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KamizonoShinobu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年7月1日 at 08:28:28

Artist: ClariS
Title: Hitorigoto -TV MIX-
Source: エロマンガ先生
Tags: Opening Anime Eromanga Sensei ero manga eromanga-sensei tv size
BPM: 165
Filesize: 2321kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.2 stars, 211 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.23 stars, 116 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.75 stars, 289 notes)
  4. Oni (3.58 stars, 409 notes)
Download: ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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かんたん ★4/5
ふつう  ★6/7
むずかしい★6/8
おに   ★7/10

Ura Muzukashii ★8 can be downloaded from here. It is made for people who want to bridge to Oni before they advance.

Inner Oni ★10 can be downloaded from here or here.

changelog
15-APR-2017: Self-modded
Seperate Inner Oni from this mapset.
Applied ily4's mod, thanks!
Applied agu's mod, thanks!
Applied bbj0920's mod, thanks!
audio file changed.
Applied Smallwu, sing216 and Arrival's mod, thanks!
Offset +7,remapped minor part of oni. (offset mod thanks to JUDYDANNY)
Applied Chromoxx and JUDY's 1st mod, thanks!
Thanks JUDY's IRC mod.

bubble log
1st Bubble: Arrival
Bubble popped by JUDYDANNY
-New Cycle-
1st Bubble: JUDYDANNY
Qualified by Arrival
koseh_old
I did waiting to taiko mapset for this song, so I'm glad to it! :)
Can I comment some for this?



General
  1. AIBat detected "Audio Lead-In". In by case, Open .osu files as notepad, find and edit "AudioLeadIn" to 963 or 1000.
  2. Izumi Sagiri can't be seen when preview phase. Flip horizontal or make space on right and delete left space.
    But if you intentded for Result page, ignore this.
  3. If you okay, replace spinner 00:21:218: to finish slider in each diff.
  4. Finish notes overused. If that's your taste, Don't care about it.
    Details
    Set them to non-finish :
    00:18:491:
    00:24:309:
    00:30:127:
    00:33:037: (used only Futsuu, Muzukashii)
    00:35:946:

Kantan and Futsuu
  1. I think it's proper, Perfect!

Muzukashii
  1. 1/3 part 00:41:037: ~ 00:41:400:, "dddk" maybe feels hard. change to this one:
    "dddd" or "kkkk"
    "ddkk" or "kkdd"

Oni
  1. In 01:16:673: ~ 01:18:127:, If You prefer using finish, set to finish all notes.

Inner Oni
  1. Change notes for fitting to "Inner Oni".
Details
00:28:573: ~ 00:29:582: Replace pattern. Imo, Best is "dkddk dkkdk".
00:34:491: ~ 00:35:400: Replace pattern same opinion or similarly.
00:46:855: ~ 00:47:218: Replace to "dkkdd".
01:26:855: ~ 01:28:309: Replace any notes.
Then set last note 01:28:309: to finish.
Topic Starter
KamizonoShinobu

koseh wrote:

I did waiting to taiko mapset for this song, so I'm glad to it! :)
Can I comment some for this?



General
  1. AIBat detected "Audio Lead-In". In by case, Open .osu files as notepad, find and edit "AudioLeadIn" to 963 or 1000.
  2. Izumi Sagiri can't be seen when preview phase. Flip horizontal or make space on right and delete left space.
    But if you intentded for Result page, ignore this.
  3. If you okay, replace spinner 00:21:218: to finish slider in each diff.
  4. Finish notes overused. If that's your taste, Don't care about it.
    Details
    Set them to non-finish :
    00:18:491:
    00:24:309:
    00:30:127:
    00:33:037: (used only Futsuu, Muzukashii)
    00:35:946:

Kantan and Futsuu
  1. I think it's proper, Perfect!

Muzukashii
  1. 1/3 part 00:41:037: ~ 00:41:400:, "dddk" maybe feels hard. change to this one:
    "dddd" or "kkkk"
    "ddkk" or "kkdd"

Oni
  1. In 01:16:673: ~ 01:18:127:, If You prefer using finish, set to finish all notes.

Inner Oni
  1. Change notes for fitting to "Inner Oni".
Details
00:28:573: ~ 00:29:582: Replace pattern. Imo, Best is "dkddk dkkdk".
00:34:491: ~ 00:35:400: Replace pattern same opinion or similarly.
00:46:855: ~ 00:47:218: Replace to "dkkdd".
01:26:855: ~ 01:28:309: Replace any notes.
Then set last note 01:28:309: to finish.
Basically General stuff I cant help about it.
Muzukashii: I think dddk is fine, there is a 1/1 break afterwards.
Oni: Finishers there are emphasizing vocal.
Inner Oni: you need to provide reason for me to make changes tho.

Anyway thanks for mod.
JUDYDANNY
ClariS x エロマンガ先生 = Nice mix
iloveyou4ever
NM here~
[General]
Tags:please add these eromanga sensei ero manga eromanga-sensei eromangasensei opening tv size
source:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596704

[Kantan]
01:28:218 - seems the spinner should end here?
everything seems fine

[Futsuu]
00:13:946 - change to k
00:14:673 - change to d
00:19:764 - 00:20:491 - same as above
->fits the music better and give more variation?
00:53:037 - remove this?
->分段清楚d,同埋可以更加emphasis到finisher
01:18:491 - remove this
->又係分段可以清楚d
01:28:218 - again end the spinner here

[Muzukashii]
00:14:673 - change to d
00:20:491 - ^
00:52:673 - change to k
->background melody high pitch
01:03:946 - change to k?
->just feels better to me
01:15:582 - ^
01:22:309 - add k?
->呢度我覺得可以做多少少連貫
01:28:218 - spinner end here

[Oni]
Why od6.3? any special reason?
If not,I suggest you change to 6
00:15:400 (12,13,14,15) - kddk?
->fits the music better
00:21:218 (36,37,38,39) - ^
00:29:582 (77,78) - ctrl+g?
00:35:582 - change to k?
->just feel that changing to k can emphasis the finisher next
00:46:946 - remove this
->suddenly 5plets?
01:28:218 - again

sorry for bad mod,already a good map
GL :D
Topic Starter
KamizonoShinobu

iloveyou4ever wrote:

NM here~
[General]
Tags:please add these eromanga sensei ero manga eromanga-sensei eromangasensei opening tv size >Will fix later.
source:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596704

[Kantan]
01:28:218 - seems the spinner should end here? OK
everything seems fine

[Futsuu]
00:13:946 - change to k This has to be d because I consider 00:13:946 (5,6,7,8) - pitches.
00:14:673 - change to d
00:19:764 - 00:20:491 - same as above
->fits the music better and give more variation? ^
00:53:037 - remove this?
->分段清楚d,同埋可以更加emphasis到finisher OK
01:18:491 - remove this
->又係分段可以清楚d
01:28:218 - again end the spinner here

[Muzukashii]
00:14:673 - change to d
00:20:491 - ^ Not changing this because I think current pattern is fine already
00:52:673 - change to k
->background melody high pitch >OK
01:03:946 - change to k? >not consistent with 01:01:037 (152) -
->just feels better to me
01:15:582 - ^ ^
01:22:309 - add k? >I am not following vocal here that much here.
->呢度我覺得可以做多少少連貫
01:28:218 - spinner end here

[Oni]
Why od6.3? any special reason? TnT OD is 6.3
If not,I suggest you change to 6
00:15:400 (12,13,14,15) - kddk?
->fits the music better
00:21:218 (36,37,38,39) - ^
^Done
00:29:582 (77,78) - ctrl+g? Why?
00:35:582 - change to k?
->just feel that changing to k can emphasis the finisher next
00:46:946 - remove this >I think Oni allows 5plets, as well making variation from past 2 bars.
->suddenly 5plets?
01:28:218 - again

sorry for bad mod,already a good map
GL :D
Thanks for mod. kds given
roufou
Oni:
00:16:855 - d d k d sounds better imo for pitch, might require some changes around this part to complement though like moving this 00:18:127 - same for all other parts like this
00:27:218 (63,64) - I think these should be different colors, maybe change this from ddk to dkd, same for all similiar patterns
00:40:855 - not sure how I feel about this, perhaps you should change this to a kat, I think something should be changed with this 1/4+1/3 pattern
00:57:218 - I like these better as kkddk but idk...up to you.
01:00:127 - maybe kdkdk

if you follow my changes make other changes to suit them.


maybe I'll check easier diffs later, good luck with mapset in any case.
Topic Starter
KamizonoShinobu

agu wrote:

Oni:
00:16:855 - d d k d sounds better imo for pitch, might require some changes around this part to complement though like moving this 00:18:127 - same for all other parts like this
^I think it is fine as it is.
00:27:218 (63,64) - I think these should be different colors, maybe change this from ddk to dkd, same for all similiar patterns
^ok
00:40:855 - not sure how I feel about this, perhaps you should change this to a kat, I think something should be changed with this 1/4+1/3 pattern
^no, the song called for 1/3 patterns. Also not changing to kat because too complicated.
00:57:218 - I like these better as kkddk but idk...up to you.
01:00:127 - maybe kdkdk
^Consistency smh
if you follow my changes make other changes to suit them.

maybe I'll check easier diffs later, good luck with mapset in any case.
Thanks for mod.
roufou
I know the song called for 1/3 I'm just saying dd[k k k d] is an awkward pattern here, reason I say change to kdk is cause it flows better, the problem lies in the start imho with the dd.

I think it needs a change somewhere but it should indeed be 1/3, I'm too lazy to give more ideas though.
Akiyama Mizuki
nice song

why od6.3 just cut it off to 6

better mp3 from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596704

00:01:946 (3) - 00:03:400 (6) - 00:04:855 (9) - 00:07:764 (13) - 00:09:218 (16) - 00:10:673 (19) - k, I get why you emphasize 00:09:764 (17,18) - kinda sounds but these 6 aren't as prominent, they just don't call for finishers. they sound somewhat ~lighter~, so k fits much better (imo)
shouldn't you swap 00:15:037 (11,12) - and 00:17:946 (23,24) - , 00:20:855 (35,36) - and 00:23:764 (47,48) - too, fits the trumpet
00:46:855 (162,163,164,165,166) - ddkkd fits better, dkdkd sounds kinda off
00:54:309 (203,204) - just make these a slider, K K sounds too stiff for this kinda sound
01:02:127 (251,252,253,254,255) - 01:13:763 (323,324,325,326,327) - d ddk d d?? why make these patterns feel empty out of nowhere
01:15:945 (336) - This has to be a finisher imo, not having finisher here makes 01:16:673 (339,341,343,345,1) - sound too unnatural. so yeah 01:15:854 (335) - delete this too i guess
01:23:037 ~ 01:23:764 - what about ddkdddk k here? would make a nice buildup for 01:23:946 (38) - , fits the trumpet at 01:23:218 - imo
01:26:855 - why not an ending finisher here
Topic Starter
KamizonoShinobu

bbj0920 wrote:

nice song

why od6.3 just cut it off to 6

better mp3 from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596704

00:01:946 (3) - 00:03:400 (6) - 00:04:855 (9) - 00:07:764 (13) - 00:09:218 (16) - 00:10:673 (19) - k, I get why you emphasize 00:09:764 (17,18) - kinda sounds but these 6 aren't as prominent, they just don't call for finishers. they sound somewhat ~lighter~, so k fits much better (imo)
^They are actually at same volume so it is ok to emphasis those 6 fxs
shouldn't you swap 00:15:037 (11,12) - and 00:17:946 (23,24) - , 00:20:855 (35,36) - and 00:23:764 (47,48) - too, fits the trumpet
^It will reduce the emphasis of d (13,37)
00:46:855 (162,163,164,165,166) - ddkkd fits better, dkdkd sounds kinda off
00:54:309 (203,204) - just make these a slider, K K sounds too stiff for this kinda sound
01:02:127 (251,252,253,254,255) - 01:13:763 (323,324,325,326,327) - d ddk d d?? why make these patterns feel empty out of nowhere
^ 3ok
01:15:945 (336) - This has to be a finisher imo, not having finisher here makes 01:16:673 (339,341,343,345,1) - sound too unnatural. so yeah 01:15:854 (335) - delete this too i guess
ok, remapped that bar in additional.
01:23:037 ~ 01:23:764 - what about ddkdddk k here? would make a nice buildup for 01:23:946 (38) - , fits the trumpet at 01:23:218 - imo
^ Breaks fml
01:26:855 - why not an ending finisher here
^01:28:218 has to be emphasis because strong fx. A spinner end can do the job.
Thanks for mod.
Smallwu
Hola!
Quick mod from in-game request
[General]
  1. 將BG往下移 因為白毛的頭被切半了:3
[Muzukashii]
  1. 把HP改成 5.5 或 6?
    因為這樣感覺比較順?A? (8-->7-->5-->6) 7突然變成5似乎犯了SM的強迫症 :o
    另外, 因為這是TV版(而且Note數和其他的Muzukashii比算是很少的), 所以HP高一點感覺是可被允許的

  2. 00:11:278 (1) - Finisher? 因為前面的Slider也是BIGBIG的那種 (較無關緊要:3)
  3. 00:14:006 (6,7,8,9) - k k d k like Oni?
  4. 00:19:824 (24,25,26,27) - ^
  5. 00:59:278 (143,144) - Ctrl+G to follow the ring? 我個人感覺 dk 和 kd 在這邊都能不錯的跟到人聲, 所以改一下, 讓鈴聲也可被跟到?
  6. 00:59:824 (146,147) - Ctrl+G if u 有意跟人聲
  7. 01:05:097 (169,170,171,172) - Ctrl+G because their pitches sound like that :3
  8. 01:10:914 (195,196) - Ctrl+G Reason same as 00:59:278
  9. 01:11:460 (198,199) - Ctrl+G Reason same as 00:59:824
  10. 01:16:005 (218) - k 或許你是想保持一致性? 但這裡放k比較好.
    人聲高於前個歌詞, 且有鈴聲在此:3 (若你這樣改, 也可以和後面的DkDkDkD起到映襯的效果)
[Oni]
  1. Agree iloveyou4ever, why OD is 6.3 ?O?

  2. 00:11:278 (1) - Finisher? 因為你前面的Slider也是BIGBIG的:3
  3. 00:29:460 (76) - I think this one move to 00:30:006 will have better effect
    再怎麼說, 原本地方的鼓點和 00:30:006 的喇叭聲比起來 還是喇叭比較好被跟
  4. 00:35:278 (105) - Move to 00:35:824 ^
  5. 00:41:006 (125) - 我不知道你是不是為了好打些才加這顆, 如果不是就移除吧, 這裡沒聲音:3
  6. 01:05:824 - 增加don來連結兩個段落? 這裡是有聲音的, 感覺加了也OK
=====
Good Luck! >3<
sing216
       /
新手之mod (:3 _ )=

Kantan
00:46:187 (38) - change to d?

gogotime :idea: :
00:56:733 (56) - move to 00:57:460 (57) -
00:59:642 (61) - move to 01:00:369 (62) -
^好似後面有音好啲 (如果接受既話後半part都跟番咁樣改)

01:17:824 (92) - Delete

Futsuu
00:52:187 (89) - move to 00:51:460 (87) -

gogotime :idea: :
00:57:097 (103) - delete and 00:57:460 (103) - add k
01:00:006 (112) - move to 01:00:369 (112) -
^比較明確follow緊邊到既音樂 (如果接受既話後半part都跟番咁樣改)

01:23:642 (18) - change to k

Muzukishii
00:25:460 (40) - d
00:28:369 (48) - d
00:31:278 (56) - d
00:34:187 (64) - d
^呢part冇左呢粒音有啲奇怪, 而且冇左好似都太疏

gogotime :idea: :
01:23:824 (260) - k 跟番前3個pattern kkk之後冇k, 後3個kkk有k

Oni
00:29:460 (76) - change to d 更加突顯之後粒藍音
00:47:006 (163) - delete
00:47:642 (168) - D?

加油, Good luck ah :)
Topic Starter
KamizonoShinobu

Smallwu wrote:

Hola!
Quick mod from in-game request
[General]
  1. 將BG往下移 因為白毛的頭被切半了:3 I changed the BG
[Muzukashii]
  1. 把HP改成 5.5 或 6?
    因為這樣感覺比較順?A? (8-->7-->5-->6) 7突然變成5似乎犯了SM的強迫症 :o Not a reason for me to change HP, also I want to be generous on HP this time.
    另外, 因為這是TV版(而且Note數和其他的Muzukashii比算是很少的), 所以HP高一點感覺是可被允許的

  2. 00:11:278 (1) - Finisher? 因為前面的Slider也是BIGBIG的那種 (較無關緊要:3) This fx is different to the previous 3 because it is a continuous effect.
  3. 00:14:006 (6,7,8,9) - k k d k like Oni?
  4. 00:19:824 (24,25,26,27) - ^ All 2 fixed
  5. 00:59:278 (143,144) - Ctrl+G to follow the ring? 我個人感覺 dk 和 kd 在這邊都能不錯的跟到人聲, 所以改一下, 讓鈴聲也可被跟到? No, rip overall structure, I start all bars with d.
  6. 00:59:824 (146,147) - Ctrl+G if u 有意跟人聲 ok
  7. 01:05:097 (169,170,171,172) - Ctrl+G because their pitches sound like that :3 ^^
  8. 01:10:914 (195,196) - Ctrl+G Reason same as 00:59:278
  9. 01:11:460 (198,199) - Ctrl+G Reason same as 00:59:824
  10. 01:16:005 (218) - k 或許你是想保持一致性? 但這裡放k比較好.
    人聲高於前個歌詞, 且有鈴聲在此:3 (若你這樣改, 也可以和後面的DkDkDkD起到映襯的效果)
    ^fixed in my own way
[Oni]
  1. Agree iloveyou4ever, why OD is 6.3 ?O?
    Reason mentioned, I want to make error allowance +-30.5ms
  2. 00:11:278 (1) - Finisher? 因為你前面的Slider也是BIGBIG的:3
  3. 00:29:460 (76) - I think this one move to 00:30:006 will have better effect
    再怎麼說, 原本地方的鼓點和 00:30:006 的喇叭聲比起來 還是喇叭比較好被跟 lost impact on emphasizing 00:30:187 (79) - finisher
  4. 00:35:278 (105) - Move to 00:35:824 ^ ^
  5. 00:41:006 (125) - 我不知道你是不是為了好打些才加這顆, 如果不是就移除吧, 這裡沒聲音:3 vocal has a long voice here, another d can fit in this slot, but I will seek for more opinion.
  6. 01:05:824 - 增加don來連結兩個段落? 這裡是有聲音的, 感覺加了也OK It will reduce the emphasis on showing another identical parts incoming.
=====
Good Luck! >3<

sing216 wrote:

       /
新手之mod (:3 _ )=
Hi dalao Orz
Kantan
00:46:187 (38) - change to d? not consistent with 00:52:006 (48) -

gogotime :idea: :
00:56:733 (56) - move to 00:57:460 (57) -
00:59:642 (61) - move to 01:00:369 (62) -
^好似後面有音好啲 (如果接受既話後半part都跟番咁樣改) will reduce the impact from finishers.

01:17:824 (92) - Delete vocal

Futsuu
00:52:187 (89) - move to 00:51:460 (87) - ok

gogotime :idea: :
00:57:097 (103) - delete and 00:57:460 (103) - add k
01:00:006 (112) - move to 01:00:369 (112) -
^比較明確follow緊邊到既音樂 (如果接受既話後半part都跟番咁樣改)

01:23:642 (18) - change to k


Muzukishii
00:25:460 (40) - d
00:28:369 (48) - d
00:31:278 (56) - d
00:34:187 (64) - d
^呢part冇左呢粒音有啲奇怪, 而且冇左好似都太疏
For breaks
gogotime :idea: :
01:23:824 (260) - k 跟番前3個pattern kkk之後冇k, 後3個kkk有k
^ lost impact from 01:24:006 (257) -

Oni
00:29:460 (76) - change to d 更加突顯之後粒藍音
00:47:006 (163) - delete
^ok
00:47:642 (168) - D? Seek for more opinion.

加油, Good luck ah :)
Thanks for mod, kds given.
Arrival
Hey

[Kantan]

00:54:006 (52) - Delete the slider for a complete 4/1 break before the kiai.
01:00:733 (63) - Put this as a finisher and delete 01:01:460 (64) - so you can have a 4/1 break while still having a good emphasis.
01:12:369 (83,84) - ^

[Futsuu]

01:06:187 (127) - Delete this for a slightly longer break at the half of the kiai

[Muzukashii]

00:41:460 (77) - You need to put this as a don, this is a pretty compex rhythm that uses both hands.

[Oni]
Od 6.3 ? Is there a particular reason ? I'd have put 6 or 5.5 considering the spread and the BPM.

00:41:006 (125) - Are you sure you want to keep this note ? It's not in the song and it makes a pretty big difficulty spike compared to the difficulty overall. I'd suggest to remove it to not overmap and to be coherent with the rest of your diff.

Call me back
Topic Starter
KamizonoShinobu

Arrival wrote:

Hey

[Kantan]

00:54:006 (52) - Delete the slider for a complete 4/1 break before the kiai. ok
01:00:733 (63) - Put this as a finisher and delete 01:01:460 (64) - so you can have a 4/1 break while still having a good emphasis.
01:12:369 (83,84) - ^
^ For break time, I used another method to fix.
[Futsuu]

01:06:187 (127) - Delete this for a slightly longer break at the half of the kiai ok

[Muzukashii]

00:41:460 (77) - You need to put this as a don, this is a pretty compex rhythm that uses both hands. This would reduce the contrast between 00:41:460 (77,78) - tho. Since 00:41:824 (78) - d act as a signal on starting new section of the song. Plus, this 1/3 isn't the hardest part of the difficulty.

[Oni]
Od 6.3 ? Is there a particular reason ? I'd have put 6 or 5.5 considering the spread and the BPM. I want to make it with +-30ms error allowance.

00:41:006 (125) - Are you sure you want to keep this note ? It's not in the song and it makes a pretty big difficulty spike compared to the difficulty overall. I'd suggest to remove it to not overmap and to be coherent with the rest of your diff. >Well, since you are the 2nd modder that told me about the same issue, I guess it is better to follow modder's advice. Deleted this note for easier pattern switching

Call me back
Thanks.
Aloda
Hm

General
A few of your tags are redundant - Eromanga, Sensei, ero, manga and tv are all included elsewhere in the metadata/tags.

Your offset might be a little off, I found myself consistently hitting a little late. Could just be me though.

Kantan
The 1/1 at 00:52:733 (49,50,51) feels a little out of place to me. The vocals here don't have the same inflection as the ones you've mapped 1/1 to previously in the section (00:44:006 (34,35,36) - 00:46:915 (39,40,41) etc) so using the same pattern here don't play well imo. I suggest removing 00:53:097 (50).

The 4/1 breaks in the Kiai section are very not good to play. Compare 00:56:369 - 00:57:824 to 00:59:278 - 01:00:733. The first is mapped very densely (for a Kantan) which is good, since this is the most intense part of the song. But then the second is just empty, it it makes a very stark and jarring contrast going from one to the other. The bpm is low enough that you don't need to leave huge gaps like this.

Futsuu
00:02:006 (3) - 00:03:460 (6) - 00:04:915 (9) etc feel very strange as finishers imo. Try kats instead, which contrast nicely with the rest of the finishers here.

Muzukashii
00:02:006 (3) - 00:03:460 (6) - 00:04:915 (9) etc feel very strange as finishers imo. Try kats instead, which contrast nicely with the rest of the finishers here.

In the Kiai, many of the 1/4 patterns you've used sound really weird, since the red tick following them has a strong vocal sound that you've completely ignored. This gives a weird impression as the strong mapping ends right before the strong vocal, and it's not nice to play. I suggest adding notes on these red ticks.

Oni
00:02:006 (3) - 00:03:460 (6) - 00:04:915 (9) etc feel very strange as finishers imo. Try kats instead, which contrast nicely with the rest of the finishers here.

Throughout the 00:24:369 - 00:36:006 section, your mapping almost always coincides with the vocals, so the couple of times it doesn't sound pretty weird. I suggest adding notes at 00:30:006 and 00:33:642 , though you might have to remove a couple of other notes to preserve the flow.

gl
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KamizonoShinobu

Aloda wrote:

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General
A few of your tags are redundant - Eromanga, Sensei, ero, manga and tv are all included elsewhere in the metadata/tags.
^ it is necessery because the ranked version of this song has all of these tags

Your offset might be a little off, I found myself consistently hitting a little late. Could just be me though.
>Will check with BNs on this issue.

Kantan
The 1/1 at 00:52:733 (49,50,51) feels a little out of place to me. The vocals here don't have the same inflection as the ones you've mapped 1/1 to previously in the section (00:44:006 (34,35,36) - 00:46:915 (39,40,41) etc) so using the same pattern here don't play well imo. I suggest removing 00:53:097 (50). moved that note to 00:52:369 (49) -

The 4/1 breaks in the Kiai section are very not good to play. Compare 00:56:369 - 00:57:824 to 00:59:278 - 01:00:733. The first is mapped very densely (for a Kantan) which is good, since this is the most intense part of the song. But then the second is just empty, it it makes a very stark and jarring contrast going from one to the other. The bpm is low enough that you don't need to leave huge gaps like this. >BPM does not affect whether you need breaks or not, they are independent

Futsuu
00:02:006 (3) - 00:03:460 (6) - 00:04:915 (9) etc feel very strange as finishers imo. Try kats instead, which contrast nicely with the rest of the finishers here. >But the trumpet pitch are actually the same for the same bar.

Muzukashii
00:02:006 (3) - 00:03:460 (6) - 00:04:915 (9) etc feel very strange as finishers imo. Try kats instead, which contrast nicely with the rest of the finishers here. same as futsuu

In the Kiai, many of the 1/4 patterns you've used sound really weird, since the red tick following them has a strong vocal sound that you've completely ignored. This gives a weird impression as the strong mapping ends right before the strong vocal, and it's not nice to play. I suggest adding notes on these red ticks. Although your concern is correct, adding notes on those places will reduce the emphasis of finishers on each bar tho.

Oni
00:02:006 (3) - 00:03:460 (6) - 00:04:915 (9) etc feel very strange as finishers imo. Try kats instead, which contrast nicely with the rest of the finishers here. ^

Throughout the 00:24:369 - 00:36:006 section, your mapping almost always coincides with the vocals, so the couple of times it doesn't sound pretty weird. I suggest adding notes at 00:30:006 and 00:33:642 , though you might have to remove a couple of other notes to preserve the flow. Will reduce the effect of finisher emphasizing.

gl
Thanks for mod.
Arrival
Looks good

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Chromoxx
quick irc, looking at each diff very briefly... lower diffs had a few overly repetitive rythms and some other inconsistencies and the rythm in the oni still needs improving a bit imo...

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2017-05-09 15:09 Chocola_2287: hi
2017-05-09 15:09 Chocola_2287: do you accept mod req?
2017-05-09 15:09 Chromoxx: hi
2017-05-09 15:09 Chocola_2287: want to get more opinion before I ask 3rd BN check
2017-05-09 15:12 Chromoxx: mh not really atm... already have a few things to do
2017-05-09 15:12 Chromoxx: but i can maybe take a quick look in a bit if you want
2017-05-09 15:12 Chocola_2287: not even queueing up?
2017-05-09 15:13 Chocola_2287: Actually I am confused about 'spread' stuff
2017-05-09 15:14 Chocola_2287: I am still too noob to map easy diffs
2017-05-09 15:14 Chocola_2287: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1266755 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX-]
2017-05-09 15:18 Chromoxx: lemme check
2017-05-09 15:20 Chromoxx: kantan:
2017-05-09 15:20 Chromoxx: 00:05:467 (4,1) - either make both of these sliders or spinners
2017-05-09 15:20 Chromoxx: since it's the same sound
2017-05-09 15:21 Chromoxx: overall rythms are too repetitive, using the same tripletes too often
2017-05-09 15:21 Chocola_2287: 4,1? I thought it's 4,5
2017-05-09 15:21 Chromoxx: 00:05:467 - 00:11:285 -
2017-05-09 15:22 Chromoxx: 00:41:831 - this pattern is still kinda too long since it's more of a calm section
2017-05-09 15:22 Chromoxx: 00:54:922 - kiai patterns are too short when compared to the rest of the map
2017-05-09 15:23 Chromoxx: 00:59:285 - could add kkd triplet here, 01:10:922 - here too
2017-05-09 15:23 Chocola_2287: so I need more 4/1 breaks on 00:41:831 ?
2017-05-09 15:23 Chromoxx: 01:17:104 - 01:17:831 - delete, 01:17:467 - chagne to k
2017-05-09 15:24 Chromoxx: 00:12:740 - to 00:40:376 - is the section where it's too repetitive, you're using the same triplets again and again
2017-05-09 15:24 Chromoxx: 00:41:831 - and yea slightly more 4/1 breaks in this section and less kkd 1/1
2017-05-09 15:25 Chromoxx: Futsuu: 00:02:013 - change these notes to k, better emphasis on the DD
2017-05-09 15:26 Chromoxx: same thing about the slider/spinner again, either use both as sliders or both as spinners
2017-05-09 15:27 Chocola_2287: 00:02:013 - considering the same bar, these notes actually has same pitch as fxs in DD
2017-05-09 15:27 Chromoxx: the pitch is definitely higher
2017-05-09 15:27 Chromoxx: they have a different sound on them
2017-05-09 15:27 Chromoxx: it's more drawn out, whereas the DD is more abrupt
2017-05-09 15:28 Chromoxx: the DD have a strong bass hit, whereas the ones inbetween only have the high trumpet
2017-05-09 15:28 Chocola_2287: well by that it is already a seperate instruments
2017-05-09 15:29 Chromoxx: yes, so they shouldn't be mapped the same
2017-05-09 15:29 Chromoxx: specially when this results in the entire section being only D
2017-05-09 15:29 Chromoxx: 00:12:740 - in this section you're using kd too much, becoming repetitive even though the pitches change
2017-05-09 15:30 Chocola_2287: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8042926 maybe like this?]
2017-05-09 15:30 Chromoxx: 00:36:013 - to 00:40:376 - repetitive d k d k d becomes kinda boring
2017-05-09 15:30 Chromoxx: yea something like that ^^
2017-05-09 15:30 Chocola_2287: ah ok
2017-05-09 15:30 Chromoxx: 00:41:104 - for this section you could maybe map the 1/2 vocals instead of putting the triplet at 00:42:558 - etc.
2017-05-09 15:31 Chromoxx: kiai seems fine
2017-05-09 15:31 Chromoxx: muzu:
2017-05-09 15:32 Chromoxx: 00:02:013 - same thing about these notes
2017-05-09 15:32 Chromoxx: same thing about the slider/spinner
2017-05-09 15:33 Chromoxx: 00:12:740 - section here is good
2017-05-09 15:33 Chromoxx: although it could maybe be slightly denser for better spread
2017-05-09 15:33 Chromoxx: 00:24:376 - this section isn't dense enough
2017-05-09 15:34 Chromoxx: 00:41:104 (74,75,76,77) - either dddd or kkkk, patterns is a bit too hard for the muzu, considering the difficulty of the rest of the map
2017-05-09 15:34 Chromoxx: some rythms could still be improved, but that's basically the biggest things to notice
2017-05-09 15:35 Chromoxx: Oni: 00:02:013 - same thing here again and same with slider/spinner
2017-05-09 15:37 Chromoxx: 00:41:831 - rythm here is too intense when relating it to the rest of the map
2017-05-09 15:37 Chromoxx: overall rythm also needs some improvement
2017-05-09 15:38 Chocola_2287: so I basically need to remap part of it?
2017-05-09 15:38 Chromoxx: idk about remap, just self-mod it a bit more... as it is now it isn't ready for rank imho
2017-05-09 15:39 Chromoxx: this is just what i found after looking at each diff for 1min, so threre's probably more smaller stuff too... anyway, i gotta get back to doing some other stuff so i'll just post this as an irc in the thread
2017-05-09 15:39 Chocola_2287: ok thanks
2017-05-09 15:40 Chromoxx: np
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