This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 14 de agosto de 2011 at 17:37:06

Artist: Owl City
Title: Shy Violet
Tags: eldnl all things bright and beautiful
BPM: 110
Filesize: 5471kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,04 stars, 138 notes)
2. Hard (4,32 stars, 249 notes)
3. Normal (2,25 stars, 185 notes)

Download: Owl City - Shy Violet
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For the project of Larto Owl City - All Things Bright and Beautiful

Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%

Thanks to:
eldnl:For the guest diff "Hard"

Tengo que escribir algo aquí o si no no me deja comentar. Y el comentario es muy corto.

Download: Owl City - Shy Violet (MoodyRPG) [Hard].osu

Hi. ^^

[general]
mp3 is 320kbps == ....
use this

offset for the new mp3 : 611


[easy]
01:03:822 (x) - add a circle.
01:06:004 (1) - start this slider from 01:05:731 would be better ?

doesn't have any big problems.
Good

[normal]

what a beautiful diff <3

[hard]
00:36:004 (5) - delete
01:06:550 (2) - delete
01:35:731 (8) - please reduce the slider repeat by 2.
02:29:459 (2) - delete
02:33:823 (2) - delete

didn't like the long sliders at the ending part.
but maybe its okay..

the "delete" at hard. if you do that , it sounds better IMO :>

Good job MoodyRPG, its well-mapped ^^

star.

HeatKai wrote:

Hi. ^^

[general]
mp3 is 320kbps == ....
use this

offset for the new mp3 : 611


[easy]
01:03:822 (x) - add a circle.
01:06:004 (1) - start this slider from 01:05:731 would be better ?

doesn't have any big problems.
Good

[normal]

what a beautiful diff <3

[hard]
00:36:004 (5) - delete
01:06:550 (2) - delete
01:35:731 (8) - please reduce the slider repeat by 2.
02:29:459 (2) - delete
02:33:823 (2) - delete

didn't like the long sliders at the ending part.
but maybe its okay..

the "delete" at hard. if you do that , it sounds better IMO :>

Good job MoodyRPG, its well-mapped ^^

star.

Thanks For Mod ^^

Fixed

Hello.

modding key:
this is a suggestion
this is something I really recommend
this is unrankable

General
Hey, an Owl City song I've never heard of. Great song choice!
Change the last timing point to 201337, it's off since you did timing changes (?)

Hard
01:01:700 (1,2) - If you're going to keep this, keep consistency with (5) and (1)? It would sound much better.
This is one nice Hard! Awesome job.

Normal
A bit linear, but what can you expect from a Normal, right? Great job as before.

Easy
01:40:973 (1,2) - It would feel much better with a beat in between these in the middle.
01:45:337 (1,2,3) - Perhaps align on Y axis?
02:13:155 (2,3) - Perhaps another beat in between?
02:24:609 (1,2,3) - Move this so it's right in the middle of Y axis? Move 4 if necessary.
But a fun and playable hard! Good job.

what a great mapset. awesome work. you have my star!

Easy
00:37:700 (3) - add new combo, cause all previous notes in this area ended with a 2 combo on the same beat
01:34:428 (3) - ^
01:47:519 (3) - ^
02:48:610 (4) - add new combo

Normal
00:48:610 (1,2,5) - add claps at the end of each slider
01:01:700 (1,2,3) - add claps on the very end of each of these notes, matching the music, then add a clap on 01:05:519 (5)
01:07:700 (2,4) - add claps
01:10:428 (1,2,3) - same as b4, and then add clap on 5
01:16:428 (2,4) - add claps
01:51:882 (1,2) - add whistles at the end of these sliders
02:35:519 (3) - add claps on the rebounds at 02:36:064 and at 02:37:155
02:55:155 (1,2,3) - just saying u got the claps going on here, awesome

Hard
wow this diff's hitsounds and patterns move very smooth, well done
01:38:791 (4) - add clap at end of slider
01:41:519 (2) - add clap on the beginning of slider only
01:43:155 (4) - add clap at end of slider
01:45:882 (2,5) - add clap at the beginning of these sliders
01:49:700 (1,4) - add claps at the end of these sliders
02:28:973 (1) - this is kinda awkward since this note sounds similar and it's ending at a white note
02:39:882 (6) - add new combo
02:46:428 (1) - this combo <3
03:03:882 (1) - ^

Pretty interesting, never heard of this song, but i know owl city and this is pretty awesome, great map

Hola ;P

[General]
Me gustó el mappeo que se utilizó en esta canción y el uso de los hitsounds <3~
No encontre problemas en términos generales (:

[Normal]
00:27:337 (2): Checa el spacing de esta nota, porque no es el mismo spacing que se usa en los sliders (5) y (6) del mismo combo (por lo menos si quieres mantener ese spacing en esa parte entonces cambia el spacing de los sliders, recomiendo cambiar el spacing de las notas porque el distance spacing de toda la dificultad es de x0,8 y no x1,0).
00:27:882 (3): Checha el spacing si no harás el cambio de los sliders~
00:28:428 (4): ^
00:31:700 (2): ^
00:32:246 (3): ^
00:32:791 (4): ^
00:33:337 (5): ^
00:34:973 (6): ^
00:35:519 (1): ^
00:36:064 (2): ^
00:36:610 (3): ^
00:37:155 (4): ^
00:37:700 (5): ^
00:38:519 (6): ^
00:38:791 (7): ^
00:44:246 (1): ^
00:44:791 (2): ^
00:45:337 (3): ^
00:45:882 (4): ^
00:46:428 (1): ^
00:46:973 (2): ^
00:47:519 (3): ^
00:47:791 (4): ^

No encontre nada más (:
Amé tus sliders al final eldnl *-*

Star! quiero verlo rankeado luego >_>

dkun wrote:

Hard
01:01:700 (1,2) - If you're going to keep this, keep consistency with (5) and (1)? It would sound much better.
This is one nice Hard! Awesome job. Sure fixed.

EEeee wrote:

Hard
wow this diff's hitsounds and patterns move very smooth, well done
01:38:791 (4) - add clap at end of slider In this part I prefer to use whistles but If other mod mentioned it I change it ^^
01:41:519 (2) - add clap on the beginning of slider only ^
01:43:155 (4) - add clap at end of slider^
01:45:882 (2,5) - add clap at the beginning of these sliders ^
01:49:700 (1,4) - add claps at the end of these sliders ^
02:28:973 (1) - this is kinda awkward since this note sounds similar and it's ending at a white note I don't understand
02:39:882 (6) - add new combo Nah it's fine
02:46:428 (1) - this combo <3 <3
03:03:882 (1) - ^ <3

Thanks a lot guys

Download: Owl City - Shy Violet (MoodyRPG) [Hard].osu

Owl City!!!
Kenezz's Bakamod~

Easy

1. 00:26:791 (1) - Agrega Whistle en el repeat~
2. 00:28:973 (1) - ^
3. 00:44:246 (1) - Finish al inicio
4. 00:58:973 (x) - Agrega una nota con clap aqui?
5. 01:01:155 (x)- ^
6. 01:01:700 (1) - Finish al inicio
7. 01:10:428 (1,2,3,4) - Estos beats rompen con el flow y imo no se oyen nada bien, ademas 2 y 4 tienen clap en donde el patron no lo marca y se oye mal, te aconsejaria cambarlos por sliders y beats en zonas donde puedas colocar claps talvez... http://puu.sh/3SF3
8. 01:32:246 (1,2,1,2) - Lo mismo que el punto anterior
9. 01:45:337 (1,2,1,2) - Nuevamente, recuerda que puedes variar en la colocacion de sliders y claps~
10. 01:54:064 (3) - Cambia el Finish por un whistle, el finish suena demasiado fuerte comparado con el cambio del nivel de volumen de la pista
11. 02:07:155 (x)- Agrega un Spinner que inicie aqui y termine en 02:09:337 ademas agregale whistle~
12. 02:11:519 (1) - Finish al inicio
13. 02:15:882 (1,3) - Clap en la repeticion, trata de preservar el patron de claps hacen que suene mejor :3
14. 02:20:246 (1) - Finish al inicio
15. 02:26:791 (3) - Agrega Whistle en el inicio
16. 02:33:882 (2) - Clap, recuerda el patron de claps por si se me pasa postear uno
17. 02:36:064 (2) - ^
18. 02:37:700 (1) - Finish en el inicio
19. Durante el kiai time faltan varios claps sigue el patron y colocalos :3 ah si, los whistle se oyen bien pero imo es mejor con claps ademas es el coro con kiai y creo que debes enfatizarlo mas
20. 02:50:791 (3) - Uhmm new combo y remuevelo aqui 02:53:519 (1)
21. 02:55:155 (1) - Finish o whistle en el inicio
22. 03:12:610 (1) - ^

Normal

1. Toma en cuenta lo del patron de claps que puse en la diff Easy para ya no hacer este modpost mas largo, ojala y los coloques u_u
2. 00:33:337 (5) - Whistle en el repeat
3. 00:44:246 (1) - Finish
4. 01:47:519 (4) - Supongo que para seguir el patron de new combos que has hecho es necesario uno aqui
5. 01:54:064 (3) - Sustituye el Finish por Whistle
6. 02:11:519 (1) - Finish
7. 02:46:428 (1) - NAZI ALERT! xD muevelo un poco a la izquierda para que quede justo en el centro :3
8. 03:01:700 (1) - Agregale Finish
9. 03:12:610 (1) - ^ al inicio~

Hard

1. 02:04:973 (1) - imo este spinner deberia empezar en 02:07:155
2. No veo Problema mayor aqui, bonitos sliders y hitsounds <3

Buen Map Moody, espero que se rankee pronto, de momento solo queda dejar mi estrella xD
Starred~

PD: Puedes Agregar el nombre el album a los tags~

hi~:3

General

combo color suggestion:3
how about this?

Easy

OD+1..

00:44:246 (1) - add finish
01:01:700 (1) - ^
02:11:519 (1) - ^
02:28:973 (1) - ^
02:44:246 (3) - remove finish
02:55:700 (1) - add clap
02:57:882 (3) - ^
03:01:700 (3) - remove finish



Normal

00:47:519 (3,4,5) - all stack is better imo
00:48:064 (5) - add clap
00:52:973 (1) - add finish
00:58:428 (2,3,4) - try this
01:01:700 (1) - add finish
01:19:155 (5) - new combo
01:36:610 (3) - ^
01:37:155 (1) - remove new combo
01:45:337 (3) - new combo
01:45:882 (1) - remove new combo
02:11:519 (1) - add finish
02:36:064 (3) - add clap
02:37:155 (3) - ^
02:37:700 (1) - add finish
02:46:428 (1) - ^
02:55:155 (1) - ^
03:03:882 - ^
03:12:610 (1) - ^






Hard

HP+1
OD+1

02:11:519~long time copy and past?
its not fun to play imo


good luck~★

Kenezz wrote:

Owl City!!!
Kenezz's Bakamod~

Easy

1. 00:26:791 (1) - Agrega Whistle en el repeat~
2. 00:28:973 (1) - ^
3. 00:44:246 (1) - Finish al inicio
4. 00:58:973 (x) - Agrega una nota con clap aqui?
5. 01:01:155 (x)- ^
6. 01:01:700 (1) - Finish al inicio
7. 01:10:428 (1,2,3,4) - Estos beats rompen con el flow y imo no se oyen nada bien, ademas 2 y 4 tienen clap en donde el patron no lo marca y se oye mal, te aconsejaria cambarlos por sliders y beats en zonas donde puedas colocar claps talvez... http://puu.sh/3SF3
8. 01:32:246 (1,2,1,2) - Lo mismo que el punto anterior
9. 01:45:337 (1,2,1,2) - Nuevamente, recuerda que puedes variar en la colocacion de sliders y claps~
10. 01:54:064 (3) - Cambia el Finish por un whistle, el finish suena demasiado fuerte comparado con el cambio del nivel de volumen de la pista
11. 02:07:155 (x)- Agrega un Spinner que inicie aqui y termine en 02:09:337 ademas agregale whistle~
12. 02:11:519 (1) - Finish al inicio
13. 02:15:882 (1,3) - Clap en la repeticion, trata de preservar el patron de claps hacen que suene mejor :3
14. 02:20:246 (1) - Finish al inicio
15. 02:26:791 (3) - Agrega Whistle en el inicio
16. 02:33:882 (2) - Clap, recuerda el patron de claps por si se me pasa postear uno
17. 02:36:064 (2) - ^
18. 02:37:700 (1) - Finish en el inicio
19. Durante el kiai time faltan varios claps sigue el patron y colocalos :3 ah si, los whistle se oyen bien pero imo es mejor con claps ademas es el coro con kiai y creo que debes enfatizarlo mas
20. 02:50:791 (3) - Uhmm new combo y remuevelo aqui 02:53:519 (1)
21. 02:55:155 (1) - Finish o whistle en el inicio
22. 03:12:610 (1) - ^

Normal

1. Toma en cuenta lo del patron de claps que puse en la diff Easy para ya no hacer este modpost mas largo, ojala y los coloques u_u
2. 00:33:337 (5) - Whistle en el repeat
3. 00:44:246 (1) - Finish
4. 01:47:519 (4) - Supongo que para seguir el patron de new combos que has hecho es necesario uno aqui
5. 01:54:064 (3) - Sustituye el Finish por Whistle
6. 02:11:519 (1) - Finish
7. 02:46:428 (1) - NAZI ALERT! xD muevelo un poco a la izquierda para que quede justo en el centro :3
8. 03:01:700 (1) - Agregale Finish
9. 03:12:610 (1) - ^ al inicio~

Hard

1. 02:04:973 (1) - imo este spinner deberia empezar en 02:07:155
2. No veo Problema mayor aqui, bonitos sliders y hitsounds <3

Buen Map Moody, espero que se rankee pronto, de momento solo queda dejar mi estrella xD
Starred~

PD: Puedes Agregar el nombre el album a los tags~

Thanks For Mod ^^ and y u c a

All Fixed

Hi! Here's my mod
EDIT; Hice el mod y no me di cuenta que habias hecho un update de los mapas ): Perdon si algo que mencione ya esta hecho ~

General;
- Preview time on Easy is different
- Try these colors ?

Combo1 : 108,221,216
Combo2 : 121,227,185
Combo3 : 51,95,174
Combo4 : 88,95,167

Easy;
- 00:44:246 >> Finish at start ?
- 01:01:700 >> ^
- 01:19:155 >> Switch to normal finish ?
- 01:40:973 (3,4) >> Ugly ): try this maybe ?
- 01:53:519 >> Add note with clap
- 02:11:519 >> Finish at start
- 02:15:064 (4~1) >> It would be easier for new players to hit (1) if you put it under the end of (4)
- 02:20:246 >> Don't force the curve like that, try to make it smoother
- 03:21:337 >> Switch to normal finish ?
- Your clapping pattern is inconsistent, you don't do the regular clapping pattern (2nd and 4th beat) but try to keep it consistent with the 2nd beat clap pattern
- Some parts seem like beats are missing to me but is an Easy so I guess is fine

Normal;
- 00:26:791 (1,2,3,4) >> 1/1 seriously ? I was expecting something that followed the music more, like this

- 00:38:791 >> Remove a repeat and move to 00:39:064
- 00:44:246 >> Finish
- 00:48:064 >> Missed clap ?
- 00:51:882 >> Divide into 3 notes
- 01:00:882 >> Add a note
- 01:07:700 (2,4) >> Remove the whistles and add claps
- 01:18:337 >> Add a note
- 01:36:610 >> Start the new combo here
- 01:37:428 >> Make a short slider from here to 01:37:700 fits better
- 01:40:973 >> Remove the new combo
- 01:42:064 (1,2,3) >> Sounds better if mixed into a slide, also add a note at 01:42:882
- 01:46:428 (2,3) >> Make a slider from where (2) is until (3)
- 01:50:519 >> Add a note
- 01:52:973 >> Shorten this slider to 01:53:246 and add a note at 01:53:519
- 02:11:519 >> Finish
- 02:14:246 >> Clap
- 02:23:791 >> Add a note
- 02:35:519 >> Repetitive ): try this

- 02:46:428 >> Finish at start
- 03:16:155 >> Add a note
- You missed some claps on the whole map, check

Hard;
- 02:33:337 (1,2,3,4) >> Unstack (4), players might think they have to hit (3,4) like (1,2) because it seems like it but is not
- 03:11:791 >> Add a repeat

* Star ~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod
EDIT; Hice el mod y no me di cuenta que habias hecho un update de los mapas ): Perdon si algo que mencione ya esta hecho ~

General;
- Preview time on Easy is different
- Try these colors ?

Combo1 : 108,221,216
Combo2 : 121,227,185
Combo3 : 51,95,174
Combo4 : 88,95,167

Easy;
- 00:44:246 >> Finish at start ?
- 01:01:700 >> ^
- 01:19:155 >> Switch to normal finish ?
- 01:40:973 (3,4) >> Ugly ): try this maybe ?

SPOILER

- 01:53:519 >> Add note with clap
- 02:11:519 >> Finish at start
- 02:15:064 (4~1) >> It would be easier for new players to hit (1) if you put it under the end of (4)
- 02:20:246 >> Don't force the curve like that, try to make it smoother
- 03:21:337 >> Switch to normal finish ?
- Your clapping pattern is inconsistent, you don't do the regular clapping pattern (2nd and 4th beat) but try to keep it consistent with the 2nd beat clap pattern
- Some parts seem like beats are missing to me but is an Easy so I guess is fine

Normal;
- 00:26:791 (1,2,3,4) >> 1/1 seriously ? I was expecting something that followed the music more, like this

- 00:38:791 >> Remove a repeat and move to 00:39:064
- 00:44:246 >> Finish
- 00:48:064 >> Missed clap ?
- 00:51:882 >> Divide into 3 notes
- 01:00:882 >> Add a note
- 01:07:700 (2,4) >> Remove the whistles and add claps
- 01:18:337 >> Add a note
- 01:36:610 >> Start the new combo here
- 01:37:428 >> Make a short slider from here to 01:37:700 fits better
- 01:40:973 >> Remove the new combo
- 01:42:064 (1,2,3) >> Sounds better if mixed into a slide, also add a note at 01:42:882
- 01:46:428 (2,3) >> Make a slider from where (2) is until (3)
- 01:50:519 >> Add a note
- 01:52:973 >> Shorten this slider to 01:53:246 and add a note at 01:53:519
- 02:11:519 >> Finish
- 02:14:246 >> Clap
- 02:23:791 >> Add a note
- 02:35:519 >> Repetitive ): try this

- 02:46:428 >> Finish at start
- 03:16:155 >> Add a note
- You missed some claps on the whole map, check

Hard;
- 02:33:337 (1,2,3,4) >> Unstack (4), players might think they have to hit (3,4) like (1,2) because it seems like it but is not
- 03:11:791 >> Add a repeat

* Star ~

Thanks For Mod ^^

Kenezz wrote:

Hard

1. 02:04:973 (1) - imo este spinner deberia empezar en 02:07:155 Ok cambiado
2. No veo Problema mayor aqui, bonitos sliders y hitsounds <3

y u c a wrote:

Hard

HP+1 Sure
OD+1 Ok

02:11:519~long time copy and past? When you are playing is fun lol
its not fun to play imo

lovhin456 wrote:

Hard;
- 02:33:337 (1,2,3,4) >> Unstack (4), players might think they have to hit (3,4) like (1,2) because it seems like it but is not Perhaps moody already change that >.> but it's okay.
- 03:11:791 >> Add a repeat I don't like a jump here

Thanks a lot ~

Download: Owl City - Shy Violet (MoodyRPG) [Hard].osu

Hi

[Nomo]
01:01:155 (6) - move it a little closer to (5) ?


bonus 80000!

Greetings~

General

hm maybe cut the mp3 a bit cuz 12% after the last note are unused and it would be a great way to reduce the filesize here
I attached a Soft Sliderslide for you
03:03:882 add a fountain here maybe?

Easy

01:01:700 (1) endpoint overlaps 3 really bad and doesnt look beautiful...
01:32:246 (1,2,1,2) maybe use in this part sliders? (1,2,3,1,2,3)
01:40:973 a much more neater wave slider here http://puu.sh/3VLk
01:53:519 (3) hm jump~

Normal
00:37:700 (5) add a whistle at the end?
00:38:791 (7) same here?
02:36:610 (4,5,6) move them to X:376 Y:192 and arrange 1,2,3 like this? http://puu.sh/3VNw looks like a good pattern
03:16:700 add a note here and delete 03:16:973 (1) ?

Hard

A bit easy for an hard but its ok

00:33:337 (5) put it on X:256 Y:136 so it doesnt get overlapped by the previous 4
00:53:791 (2,3,4) dont stack them so much and use normal distance (1,0)
01:35:246 (4,5,6,7,8) especially this is really hard to read

Try to reduce them if you agree or not, its your decision

Easy

1. 01:03:882 (3) - This circle is partially hidden by the end of the slider and the 300/100/50 image. You should avoid this kind of thing in easy to ensure the readability of the map for new players.
2. 01:09:882 - Because of the drums, you should add a note here, else this part feels empty and it can confuse the player.
3. 01:33:337 (2,1,2) - This pattern doesn't fit the music. The circles should be on the clap that you can hear in the music because this part is based on them, so try something like :
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:19:700 - Add a note here for the same reasons as 01:09:882
5. 03:09:882 (2,3,4) - You should use clap on them, it's kinda weird if you suddenly stop to add claps and besides, whistles don't fit here.

Normal

1. 00:37:700 (5,6,7) - This is not a good idea, you did it just for the sake of making the end of the pattern harder, but It would be better if you continued to map this part in the same way you did before, that is, using only 1/1
2. 01:41:519 (5,3,1,2) - As I have already said in Easy, if you suddenly use whistles instead of claps, it's weird and confusing because it breaks the rhythm you did with hitsounds in the map before.

Hard

1. 01:14:519 (1) - The spot where this slider ends is not appropriate. Consider shortening it by 1/2, it will sound better. (Use the scale function if you want this slider to keep the same shape. ctrl+shift+S)
2. 02:41:791 (1) - As you did a copy/paste, same as above
3. Nice slider job

Short mod You did a good job in this map. Have my star

So two people modded before me, so some of my suggestions may be the same as them. I'll make sure to point out which ones.


Easy
Set the hitsound volume 80% to match Hard
AR +3
01:53:519 (3,4) - Move these to x:131 y:216 to fix the spacing (Also found by Lightgazer)

Normal
Set the hitsound volume 80% to match Hard
AR +1
OD -1
HP -1
00:38:246 - Whistle
00:38:519 - Remove whistle
00:39:337 - Whistle
01:00:882 (5) - Move this to x:206 y:238
01:40:973 (3) - New combo
01:42:064 (1) - Remove new combo
01:46:973 (3) - Move this to x:51 y:269

Hard
Tickrate 2
00:33:337 (5) - Move this 2 grids up and to the left. This makes it look nicer and play the same. (Also found by Lightgazer)


That's all, solid mapset you got here
I would recommend using grid snap in the future. It makes everything nice and tidy

Charles445 wrote:

So two people modded before me, so some of my suggestions may be the same as them. I'll make sure to point out which ones.


Easy
Set the hitsound volume 80% to match Hard
AR +3
01:53:519 (3,4) - Move these to x:131 y:216 to fix the spacing (Also found by Lightgazer)

Normal
Set the hitsound volume 80% to match Hard
AR +1
OD -1
HP -1
00:38:246 - Whistle
00:38:519 - Remove whistle
00:39:337 - Whistle
01:00:882 (5) - Move this to x:206 y:238
01:40:973 (3) - New combo
01:42:064 (1) - Remove new combo
01:46:973 (3) - Move this to x:51 y:269

Hard
Tickrate 2
00:33:337 (5) - Move this 2 grids up and to the left. This makes it look nicer and play the same. (Also found by Lightgazer)


That's all, solid mapset you got here
I would recommend using grid snap in the future. It makes everything nice and tidy

Thanks For Mod ^^

All Fixed