing to the player. To be completely honest, I think you can map the drums in this section. :)
00:12:188 (5) - If you aren't going to change the above suggestion, this should be an NC as it starts a new measure and repeats the drum rhythm.

As it stands at the moment, it's a good diff but some parts are a bit weirdly mapped.

[orbiting earth in the everlasting silence of space]
00:00:111 (1,2,3) - flip 180 degrees for better flow
00:02:059 (5) - NC?
00:05:565 (5) - ^
00:40:240 (5) - NC, because this drum sounds different when I'm listening to the song, like you did at 00:52:708 (1)


nice map!
SCANDiO
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SCANDiO
M4M queue
Hard
00:30:695 - https://puu.sh/tIY87.png that's better for most players
00:39:266 - https://puu.sh/tIYhi.png for the rhytm and tiny sliders does not sound in accordance with this diff
00:43:162 - https://puu.sh/tIYsL.png i asked on top this box
00:03:033 (6,1) - x:112 y:320 - there's a huge distance between (5) and (6,1), reduce the distance a bit
00:04:007 (2) - x:228 y:64 - ^
00:20:370 (1,2,3) - move a lttle bit to left
"Insane"
00:31:669 (3,4) - little bit reduce the distance between two circles
00:32:448 (6) - move little bit to left, closer to slider(1)
00:34:201 (5) - move to left, closer to circle(4)
00:39:559 (4,5) - closer to double(2,3 circle)
00:57:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - move closer, like that https://puu.sh/tIZzI.png
Map is a short, but i want to hear full map with full ver. of song. Good luck ;)
deadpon3
531 posts
Joined April 2013
deadpon3
hey, from ur m4m que

Easy


00:07:513 (2) - 0,03x DS difference, just simply move it to the right direction

00:24:266 (4,5) - Fix linear flow here? It's crooked, check it out (0.02 X: value difference when I rotated it straight)
box

Normal


00:17:448 (5) - Horizontal flip? Would make a nice reference to 00:15:695 (1) -

00:58:942 (2,3) - Uhh, mentioning blankets forgive me uwu
boxv2

01:10:240 (4) - You used straight slider here and didn't save much space for notes below, I know that 01:10:240 (4,5,6,7) - is supposed to be some kind of "L" pattern but it looks unprofessional and kinda random :/ What I suggest is to change shape of 01:10:240 (4) - into slider with a red point like you did in the next sequence 01:16:474 (4) -

Hard


00:51:734 (2,3) - Why isn't that the same tilt angle?
boxv3

01:04:007 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could make it a pentagon pattern, because it looks a bit random for me rn :/ Remember to keep 1.2x DS, it's possible to modify the pattern below this way:
another box

last diff name


00:04:396 (3) - What about "M" shape?
boxx

00:18:812 (1,2) - I don't know why is spacing here 2x between these sliders and then it suddenly decreases between 00:19:201 (2) - and 00:19:591 (3) - where a strong drum appears, that's a stronger tone, spacing here should be higher than between 00:18:812 (1,2) -
It even looks unnatural, especially with straight flow.

00:40:240 (5) - How about NC on this note to emphasise the drums tone decrease? Also there's a really sharp change of direction so NC would reveal it very nicely.

00:52:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't understand your idea of spacing increase here, it doesn't emphasise any change of music aaand the less spaced part feels pretty weird 00:52:318 (3,4,5,6) - :/ Maybe keep spacing clear in this stream or make it increase more naturally I really don't know uwu

Uhh, I can't find anything else so I'll keep my mod in that form.
gl;hf m8
SeaRasp
693 posts
Joined August 2014
SeaRasp
Hey M4M from queue

Insane
  1. 00:16:474 (4) - Don't really think placing a slider here is appropriate sense it's covering two equally strong beats and adding a clap on both makes it weird. I think placing two stacked circles would work way better and would emphasize the following vocal a lot more. It's also the only time you used a slider for these exact beats.
  2. 00:18:520 (1) - NC not necessary, if compared to 00:40:240 (5) - where you didn't NC. Either add NC on the second stream or remove from first IMO.
  3. 00:38:877 (1,2,3) - Sense the spacing is pretty high in this part of the map, I always mess this up for a tripple coming out of sliderend so I think increasing the spacing would help for readability to catch the 1/2 gap between the slider and double. Or maybe it's just me lol
    00:39:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -Speaking of this stream I don't feel like it represents the drums correctly as 00:39:851 (1,2) - are way more important than the following circles; 00:40:046 (3,4,5,6,7) - are about the same and 00:40:435 (7,8,1) - these are getting lowder. So you should try to represent the differences with spacing, angle changes...
  4. 01:00:111 (4) - Why don't you make the tick be at the angle, would look nicer. You could do that for other sliders too unless you think it limits the shape too much.
  5. 01:12:968 (5) - Consider changing the shape to differentiate it from the previous slider which covers the drum and this one only vocals and also three sliders of same shape in a row is meh. Very minor though
  6. 01:18:227 (1) - :(
Hard, Normal and Easy all look nice to me though or maybe I'm just not good at modding them.
Anyway good luck and sorry for modding just 1 diff
Starset
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Topic Starter
Starset
Space

[ Space ] wrote:

m4m from queue, sorry for bad mod : (

[General]

No combo colors? //added

[Easy]
00:03:617 (4) - New lyric, NC? //not ncing for lyrics
00:09:851 (4) - ^ //^
00:28:162 (1) - Half that slider and put a circle where the sliderend is, fits the music better and is overall better gameplay //this is easy diff and should have rythms like this
00:30:111 (4) - If you follow what I asked above, NC?
00:54:656 (3) - Make second slider anchor white and lower it, like this: //no i like my slider shape :3


Solid diff! :D

[Normal]
I didn't find anything wrong with this diff specifically. good job!

[Hard]
00:01:279 (3) - Snapping this at 1.2x distance snap makes the transition from 2 to 3 easier, and fits the difficulty. You don't have to snap anything else in this section, as you can break distance snap on objects one or twice, if I remember correctly. //yea
00:03:033 (6) - NC, and don't NC at 00:03:227 (1) //no sry im just ncing every big downbeat for consistency
00:09:266 (6) - NC, as this is starting a new section of music.
00:09:851 (2,3,4) - You go from following the drums of the music at the start to following the vocals at 2, 3, and 4- and then back to drums at 5, which ends up being ultimately confusing to the player. To be completely honest, I think you can map the drums in this section. :) //yes its intended also its on every difficulty if u didnt notice since vocals feel more loud
00:12:188 (5) - If you aren't going to change the above suggestion, this should be an NC as it starts a new measure and repeats the drum rhythm.

As it stands at the moment, it's a good diff but some parts are a bit weirdly mapped.

[orbiting earth in the everlasting silence of space]
00:00:111 (1,2,3) - flip 180 degrees for better flow //nah, intended back and forth flow
00:02:059 (5) - NC? //no
00:05:565 (5) - ^
00:40:240 (5) - NC, because this drum sounds different when I'm listening to the song, like you did at 00:52:708 (1) //yea

nice map!

SCANDiO

SCANDiO wrote:

M4M queue
Hard
00:30:695 - https://puu.sh/tIY87.png that's better for most players //yea but its not necessary
00:39:266 - https://puu.sh/tIYhi.png for the rhytm and tiny sliders does not sound in accordance with this diff //its fine
00:43:162 - https://puu.sh/tIYsL.png i asked on top this box
00:03:033 (6,1) - x:112 y:320 - there's a huge distance between (5) and (6,1), reduce the distance a bit //not really
00:04:007 (2) - x:228 y:64 - ^ //^
00:20:370 (1,2,3) - move a lttle bit to left //why lol
[box="Insane"]00:31:669 (3,4) - little bit reduce the distance between two circles //ok
00:32:448 (6) - move little bit to left, closer to slider(1) //nah
00:34:201 (5) - move to left, closer to circle(4) //^
00:39:559 (4,5) - closer to double(2,3 circle) //^
00:57:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - move closer, like that https://puu.sh/tIZzI.png
Map is a short, but i want to hear full map with full ver. of song. Good luck ;)

deadpon3

deadpon3 wrote:

hey, from ur m4m que

Easy


00:07:513 (2) - 0,03x DS difference, just simply move it to the right direction //ok

00:24:266 (4,5) - Fix linear flow here? It's crooked, check it out (0.02 X: value difference when I rotated it straight) //lol ok

Normal


00:17:448 (5) - Horizontal flip? Would make a nice reference to 00:15:695 (1) - //but will fck up my flow next

00:58:942 (2,3) - Uhh, mentioning blankets forgive me uwu //ye i like blankets


01:10:240 (4) - You used straight slider here and didn't save much space for notes below, I know that 01:10:240 (4,5,6,7) - is supposed to be some kind of "L" pattern but it looks unprofessional and kinda random :/ What I suggest is to change shape of 01:10:240 (4) - into slider with a red point like you did in the next sequence 01:16:474 (4) - //why next notes dont have enough space? it looks fine to me

Hard


00:51:734 (2,3) - Why isn't that the same tilt angle? //sorry


01:04:007 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could make it a pentagon pattern, because it looks a bit random for me rn :/ Remember to keep 1.2x DS, it's possible to modify the pattern below this way: //tryed my best


last diff name


00:04:396 (3) - What about "M" shape? //nah


00:18:812 (1,2) - I don't know why is spacing here 2x between these sliders and then it suddenly decreases between 00:19:201 (2) - and 00:19:591 (3) - where a strong drum appears, that's a stronger tone, spacing here should be higher than between 00:18:812 (1,2) -
It even looks unnatural, especially with straight flow. //equalised the spacing but i still want less spacing between a slider and circle, thats how i map basically

00:40:240 (5) - How about NC on this note to emphasise the drums tone decrease? Also there's a really sharp change of direction so NC would reveal it very nicely. //ye

00:52:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't understand your idea of spacing increase here, it doesn't emphasise any change of music aaand the less spaced part feels pretty weird 00:52:318 (3,4,5,6) - :/ Maybe keep spacing clear in this stream or make it increase more naturally I really don't know uwu //space increase cuz that whole stream got drums lol

Uhh, I can't find anything else so I'll keep my mod in that form.
gl;hf m8

SeaRasp

SeaRasp wrote:

Hey M4M from queue

Insane
  1. 00:16:474 (4) - Don't really think placing a slider here is appropriate sense it's covering two equally strong beats and adding a clap on both makes it weird. I think placing two stacked circles would work way better and would emphasize the following vocal a lot more. It's also the only time you used a slider for these exact beats. //fixed
  2. 00:18:520 (1) - NC not necessary, if compared to 00:40:240 (5) - where you didn't NC. Either add NC on the second stream or remove from first IMO. //added nc for other
  3. 00:38:877 (1,2,3) - Sense the spacing is pretty high in this part of the map, I always mess this up for a tripple coming out of sliderend so I think increasing the spacing would help for readability to catch the 1/2 gap between the slider and double. Or maybe it's just me lol //tryed my best
    00:39:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -Speaking of this stream I don't feel like it represents the drums correctly as 00:39:851 (1,2) - are way more important than the following circles; 00:40:046 (3,4,5,6,7) - are about the same and 00:40:435 (7,8,1) - these are getting lowder. So you should try to represent the differences with spacing, angle changes... //i just cant change spacing after 2 notes of stream...so i just chose to make change on the upbeat
  4. 01:00:111 (4) - Why don't you make the tick be at the angle, would look nicer. You could do that for other sliders too unless you think it limits the shape too much. //shape ruined
  5. 01:12:968 (5) - Consider changing the shape to differentiate it from the previous slider which covers the drum and this one only vocals and also three sliders of same shape in a row is meh. Very minor though //nah
  6. 01:18:227 (1) - :(
Hard, Normal and Easy all look nice to me though or maybe I'm just not good at modding them.
Anyway good luck and sorry for modding just 1 diff


thx for modz
Lilyanna
1,918 posts
Joined March 2016
Lilyanna
disable widescreen since no sb

Easy

the first two patterns has a long combo compared to the rest of the map maybe nc here 00:03:617 (4) - and 00:09:851 (4) - to be consistent
00:34:396 (1) - ctrl j for better smooth transition also it looks nice http://puu.sh/tMIFA/409408bbc4.jpg

Normal

01:06:344 (3,4) - ca make the patter symmetrycal for better looking
its good

hard

00:18:033 (4) - ctrl j give better flow

last diff with long name

00:11:020 (4) - if u do two 1/1 would be better imo this vocal 00:11:799 - and this beat 00:12:188 - could be emphasized
http://puu.sh/tMJvY/bcf7d98405.jpg

01:00:890 (1) - this shape looks meh imo xd

its good imo :c good luck! pls finish gd fast xd k bye
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
space
18:20 Kalibe: hey
18:20 HB24: heyy
18:20 Kalibe: i see u mapped all diffs, can i irc insted?
18:21 Kalibe: i'm lazy to post mod on forum xd
18:21 HB24: lel
18:21 HB24: sure
18:21 *Kalibe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1194443 Starset - Satellite [Easy]]
18:21 Kalibe: uncheck widescreen
18:21 Kalibe: d
18:22 HB24: done for all diffs
18:22 Kalibe: oh wait a bit, soterks want advice for preview xd
18:24 Kalibe: ok back
18:24 Kalibe: 00:00:111 (1) - u could add drum sample on head
18:25 Kalibe: but well i see u don't emphasis drums here
18:26 HB24: ye
18:26 Kalibe: 00:25:046 (1,1) - ?
18:27 Kalibe: unstack is specially? cuz this kinda looks weird lol
18:27 HB24: lol fixed
18:29 Kalibe: 01:11:020 (4) - add finish on end?
18:29 Kalibe: there's a crash sound
18:29 Kalibe: not only a clap
18:29 Kalibe: 01:18:033 (1) - and maybe add finish here
18:31 HB24: ok for first one
18:31 HB24: but second one is not loud enough for finish
18:31 Kalibe: alright
18:32 Kalibe: eh i don't like when od is lower than hp
18:32 Kalibe: in normals
18:32 Kalibe: tbh od 4 would also fit with spread
18:32 Kalibe: 2 - 4 - 6
18:32 HB24: sure
18:33 HB24: i dont understand what rly od so i dont care xd
18:33 HB24: changed
18:33 Kalibe: lol
18:34 Kalibe: 00:23:487 (4,5) - loud crashes, add finishes?
18:34 Kalibe: on heads ofc
18:35 HB24: wouldnt sound noisy?
18:35 HB24: idk
18:35 Kalibe: not rly
18:36 Kalibe: but it's up to you
18:36 Kalibe: 00:46:085 (5) - finish
18:36 Kalibe: 01:11:409 (7) - ^
18:36 HB24: notice that my custom finish is rly louder then the song's finish
18:37 Kalibe: ya
18:38 Kalibe: 01:18:033 (1) - u actually have circle here in easy
18:38 Kalibe: why here is spinner start?
18:38 HB24: ye true
18:38 HB24: fixed
18:39 *Kalibe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1199004 Starset - Satellite [Hard]]
18:39 Kalibe: 00:14:136 (1,2) - that spacing tho
18:40 Kalibe: it's even bigger than in kiai part
18:41 Kalibe: 00:18:325 (5) - add clap on first blue beat
18:41 HB24: ye fixed
18:42 Kalibe: 00:31:279 (1,2) - kinda prefer to use 1/2 slider
18:42 Kalibe: music tells here to follow more on vocal than drums
18:42 Kalibe: imo
18:43 HB24: its not like it isnt following vocals
18:43 HB24: but ye
18:43 HB24: wanna keep tho :p
18:44 Kalibe: 00:39:266 (1,2) - sik
18:44 HB24: ye
18:44 Kalibe: at least add nc on 00:39:851 (3) -
18:44 Kalibe: will help gameplay a bit for newbies
18:45 Kalibe: 00:49:591 (4,3) - ri p stack
18:45 HB24: rip
18:45 Kalibe: 00:53:877 (3) - no curve? ):
18:45 Kalibe: and add nc on 00:54:656 (4) -
18:46 Kalibe: 01:00:890 (4) - ^ u following every downbeat
18:46 HB24: nc not necessary
18:46 HB24: ye but for that part only its consistent
18:47 Kalibe: zzz
18:47 HB24: :D
18:48 Kalibe: 00:18:520 (1) - ?
18:48 Kalibe: why here nc? lol
18:49 Kalibe: if you want emphasis drums u should add 00:18:422 (7) - here
18:50 HB24: wait wat
18:50 HB24: ur timestamps
18:50 HB24: o_O
18:50 Kalibe: m?
18:51 HB24: nvm
18:51 Kalibe: lol
18:52 Kalibe: welp
18:52 Kalibe: that's all
18:53 Kalibe: oh
18:53 Kalibe: use hp 6 for last diff
18:53 HB24: my last diff is perfect?
18:53 HB24: xd
18:53 Kalibe: 2 4 5 6 will be :ok_hand:
18:53 Kalibe: last diff is fine
18:54 HB24: ok thanks
18:54 Kalibe: and that title
18:54 Kalibe: triggers me
18:54 HB24: XD
18:54 HB24: give me a title
18:54 Kalibe: this song is about ?
18:54 Kalibe: space
18:55 Kalibe: as diffname
18:55 HB24: space
18:55 Kalibe: 00:25:046 (1) -
18:55 Kalibe: space
18:55 Kalibe: space
18:55 Kalibe: s...p..a...c......e
18:55 HB24: LOL
18:55 Kalibe: xd
18:56 HB24: nice1
Starset
652 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Starset

Lilyanna wrote:

disable widescreen since no sb //ye

Easy

the first two patterns has a long combo compared to the rest of the map maybe nc here 00:03:617 (4) - and 00:09:851 (4) - to be consistent //its intended for that part
00:34:396 (1) - ctrl j for better smooth transition also it looks nice http://puu.sh/tMIFA/409408bbc4.jpg //but then it fcks up after with next slider :(

Normal

01:06:344 (3,4) - ca make the patter symmetrycal for better looking //its symmetrical but not vertically xd
its good

hard

00:18:033 (4) - ctrl j give better flow //true but making things spicy isnt bad also :p

last diff with long name

00:11:020 (4) - if u do two 1/1 would be better imo this vocal 00:11:799 - and this beat 00:12:188 - could be emphasized //only mapping to vocals and ignoring beats
http://puu.sh/tMJvY/bcf7d98405.jpg

01:00:890 (1) - this shape looks meh imo xd //it inspires me of space...

its good imo :c good luck! pls finish gd fast xd k bye
thanks so much lily!
Xinely
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Xinely
from nm in your queue!

General :
- 00:00:111 - until 00:12:188 - i think you can hitsound drums there example like 00:01:279 - 00:01:864 - 00:00:111 - etc with soft-hitwhistle in my sayonara map.. its just feel too empty here

Easy :
- 00:34:396 (1,2) - maybe move them to 356,252? so 00:33:617 (4,1) - (4) tail and (1) head wouldnt be that close until almost overlap

Normal :
- 00:34:201 - it has strong drum so imo better to map this too
- 00:46:669 - ^ (but the vocal is stronger and feel like should be mapped otherwise something is empty imo)
- ouch 00:55:825 (3) - nc and 00:57:773 (1,3) - swap nc for consistency.. i feel so weird to see music at 00:59:331 - has no nc when its same like 00:53:098 -
- well the SR is low due low sv and big cs here. how about 3,2 so 2,5 - 3,2 - 3,8 spread looks better

Hard :
- 00:04:007 (2) - move to 277,54? I feel quite weird to see 00:04:007 (2,3) - when (2) has stronger sound but mapped with less spacing
- 00:05:175 (4) - 136,184 for consistent spacing pls
- 00:18:325 (5) - feel a bit weird here, 00:18:422 - is a strong drum so better to start the slider at this time
- 00:30:792 - 00:31:182 - use Soft sampleset? i literally still can hear normal-hitnormal here which sounds weird
- 00:43:260 - 00:43:649 - same as above
- 00:54:656 (4) - 01:00:890 (4) - maybe nc because ur nc pattern is still every stanza afterall
- i think if you move 01:17:643 (4) - to 340,276 and 01:18:033 (1) - 152,244. flow could be better and giving emphasis for last note with mini jump

Insane :
- watdefak is this name lol, in serious its dumb
- 00:03:617 - just curious why skip this if its literally same with 00:06:734 (2) - 00:00:500 (2) -
- 00:23:877 (1,2) - i just dont get about this jump unless for pp farm because stronger drums appear at 00:23:487 (1,2) - not 00:23:877 (1,2) - , from 00:23:877 (1,2) - the drums are getting lower
- 00:30:792 - 00:31:182 - 00:43:260 - 00:43:649 -literally same as hard if u agree
- 01:06:734 (5,6) - hoo spacing could be more consistent
- 01:17:253 (3) - i would say move this to 264,16 for make higher spacing when catch 01:17:448 (4) - , because 01:17:448 (4,6) - literally have same sound so having one with normal spacing and another one with jump for design sake is kinda weird for me

good luck have to stop the meme, poke me back later
Starset
652 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Starset

Xinely wrote:

from nm in your queue!

General :
- 00:00:111 - until 00:12:188 - i think you can hitsound drums there example like 00:01:279 - 00:01:864 - 00:00:111 - etc with soft-hitwhistle in my sayonara map.. its just feel too empty here

Easy :
- 00:34:396 (1,2) - maybe move them to 356,252? so 00:33:617 (4,1) - (4) tail and (1) head wouldnt be that close until almost overlap

Normal :
- 00:34:201 - it has strong drum so imo better to map this too
- 00:46:669 - ^ (but the vocal is stronger and feel like should be mapped otherwise something is empty imo)
- ouch 00:55:825 (3) - nc and 00:57:773 (1,3) - swap nc for consistency.. i feel so weird to see music at 00:59:331 - has no nc when its same like 00:53:098 -
- well the SR is low due low sv and big cs here. how about 3,2 so 2,5 - 3,2 - 3,8 spread looks better

Hard :
- 00:04:007 (2) - move to 277,54? I feel quite weird to see 00:04:007 (2,3) - when (2) has stronger sound but mapped with less spacing
- 00:05:175 (4) - 136,184 for consistent spacing pls
- 00:18:325 (5) - feel a bit weird here, 00:18:422 - is a strong drum so better to start the slider at this time
- 00:30:792 - 00:31:182 - use Soft sampleset? i literally still can hear normal-hitnormal here which sounds weird
- 00:43:260 - 00:43:649 - same as above
- 00:54:656 (4) - 01:00:890 (4) - maybe nc because ur nc pattern is still every stanza afterall
- i think if you move 01:17:643 (4) - to 340,276 and 01:18:033 (1) - 152,244. flow could be better and giving emphasis for last note with mini jump //nah, i dont like this one :p

Insane :
- watdefak is this name lol, in serious its dumb
- 00:03:617 - just curious why skip this if its literally same with 00:06:734 (2) - 00:00:500 (2) -
- 00:23:877 (1,2) - i just dont get about this jump unless for pp farm because stronger drums appear at 00:23:487 (1,2) - not 00:23:877 (1,2) - , from 00:23:877 (1,2) - the drums are getting lower //for snare? and for pp XD
- 00:30:792 - 00:31:182 - 00:43:260 - 00:43:649 -literally same as hard if u agree
- 01:06:734 (5,6) - hoo spacing could be more consistent
- 01:17:253 (3) - i would say move this to 264,16 for make higher spacing when catch 01:17:448 (4) - , because 01:17:448 (4,6) - literally have same sound so having one with normal spacing and another one with jump for design sake is kinda weird for me

good luck have to stop the meme, poke me back later
everything with no reply is fixed thanks a lot!
6th
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6th
Hello
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2017-02-05 11:46 6th: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1194443 Starset - Satellite [Easy]]
2017-02-05 11:46 6th: I'll play it first
2017-02-05 11:48 6th: done
2017-02-05 11:49 6th: 00:02:838 (3) - i'm not really convinced by that tbh
2017-02-05 11:49 6th: I'd rather make unclickable 00:02:838 - and make clickable the downbeat instead
2017-02-05 11:49 6th: the vocals are barely noticeable
2017-02-05 11:49 HB24: but there are no solutions
2017-02-05 11:50 HB24: lol
2017-02-05 11:50 6th: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7241223
2017-02-05 11:50 6th: ?
2017-02-05 11:50 6th: ofc don't pay attention to placement
2017-02-05 11:51 6th: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7241230
2017-02-05 11:52 HB24: wanted to dumfill the red tick
2017-02-05 11:52 HB24: so idk
2017-02-05 11:52 6th: I see
2017-02-05 11:52 6th: well, it's up to you lol
2017-02-05 11:53 6th: see if it's worth it
2017-02-05 11:53 6th: imo making the white tick clickable just for that may be a bit annoying
2017-02-05 11:54 6th: hm
2017-02-05 11:54 6th: 01:07:123 (3,4) -
2017-02-05 11:54 6th: maybe you could make them look a bit different
2017-02-05 11:55 HB24: that pattern is intended
2017-02-05 11:55 6th: yeah I guess but
2017-02-05 11:55 6th: you really want them to look the same visually ?
2017-02-05 11:56 HB24: yea
2017-02-05 11:56 6th: ok. besides that it's pretty fine
2017-02-05 11:56 6th: normal
2017-02-05 11:56 HB24: looks good to me with the next 1/1 slider
2017-02-05 11:59 6th: looks okay to me
2017-02-05 12:00 HB24: nice
2017-02-05 12:00 6th: hard
2017-02-05 12:01 6th: 00:14:916 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm ?
2017-02-05 12:01 6th: Just a suggestion tho, both work
2017-02-05 12:02 6th: it's just to give 00:15:500 - less importance
2017-02-05 12:02 HB24: ye
2017-02-05 12:02 HB24: but 3 continuous circles to click on
2017-02-05 12:03 HB24: id like to keep like this
2017-02-05 12:03 6th: ok
2017-02-05 12:03 6th: 00:30:500 (3,4,1) - can you make them closer from each other ? just to make sure players won't read it as 1/1
2017-02-05 12:04 HB24: well its overlapping so its pretty obvious imo
2017-02-05 12:04 6th: for 3* players it's not
2017-02-05 12:04 6th: trust me lol
2017-02-05 12:04 HB24: and i need to keep consistent spacing for all 1/4 snaps
2017-02-05 12:04 6th: especially for those who are still used to normals
2017-02-05 12:04 6th: oh okay then
2017-02-05 12:05 6th: 01:12:968 (5,1,2) - flow was weird tbh
2017-02-05 12:05 6th: nerf it a bit
2017-02-05 12:06 HB24: ok
2017-02-05 12:06 6th: 01:05:565 - from here to end
2017-02-05 12:06 HB24: [http://puu.sh/tPgQd/68db7839ae.jpg this better?]
2017-02-05 12:06 6th: I'd have liked to see more 1/1 sliders tbh
2017-02-05 12:06 6th: it feels unnecessarily dense rn imo
2017-02-05 12:06 6th: yep
2017-02-05 12:07 6th: I mean, even the kiai has more 1/1 sliders
2017-02-05 12:07 HB24: the song demands it :/
2017-02-05 12:08 HB24: it has more drums then kiai has
2017-02-05 12:08 HB24: lol
2017-02-05 12:08 6th: well true lol
2017-02-05 12:08 6th: insane
2017-02-05 12:11 6th: 00:20:565 (2,3,4) -
2017-02-05 12:11 6th: maybe a direction change at (3) would work beter
2017-02-05 12:11 6th: better
2017-02-05 12:11 6th: gameplay-wise
2017-02-05 12:12 HB24: u mean ctrl+g?
2017-02-05 12:12 6th: not necessarily
2017-02-05 12:12 6th: just rotate (3)
2017-02-05 12:13 HB24: i think its pretty confortable as it is now ^^
2017-02-05 12:14 6th: ok
2017-02-05 12:14 6th: the rest is cool
Xinely
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Xinely
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Starset
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Topic Starter
Starset
Thank you ♥
riffy
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riffy
Yo. Taking a quick look.

[General]
  1. Literally 10% of the map is a spinner. Isn't that somewhat boring? Wouldn't the set benefit from shortening it and having bigger part part mapped?
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:227 - probably a single circle on this beat instead of slider would work better as in giving more emphasis to drums/downbeat and reducing density.
    Note: 00:09:072 (3) - same here. Please note how there is low bass sound on red ticks, and practically nothing on 00:09:072 - which makes it quite confusing. As a matter of fact, I would really love if you could tone down the density of objects in the intro as I feel like making it just as dense as the kiai makes the difficulty too monotonous.
  2. 00:54:656 (3) - 01:00:890 (3) - and prbably two individual circles here would also do better here. It gives noth variety and better drums emphasis.

    I think it generally could use the intensity changes the song has in a better way, so that rhythm could be spiced up and feel closer to the nature of the song.
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:838 (4) - 00:09:072 (4) - try a slider withut the reverse and a circle? this way we would stress the downbeat better.
  2. 00:53:877 (2) - 01:00:111 (2) - surprisingly enough Easy had rhythm more intense in these parts than Normal does. Probably you could complicate things a bit by splitting sliders to match the difficulty balance better?

    It's neat, good job.
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:656 (6) - to match the previous sliders and make things more readable there probably should be a circle on 00:25:046 -
    Note: 00:55:630 (3) - 01:01:864 (3) - same here, if you decide to fix the first one.
[Earth Watcher]
  1. 00:11:020 (4) - shouldn't this be a split of a 1/1 slider and a circle? The vocals go pretty repetitive here, so it would make sense. example
That seems to be it, I am sorry but I am quite uncomfortable with pushing it forward in its current state. Perhaps you could either explain the grounds Easy stands on or alter it to represent the song more accurate.
Starset
652 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Starset

Bakari wrote:

Yo. Taking a quick look.

[General]
  1. Literally 10% of the map is a spinner. Isn't that somewhat boring? Wouldn't the set benefit from shortening it and having bigger part part mapped? //well mapping a fade out effect is pretty weird imo and 10% of 1 min song is like very small
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:227 - probably a single circle on this beat instead of slider would work better as in giving more emphasis to drums/downbeat and reducing density.
    Note: 00:09:072 (3) - same here. Please note how there is low bass sound on red ticks, and practically nothing on 00:09:072 - which makes it quite confusing. As a matter of fact, I would really love if you could tone down the density of objects in the intro as I feel like making it just as dense as the kiai makes the difficulty too monotonous.
  2. 00:54:656 (3) - 01:00:890 (3) - and prbably two individual circles here would also do better here. It gives noth variety and better drums emphasis. //fixed in other way to reduce intensity and spread

    I think it generally could use the intensity changes the song has in a better way, so that rhythm could be spiced up and feel closer to the nature of the song.
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:838 (4) - 00:09:072 (4) - try a slider withut the reverse and a circle? this way we would stress the downbeat better.
  2. 00:53:877 (2) - 01:00:111 (2) - surprisingly enough Easy had rhythm more intense in these parts than Normal does. Probably you could complicate things a bit by splitting sliders to match the difficulty balance better? //made changes on easy so i hope its fine now

    It's neat, good job.
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:656 (6) - to match the previous sliders and make things more readable there probably should be a circle on 00:25:046 -
    Note: 00:55:630 (3) - 01:01:864 (3) - same here, if you decide to fix the first one. //wouldnt that be a very hard to anticipate that for a hard player cuz for the first one its acceptable but the others are not the last notes so the player has to move and click that fast , would be confusing imo better let it be
[Earth Watcher]
  1. 00:11:020 (4) - shouldn't this be a split of a 1/1 slider and a circle? The vocals go pretty repetitive here, so it would make sense. example
//it should be ending on red tick like all of the other diffs and thats how i fixed

That seems to be it, I am sorry but I am quite uncomfortable with pushing it forward in its current state. Perhaps you could either explain the grounds Easy stands on or alter it to represent the song more accurate.
no reply/blue=fixed, thanks a lot bakari!
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