MAY'S - I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute · forum

JauiPlaY

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

JauiPlaY 2011-08-04T14:10:59+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月22日 at 22:24:06

Artist: MAY'S
Title: I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute
Tags: shinki j-pop
BPM: 82
Filesize: 6779kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.58 stars, 377 notes)
Shinki's Normal (3 stars, 263 notes)

Download: MAY'S - I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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誰のものにもならないで

Whlie playing the song I just think about Kotobuki Nanase from Bungaku Shoujo.

My 9th map.

And thanks for Shinki's guest diff, and those who provided me skin assistances.
Enjoy!

Last edited by JauiPlaY 2011-08-22T14:24:44+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2011-08-04T14:12:45+00:00

EDiT: mod

Shinki's Normal

背景音有clap的地方最好别下whistle

[00:56:959] no whistle
第一个kiai整体降低10%音量
[01:01:715] 2: whistle(volume 90%) 3:whistle(wolume 80%) 4: no whistle (这里也可以考虑下S1的clap啊)
[01:12:325] 降低音量15%
第二个kiai整体降低10%音量
[02:06:105] whistle
[02:29:154] 换成finish
[02:37:203] 这里大范围使用whistle在clap上那就不改了
kiai部分可以用S1的clap吧背景的还是比较小

Hard

开始部分音效利用的很好
其余部分行云流水

最好用静音sliderslide 在normal难度里sliderslide的声音太大了 hard好点

Last edited by LKs 2011-08-05T02:10:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Neptunus

463 posts

Joined April 2010

Neptunus 2011-08-04T14:16:28+00:00

加长沙发我的
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Nagae-Iku

79 posts

Joined March 2010

Nagae-Iku 2011-08-04T14:16:42+00:00

Nice song and good luck
I LOVE YOU~

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Shinki

141 posts

Joined May 2010

Shinki 2011-08-04T14:19:19+00:00

............................................................(字数)

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2011-08-04T19:24:26+00:00

好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌够字数了吧擦
基片鸭加油！~

Cirno

662 posts

Joined June 2010

Cirno 2011-08-05T03:52:28+00:00

~~基片鸭~~胁迫我来送星顺便骗kd

[General]
~~BPM=164~~
..结尾map到03:53:300 ?

[~~卖萌6号~~Shinki's Normal]
默认whistle有点吵在这首比较轻柔(?的歌里来用最好降低一下音量,或者把C2的whistle换成一个整体上更轻一些的sample
spinnerspin有点响...?
02:41:410 (2) - @02:41:227 ?
02:42:691 (x) - 加个note..? 初见被这坑了x.x
others fine o.o

[Hard]
~~难度逆诈称 change name to [Normal] plz~~
00:28:151 (3) - 这个我觉得红点前后各加一个控制点软化一点更合vocal和剩下的map 像这样..?

SPOILER

00:31:349 (4) - 像其他那样把上一个slider的end完全放在track里..? 不大好看这个...
00:58:971 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 之前的0.75x slider放的不错但这段的超低spacing实在颇堵,与音乐情感脱节. 如果我map的话大概会与之前的0.75x对应,放一个高spacing(1x+)的pattern. 如果你这里做出改动的话,01:10:495(3,4,1,2)之类的地方可能也要对应调整一点
01:30:617 (3) - 大概可以在不动(2)的情况下略微上移挡住(1)结尾..? 既然你的整个map是统一性为基调的不统一的这些地方最好尽量避免...
02:03:361 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同之前颇堵...
02:40:861 (2,3) - (2)应当在02:41:227结束, 相应的(3)应该在02:41:410开始. 不全用眼睛排的图其实也可以好看(?
02:43:788 (2,3) - ^
03:23:666 (3,1) - hey boy HP bar....
挑不出啥来...只是有几个linear转的slider看不出意义所在稍微有点充art map的感觉...

SPOILER

00:32:813 (2) -
00:37:935 (3) -
01:32:813 (3) - 是根据鼓转的?那也应该01:32:995再转啊o.o
01:50:008 (4) -
02:06:471 (4,5) - 不仅看不出意义而且也不好看啊[stress]
02:23:117 (3) -
03:15:252 (1) -
03:16:715 (4,5) - 不仅看不出意义而且也不好看啊[stress]x2
03:18:727 (2) -
03:34:276 (5,6) -

送星

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2011-08-05T05:05:04+00:00

我也是骗KUDO的液

General:
BPM吐槽我就输了

326大萌神's normal:
01:40:313 (1,2,3) - 即使打起来没问题不过还是觉得后面也用Slider更好?

音量有点太高了这样的话滑条音就格外的明显而且有的地方也很吵. 下一些绿线控制下音量变化应该会很好听毕竟下了这么多的HITSOUND.

基片鸭's hard:

...HITSOUND是不是太单薄前面背景音乐有自带CLAP的时候下SOFTWHISTLE和一下是不是更好个人感觉不必要下同样的CLAP.
似乎需要更多的WHISTLE和FINISH 和326大萌神走2个极端这个DIFF实在好安静. 后面的KIAI音量就不要腼腆了 45和50音量的差距完全无法体现出变化.

节奏和排列没什么挑的打起来很好.

嗯那就这些了

结尾送你个礼物

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2011-08-05T08:58:12+00:00

先星了
字數字數字數字數字數字數字數字數字數字數字數

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2011-08-05T11:34:25+00:00

class StarThisMap : public CObject
{
　public :
　void Star()
　{
　　cout<< "StarThisMap" <<endl;
　}
}

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2011-08-05T12:17:51+00:00

[General]
名稱:MAY'S - I Love You Ga Ienakute ((I Love You不要都大寫然後G是大寫的>_>
改好記得submit一次~~

[Shinki's Normal]
02:48:910 (1,3) - 讓他對稱:O

[Hard]
00:44:520 (2,3) - 說實話不是很好看 ((讓00:44:886 - ,00:45:069 - ,還有00:45:069 - 這三點排成一樣的距離?
00:54:032 (5,6,7,8) - 這首歌你的SV用不慢建議不要出現這麼小間距的連打這樣感覺彆扭((雖然這已經不能叫連打了lol
00:58:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^((其他類似的我就不挑了~~
01:24:032 (1) - 沒必要NC我覺得...
02:40:130 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我草這神了~~
02:51:105 (1) - spinner從02:51:837 - 開始 02:51:105 - 還有02:51:471 - 加2個note

star~~
p.s 為什麼我覺得風格越來越有KPY的感覺lol

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2011-08-06T08:13:45+00:00

我的图传出42个小时之后一个星也没有

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Cirno

662 posts

Joined June 2010

Cirno 2011-08-06T08:18:35+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
我的图传出42个小时之后一个星也没有

~~我的图传出一个月之后一个星也没有~~
[/joke] [/offtopic]

al2e10

1,101 posts

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2011-08-06T08:21:26+00:00

- Hard
00:54:032 (5) - New combo and remove 00:54:764 (1)
00:55:861 (3) - New combo
01:06:471 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:07:020 (2)
01:18:178 (1,2,3,4) - Make those distance be the same is better
02:07:935 (1,2,3,4,5) - Those are different distance remove 02:07:935 (1) new combo and 02:08:483 (2) new combo
02:39:398 (4) - New combo

- All
How I thought that so many kiai time =3
And I thought 03:03:544 this section kiai time is enough.

That all. Really lovely.
Good luck STAR !

NatsumeRin

osu! Alumni

4,032 posts

Joined August 2009

NatsumeRin 2011-08-06T08:33:15+00:00

[General]
helped with hitsounds file through irc.
我觉得offset应该要+3~+5

[Shinki's Normal]
00:13:056 (1) - 开始一个好长好长的转盘然后……break了。你感觉如何了呀？我觉得还不如删了
00:38:300 (2,2) - 这两个whstle听起来奇怪（因为vocal在比较低的位置），违和感。
01:04:276 (3) - 头whistle
01:10:861 (5) - 尾的whistle去掉
02:15:255 (4) - whistle?
02:24:035 (1,2) - 拖出来感觉好一点，因为前一组也没叠
03:26:230 (1,2) - 快碰到血条了，考虑拉下来点

[Hard]
00:13:056 (1) - 同Normal，这让人感到蛋碎。。。
00:59:886 (7) - 我个人意见觉得这里不要一气下去而是顿一下（第一折返那个音空出来）比较好
02:04:459 (5) - 和上面同
02:26:959 (1,2,3,4) - 这里既然已经画过一个四方我的思路会是这样

03:48:910 (1,2) - 和上面一样，最后一个1还可以扔正中间什么的

真难为你我mod这歌都快睡着了，以后类似歌不接。

florianu

florianu 2011-08-06T13:07:51+00:00

Shinki's normal
02:13:056 (1) - here is too much notes for normal, replace it with a repeat slider
HARD
01:53:666 (2) - remove the slider with a note
01:53:666 (2) - put here the new combo
02:51:105 (1) - volume 20%

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2011-08-06T14:55:31+00:00

算了不等2kd位
Shinki's Normal
00:13:056 (1) - 同意rin叔要不删spinner要不后面map点什么,马上break感觉很那啥
02:23:666 - 加个circle?没了个音玩的時候感觉別扭
02:51:105 (1) - 我感觉太长
03:05:008 (2) - whistle?
03:36:471 (3) - 去一个reverse加circle?

Hard
00:13:056 (1) - 同上
我弱不会吐槽(偷懒

SiU_LeAf

116 posts

Joined April 2010

SiU_LeAf 2011-08-06T15:49:49+00:00

小葉純路過~~~
歌不錯聽說>_<
加油

SPOILER

純路過打點感想, no kd
[Normal]
00:13:056 (1) - 小葉覺得normal一開始用spinner不太好, 因為新手難度不可以在spinner後太快放note, 這樣的break time小葉也不太喜歡
00:26:593 (1,3) - 小葉覺得(3)不要放在(1)下面就好了
00:33:544 (1,2) - 小葉覺得slider指著(2)就好了
00:57:325 (1,2) - 其實小葉覺得短slider接note的話比兩個note代替短slider還要難打.
03:13:788 (1,2) - ^
02:25:495 (1,1,2) - 因為是新手難度, 所以小葉建議如果那個位置真的要放spinner, 就把接下來的(1,2)刪掉
03:26:959 - 這樣強大的噴泉效果據說是不行的~ 據小葉所知是只可連續噴兩次, 不過小葉不太清楚, 建議你去請教別人

[Hard]
00:26:044 (2,3) - 這個節奏小葉不清楚有沒有問題, 小葉覺得在00:25:861 add note也不錯
00:28:788 - ^
00:34:642 - ^
00:37:569 - ^
00:40:495 - ^ (這首重覆很大, 接下來不指出了>_<)
01:40:130 - Add note?
~~02:43:056 (1) - 純小葉主觀問題, 這角度不太好看...~~
02:51:105 (1) - 感覺spinner很長~~
03:26:776 - kiai同上
~ 完 ~
話說小葉覺得這類的歌, MAP會是Circle Size很小的, 嗯嗯嗯

zsr123

357 posts

Joined January 2010

zsr123 2011-08-07T06:02:11+00:00